FF - KISMAT ~ III ~ COMPLETED

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Friends, thanks for your encouragments which made me open the third thread for this FF - KISMAT.
Continue to read and leave your valuable comments.
Luv
Selvy.
KISMAT (1 - 33)
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Part 69(1) Part 70(5) Part 71(10) Part 72(13) Part 73(17) Part 74(21)
Part 75(25) Part 76(31) Part 77(35) Part 78(39) Part 79(44) Part 80(48)
Part 81(53) Part 82(58) Part 83(62) Part 84(66)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congrats for ur 3rd thread waitinggggggg for next

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Hey congrats on the new thread
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congrats for the third thread
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Part 69

Heer rushed to Prem room when she heard Prem shouting her name. 'what happened Prem? why are you shouting like this?' Prem with defeated face 'I don't know which to wear.' Heer searched his closet and pulled out a suit for him. After giving a satisfied look she handed it to him 'here you wear this.' Prem kissed her cheek 'thanks Heer. that's why I need you.' Heer face became sad and turned to other side 'so you are thinking me as servant.'

Prem placed the suit down and turned her to face him 'I didn't mean like that. you only know my taste.' He pulled her cheeks 'now smile.' He whispered 'actually you looks like a monster when you get angry.' Heer gave angry look to him. Prem tickled her waist 'see see again. Monster.' Heer hit his chest with her fist like a kid. Circling his hand around her waist 'I always want to you see your smiling face.' Heer smiled. He hugged her. Placing her face on his chest thought 'can't you hear my love for you Prem?' Prem gently pulled her away 'did you said anything Heer?' Heer internally happy but 'no nothing.' She shook her head and pulled herself away from his hands.

When he finished putting his shirt, she helped him to wear his coat. Prem 'Heer, don't you think its too much for lunch with my fiance. Like you I too want a simple dress.' Heer 'you are special today. I'm not.' Prem 'you are always special to me Heer.' he kissed her cheek. Heer blushed. Hiding her expression she ordered 'okay. now stop talking. come down fast.'

Prem putting his hand around her shoulder 'I think you are more excited than me.' she looked at him. He winked 'why?' Heer with a fake angry gently pushed him away and turned to otherside 'I'm not coming.' Prem pulled her back 'oh I'm sorry. I just teased you.' Heer in puppy face warned him 'don't do that again.' Prem bow down 'yes mam.' Heer 'Premmmm.' Prem smiled and gave a gentle hug.

Prem, Heer and DJ headed towards the restaurant where Sanjana has invited them for Lunch. On the way DJ is continuously enquiring about Sanjana. Heer initially got tensed why Mausi is asking more and more about Sanjana. Later from their conversation Heer found one truth 'Prem doesn't know much about Sanjana.' She considered this as her strength.

Heer stepped out of the car thinking 'Sanjana is really clever selected a romantic restaurant.' DJ stepped with comment 'instead of eating at home nowadays kids are preferring to eat outside.' Prem came to other side of DJ 'Mausi, lets go inside.' DJ in the middle, Prem and Heer on her either side entered the restaurant.

Sanjana who is already waiting for them with Rishab saw DJ coming with Prem and Heer. Sanjana 'Rishab, why this old lady is coming here.' Rishab saw DJ. He warned 'Snajana you have to be careful. She is very traditional and she has voice in JM mansion. If she gets some signal wrong about you then you are out of Prem's life.' Sanjana nodded 'see my acting.'

Sanjana wearing mini skirt and strapless tops came forward to greet them. She didn't look at Prem. she straight away bent down and touched DJ's feet. DJ got excited. DJ pat her cheek lovingly 'how are you beta?' Heer rolled her eyes in surprise. Sanjana gave a cheap look to Heer. She is about to hug Prem, Rishab hinted her to give hug to Heer. Sanjana got his point and hugged Heer. Rishab took blessing from DJ and hugged Prem.

Sanjana 'Mausi, come.' She held DJ's hand and lead her to the table. DJ sat in a chair 'nice place.' Heer rolled her eyes thinking 'outside she was fuming now she like this place. Starange. Even Mausi changed after looking at Sanjana.' She sat next to DJ. Prem sat on the other side of DJ. Sanjana happily sat next to Prem. Prem smiled at Sanjana 'it's a nice place.' Sanjana smiled and also gave a victory smile to Heer.

