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Posted: 15 years ago
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sajan in drama room after auditions.gunjan iz going out when
smrat:chasmish coffe peney chalein?
gunjan turned
g:phele baat mera naam GUNJAN BUSHAN hai aur dosere baat mein ajnabion ke sath coffee peney nahn jate...smjhey
s:chasmish mein ajnabi k baat kab kar raha hon mein to wohe hon jis sey tum aj bhe pyaar karte ho...he was hurt....
g:mein tumsey pyaar nahn karte...hmarey bech jo tha wo us accident key sath khatam ho gya jab tum ney mjsey meri di ko cheena.smrat saw her with tears n harted
s:chashmish....it seemed like someone pierce knife in his heart......mein ney nupur ko nahn cheena....kismat ney humsey nupur ko cheena hai......nahn cheena mein ne nupur ko......he was crying n sat on kneess...gunjan dont know what to do...her heart was saying wo teekh keh raha hai yeh kismat ka faisla tha.......
s;mera kasor sirf itna hai k wo uperwala mjhey nahn kush dekhna chahta tha islea us ney mjhey...mjhey...he cant say anymore...he was angry on his fate...he broke the glass which was in his hand...
s:ahhhhh
g:smratttttt she came near her but smrat stopped her
s:nahn rehney dein miss bushan...she saw him in shock......smrat got up with difficulty n moved to his cabin............where gunjan was crying.........
g:i am sorry smrat i am sorry mein galt the aur galt hon i am soory mein ney tmhey dukh dye hain jan bojh kar kimat k bjae tmhey kasor war tehraya i am soory...she was sitting on floor n then she saw smrat s blood...she quickly got up n wipe her tears.....n rushed towards his cabin with aid box.....
gunjan in heart smrat ko meri zarorat hai....she entered in his cabin he wasnt facing her he didnt know she is standing behind.he was sitting in chair having pic of all four...his back was facing gunjan..
s:i am soorry nupur mein ney bohat koshis k key mat khao apney dil k baat bhul jao apna pyar par..........he wiped his tears ....par i promise ab mein kuch aesa nahn karon ga jis sey gunjan hmarey past k barey mien sochey...mein uski smile wapis karon ga jo mein ney cheen le hai....mein apna pyar buhla don ga....sab kuch bulha doon ga....he hugged the pic n tearz was faling from his face...he wiped tearz n moved n turned n was shocked to see her...she had tearz...
he placed pic in drawer n then got up from his seat
s:gee miss gunjan ap ko koe kaam hai....he wasnt seeing towards her...gunjan came near her placed aid box n made him sit again n did his dressing...he was just seeing his pain on her face...after dreesing gunjan saw him starring ......he moved his gaze n removed his hand from her hands...n got up...she also got up n turned to go smrat turned in hope that she might stopped.....
gunjan stopped n without turning
g:i still love u smrat....he was overjoyed n tearz falling from eyes..he quickly hugged her from back..
s:i love u too cahsmish....thanks mjhey maf karney k lea...
she turned
g:smrat tmhare galti he nahn the wo to meri galti hai tmhey galt smjheney k jo mein hamesha karte hon..he smiled..n wiped her tears....
s:par is dafa galti meri hai...
g:nahn meri
s:meri...they have intention to continued it till heard
mayank:yar dono soory bol do galti jis k bhe ho mjhey to abhe ise wqt treat chaye tmhere re union k he give his famous smile....sajan smiled...n mayank opened arms..n they both rushed to hug himm...n they were feeling like nupur is also in their hug n is happy like them..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wooowwww awesome fab too good loved itt
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superb os i loved it sooooo much........the last part was tooo good
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hey nyc one dear...really touching!
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heyyyy realy nyccc os..
realy vry touchng.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwww...........
so sweet! d ending was d best!!
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Hey dear so awesome OS so so touching n last part was so so sweet ending loved it to core do write more OS
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Fabulous update.Hope CV's show us something like this .
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tht was sooooooo sweet OS of sajan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks to all for commenting

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