Chashmish meri baat suno please...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi guys

this is my first ever attempt at writing...plz do comment, suggest, criticize...whatever you think...I will continue only if you guys think I should..

Gunjan couldnt believe her eyes...Samrat was sitting in front of her where SSC was a minute ago.'so it was Samrat all this time..my Samrat..no..what am I thinking? Such betrayal...again!'...she couldnt take it. She got up to leave..Samrat tried to stop her,'chashmish please mat jao...' Everyone thought it was best to leave them alone. Gunjan kept walking angrily..Samrat ran after her n caught hold of her wrist,'Chashmish meri baat suno please...'


Gunjan stopped and turned around angrily,'Tum kuchh bhi bolo samrat kuchh nahi badlega..di waapis nahi aayegi..mujhe akela chhod do samrat..kyon tum meri zindagi mein phir se aaye..'

'I love u chashmish...mein tumhare bina mar jaoonga..'Sam pleaded in a teary voice,looking into her lovely sad eyes, gently pulling her towards him..

Gunjan on the brink of tears, couldnt help falling in the abyss of his longing gaze. She said uncertainly, softly,'I hate u samrat, I hate you..'

Oh love! Her lips were saying one thing and her eyes another..He took her in his arms..holding her so tight as if he would never let her go...she closed her eyes and melted in his embrace..all the longing, the pain washing away...




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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!!!!!!That was really nice.I wish we can see hat on Monday.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh...my...god....that...was soooooooooo awesome!! Plz continue sooon!! Really can't wait to read more! U write amazingly! Plzplzplz continue asap! And do pm me!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its sooooooooooooooo much beauutifull.. 😍
i hope dis happens.. 😛
plzzz continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice dear............liked you OS.......but I think it needs to be more detailed.........
Very nice try........pls cont
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow hope the same happen relli nice
loved ur post
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow.. its so beautiful.. amazing.. hope it happens...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was really nice
hope we get to see such a scene in the show😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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YOU are toooo good!!
You shud write ffs!!love you
muah!! hope we get to see this on monday!!
Im dying to watch mjht!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing OS dear👏
hope the cvs show smthing like this in the coming episodes😳
do continue😊

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