'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 51

Omg neela

wht an emotionAl update

I was hvin tears in my eyes

poor nupur 1

she might be having some majburi maybe for leaving mayank

and mayank???usne sharab pi???

Bechara!!!!!I felt bad for him

hope mayu theek ho jaaye

and even shilpa aunty

do cont soon

Sariska

Acha sila diya tune mere pyaar ka

Awesome one.....

Hey Neela,

For the first time,

as quoted by you...,

p.s. The award goes to my 'shakki' reader POOJA aka 'mjhtnupurmayank'.

Ahem.. Din't expect that at all.... My eyes actually popped out reading the above line .... lol.... and then I went back to read all my comments and understand the 'shakkipana'..... ha ha ha.... Thanx for the award though.... lol... I wil continue with my "Inquisitiveness"( Ha ha... I am giving a good name...!!) and "Shakkipana" in my comments.....

So, coming back to the update....
Awesome update..... !!
The twist thing was right.... he he...
Nupur did write a letter about getting married...
But, still I hope its not true.... lol..!
Now, you must be thinking how can it be untrue if you have already written about the letter....
Thats a filmy-shakkipana-from-my-side-which-is-highly-impossible.... Try to control yourself from laughing...... well, did Nupur(old) write false things about getting married so that Mayank forgets Nupur???? Because, if Mayank has recognised the hand writing then it should be Nupur only, so I don't think some one else will pose as Nupur and write the letter... But, then in case some one has told old Nupur about Mayank's state of mind that he is still in love so Nupur wrote..... Anyways, I wil stop my prediction now.... LOL.....!!!!

OMG... Mayank drunk and all??? Now, this is really sad......
Shilpa Aunty in hospital... Thankfully, she is safe.... and it was Nupur who was throughout with her..... Now, is Shilpa Aunty gonna feel something for this Nupur and get Mayank-Nupur married or something?????? No, no, no............... I hope not.....

One question - where exactly is old Nupur???? I really wanna know this thing.....

Somehow, I still feel there is a connection between the two Nupurs... because staying in the same house, having the same likes, getting close to Shilpa Aunty and sort of taking care of her - is it just co-incidence??? As of now, its a mystery waiting to be unraveled by you....

Although, if there is a connection between the two Nupurs I feel that maybe the new Nupur will help Mayur get back together.... Now, this seems sweet... Heavenly... Lol....!!!

Well, I know I have bombarded you with my predictions and questions..... Thoda zyada ho gaya kya???? Yeh award ka jaadu hai..... LOL....!!!
So, please give an answer soon....

Waiting for the next part eagerly,
Pls update soon....

- Pooja

hmm...well this was an awesome n an too emotional update....neela di......

gosh the way u portrayed mayank's emotions ripped my heart...i was like shit man i can't evn cry when i want to....i really felt like breaking down....how could yaar ???

it's superb !!
yeah ur rite thy r twist n turns in the story when life plays the story with us at tymes
and v r like why me ?? or sort of...u knw ths is the one thng tht connects ur story to reality
its not mere a story a fiction to be read n kept away....its much more....u get to see different aspects of life in a mere story tht suffices an entire lifetym !! 😊

now cmng back to d update 😉

well i cldn't stand mayank's behavior it was like he was saturated n all.....and finally he resorted to drinkn bt pls pls dnt make him a full tym drinker.....tht wud be so bad....kash nupur helps him out...
and wats ths another heart attack huh ???? kya yaar i cant witness shilpa aunty's pain....her lone son her cherished child.....hez becmng like ths in frnt of her own eyes...whz dyng a 1000 deaths evryday...i can try to feel wat she must be goin thro'...

but then wat can nupur do(old) i mean it was nt in her hands na ...i dnt thnk its wise to blame her for mayank's condition she too loved him a lot...she too was bound by so many thngs...parents ...mayank and so much....i guess if it were in her hands she wud nevr have left mayank...poor girl at times i feel more for her than mayank...shez married she can't evn cry over her grief like mayank can....she has to go thro' each n evrythng no matter she likes it or not...and then u can't change smthngs....its destiny...

this is not a mere story for me it's much much more !!

hmm yeah evn i sort of have strted feeling....the 2 nupur mayb have a connection or like u knw....thy knw each other somewhere.....thts all a maybe maybe....
it cld not be so....??? 😉

lets c...do continue soon .......im getng more impatient with each update new update.... 😳

and i must say ur a fantastic writer who knws hw to show case emotions.....and maybe those emotions r real and very close to u.....hence u relate n portray them really beautifully.....it cld b otherwise too as ur an awesome writer di..!!..

take care,
fatima 😊

This is sooo sad!!!

Hi Neela,

such an emotional part neela
loved it
plz do something
i donot want a sad ending
plz mayur deserve a happy ending

Heyyy neela:)
it was a really touchy n sad update..:(:(
real nupur got married...oh my mayu...
Nd shilpa aunty got heart attack...
Plzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for pm