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Posted: 15 years ago
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1st warning has been given as the topic - when it says "AR post" its pretty obvious that i want to SR or ArSh bashers here. 😉

2nd warning - ArSh bashers get lost. SR bashers get lost. I dont want you to be here if your gonna bash. If you have something nice to say then PLZZZZZ go ahead and say.... i wont warn, im just gonna report. If that doesnt work then i aint gonna keep quite... Im'a put you at your spot... im known for my karvi zubaan. 🤬


NOTE: I AM TALKING ABOUT THE BASHERS WHO ARE PASSIONATELY AGAINST AR!!!! please dont make a mistake that i mean all of them. I have many friends who are SR and ArSh. i just want bashers to stay away.

AR FANS,

As we know the type of track that is playing on DMG, we are heartbroken or just given up to watch the love tracks or SR or ArSh. But, some of us still have hope! I wrote this when Riddhima found that armaan didnt leave her (January 26 2010) and she went in that crazy mode to find her beloved armaan. It inspired me. None of you know, that when I watch something, it usually inspires me to write a poem. Thus here it is...

I've made no changes since I wrote it, because i believe that the first time you put something on paper, it reveals your true inner emotions.

Enjoy

P.s I would love some criticism, but if you know that your gonna write something super bad like "u suck" or something, then bug off... i dont have patience to be nice to you... Get it right the first time you read this


To the rest of you? I LOVE YOU ALL. here is the poem:


Promise Me

Promise me that you would be
My today,
My tomorrow,
My day,
My night,
My beloved,
My precious,
My dream.
Promise me that you would be there,
When I need a shoulder to cry on,
When I'm feeling lonesome,
When I feel as if there's
No tomorrow.
Promise me that you would be there
When I feel
I'm becoming extinct.
Promise me
That you would be
My everything,
My nothing,
My love
My life.
Promise me that you would be,
The faithful one
I can always trust.
The loving teddy, I can always hug.
The one who can take my breath away.
The one who will listen to me,
When I have nothing to say.
Promise me that you would be
Everything I want you to be.
Promise me that you would be
Only mine, for all eternity.
Promise me that you would be
With me,
Every second of my life,
Until the day
I die.
Promise me.




(Just for "tabbyj" 😛)

Thanks for reading!!!!


do comment!!!!!!



p.s. sorry if i scared some of you off... totally not my intent... 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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come on u guys.... Comment!!!! 45 Views 0 Comments?????
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Posted: 15 years ago
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actually I want to comment. but since u said get lost, I got frightened and ran away. Just peeped in again to know whats going on😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely poem👍🏼
But yaar please edit your 2nd warning.All SR and ArSh fans aren't bashers.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifully written!!!!luvd it!!👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamil

actually I want to comment. but since u said get lost, I got frightened and ran away. Just peeped in again to know whats going on😛



pls shamil take me wid u
i am scared 🤢here
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome.
AR forever ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@TM
being ARSH fan i feel iur second warning is a bit rude.........
for few people u cant label whole fangroup as bashers.............
and ur poem is definitely very nice..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i jus feel that wen you are in love ...................you need no reason to remembr or to even love the person...............this is love wch is selfless................n patient.................n a persons' life.............i really liked your poem.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice poem...good work 👍🏼

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