Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur)

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hey S!

A very nicely written part. MN here are adorable. You upholded their levels here more than the show. They unknowingly influence and control each other. Their next meet is going to be interesting. I have a feel that she would get a slightest inclination that Mayank is the Library guy. I am all eager to see how you are going to shape up situations.

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

*Reserved*

I'd edit my comment asap. :-)

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Your words create magic, Sookie. 😳 Amazingly put and exceptionally well written. I appreciate your work a lot. Your writing skill is plain FANTASTIC.

Mayank and Nupur in this very FF are just like the ones in the show and therefore, your story immediately connects with the reader. I like how the story's shaping up.

Update soon!

-Kanky

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

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Sorry, I'm late... this was in the back of my mind, was just waiting for the mood to set in. So, here I am.. with my review.

umm... to hit it off, It was splendidly written. I so loved the flow... it was amazing. The story changed slightly from the show, 'the break-fast table part..' or I don't know if I missed it on the show. :P 😆

Nupur, in my opinion, is different from the chatter-box she was supposed to be; rather she's quite.. I mean, just a bit.. but she refrains from useless convo's while Nupur on the show.. seeks them. Just, what I think of her, I don't know if its just in me... btw, I like her here, better. 😳

Mayank and his mother, the part I also loved in the show, were great. Loved the bit. 😊

So, umm lookin forward to when they face the reality... I mean, get to know about their "blog-relationship" 😉

Blog...err, reminded me of the verses... Gawd, they were fabulous. You are one heck of a writer. Just superb. I mean... I completely fall into a loss of words whenever I read your couplets... were such awesome. Good Job, again. 😊

.. got-to catch up school five hours later,

need some sleep. 🥱

Take care =) *I can't beleive I said that... waise, you were sick naa... what happened?*

whatsoever it is... keep up with the pace. I'm so loving the pace.

and Thanks for the PM

Love you! :))

Edited by Angel-Pebby - 15 years ago

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Asmara.

@Asmara.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

Awesome one........

Loved it........

Continue soon.........

And thnks for the pm...........

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

Heyyyy sookie
amazing update yaar
both are such people who won't think before speaking
but later they will realize n feel guilty....
As always loved the words....
Do continue soon
n thanx for pm

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shweta

@cool_shwets

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

Hey i just went through all d 5 chps of this ff n i loved it to the core...i'm glad i came across this ff.....i loved ur unique style of writing...pls do pm me the next time u update😳

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: nikki028
wonderful update yaar.....i am here evn b4 u pmd me abt this update....truly u hv a vry vry hatke style of writin n portrayin emotions n thts wht i love in this ff....gr88 update...plzz continue soon......

Thanks a lot Nikki! Yep, you were super fast this time. Thanks again. Update again during weekend!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
U are outstandin dear.,
amazin'...

u just hammer the nail everytym u update,,

Gossshhh...u are amazin dear ..

n the best thing was..that u updated really soon this tym...lol

great doing ...n i love the way , u inculcate ur ideaz in the original story

Great going...

lukin fwd to apology :) :)

luv

ruchi :)

Hello Ruchi,

Thanks! Yeah it took me only one week to come back on a new update. I am hoping to keep this tradition on...! :-)
Yep, apology is next!

Sookie

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Liked the update
Sir really didnt thought before pairing Mayur

Mayu lost his temper 2nd time on Nups

Nups was really thking a lot abt Mayu

Hop Mayu apologizes soon

MM is a great mom n a frnd too

Thanks! Yeah, I am still keeping the original storyline. I think the two of them are well matched as they challenge each other frequently. So the professor would definitely like to see something glorious come out of the two...