AR ShortStory: One Hug [Part 4 Pg 18]

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Ryka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

hey..

awesum part..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm..

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naina.sweety

@naina.sweety

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

heyy sis!!!
gr8 work!!! 😊...
mind blowing!!!
too good!!! really like wht she was wearin :)...
thnxx 4 pmin me!
do continue soon!!!
tc byeee ❤️ 🤗

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frndshp_luv_dmg

@frndshp_luv_dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

hey Maryam,

superb part.....i loved d white n red combination....😳 waiting for d next part...update soon!

Edited by frndshp_luv_dmg - 16 years ago

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

superb dear thx for pm

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Soulmate27

@Soulmate27

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

mindblowing....... amazing........jst 222222222 good.............beautiful............

stop saying sorry..................😆instead continue with the superb story😉

waiting eagerly for the rest story to come along............

thanx for the pm.........pls pls continue😃

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Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Thanks guys....for ur lovely comments...i am glad that u like it... so i am back with the next part..and ya maybe its a bit short... but i couldnt add the next day here as it wont match... i wanna keep it for the next part... so ya and i am sorry its a bit late as i was lazy and couldnt upload... so here is the part...

"Armaan where are u?," asked Riddhima, who was really afraid of dark

Suddenly, the lights switched on. Riddhima was really relieved about that but she still couldn't see Armaan. Riddhima had a feeling that Armaan was behind her.

Riddhima immediately turned around. There he was... with his head low... on his knees... with a beautiful diamond necklace in his hand.

Riddhima made him stand by holding his shoulder.

"this is for me??," said Riddhima

Armaan just nodded.

"wow... its beautiful... but their was no need for this... it must be really expensive," said Riddhima

"It is!! but not much as u r... if i have money i will always buy these expensive gifts for u," said Armaan sincerely

"awwwwwwww... thx a lot Armaan," said Riddhima, "as you have got it... wont u put it on for me," asked Riddhima😳

Armaan just blinked.

"Beautiful... on you it looks more beautiful," said Armaan

"Well... you see i am so beautiful," said Riddhima 😉

"ya ya... ok lets go and eat dinner," said Armaan

They walked towards the small table. Armaan pulled out the chair for Riddhima. After Riddhima got seated...he went and sat on his chair.

"So should we get the food?," asked Armaan

Riddhima just nodded.

"Ok then close your eyes and count till twenty," said Armaan

"armaan.... since the whole time u r making me do all these... well anyways.. lets try this,too " said Riddhima and closes her eyes

"20.... 19... 18... 17... 16...," said Riddhima

"10.... 9... 8...," said Riddhima

"3... 2... 1," said Riddhima and opened her eyes.

She was shocked!!!😲

She was all her fav dishes in front of her😃

(guys i have no clue ka log date pay kya khayge tu meina sab rak diya hai jo mujhe pasand hai😆😆😆)

Hyderbadi Meat Biryani

Veggie Biryani

Some Tandoori Roti

Butter Chicken

Do Paiza, Which Is Made Of Mutton

Tandoori Chicken

Aloo Matar

Shahi Paneer

Raita

There were Cold Drinks too.

"Armaannnnnnnnnn... there are all my fav indian dishes... frankly speaking... indian is my favorite cuisine," said Riddhima with love in her eyes

"i know basket," said Armaan

"When did you got all the time to do this?," said Riddhima while keeping her hand on his hand

"I always have time for my basket," said Armaan as put his on her's

After that they ate the food and talk about random stuff. They both were very comfortable... they knew one thing... before this new feeling and this date and all... they were best friends... who are never out of topic to talk about.😃

As they were finishing their food... Riddhima asked,"Armaan could we go on the beach after dinner... if you dont have any other plans,"

"sure basket," said Armaan😃

As they got done... they headed towards the parking lot.

There before sitting in the car.. Armaan took of his coat, tie and and put them on the back seat. He also opened his first 2-3 bottons of his shirt.

