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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

oh just wow
i totally loved this part
so really cool n amazing n rocking
thanks a ton for the pm

love
pooja



well i am glad u loved the part and will update it soon

love
PJ
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thank for the comment and i am glad that u liked it😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: i_clueless

i love this FF! very well written and rocking concept..👍🏼 specially because it's in Armaan's POV..most FFs give Riddhima's POV and it gets annoying..glad to have come across this one..have been silently reading till now but just had to comment some day.. love all the extra characters especially Shin..i can totally relate to her and also to Armaan..they are my favs..😳 ummm...the truth or dare game was so funny and love the bond between Shin-Sani and Armaan-Nattu..interactions between all six and Nattu are supercool..! Sidbecomes annoying sometimes and i like this new Riddhima..a lot more relatable and more mysterious...i wonder who Riddhima's stalker is..😕 who could it be..? and why..?

can't wait for the next chapter..thnxx for adding me to the PM list
-Miya-



well u made my day by saying such sweet comments😃.............well ya maybe u are right that it is from armaan's POV😃................well ab shayad riddhima ka POV sab likhte hai thats why u said that but mein un sab jaisa acha writer nahi hoon but agar aapko mera FF acha laga then its my pleasure and it has really motivated me to write more😃...........well chalo thank go that u finally commented, ur comments really motivates me..............i will try ki future mein bhi aapko mere FF ke parts ache lage..............well actually i was not in the favour of using side characters like other FFs so i used my friends name as side characters o give something new😆😆😆😆😆..........wow i am glad that u liked armaan and shin's characters😃.............well actually truth and dare to hamara universal game hai na😆😆..............oh great that u loved sani-shin and armaan-nattu bonding..............abhi future mein aap aur bhi nayi bondings dekhyengi😆😆...........i will try to make it as interesting as i can..............well nattu is actually of their age only so she is able to bond with them easily😃...........well i will try to improve sid's character and about riddhima, well mein bore ho chuka tha har FF mein ek hi tarah ki riddhima se so i had to come up with new improved riddhima😆😆😆😆😆..........well riddhima ka stalker kaun hai yeh jaldi hi pata chal jayega but tab tak aap ko patience rakhna parega😆😆😆................well who and why sab sawalo ke jawab mill jayenge thora wait to karo😆😆😆😆😆...............well will update it as soon as possible.

-PJ-
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: namita18

hey..
firstly, i want to ask by what namei should call u , pj or pj bhai (tell me which one, u like the most), i m namita, i know we havent introduced ourself yet, so thought to do it now,
well u can call me by any name dear, yahan har koi mujhe ek naye naam se hi bulata hai😆😆😆😆, so jo bhi naam aapko acha lage us naam se bula lo😃, hi namita, my name is paramjeet therefore shortform PJ😆😆😆.....well baki ka intro aap mujhse scrap ya Pm ke through le sakti hai😃
secondly, i m really really sorry for this late comment. i have reserved before also to comment but didnt time to comment..
now after my bakwaas, i will come straight to ur ff..
well koi baat nahi der se comment kiya but important thing is ki kiya to sahi😃😃

i love the concept, as it is related to corporate world, in which i m really interested and really like the different character of ur ff..
wow chalo koi to mila jissey cor[porate world mein interest hai, well i am doing MBA so mujhe to corporate world ki knowledge hogi hi na and i was interested in writing on that concept only😃.........wow i am so glad that u liked the different characters kyunki i was worried ki kisi ko yeh different characters pasand aayenge ya nahi😆
its so refreshing to see ridhima in flirty and bold look, and armaan so sidha sadha..
well ab kuch to naya karna banta tha na warna FF likhne ka fayda hi kya huya😆😆😆
i love their chemistry and waiting eagerly to see more of AR in coming part..
well u will see lot of AR from now on chahe wog ramance ho ya fighting😆😆😆😆

