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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone Am Mehek and will be doing the update for Mariam.That will be my 1st time so sorry in advance and hope u ill like it.


Part 1

Show Maya coming in the living room where everyone is gathered!
She say that what is right.The one with whom You had taken 7 pheres in front of the fire she is your real wife.She say to bhavri now U are going to stay with Anadi and she take there hands and put in in one another.Bahvri let go of Anadi hand and say thats not right.This is wrong this no Justice.Masa come and say hey girl thats whats is right hold the hand of SIL.Bhavri say no Mai this is not right. In order to make Justice properly U have to know the whole truth. And there is a truth which I want to tel you all. Maya say Now what have you got to say?Bhavri say its true that am your son 1st wife and according to the law am the 1 who have 1st right on him!But one bigger truth than that is that in my womb am carrying someone else child!!everyone is shock and we have a close up of every1 face.Then Anadi dad start to get and attack Shankar is the 1st one to notice it and he cries "Bappu ,Bappu"'every1 turn to look at him and Anadi,Shankar and Maya rush to him Maya Say take him inside!

In Bhavri room
Masa is slappin Bhavri She say u have gone mad u had your "laksha"fate in your hand and you have acted foolishly.Maya had given ur hand in that of Anadi and you have let go of that hand.And you have left it by saying that am carrying som1 else child in my womb. Oh Bhavri one shud learn from you to act foolishly and to hit their own foot with"kulariyon"(sowi dnt knw the meaning).Now what are you going to do?who will gave his name to your child have U thought abt that who will give U shelter?/U have ruin everyth!!

Bhavri say no Mai whatever I have done today thats what is right. Till today whatever I was doing was wrong. ! was strayed.What a big mistake I was going to commit.How could I have even think about some1 else apart from Shauryaji?/How could I have even think about giving some else name to shaurya child?? why didn't I die before thking of settling down with some1 else. Am i that bad. I have behave badly with every1.With maithli,Anadiji,shauryaji and every1 else!!
All that becoz of U only becoz of U. U have put all that poison in my mind.Maithili had only her dutu as a friend/sister.She had given her husband hand in mine!And you U have not been able to fulfill your duty as a Mother...do you know why becoz u r my step mother no real mum would have done that with their child..But somwhere its alos my fault Mai..I had become weak and got caught up in ur talks but not anymore becoz now I have realise my mistakes Mai..andnow am gona atone and I will show my frienship for maithili!!
Bhavri trying to go!
Masa try to stop her and say where are U going have U gone mad!!Bhavri say was,I was mad but now I have come to my sense let mi go!! Masa say STOP i won't let you go!!
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Part 2
Masa say "Nah, Nah"Bhavri push her and get out whilst closing the door!! Masa is calling for BHavri by knocking on the door!

Maithili walking on the street its night time!!
She is remmembering what Maya had said while throwing her out.Flashback Maya:Maithili won't stay in this house anymore if som1 will stay in this house it will be your 1st wife Bhavri. I don't want your unlucky shadow in my house!! Maithili still walking and now she's having falshbacks about Anadi and her and how Maya had throw her out with the song" Kistmet mein..."in the background!

Now back to Maithili on da street she is talking to herself. What people say is true U don't find real happiness in your own hapiness but by giving hapiness to your dear one's!Today whatever I have done It was for Bhavri hapiness so that she can get her rights.Anadiji's family have also got their heir.Anadiji will also search for his hapiness in his family hapiness..and for me what can mean more than that.....Oh God give Anadiji the strength to fulfil his duty!

Bhavri came there and say give me strength so that I can atone for what i have done!And Bhavri run to hug maithili!
Bhavri say my friend/sister forgive me..I have made a mistake I had gone strayed..I was tredding on the wrong path..forgive me she fold her hands in front of Maithili and say Forgive me
Maithili say I have already forgiven U since dn't know when..Uare Anadiji 1st wife so the one who have 1st right on Anadiji its U Bhavri say No maithli no thats wrong..U don't become som1 wife only by taking the 7 pheres it should be by "Mann,vachan and karam" ..and according to that U are anadiji real wife!
Maithili say now nothing can be done bhavri...Bhavri say wat nothing can be done..everyth is possible..I have told every1 @ home that this is Shauryaji child..yes and now Mai won't ever let me stay in dat house.. Maithili say what "anarth"a mess have you done..Bhavri say no this not an "anarth" maithili thats what is right..whatever I have been doing till now that was wrong..today for the 1st time I have understand what it is to be a friend and a wife..I was so wrong..1st of all I had asked Anadiji to go away from my life..then don't know why I had come between U 2.. to ruin your relationship.. don't know I was selfish for what.. then I had threaten u that I will put U out of that house.. and when I had won my challenge then I understood what a loss it was for me.. in this victory Maithili I had lost that thing that was my life...my best friend...whatever I had done was very wrong..and now I will have to atone for that....Maithili this house,this family,Anadiji all that is yours..only U have the right on all that and no one else..come lets go from here..
Bhavri and Maithili was turning around when Anadi came there...