Riddhima also took her rings out... so they dont get wet.

Then they headed towards the beach.

Riddhima immediately ran out... she even took her heels out so she can walk easily.

and around...unbottons of the his shirt's sleeve and folded them.

Riddhima was really having fun.... suddenly Riddhima started singing.

She went by the the water and started playing with it.

Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya (Riddhima pointed towards armaan and sang)
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya(and then pointed towards herself and sang)
Chun liya (she played with the water)
Maine Sun liya (she acted as she could hear it and sang)

Armaan came and got hold of her hand and did some moves with her

Pehla nasha...Pehla khumaar(Armaan moved away from her and just walked by the shore... as he moved his finger through his hair and sang)
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar(Armaan just twirl around and just looked at Riddhima who was playing in the water and sang)
Kar loon main kya apna haal(Armaan kicked the water which was by his leg and sang)
Aye dil-e-bekaraar(Armaan sang as he walk towards Riddhima)
Mere dil-e-bekaraar(he sang pointing towards his heart)
Tu hi bata(He sang as he holded Riddhima's hands and dance with her)

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

They both played with water and dance

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin

(Armaan lay down on the sand and sang the lines)

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin

(Armaan just kicked the water and sang the lines)

Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen (Armaan pointed towards the sky and then the ground and sang)
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin(Armaan looked towards riddhima and act like asking "what should i do and what should i dont" while doing this he sang)

Pehla nasha...Pehla khumaar(Armaan moved away from her and just walked by the shore... as he moved his finger through his hair and sang)
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar(Armaan just twirl around and just looked at Riddhima who was playing in the water and sang)
Kar loon main kya apna haal(Armaan kicked the water which was by his leg and sang)
Aye dil-e-bekaraar(Armaan sang as he walk towards Riddhima)
Mere dil-e-bekaraar(he sang pointing towards his heart)
Tu hi bata(He sang as he holded Riddhima's hands and dance with her)

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

(Armaan went to get ice cream for then and Riddhima was playing in the water and dancing in it)

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se(Riddhima just walked by the shore.... remembering all the things he said to her today... and sang)
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke(Riddhima just twirl around remembering the decoration he did for her and sang)
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se(Riddhima just walked by the shore.... remembering all the things he said to her today... and sang)
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke(Riddhima just twirl around remembering the decoration he did for her and sang)
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke(Riddhima just lay down on the sand with arounds open and sang)
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se(Armaan came from nowhere and kissed her eyes... sand Riddhima)

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar

Raining started pouring like cats and dog... but they still kept dancing... Enjoying... Having fun... As their is nothing called as sadness... As they dont know they wont see each other tomorrow...

When the rain got really heavy...They both ran towards the car... Armaan immediately unlocked it and they got in...

Armaaan started driving... it was ten ten... and was really late... as Armaan needs to catch his flight tomorrow too...

As they came on a signal... he notice riddhima...

Her window was open and the rain was coming her face... and she did no move to close it... it was enjoying it... her hair was moving because of the wind... she was looking really pretty at that time..

Armaan needed to force himself to look on the road otherwise accident will happen... and he is on the highway... he needs to be careful... but once a while he takes a glance at her...

As he parks his car infront of her house he says.. "Basket i am going to my parents house for two days."

"whyyyyyyyy," asked Riddhima

"because my parents want to see me," said Armaan

"ok... then need to go... talk to u later..," said Riddhima

" r u gonna sleep right away," asked Armaan

"no... i want to tell something to someone," said Riddima

"What??," asked Armaan

Riddhima got of the car and looked inside from the window

"That... maybe," said riddhima as she started taking steps to her house," I AM IN LOVEEEEEEEE," said Riddhima and ran to her house

Armaan just smiled and went his home.

Riddhima was busy chatting with her friends.. when her cell rang..