one thing more, if i m not wrong dis is ur first ff na ??
ya u are right this is my first FF and mujhe bhi bharosa nahi ho raha ki ek mahine pehle mujhe FF parna bhi pasand nahi tha aur ab FF likh raha hoon😆😆😆😆
and u r so intelligent to give ur friends a character in ur ff. i mean all of ur gang is a part of ur story, not just my name, but also their realself, hubs vini,twinzy, sani. sometime it didnt looks like an ff, but lagta hai u r all commenting on any thread, i mean it was so realistic... i m not complaining but i seriosly like it. and after that converstion between sani and armaan's character, i can say that, u r armaan of dis ff,becoz that conversation is exactly like, wat u both talk on the any other posts..
well to be very frank i am not a very good writer but i do love joking around and do all kinds of pranks and nonsense talks😆😆😆............well fir dimag mein aaya ki ek FF likhna chaiye jisme mein hamari convos sab ko dikha saku jo itni bhi boring nahi hoti..........well its just a try, mujhe nahi pata that u will like it or not but all i wanbt is ki koi 5 minute bhi spend karey mera part parne par to haste huye jaye, if i can make someone laugh because of this FF or whatever u want to call these convos to i thing i have done my job😃.........well aapko kaisey pata ki sani aur mein har thread par aisey hi baat karte hai......hey sorry but have i ever met u.....aap mere baare mein itna janti hai, itna sahi analuysis kiya and i hardly know anything about u😆😆😆😆
seriously, u r very good observer, and a good friends that's y u have put the realself of ur friends as characters of dis ff, and i can say that, u know dem very well, thats y u have wrote dis ff so realistically...
well thanks for such sweet comments......can't believe u analysed everything so correctly.....kahin aaap PJ baba ki shishya to nahi hai na😆😆😆😆

i m really waiting for sid's plan and armaan-ridhima's moments.
well u will surely get what u want very soon😃
thankuu soo much for the pm
pls continue soon
well ya i will continue it as soon as i can😃
luv u
tk

PJ

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PART - 5

A man who was listening to all this was thinking to himself, aaj to tum bach gayi canteen mein meri jaan but kab tak bachogi……..bohot jald tum meri baahon mein hogi. Don't worry riddhima if ur Columbian boyfriend was a good kisser and then I will prove to u that how good I am on the bed with u. ab koi tumhe mujhse bacha ya dur nahi rakh payega.

That man was constantly looking at riddhima as if he is going to kidnap her any moment he found her alone.

Riddhima: comeon guys chalo ab meri turn khatam, chalo ab game ko aage barate hai.

Riddhima took the bottle and spun it and this time the upper end of the bottle came towards Armaan.

Armaan: lo yaar gayi bhes paani mein, ab mere saath tum log kya karoge.

Sid: abe agar mad ka baccha hai to truth nahi dare choose karma.

Armaan: dekh sid mujhe jo chunna hoga mein chun lunga, sirf dare chunne e mardangi sabit nahi hoti

Sid: ab yeh bol na seedhe seedhe ke tumjhe daar lag raha hai. See guys our armaan is a darpok man.

Armaan: sid fine I choose dare, so who is going to allot me the dare.

Sid: kyu na mein tujhe dare doon

Riddhima: shut up sid, is baar armaan ko dare dene ka kaam mein karungi

Armaan: issey to acha tha sid hi dare de deta, iski smile dekh kar to mujhe daar sa lag raha hai.

Riddhima: armaan are u ready do do what I give u as a dare

Armaan: fine ab de bhi do zada latkao mat

Riddhima: kya baat hai my puppy dog, dare lene ki itni jaldi (started to laugh)

Armaan: fine I guess tumhe dare dene mein koi interest nahi hai so lets move forward in the game.

Riddhima: no no baby abhi to maine tumhe dare diya bhi nahi hai, so ur dare is that u have to flirt with me for next 7 days.

Armaan: what?????? (really shocked to hear that)

Everyone out there also got shocked after listening to that dare.

Nattu: good going riddhima, abhi yeh sab ke maze le raha than a ab isey pata chalega.

Riddhima: thanks nattu, ab dekhe to sahi ki how does mr armaan flirts

Sani: tu to gaya kam akal

Shin: ab kya poora din meow meow aur bhau bhau sunna parega, nattu isey rook warna hamara training room zoo ban jayega

Vini: riddhima tujhe nahi lagta ki yeh sab theek nahi hai, matlab agar tumhare dad ko pata chal gaya to tum dono ki kher nahi

Sid: (who was feeling really jealous of armaan ki riddhima ne usey flirt karne ke liye kaha mujhe nahi) vini thik keh rahi hai riddhima, waisey bhi mujhe nahi lagta ki yeh kabhi kisi ke saath bhi flirt kar payega. Yeh to bas sab ka bhaiya banne layak hi hai.

