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Hi Everyone!
So it's Naina again, with another SS coming your way, along with Sia Di and Kanchan Di :) This is inspired from the movie Chupke Chupke, with Dharmendra and Sharmila Tagore, and Prida will be playing the main roles. The story will definitely be more modernised, there will be changes from the original script, and so keep reading!
Prologue:
Chupke Chupke
Prologue:
The knocking on the door ofhis cabin woke him up. Turnng the light on, he turned over to look at the clock, only to find out that it was 1:30 AM in the morning.
Who could it possibly be at this hour? he thought to himself, as he got out of bed,
"Arreh Kaka'Aap yahan?" he asked, surprised to see the bahadur standing in front of him.
"Woh..woh kya hain na ki'.Mera pota'he's very sick, and I just found out" replied the old man, whom everyone knew as Hari Kaka.
"So app jayiye, I'll take care of everything here" he replied, confused as to what the actual problem was.
"No.no. I can't do that. If the owner finds out that I'm not there, then I will be fired" said the old man quietly, sorrowfully as he really wanted to be with his grandson. "And plus, we have that tour bus with the college kids coming in soon, and they didn't tell us exactly when."
By now, he was completely awake.
"Hari Kaka'Aap chinta mat kijiye. Main sabh sambhaldoonga. You know what? From now on, I'm not Prithvi Saxena, I will be Hari Kaka, the Bahadur" smiled Prithvi, taking the monkey cap off of the old man's head and putting it on his own.
"Lekin..Par'" began Hari Kaka in protest, not really wanting to hand everything over to Prithvi.
"Lekin wekin kuch nahi. I'm the bahadur now, you can run along now. Take care of your grandchild" said Prithvi, as he walked over to his cupboard, took out his wallet, and handed over some money to the old man waitng outside.
"May you always be blessed son. Thanks a lot for this." Said Hari Kaka gratefully, the tears shining through in his eyes, as he placed his hand over Prithvi's head and turned to walk away.
Prithvi went back to bed smiling. Hmm A Bus full of girls, and he would be the Bahadur Hari Kaka, not the Historian Prithvi Saxena.
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The wind creased her face and a few strands of her hair flirting with her face. A gentle smile graced her lips as she enjoyed the scenery, peeping out of the window of the bus. Completely lost in another world, her trance is only broken when the bus suddenly comes to a stop.
Damini stepped down from the bus, breathing in the fresh mountainous air, and looking around at the beautiful surroundings. The scenery outside was breathtaking to put it simply. The hills and valleys, with their dark green grass swaying in the winds, were a sight to behold. Looking down at the land, the patches of bright green, and brown, the farmland, all in perfect sqaures and rectangles. Animals wandering about, butterflies, rabbits, deer, flowers everywhere, daisies, tulips, roses and daffodils. The picture outside was truly a sight to behold.
A sudden voice interrupted her thoughts.
"ANYONE HERE!!!" screamed the principal, looking around for anyone to hold their bags. All the students looked at her, silently giggling to themselves, as they saw the fat, round woman trying to lift the suitcase and failing miserably, as she huffed and puffed and panted, but barely moved an inch.
"Coming!!" screamed a man's voice from a distance. And everyone's heads turned.
A small tiny figure was coming running to them from a distance, his size seemingly growing larger and larger as he got more and more close. And when he finally stopped in front of them, they saw that he was anything but tiny. A tall man, huge broad shoulders. He had a commanding presence.
But they were the most shocked when he opened his mouth to say something.
"Han Memsaab. I'm the Bahadur. Let me take your bags."
Everyone's jaws dropped. The Bahadur? No way. Impossible.
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So....how was it? We're all eagerly waiting to read your comments :) Please do respond and let us know if you want us to continue! And. do let us know if you want to be added to the PM List! =D
Thanks!
~Naina, Sia, and Kanchan
So it's Naina again, with another SS coming your way, along with Sia Di and Kanchan Di :) This is inspired from the movie Chupke Chupke, with Dharmendra and Sharmila Tagore, and Prida will be playing the main roles. The story will definitely be more modernised, there will be changes from the original script, and so keep reading!
Prologue:
Chupke Chupke
Prologue:
The knocking on the door ofhis cabin woke him up. Turnng the light on, he turned over to look at the clock, only to find out that it was 1:30 AM in the morning.
Who could it possibly be at this hour? he thought to himself, as he got out of bed,
"Arreh Kaka'Aap yahan?" he asked, surprised to see the bahadur standing in front of him.
"Woh..woh kya hain na ki'.Mera pota'he's very sick, and I just found out" replied the old man, whom everyone knew as Hari Kaka.
"So app jayiye, I'll take care of everything here" he replied, confused as to what the actual problem was.
"No.no. I can't do that. If the owner finds out that I'm not there, then I will be fired" said the old man quietly, sorrowfully as he really wanted to be with his grandson. "And plus, we have that tour bus with the college kids coming in soon, and they didn't tell us exactly when."
By now, he was completely awake.
"Hari Kaka'Aap chinta mat kijiye. Main sabh sambhaldoonga. You know what? From now on, I'm not Prithvi Saxena, I will be Hari Kaka, the Bahadur" smiled Prithvi, taking the monkey cap off of the old man's head and putting it on his own.
"Lekin..Par'" began Hari Kaka in protest, not really wanting to hand everything over to Prithvi.
"Lekin wekin kuch nahi. I'm the bahadur now, you can run along now. Take care of your grandchild" said Prithvi, as he walked over to his cupboard, took out his wallet, and handed over some money to the old man waitng outside.
"May you always be blessed son. Thanks a lot for this." Said Hari Kaka gratefully, the tears shining through in his eyes, as he placed his hand over Prithvi's head and turned to walk away.
Prithvi went back to bed smiling. Hmm A Bus full of girls, and he would be the Bahadur Hari Kaka, not the Historian Prithvi Saxena.
****************************
The wind creased her face and a few strands of her hair flirting with her face. A gentle smile graced her lips as she enjoyed the scenery, peeping out of the window of the bus. Completely lost in another world, her trance is only broken when the bus suddenly comes to a stop.
Damini stepped down from the bus, breathing in the fresh mountainous air, and looking around at the beautiful surroundings. The scenery outside was breathtaking to put it simply. The hills and valleys, with their dark green grass swaying in the winds, were a sight to behold. Looking down at the land, the patches of bright green, and brown, the farmland, all in perfect sqaures and rectangles. Animals wandering about, butterflies, rabbits, deer, flowers everywhere, daisies, tulips, roses and daffodils. The picture outside was truly a sight to behold.
A sudden voice interrupted her thoughts.
"ANYONE HERE!!!" screamed the principal, looking around for anyone to hold their bags. All the students looked at her, silently giggling to themselves, as they saw the fat, round woman trying to lift the suitcase and failing miserably, as she huffed and puffed and panted, but barely moved an inch.
"Coming!!" screamed a man's voice from a distance. And everyone's heads turned.
A small tiny figure was coming running to them from a distance, his size seemingly growing larger and larger as he got more and more close. And when he finally stopped in front of them, they saw that he was anything but tiny. A tall man, huge broad shoulders. He had a commanding presence.
But they were the most shocked when he opened his mouth to say something.
"Han Memsaab. I'm the Bahadur. Let me take your bags."
Everyone's jaws dropped. The Bahadur? No way. Impossible.
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So....how was it? We're all eagerly waiting to read your comments :) Please do respond and let us know if you want us to continue! And. do let us know if you want to be added to the PM List! =D
Thanks!
~Naina, Sia, and Kanchan
Shiv Shakti
