Written Update 9th July

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Continuing from 8th July


Aditya is shown in his room when Swara comes in with his tea.


Aditya: Swara, i want to tell you something.

Swara:
Yaa then tell me..

Someone calls Swara and she responds by saying that she is coming.

Swara:
(telling aditya) You freshen up and drink you tea. I shall be back shortly.


Gokul is shown holding his cheek which was slapped by Ragini with her words going on in background. Shanti then brings some ice cubes to put on Gokul's cheek

Shanti:
She slapped you really hard right. It must be hurting naa, i brought ice for you.

Gokul:
Are you mad? This kind of slap leaves wound in the heart not face.

Shanti:
Alrite, i will put it there then.

Gokul:
I dnt know which bad time it was when i wedded you. I'm going to meet Ragini veni and laughs. He tells shanti that the poison of the snake will shaken the snake itself


Ragini is walking in the passage when Gokul comes and begs her holding her legs.


Gokul:
I'm sorry Ragini veni. I cant even dream of your insult. You took me like your brother but me.. I'm sorry. i wont get up until you forgive me.

Ragini:
Yes i forgive you. You realise your mistake its enough but there is a condition. You must do one thing for me.

Gokul: Ya tell me i can even build Taj Mahal for you.

Ragini:
No need for that but bring that man for me that Swara took the silver coin from. I'm sure one day he will be useful for us.

Gokul:
Oh Mahesh, he is a street guy, how will he be useful for us.

Ragini:
That same street guy, i dnt know how and when he will be useful to us but all i know is that enemy of our enemy is fren to us. And you know Gokul, right now my biggest enemy is Swara.

Gokul:
Looks like big problem is going to come.

Ragini is shown smiling evilly


Deepti and Aditya are having coffee and Swara is standing behind Aditya

Deepti:
You are very lucky bhauji, you got such a no.1 coffee maker, no.1 wife. I have never had such coffee in my whole life and all your nights will be memorable with such coffees.

Akasad::
Then one coffee for me.

Swara: I'll be here with it right away

Aditya:
Sugar is slightly less in the coffee, i shall go and get it.

Akasad:
Strange, today Veni forgot to put in sugar in dada's coffee or he wants to have more sugar today?

Deepti:
Akki, try and understand. Suddenly coffee became bitter because sweetness went to kitchen naa..

Swara is shown going out with Akasad's coffee when she sees Aditya in the kitchen.

Swara: Hey, wat are you doing here? You wanted something?

Aditya:
No..ermm actually I...

Worker
: Swara veni, Amol didnt eat and even Aai Sahib is not at home... if you can feed him

Swara:
You take this coffee and give it to Akasad bhauji ....i shall go and feed Amol.

She goes and Aditya remain standing there.


Scene changes showing Swara's parents are on the road and its raining really heavily. Majula's health aint that good and their things are robbed.


Swara comes in the room where Aditya is working on his laptop.

Swara:
You are angry with me is it?

Aditya:
Why do you feel such?

Swara:
You wanted to talk to me right but im so busy involved with other things.

Aditya:
Swara, we are just newly married and as a wife its not wrong for you to have expectations. But what can i do, im not able to give you time.

Swara:
Who said im angry with you. Whatever i get, as much as im getting, im very happy. As a husband if u understand me then its even my duty to undrrstand you.

Aditya:
Actually its not just tat much, we wont be able to go for honeymoon.

Swara:
You were hesitating to just say this much? I'm your wife and i understand all you work. I cant share it but i can be with you na. Travelling around doesnt mean anything much to me coz my heaven is wherever you are with me and anywayz people go after wedding so that they can understand one another? but we both hav already understood one another more than ourselves. so we dnt need such formalities.

Aditya:
Swara, looks like i have known you very less and im really lucky to have you.

They both hug and share a moment...


Then... Swara is trying to put a bag above the cupboard. She puts it and it about to fall from the stool when Aditya catches her in his arms. The both look at each other and are lost.. Swara is shy and asks Aditya to leave her and let her down.


Swara:
Whose clothes are all these?

Aditya: They are all mine.

Swara:
You kept all your childhood kids?

Aditya:
Aai said she wants my son to wear these clothes as she wants him to be like me. I told her its not important but she still....

Swara:
Its true naa, you are not only a good son but is also a good husband. And im sure you will be a good father too...

Aditya:
When? (hahahahahahah it was sooooo cute)

Swara feels shy and tries to go but aditya holds her hand and goes near her.

Aditya:
Swara, i have seen a dream of our child. but dnt knw if it will be a son or a daughter.

Swara:
WIl be a son. My Aai always says that after marriage wife and husband becomes one and this feeling comes after the birth of their kid. Even i want to feel that feeling and Aai Maha Laxmi has alwiz give me more than my expectation and i knw she wil alwiz do it. Even i wish we wil hug our kid and say that we are also one. One that comes like a dream to us and stays with us forever.

Swara's parents are shown in a bus-stop while its raining extremely heavily. Swara's baba is trying to stop cars for help but in vain. He cries for help from GOD

Swara wakes up from her sleep feeling that he parents are in trouble.


Aditya: Swara, what happened? Did you see a bad dream?

Swara:
Aditya, im feeling like my parents are in trouble

Aditya:
Swara, you are just insecured and if they are in trouble you will be the first wan they would call you are their only child. Sleep for now and call them later.

In The Morning: Swara's parents are still in the bus-stop wet and her Aai is really ill. Swara's baba sees and auto driver and asks him for help but doesnt have money to pay for the fare. The Auto driver says that he wil drop them at a near by clinic. He takes them from there.

Swara's baba: Doctor, my wife is really ill. Please check her fast.

Doctor:
You go and get receipt from the receptionist.

Swara's baba:
But i dont have money doctor.

Doctor:
Does this looks like a donation place that i will do free consultation? Its my principle. If you have money then do medication

Unshown man:
why aren't you seeing his wife? You are here to serve them. This white coat and degree on the wall is for you to serve the people

Doctor:
Who are you to give me this knowledge? and its very easy to give someone lecture but u pay for them then. Why... you are speechless now?

The man removes some money and pays the doctor. The man is Aana Sahib's Brother.


No Precap.


Thank you




Edited by hetalmkn - 15 years ago

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