Armaan: abe kyu mujhe badnaam kar raha hai

Sid: (thinking tumjhe badnaam nahi kar raha bas tujhe apne raaste se hata raha hoon) nahi yaar bas jo kaam tu nahi kar sakta us kaam se tujhe bachja raha hoon

Armaan: who sab to theek hai but itna sab kyu bol raha hai ki mein kabhi kisi ke saath flirt nahi kar sakta.

Sid: (abe yaar yeh sala befkoof samajta hai ki yeh flirt kar sakta hai, bhala mere saamne iski kya aukaat) nahi kuch nahi yaar bas aisey hi bol diya tha

Riddhima: ab bas karo tum dono, armaan u have to do the dare I gave u

Sid: but…(was stopped by riddhima)

Riddhima: will u just shut up, I have given a dare to armaan not to u, so keep ur mouth shut.

Sid: ok fine but do u think ki armaan yeh kar bhi payega ya nahi.

Armaan: he is right riddhima, please try to understand maine pehle kabhi kisi ke saath flirt nahi kiya hai so mein nahi kar payunga.

Riddhima: fine then don't do it but from now on everyone in the company will start calling u budda armaan, ab ek budda hi flirt karne se mana kar sakta hai.

Armaan: hey that's not fair

Riddhima: it is fair my dear friend and what do u say isn't he budda

Nattu: haan absolutely I will call him budda kam akal

Shin, sani and vini also started to make fun by calling armaan budda where as sid was trying his best to convince armaan not to accept the dare.

Armaan: (after he got irritated by everyone calling him budda he stood up to say something to everyone) ok stop it all of u, I accept my dare and I will flirt with Riddhima for a week now.

Riddhima: ya that's like my good puppy dog

Armaan: but tum bura to nahi manogi agar mein tumhare saath flirt karunga to.

Riddhima: main aur gussa becasue of flirting….. kabhi nahi (blushed a bit). Aur voh bhi if u flirt with me.. tab tho bilkul bhi gussa nah karoongi.

Armaan: thanks Riddhima jaan

Riddhima: thanks kiske liye? mujhe tho aapko thank you kehna chahiye mujhe jaan bolane ki liye (blushed again)

Armaan: kitna blush karti ho

Riddhima: ji mujhe tho blushing naturally aati hai

Sani, shin, nattu and vini decided to have some fun by pulling their leg. Whereas sid was getting really jealous by seeing armaan flirt with riddhima and riddhima enjoying that.

Sani: wah to riddhima tumhe mill hi gaya tumhara flirty partner

Riddhima: aise math kahiye... mujhe sharam aati hai

Shin: don't tell me tumhe bhi sharam aati hai (and started to laugh)

Vini: sharmana to larkiyo ka gehna hota hai na (and all started to laugh on that)

Sid: (he was getting really frustrated now on seeing them flirt so he decided that its netter that he leaves now) guys mujhe bohot zaroori kaam hai, I am leaving now.

Vini: itni jaldi kyu, thori der baad chale jana abhi to game shuru hi hui hai

Sid: arey magar…

Vini: comeon yaar bas thori der (she was getting attracted to sid but didn't tell him as she wanted to know him first)

Sid: thik hai but I will stay here for just 30 minutes more…….is it ok

Vini: ya that's great.

So vini and sid started to talk among themselves whereas others were busy in the conversation between armaan and riddhima)

Armaan: aur batao jaan apne baare mein

Riddhima: mein kiya batao.. aap hi poochlo, ab to aapka haq banta hai

Sani: chalk am akal pooch le ke usey shaadi ke baad kitne bacche chaiye (and started to laugh)

Shin: nahi nahi pooch ki shaadi ke baad iska kitne aur affairs karne ka plan hai.

Nattu: kya tum dono bhi, dekh armaan tu pooch kit um dono kaunse jungle mein romance karne wale ho kyunki tumne zoo to yaha khol hi diya hai.

Armaan: tum teeno thori der ke liye apna muh band nahi rakh sakte kya. Kya paaglo waali baatein kar rahe ho, mujhe flirt karne ka dare mila hai, koi shaadi nahi ho gayi Riddhima ke saath. Kyu mera mazak bana rahe ho

Nattu: kyu jab mera mazak bana raha tha tab kya huya tha

Armaan: thik hai uralo jitna mazak urana hai mein bhi time aane par tumse badla le hi lunga (and passed a smile)

Riddhima: ab kuch poochoge bhi, kya poochna chahte the?

