AbHer OS # 9- Rehengay Tere Sang Hamesha

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys,

The forum was really sunsaan so decided to come back with my weekendly dose of AbHer w/ an OS!!!😆 So here goes hope u like it

Rehengay Tere Sang Hamesha

Once Abeer and Leher clear up everything at the Mathur house. They are about to leave but Leher's mom says that they should stay a while, Leher's dad has gone out and KulCha is also not there. So when Leher's mom goes to prepare something for them, they eat and the mom leaves them alone with Bittan.

The three are sitting on a sofa, Bittan in the middle and Abeer and Leher on each end. Leher is totally ignoring Abeer.

Bittan: Didi kaisi ho? Humne apko bohut miss kiya!!

Leher: Bittan hum bhi tujhe bohut hi miss kartiay hain. They both hug and Abeer looks on. When Leher hugs Bittan and her head is on her shoulder, Abeer looks at her and does a ishara with his finger like mujhe bhi hug karo na.

At that moment Leher breaks the hug and returns to her spot on the sofa.

Bittan now turns to Abeer.

Bittan: Waisay Abeer jeeju ap to humay bhool hi gaye shaadi ke baad, pehlay toh humsay khoob madath letay thay didi ko patanay mein, ab kaam nikal gaya toh bus?

Abeer: On the sound of the word madath a light bulb lights in Abeer's head and he gets an idea that maybe Bittan can help him in manofying Leher, so he starts his maska lagaing.

Abeer: He puts his hand around her shoulder. Aray Bittan kaisi baath karti ho, ek jeeja apni saali ko bhool sakhtha hai kya. Aur tum toh ho hi itni pyari, tum jaanthi ho tum apni didi say bhi zyada pyaari ho and he winks.

Leher turns and makes an angry face and Abeer.

Abeer continues his maska lagaing.

Abeer: Hum toh humesha tumhein college mein dondthay hi rahtay hain Bittan, lekin lagtha hai tum humsay bhaag thi ho.

Bittan: Aray nahi Abeer jeeju aisi baath nahi hai,... aur huh ab didi nahi hoti hai apkay saath toh aap humein doondthay hain? Waisay aap bara jhooth bolney lagay hain, 'didi aap Abeer jeeju ko pakar key rakhay baray dhokeybaz horahai hain.😉

Leher: Yeh toh tu bilkul sach keh rahi hai Bittan!😡 Again Leher gives her mad look and she gets up.

Bittan: Aray di kahan ja rahi ho, bura maan gayi kya? Hum toh mazak kar rahay tay.

Leher: Nahi Bittan tumhari baat toh sahi thi, lekin humein college say yaad aya key humari kuch books room mein hai toh hum le letain hain.
Leher goes to her room and this gives Abeer a chance to update Bittan on how he didn't believe and support Leher in front of everyone and how he feels terrible for it and wants to apologize, but doesn't know what to do.

They both cook up an idea while Leher finds her books.

Bittan sends Abeer upto their chaath and says that she'll figure out a way to bring Leher there.

Meanwhile Abeer does his whole setup to try and get forgiveness.

Leher has just gotten her book from the room and is heading downstairs ready to go home. Bittan stops her.

Bittan: Didi thori der rukho na, itnay dinon baad toh ayi ho aur humaray saath baath bhi nahi kar rahi. Chalo hum chaath pe chalkay thandi hawa mein baath kartay hain.

At first Leher's mind wanders to Abeer and how he'll be so lonely and bored downstairs if she leaves like that, but then she thinks in her head.. "Achar hai Abeer ko bhi thora tarap na chaiyay, usko apni ghalthi ka ehsaas toh ho"

She decides it's a good idea to spend some quality time with her sister.and leave Abeer to suffer.

They head upstairs to the chaath and Bittan turns as soon as they get there.

Bittan: Oh ho didi hum kuch khanay ko latay hai. Ap jao hum abhi atay hai.

Leher enters the chaath and Bittan closes the door behind her and locks it as well. She had made a plan with Abeer to call her after he was done manofying Leher and if it took a while they could always just jump over to their own chaath from around the wall. She was going to tell the Mathur's that AbHer had left to their house.

When Leher sees Bittan has locked the door, she starts banging it.

Leher: Bittan darwaza kyun band kiya kholo!

Just then she hears someone cough ahooh ahooh, behind her.

She jumps and Abeer who is only inches behind her ends up falling to the ground with Leher on top of him.

Abeer is all happy in his head thinking: Aray wah humein toh kuch karna hi nahi para aur Leher humari bahon mein, lagtha hai bhagwan humaray saath hai! Chal beta Abeer shuru hoja.

For a moment they both get lost in each others eyes but then Leher realizes all that Abeer did and comes back to reality..

Leher with a shocked expression!: Abeer tum yahan kya kar rahay ho.

Abeer: Tumhara intezaar.

Leher: Abeer humain tumsay koi baat nahi karni. She gets up and fixes her sari and faces away from Abeer.

