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Posted: 15 years ago
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A lady in her mid- twenties, is sleeping nicely in her bed. Alarm rings at 6 am. Without grumbling she gets up. Her room is not very big. Its spacious. One wall painted in mango colour with some nice pics. and remaining three walls in light yellow colour.In one corner all the books are neatly arranged. The room is clean and not messy types. The lady is none other than Dr. Nupur Bhushan. Not a girlie type. But has her own attitude and aura. Her taste is sophisticated. She goes and open the window and the balcony door. She goes and stand in the balcony. She loves to see the early sunlight, but cant see regularly because of her hectic life. She must take 7 hours sleep. Her life is properly planned by her. She is very much sorted out and plans out her things very well but still confused in her own way. Disciplined. She does her yoga till 6:30, then goes to make her breakfast. Ready by 7. Then she gets ready by 7:45, wearing a white kurta with black trousers, no makeup. Just a watch and a bracelet in her hand and a pair of earings. Done with her breakfast by 8. Then next, she picked up her labcoat, her stethescope, her cell phone, door keys, car keys, her hankie. Packed all stuff. Then locked the house and reached the car, but forgot her labtop. "Oh no!" runs back to her flat, picks up her labtop, then again locks the door and heads towards the "Life- Care hospital"
Thats Dr, Nupur Bhusha, MBBS, MD ( Surgeon).

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A man in his mid twenties is seen painting around 6 in the morning in a wide balcony. He is wearing his black vest and track pant. His room is big one. His room has a boyish touch but still is nicely decorated. But its full of papers lying over. His passion is painting. "Mayu, Hey bhagwan yeh ladka, bhi na, " "Maa, its Mayank!" He shouts from outside. "Pata hain, maine hi rakha hain"
The lady is Mrs. Shilpa Sharma, a sagittarian, Optimistic ,freedom-loving,Jovial ,good-humored,Honest , philosophical and dramatic. "Not going to gym" She goes in the balcony. "Yeah , going in 15 minutes"
"Tu subah 5 baje sirf yeh paintings our geometry banane ke liye uttha hain, aur mere doston ke bachhe, subah - subah apni girlfriend se baat karne ke liye utthe hain, aur tu" She sighed. "Maa, please dont disturb, i need to complete this, and you should feel proud of me, I am so creative, I am so funloving, And I will get a nice girlfriend very soon...."
"pata nahi, very soon kab aayega? ..one minute, I dont want you to have a girlfriend...girlfriend..doesnt sound that good na...'someone special'...." Mayank kept down his pencil, "ok maa, meri someone special, jald mil jaayegi, now you go, otherwise both of us will be late"
"Ok, i am going, and please try to be back by 8" Shilpa went to ruffle his hair, "Maa!" Mayank moved back.
"Ok fine, am leaving" She smiled and left the balcony. The moment she went to pick the lying papers, she heard, "Maa, i'll do that!"
She knew her perfect son , wants to do his work on his own. "Bas, ek acchi perfect bahu mil jaaye."
"I am listening" Mayank came in. "Main jaa rahi hun." And she left.


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"Hey Nupur" Dia entered Nupur's cabin, Nupur;s cabin was not like a usual doctor's cabin, being an Arian she wanted her each and everything to be unique. Her cabin was painted in nice shades of blue, she liked blue. Nupur looked at Dia and smiled,"Hey Dia,"
and fixed back her gaze to the labtop screen. "When will aunty and Nishti return?" Dia entered wearing a nice black top and blue jeans and sat on the chair across Nupur,
"They are returning tomorrow evening from Pune, I wished they stay little more." Nupur sighed. "What? Why?" Dia gawked.
"Relax! The moment they return, their start about my marriage, their only motto- 'My wedding'" Dia gigled whereas Nupur stared at her. "Sorry dear, but they are right, you are 26 now, and unless you marry how Nishti can marry!"
"and you, you are saying as if you are just 20" Nupur said. "Nupur, i dont have a little sis who is interested in getting married like Nishti and I am waiting for my Mr. Right"" She leaned back.
" I know my sis, a complete Taurean,Taureans are deeply romantic and very loyal.and always get blues being a bull". Dia laughed
"Oh your humour is getting better by staying with a saggittarean". Both laughed. "By god! But I miss them, its been 2 days, I have to cook myself." Nupur said little sadly.
"You are sad about cooking!....Nupurr....Oh god! you are in your horoscope land right?" Dia got up and went to stand next to Nupur "''Do you realise that you are obsessed by this" Dia said little irritated, ''is there any harm?"
"No harm but still, life doesnt go like this"
"Dia, dont worry, I know, this is just for fun and it helps to judge people, now see you are saggi and me aries, and we are best friends" Both smiled, "Yeah, thats true, lets go now, its 9, time for rounds." Dia said leaving the cabin.
Nupur checked her day's forecast , which stated- ''chances for a journey'' She wondered which journey and left for rounds. Little did she knew journey of life....

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Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sami Great update tumhe kuch sochane ki jarurat hi nahi hai

I was happy SS is sagi me too Sagi dear
and intro of Mayu was beautiful
SS is worried about his someone special
i was confused at one point "Very soon"
this soon i took in Marathi [ tula mahiti aahe Soon manjhe]
anyways cut to update
Loved the way they are talking abt the Sign
So next update going to be Mayank and Nupur meeting
Wow
and the special Comment " Me first 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳"
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
but short part
thanks for PM.
continue soon



love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sam di..
this was a really nice and simple introducion..
do continue soon..
-Zaini
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Posted: 15 years ago
haey sam

Brilliant start hun.

Loved each n every scene.

That vz too good.

Do continue s0o0n with other ff's.

Love
*kulsum*
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Posted: 15 years ago
Res actually g2g will edit it

edited:
Sam Kya likhti ho yaar

simply loved it

waiting for mayur to meet

atleaSt tum apna promise to nibha rahi ho

ab main bhi apna promise nibhaungi aur apne ff mein mayur ke beech pyAar bhi laungi very soon

tc n do give more updates

Sariska
Edited by sariska_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice! Looking foward to next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow what an amazin concept and story! Nice! Continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sam... this FF is surely gonna rock!! even i read the Horscope column daily... now another reason for me to read it without missing any word... :)

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