Armaan: tum rehti kahan ho? What are ur hobbies and what else do u love other than boyfriends?

Riddhima: ji I live in Pitam Pura, I like to play Volley ball, basket ball and tennis. I love to eat and mujhe kabhi pyaar nahi huya.

Armaan: Oye u live in Pitam Pura and I live in Rohini, hum to neighbours huye yaar and secondly pyaar ek se hota hai.......................haazaro se nahi...........................................so choose one and be loyal to him

Riddhima: so how about we both comming together to the office from tomorrow. Lekin meri galti nahi hai! itne sarre ladki hai.. mein kya karo! (started dreaming about all the hot and handsome men she has met and dated) lekin abhi tak kisse se pyar nahi hua, sirf time pass hai.

Armaan: well thik hai aaj tumhe ghar drop kar dunga aur kal se hum dono saath hi office aaya karenge meri bike ya car par and pyaar ho jaye ga dear...have some patience....mein hoon na.

Riddhima: aap sachi main ho (started blushing again) lekin aap kya karlo ge???

Armaan: well koi nahi mila to mein to hu hi na (started laughing loudly).

Riddhima: YAY! ab tho mujhe koi chinta nahi……… mujhe back up milgaya.

Armaan: yes same with me..............................backup to hona hi chaiye

Riddhima: ji mein hoon na ab ki backup!

Shin: yaar tum dono kar kya rahe ho, bas bhi karo ab tum dono jokers.

Riddhima: hum to kuch bhi nahi kar rahe………me no joker, mein hoon partner in flirting.

Shin: heyy Riddhima...i'm a girl so plz no flirting with me.

Riddhima: oye tumhari flirting partner nahi, Armaan ki

Sani: ye kya sab partner in flirting ho raha hai, mein kiski partner hoon?

Armaan: waisey is restaurant mein kai handsome waiter hai kisi ko bhi apna partner bana lo aur raat ko sapne mein ussey shaadi bhi kar lena (started to laugh)

Sani: kam akal chup ho ja warna tu janta nahi hai ki mera gussa kaisa hai

Riddhima: oye sani mere armaan ko dhamki mat do warna mein flirt kiske saath karungi.

Armaan: kya baat hai riddhima tum to meri jaan ho.

Riddhima: dun worri mein bas apki hi hoon! (said that blushing a bit)

Armaan: thats great .....................................kyunki mein bahot possessive types hoon

Riddhima: sachi mein......... mujhe possessive types bohot pasand hai.

Nattu: armaan and riddhima kitna flirting karte ho tum dono, agar mujhe flirting sikhna hoga na then will surely ask u guys.

Riddhima: of course anytime, lekin flirting natural hai yaar.

Armaan: waisey mera to pehli baar hai but if u like it then anytime dear............afterall i am always there to help friends.

Riddhima: excuse me.. aap sirf meri flirting partner ho.. mein bhi thori possessive hoon

Armaan: arey nattu to meri diii hai pooch lo unse, mein to unki help sirf islia karunga taki who mere jiju ke saath flirt kar sake.

Riddhima: itz ok.. flirting ki hai, believe tho karna hi parega…….. i believe u

Nattu: lagta hai kuch jal raha hai yahan par, Riddhima who sirf dare ki wajah se tera flirting partner hai, tu usko le kar sach mein itna possessive kyu ho rahi hai, why are u getting jealous?

Riddhima: (thinking to herself yaar yeh nattu keh to thik hi rahi hai why am I getting jealous, who koi mera asli boyfriend thorna hai aur na hi mein ussey pyaar karti hoon, then why did the hell I got jealous) nahi kuch nahi bas jab tak uska dare khatam nahi ho jata I will be possessive for him.

Armaan: thats why u are my jaan

Riddhima: agar mein apki jaan hoon, tho ap meri kaun ho?

Armaan: flirting partner aur kaun (both started to laugh on this)

Nattu: I am very bad at flirting, actually I have not tried flirting that much with ur jiju islia jaldi se sikhna hoga

Riddhima: flirting is an art..and every one should know this..

Nattu: but I am very bad at art

Sani: yaha bohut flirting ho rahi hai

Riddhima: well flirting karne ke liye zada kuch nahi bas romantic baatein, romantic gaane and yahi sab karma parta hai bas

Armaan: ab mujhe romantic gaane bhi gaane parenge kya

Riddhima: ye my flirting partner, sing some romantic songs for me.

