Story contest - disqualified story(late entry)

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

Now what to say. Kya story thi. everything was moving the way we want in actual show. Awesome. I liked it. fast paced. dialogues were awesome esp ACP sir's. Liked Abhi-Daya scenes and too good concept dil jeet liya.

I really liked the grip this writer had over story. everything was clear.

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

A very well organised fast paced story...feeling like a show is running ..too good

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Jeet Banerjee

@jeet.

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414
Now what to say. Kya story thi. everything was moving the way we want in actual show. Awesome. I liked it. fast paced. dialogues were awesome esp ACP sir's. Liked Abhi-Daya scenes and too good concept dil jeet liya.

arre mera naam a gaya!! JEET !! 😆 😆 😆

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

OK this person had an unfair advantage of having read the other stories before completing this one. But then, there is also a disadvantage of making it 'different' from others.

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

this is one of gr8 story..but unfortunatly late ho gayi..lekin jisne bhi likhi hein hatts of to u buddy.nice work👏

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

The story is a very well planned one.... Wonderfully written.👏 Daya centric, but thats fine....😃

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: visrom
OK this person had an unfair advantage of having read the other stories before completing this one. But then, there is also a disadvantage of making it 'different' from others.

This is all fair now i think.. because talent is talent ..does not matter you participate or no...hats off to spirit shown by writer...

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

Very nice story,wished u had written earlier toh competition aur bhi tough ho jaatha

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: visrom
OK this person had an unfair advantage of having read the other stories before completing this one. But then, there is also a disadvantage of making it 'different' from others.

Yep. But the spirit shown by this writer even after completing deadline this writer completed. I can say its one of best but no voting for this one.