Abeer grabs her hand: Leher please, humain apnay kiye pe pachtawa hai, hum jaanta hain humein tum pe vishwaas karna chaiyay tha, lekin pata nahi humain kya hogaya tha, sab kuch aur hi kehray they'

Leher: yehi toh baath hain Abeer, sab kuch aur kehrahay they, lekin hum toh samajthay thay tum auron jaisay nahin ho. Humain toh vishwaas tha key humara Abeer sab say alag hai kabhi humara saath nahi chodayga, humesha humpay yakeen karegay, chahay puri duniya humaray khilaf ho. Tears starts rolling down her eyes as she recalls what happened.

Imagine this song playing in the whole sorry part, found it randomly and thought it suited them:
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PNhbwsInzog&feature=fvsr[/YOUTUBE]

Abeer wipes her tears: Leher please tum aisay rooh mat abhi, please humein maaf kardo, hum promise karthay hain kay agay kabhi aisa nahi hoga. He pulls his ears. Please please please!!!

Leher feels like smiling but thinks that she shouldn't give in so easily. She turns around.

Leher: itni asani say hum maaf nahi karengay kuch khaas karna parega.

Abeer: kya karoon? Kyaa karron? He puts on these funny glasses
And pulls his eyebrows up and down, in a kiddish voice: Please Leher ji umein maaf kar di jiye. And he folds his hands together.

Leher finally laughs but shakes her head saying that nope she will not forgive him.

Then Abeer brings out all these "I am Sorry" balloons and flowers for Leher, but Leher still refuses to give in.

Abeer brings out a plate of samosa, he had secretly sneaked them from the kitchen and on the plate he had written I AM SORRY with ketchup!! He started feeding Leher and Leher took a bite finding his idea so cute.

Abeer, as they both are sitting down side by side eating the samosa: Ab toh maaf kiya na?

Leher: shakes her head no, Nahi

Abeer: Kya abhi bhi nahin? Aray ab kya karoon?? Hmm acha tum kuch romantic chathi ho na, hum jantay hain. Abeer pulls her into a hug and has his head on her shoulder.

Leher: Abeer chodo hum aur naraz hojayegay.

Abeer: nahi hum nahi chodangay.

Leher: Abeer please, she lets go of his hold and runs to a corner on the chaath.

Just then it starts raining really hard. Abeer and Leher get full wet within minutes.

Leher: Uf ho Abeer hum poray geelay hogaye, ab kya hoga, ek toh yeh Bittan darwaza bhi nahi khol rahi.

The wind is blowing really hard and Leher is shivering.

Abeer comes closer to Leher

Leher: Pata nahi yeh Bittan kahan rehgayi ab itni sardi main'.

Abeer wraps his arms around Leher and pulls her closer.

Abeer: Ab Bittan nahi anaey wali.

Leher: Ma..matlab? trying to move away from Abeer. Abeer tum ne yeh sab'

Abeer: Shhh..he wipes off the rain drops from her lips, she shudders,
Kuch bol ne ki zarrorat nahi

As the rain falls on the Abeer pulls Leher into a hug and kisses and forehead and then gently plants a kiss on both her cheeks. He is tracing her lips with his fingers but Leher shys away and moves her face.

Abeer picks up Leher in his arms and they cross over the chaath into their own chaath.

As Abeer is putting Leher down their noses touch and Leher blushes. As they are walking Leher slips on a puddle of water but Abeer grabs her hand and doesn't let her fall.

Leher looks up at Abeer.

Leher: Kabhi humara saath math chodna Abeer.

Abeer: Kabhi nahi.

They sneak back into thir room downstairs so no one really notices that they had been on the chaath and they tell Banke to pretend that he was the one that let them in the house from the front gate.

That night they fell asleep in each others arms holding each others hands with a promise to never leave each others side come good or bad❤️..


As far as the rain part u can imagine any song u like😉

Sorry for any mistakes, it's 2 AM and i really wnated to get this in for Sunday sooo hope it makes sense didn't really reread!!😕 Do leave ur comments!!!😃

~Fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey, Fatima...really sweet one...Loved the way Bittan and Abeer plan to bring Leher to the terrace...wish the CVs read these and give us a baarish on the terrace scene....soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fati..........you did it again............ooooh.....I wish they would show something like this............mein tho ek roomani apology scene and ek baarish scene ke liye taras rahi hoon..........and you combined both............☺️☺️☺️.............great job! 👏 If the CVs don't give me what I want, I shall just read your scene..........reading this is as good as seeing...........you and Hina deffo have a gift!!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fatima ... Another Fab Write Up !!👏
You incorporated everything we want to see...
The apology... Jeeju-Saali scenes... and the all important Baarish !!!😉
Could imagine every bit ....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fati .. that was FABBB!!! Wowww! Loved every bit .. especially the baarish part .. and ofcourse, how you brought in everything!!! The jeeja-saali nok-jhonk .. Leher's roothna .. Abeer's manana (the I'm Sorry with ketchup part was adorrrrable!!!)
I could totalllly imagine it all .. the scene flashing right in front of my eyes!!! 😍 😍 I hope the CV's are reading your OS!!! They have to use yours and Hina's scenes!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww Fati,this was sooo cute
Bittan included very sweetly and the chath part was awwww
looking forward to more such scenes
you're awesoem with the dialouges and description

thanks bachi !


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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved it! So want to see a rain sequence and Abeer manaoing Leher like this!

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