Prem smiled at Heer who is sitting on the other side of DJ. Heer managed to hide her sadness. Heer returned fake smile to him. Rishab come and sat next to Heer. between Heer and Sanjana. Prem face changed when Rishab sat next to Heer. Rishab leaned forward to Heer and whispered 'did you like this place?' Heer looked around. She also noticed Prem face changing. She with a wide smile and little excited voice 'ha Rishab, its so romantic.' Rishab smiled 'thanks.'

Prem mobile rang. DJ got irritated 'arrey Prem, why can't you switch off the mobile.' Prem looking at the mobile 'its important call Mausi.' DJ 'go and talk.' Prem got up from his chair and went to the balcony and started talking. DJ murmured 'don't know why he is busy even during holidays.' Rishab phone too rang. Heer giggled. DJ 'you too.' Rishab giving excusing smile to DJ and Heer went to a distance to attend the call.

DJ 'don't know how these guys will run family life. Always talking in mobile.' She looked at Sanjana 'arrey beta. You come and sit next to me. let him sit there.' Sanjana picked up Prem's coat which is left on the chair and placed it in the next seat. She sat next to DJ and started answering DJ's question in uninterested way. Heer is confused. She thought DJ will reject Sanjana. She is confused 'how Mausi like Sanjana?' but kept quiet without giving any doubt to anyone. She is tapping the table as if she is reading the menu. But her mind is restless.

Sanjana ordered her favourite while Heer ordered Prem and hers. Mausi ordered her favorites. Prem finished his call and came in. He went next to Sanjana. Heer unable to see him again sitting near Sanjana looked down to hide his feeling. Prem picked up the coat from the chair. Heer looked up when she heard Prem 'Mausi, what do you want?' Heer saw Prem sitting next to her. Prem looked at Heer and winked. Heer smiled. Sanjana noticed this with anger. RIshab returned and saw Prem sitting next to Heer. Without making any issue he sat between Prem and Sanjana.

Heer has selected Indian dishes, while Sanjana and Rishab selected Chinese. As Sanjana ate using spoon, it made noise. DJ 'don't you know to eat with your hand? why are you using spoons and making noise?' Sanjana thought 'this lady is irritating. Not even allowing me to enjoy my food. Stupid country lady.' Heer inside laughing. Sanjana is cursing herself for inviting Heer. She gave angry look to Rishab, who is the one who gave the idea of inviting Heer.

After finishing the lunch, they all ordered their favourite ice creams. Heer is silently smiling. Sanjana noticed a teasing smile on Heer's face. Ice creams served. Heer started eating very fast. Sanjana confused 'why she is eating as if she going to catch something?' Heer finished hers and pushed aside with a smile.

No one ate more than two spoons of ice cream. Heer, like a kid looked at Prem with a smile. Prem smiled and started feeding her. Rishab and Sanjana got shocked and stared at them. Rishab looked around. There are many people sitting around. Restaurant is almost full. He thought 'don't they feel shame?' DJ looked at the way they are staring at Prem and Heer. 'why are you both staring at them like this?' Sanjana 'Heer, if you want order one more cup.' Heer didn't pay any attention to her. Prem too busy feeding Heer.

DJ smiled 'how many ice cream you order.' she looked at Prem and Heer 'this will be the scene.' Rishab and Sanjana gave confused look to her. DJ busy eating her ice cream 'its their habit. Heer will always finish her ice cream before Prem starts eating. Then she will eat his part from his hand. They won't bother about the location where they are sitting.' Sanjana and Risahb face fell in defeat. DJ shook her head 'you can't change it now.' after a pause 'I can give you one idea.' Sanjana and Rishab looked at her with hope. DJ 'don't order ice cream when they are together with you.'

After eating ice cream from his hand, Heer gave victorious smile. Prem took a tissue and wiped her mouth. Heer smiled back at him like a kid. He kissed his cheek 'thanks.' Sanaja got angry. Sensing her feeling, Rishab decided to patch up the situation for her.
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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me... wow awsum update yar....
heer wht an idea/.....so take DJ...
so it was rishab n sanjana....aarrrgghhhh...
wow prem felt jealous awsum....
wow prem feedin heer....sanjana angry...too gud selvy....
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congrats for your third thread.👏👏👏
nice update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap
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Congrats on the start of the new thread....👏
Superb update.....
Even i expected mausi to reject sanjana but here she likes her😡
Loved the cute premeer ice cream scene.....
Im happy to see prem's reaction wen rishab sat next to heer.......
Pls do cont asap.....
Hope ul unite premeer asap..........
Thanx 4 the pm...


Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago
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Loved it. Heer is so naughty. Poor Prem has no idea what Heer n Sanajana are doing.

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