The First Time I Saw You (Sajan FF) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

hey dear awesomeeeeeee ff loved it its superb plzzzzz contine soon n add me to ur pm list

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thanks u soo much dear!
will surely add u!
n will cont asap!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow tht was awesome i love it plzz add me to your pm list


aww thanks alot!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: marisol45

awesome concept
can't wait to read it
do continue soon
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thanks alot dear!
i'l continue asap n add u in my pm list!
thanks a ton!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: arjunmayankfan

lovely concept

do cont as soon as possible..........

lovely lovely lovely

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wanna read the nxt part ...........


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hey sneha!
thanks alot! loved ur comment
will cont asap n thnx alot!
will surely pm u! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome concept ...please continue soon ...please add me to your pm list 😊
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Originally posted by: zobsheh

awesome concept ...please continue soon ...please add me to your pm list 😊


Thanks alot dear
will cont soon n will add u as well!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey friends! i am back with my update n i am dedicating it to:

Aastha (Aasthahere)
Sanju (Baby_doll_2305)
Yashu (Yashu_mjht)
Zeejay (VampirePrincess)
Adi (Dr.Zombie)
Ash (ash_sajan)
okzz so here it starts!...
Samrat is smiling alone in his room thinking of his sweetest friend gunjan, when suddenly he sees the clock n gets shocked!!
Sam - oh no!! god! i am late..college jaana hain !
he runs n gets dressed up in his cool dude outfit n rushes to college
samrat enters...
Samrat aagaya! A Boy shouts who is sitting with a girl n a boy who r non other than our benji dia and dodo!
girls r as usualy drooling over him as he is walking
Samrat comes to benji n both of them give each other a hi5!
Benji - kahan reh gaya tha yaar..tu to kabhi late nehi ho ta hai
sam - kya karu yaar..aaj hua hi kuch aisa
benji - kyu aisa kya ho gaya jo guru samrat ko college ke liye late ho gaye..
samrat was going to answer when uday interrupted
uday - umm sam, pata hain kya aaj meri class mein ek nayi larki aayi hain, use patane ka tareeka bata na yaar
benji - uday, tu apne in burgers aur pizzaas ke saathhi khush reh, kyunki yeh larkiyon ko patana tere bas ki baat nehi hai, haan agar darana ho to shayed koi chance ho sakta hain
benji n samrat started to laugh
dia - whatever...sammy mujhe jaana hoga, meri ek friend se mujhe milna hain so ceeya
samrat - ok candy!
uday also leaves with dia! n only benji n sam r left
sam- yaar benji, aaj meri ek dost ka phone aaya tha, meri bachpan ki dost
benji - hmm..lerki hain?? friend or girlfreind??
sam - nehi yaar, sirf meri achi dost hain, bachpan mein hum mile they, tabse ek doosre ko jaante hain, lekin kuch reasons ki vaje se hum bichar gaye they aur saalo se baat nehi hui thi.....lekin achanak se aaj uska phone aaya
benji - kya baat hain, lekin uska naam kya hain??
sam - gunjan, main use chashmish bulata hoon (says it with a smile)
benji - chashmish??? vo kyun??
sam - aree vo lambi kahani hain
benji - yaar.. batana, mujhe suna hain
sam - teekh hain
gunjan aur main us waqt chote they..i think so she was 9 n i was of 11
hum dono delhi mein rehete they...vo apni papa aur sister nupur ke saath reheti thi
one day her sister(nupur) was sick n she had high fever
n she was crying...vo ghar se bahar chali aayi aur rote rote road ke paas aagayi...jahan bohot saari gariya chal rahi thi...or vo rote tote road cross kar rehi thi.ki achanak ek gaari use takraane waali thi when i came their pushed her...vo gir ne waali thi lekin maine bachaliya
benji - wah yaar! yeh to hero waali entry ho gayi
samrat - (smiles) us waqt ke liye hum dono pata nehi ek doosre ki aankhon mein kho gaye the..pata nehi, bohot ajeeb si feeling thi
benji knew what it was but decided not to tell as he knew that samrat would disagree
benji- aur phir kya hua?
sam - aur phir main use bohot daanta ki dekhe rasta cross nehi kar sakti!
lekin ohir vo aur bhi rone lagi..jab maine poocha to usne kaha ki uski di bohot bimar hain aur gunjan ke saath koi bhi nehi hain khelne ke liye....tab maine kaha ki main uske saath khelunga
aur phir maine uski bohot sweet si smile dekhi
aur chashmish to main use bulata that kyunki vo chashma pahenti thi
pehele to vo bohot chir ti thi is naam se lekin phir ek aadat se hogayi aur use acha lagne laga mera use chashmish bulana
har din hum dono khela karte they..jab nupur, uski di teekh ho gayi to hum teeno ek saath khelte they....lekin ek din (his smile vanishes)
meri mom aur mere papa ka divorce ho gaya aur main meri mom ke saath mumbai aagaya, delhi ko chor ke, gunjan ko chor ke
hum dono bohot roye they, ..lekin aaj uska phone aaya to mera khushi
ka teekhana nehi tha (smiling)
benji - wow! ka lov.....(sam gives him a look)
benji - mera matlab hain, kya story thi!
dia comes....sammy, meri cousin sisters excel college mein admission le rahi hain...
sam - oh wow candy! yeh to bohot achi baat hain
dia - i know, so agar vo aaye to can u tell me
2 girls r shown entering excel college
benji - lekin dia, hum unhe pehchaanenge kaise??
vo dono nei (new) hain, to agar koi neyi larki dikhe to mujhe batana
sam - ok candy!
dia leaves
when suddenly sam sees a girl in red salwar kameez who is facing her back so sam couldn't see her face
sam - benji, kahi yeh dono to yeh larki nehi
both of them r looking at them especially samrat😳
To kya samrat aur gunjan aayenge aamne saamne??
kya hoga in dono ki lovestory ka?? jaane ke liye keep reading!
friends, hope u liked this part!
i know my writing skills r not that good so sorry about that lolz
luv
debo😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey debo superb update yar loved it do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res! me 2nd.....=( Oye Debo!! First of all, U have awesome writing skills! Aur agar ainda kaha ke ur not gud at writing, tho tumhe buhot jootein padne waale hain samjhi? Secondly, this was a simply AWESOMMMMEEEE, BEAUTIFULLLLLL, MAGNIFICENNNNTTTTT update!!! Oohhh...can't wait till they meet up yaar!!! I wonder if Gunji will recognize him? sam tho bilkul buddhoo hai, so no doubt he will not recognize!😆Ohhhh!! Yaar, why did u stop there! Me wanting to read more now!!!! Jaldi update kar!!!! And when will Sammy realize that he loves Gunji?! Even Benji knows the feeling he has for Gunjan! lolz! I was right! Samrat is a real budoo!!!
But I know as u r the one writing this story,tum jaldi hi Sammy ko samjhaa dogi that he loves Gunjan! Right?! Will be waiting for another PM!
Urs,
Sanju!😳
P.S, Thank you so much for the dedication hun!🤗Sanju really luvin u! Muah!!
Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago

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