She picked it up

R:hello
A:hey
R:hey...ghar pooch gaye?
A:hmmm
R:clothes change kar lia
A:yes yaar.... you are asking so many questions now... how many questions will you ask when u will be my gf
R:(didnt answer... she just wonder what would it be to be a gf of Armaan...)
A: oyeee hoyee... I didn't know that u blush too
R:shut up... i didnt blush... and cant a friend be worried about his friend(but still like that gf more)
A:ya ya... got it
R:ok so tell me.. did u book the tickets??
A:ummm... no
R:what????????? u r going tomorrow an u didn't book the tickets!!! Did u do the packing???
A:Sorry na.... dont shout...
R: hold on let me see.. COME ONLINE ON MSN IMMEDIATELY
A: ok ok... coming
R:ok cool there is one seat left.. u can take this... i am giving u the link... u take it and book it..
A: ok....
R:and ya... i am coming to ur house now...
A:why???????
R:to pack ur stuff... because i hardly doubt u will keep everything...
A:ok...should i come pick u up
R:no... i am coming there... hold on

Riddhima drive to Armaan's house.

She reached there in 10 mins... its really close... She knocked and Armaan opened...

She immediately went to his room and saw it was big mess...

R:umm... armaan where is ur room???
A:basket this is my room
R:this is a room??? i mean i thought i came to the store room by mistake
A:ok well i did 1/4 of the packing rest u can do it...
R:ok
A:u do this i will get coffee for both of us
R: ok

Armaan came back in some mins... with two cups of coffee..

Armaan was doing stupid stuff.... and really annoying Riddhima

For a min... Riddhima thought she was babysitting😆😆😆

Riddhima cleaned his room and everything...

After everything was done... i was twelve... and she was dead tired... but then there was problem

Riddhima cant stay at his house and he wont let her drive so late...

so in the end it was decided that... Armaan will go with Riddhima to her house and he will stay there too..

So he kept all his stuff in her car and made her sit in the passenger seat and he sat on the driving seat..

Up till... they reach home... Riddhima was fast sleep...

Armaan opened the door with the key he have and carried Riddhima to her room... he made her lie down and cover her with the blanket and closed the lights and came out and the door...

He then went out took his stuff out... locked her car... and took his stuff to his room... there is a room in that house for Armaan too..

He kept his stuff away and lie on the bed and went to sleep immediately🥱

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Hey guys!!!
that was the part for u and the date too

i hope u like it
plz press the like botton and do comment
it really matters a lot
luv u all
tc
maryam

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

oye hoyye
me doing bhangra n jazz n salsa n bharatnatyam
coz i am first
hip hip hurray
three cheers for me

Mini jaan
i read the whole part
n it was totally mast n bindass

the darkness, oho ho, it was sooo romantic n all,

n tht neklace, mummy, mujhe bhi chahiye, koi mujhe bhi gift do,

wo veg khana, mooh mein paani aa gaya,

n tht song sequence, can anything be more better, than tht song, beautiful,

loved the beach n everything

i am glad Armaan stared at her, n concentrated on driving too,😆

n after tht, Riddhima ki shout abt her being in love, wow, just the right cherry on top

n later on, how she scolded him, total wifey types, sho shweet,

n then helping him n all, saara sequence, bindass tha,

ok, now this was a big enuf comment, hope u r happy,

n sachi, i really loved the part

n precap seems tempting too

love
pooja

Edited by kweetrockstar - 16 years ago

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

awesooooooome....
superb.....
wonderful..........
fabulous upd.
loved it.......
thanx for the pm......

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Saniya

@Sani_Rani

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

wow mary the part was so cute, riddhima is proper behaving like his GF😆

loved it bbz. do continue soon.

love

sani

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Aviator

@Mrs.Hulk

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#120

hey MARY😛

Lovely part
Mindblowing
and romantic...😳
That song is my favourite😃
Loved every bit of the part
beginning to ending😃
keep continue
Thanks for the PM

love
prinz😳

Edited by Prinnia - 16 years ago