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Part 3

Anadi told Bhavri whats this new game of Yours..Bhavri say am not pretending Anadiji Am telling the truth Anadi say to trust a mean perosn lik you is the biggest mistake..nhind eveyth U do there is a hidden secret..1st u have thrown Bhavri out of the house and now U want to tak her back what this new game of yours?Bhavri say U r anadi and ur anger is justify after whatever I have done even I won't forgive myself for that but believe me this time am fooling U becoz now I have understood.. and that day when u had touch me I have understand that i won't be able to be with some1 else so how can I consider else as my husband apart from Shaurya i won't be able to consider som1 else as my husband..now u can consider this as my fate ..but its fate that have unite me and shaurya..this relation will not break whether am alive or death..but its also true that u consider Maithili as your wife..I cannot consider som1 else as my husband..to tell u the truth anadi i had came here with 1 aim to give a name to my child..a father's name..but how could be so fool.. this child is mine and shaurya love "ka pratik"..its his last"nishani" this child....how did i even think of giving some1 else name to him..the 7 pheres i had taken with u is not called a mariage anadi..love was what i had with shaurya...anadi i was going astray..wen i came in this house I found that maithili was happi..and she had U..so i was jealous and felt that..what she had i didn't so i shud snatch all those hapiness from her..and i had made up ma mind that i was going to take away all her hapiness but very quickly i had understd that U can never be mine.. ur relationship are for seven lifes"janmon"..the relation that fate had unite..and mi like a fool i was going to break that realtion..anadi i have done many wrong deeds and now i want to make amends..stop maithili anadi..becoz if u don't stop her..den for my nxt 7 lifes my soul will reprimand me..u can give me whatever punishment u want for whatever i have done..but now don't let her go..
Maithili say don't cry so much my friend or even this friend of urs wil start to cry..(sowi didn;t understd wat she mean)..she say to Bhavri u have realise your mistake thats wat count for me..don't cry so much that will have a bad effect on your baby..if u are not thinking about urself thk about your baby..
Bhavri say no Maithili I have already decided I will go somwhere else to give birth to that child..At such a place where noboy will ask Questions about him..I will go far away from u..
Maithili say wat..how can U even thk of going far away from us..Have U forgot that we 2 are "kismat ki katpuliyan" Even if its about fate but it will be from 1 "dor".
Anadi say Maithili is right Bhavri U won't go anywhere..and anyway everyone in the world is not so kind hearted like maithili..there are may people like ur mum out there...Maithili is right..and by now U should have understd that I can't refuse anyth to maithili..and when I have not say anything when she had decided to leave the house...then how Can i refuse it when she want me to give my name to ur child..urs and shaurya child child will be born in my house
Bahvri say but... and Maithili say no but.. u just have to shut up and come wiv us..or i will have have to pull your ears and tak you along like we use to do when we were younger..they both hug..
And the 3 is going back

Anadi house
Anadi and Maithili have enter the house while Bhavri is standing outside Anadi ask her to com in maithili goes and tak her in as they are coming in Maya saw them
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Part 4
Maya say U have came back..if it was animal in your place it would not have com back...he would have go and commit suicide due to shame...But u shameless u came back...didn't i told u to get out of my house..U had come here wiv wrong intentions........U have make all the people who live in my house have bad thoughts and U had come to destroy my house...and all that for your selfish motives...so that u can give my son name to some1 else fault.. Ur mother have told me everyth about u..how great is this mother that she have accepted such a mistake from her daughter...look at her face its full of tears....MOther lik a saint and the daughter like devil..if this poor woman don't cry upon her fate then wat can she do...Haven't u hear me get out of here...

Maithili say MAsa don't do dat...I admit that Bhavri have made maistakes but now she doesn't have any bad intentions...Anadi u do somthg where will she go in such condition...

Maya say She can go wherever she wants there is a whole world out there..but i don't want such a dirt in my house..I don't want this "paap"mistake in my house...whatever may happen but this women won't stay here..I will beat her and put her out..while Maya is trying to put bhavri out maithili is trying to stop her and her head hit the walls and became unconsious..anadi rush to her and is trying to make her come to her sense...


Precap:
Bhavri telling her mum that since her dad have brought her in the house she know only 1 work how to empoison her life..Masa say what do you about wat i have done she says listen what i have done...Its me who had put your photo instead of that of maithili at Shaurya border camp..that why even after marriage shaurya have thought that U are his wife..he had not even saw that maithli...

So here it is guys hope I have been up to your expectations and sorry again for the delay!!
Do give your opinions!Sorri for any typo mistake and the words i didn't understand!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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take your time mehek.thanks for doing the update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks mehek for updating 👍🏼
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Thanks for the update, so glad Bhavri has realized how wrong she is. Gonna miss this show
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice detailed update...wow i can't believe how all the things are changing to be positive for once.... 😊
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thanks for the update. im sooo glad that drama is over now and atleast someone put that witch in her place.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks all hope u enjoy the update! nxt time will try to make it better! pff my hands paining! was quite a long epi 2d!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you! great update, very detailed. thank you for taking the time to do it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I think its soo saad, how the creatives changed Bhavri this much..this way. Its Pathetic! how low can they go?! 😡 in a way, i'm kinda glad this show is going to be ending..i can't bare to see Bhavri in this light. What an injustice is being done to her character! no wonder the show didnt work..when it had SOO MUCHH potential. CVs "CREATIVE" brain..must have gone to the dogs..

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