Armaan: yaar actually I am bad in singing songs and meri aawaz bhi zada achi nahi hai, so can I do some romantic shayari in place of songs

Riddhima: thik hai but it should be good one

Armaan: kyu nahi zaroor

Aap khubsurat hain itne, ke har shakhs ki zuban par aap hi ka tarana hai, hum nacheez to kahan kisi ke kaabil, aur aapka to khuda bhi diwana hai.

Riddhima: wah wah partner dill khush kar diya aap ne

Armaan: sach, chalo is baat par ek aur shayari ho jaye

Moor ker na dekh mujhe, yoon hanstay hanstay,
Mere dost hain baray hoshiyaar, keh dengay bhabhi Namaste.

Riddhima: kitna romantic partner milli hai mujhe, chalo issey baat par ek aur shayari karo na please

Armaan: zaroor zaroor

Daag ansuon se dhoye hain,
Jab bhi tanha huye hain roye hain,
Dil mein kyon na uge yaad teri,
Dil mein tere hi khawab boye hain.

Riddhima: oye mar jawan is shayari par, ab to mujhe roz tumhare muh se apne liye shayari sunni hai

Nattu: OMG romantic shayari bhi, ok bohut flirting horaha hai yaha, I think we all should leave now. Tum dono continue karo.

Riddhima: don't be shocked Nattu, flirting is an art for girls and profession of boys!

Armaan: oye mujhe flirt karne ke liye to tumne hi kaha hai na

Riddhima: but look you are so good at it.

Sani: chi chi Riddhima janu ..kuch to rahem karo...

Riddhima: oye mein tumhari jaanu nahi hoon…….me is only Armaan's jaanu. Partner aur flirt karo na

Armaan: (abe yaar yeh larki aaj tujhe pakka sarakchap aashiq ka award dilwa kar hi rahegi, ab chal beta flirt kar warna fir sab tujhe budda kehna shuru ho jayenge) who…who…I lost my phone number, can I borrow yours.

Riddhima: of course.. kuch aur chaiye kya??

Armaan: nahi filhaal to number hi de do aur meri jaan choro

Riddhima: aisey kaisey chor de partner, abhi to tumne flirting shuru ki hai abhi to maza aana shuru hua hai, aur flirt karo na

Armaan: (hey bhagwan bacho mujhe) so…have any plans tonight

Riddhima: agar aap kahe tho sab plans cancel hi kardo!

Armaan: yes dear...............................lets go for a date tonight

Riddhima: ji mein tayar hoon!(blushing a bit). kaha challenge?

Armaan: what do u say beach par party karte hai

Riddhima: mujhe beaches bohot pasand hai! aur voh bhi raat mein

Shin: bas karo yaar aur kitna flirt karoge aur yeh delhi mein beaches kahan se aa gayi.

Riddhima: oye kabab mein haddhi.. chale jaoo.. lolzz……….tum hamari time waste kar rahe ho.

Nattu: Armaan dii ke samne tum Riddhima ko date par puch rahe ho? kuch tho sharam karo yaar

Armaan: well because she is the sweetest girl I have ever met and dii jisne ki sharam uske phute karam

Riddhima: aap bhi bohot sweet ho! But ab tak aap ne mujhe yeh bhi nahi kha ki aap mujhse pyaar karte ho

Armaan: (oh shit ab yeh bhi kehna parega kya) dekho flirt karne ki baat huyi thi, yeh sab kehne ki nahi.

Riddhima: nahi tumhe kehna hi parega warna pata hai na mein tumhe kya bulaungi

Armaan: (kahan phas gaya yaar) thik hai I LOVE YOU

Riddhima: apne kehdi.. aur voh bhi sabke saamne

Armaan: pyaar karne wale darte nahi...........................jo darte hai wo pyaar karte nahi

Riddhima: isse kehte hai mard! mujhe bhi aapse bohot pyar hai.

Shin: please I beg both of you ab bas karo tum dono, thori flirting kal ke liye bhi chor do. Lets continue with the game please.

Riddhima: thik hai but armaan pata hai na tumhe yeh flirting poore 7 din tak karni hai mere saath

Armaan: haan haan pata hai chalo abhi to bas karo aur chalo game aagay barate hai.


Note - is part mein sirf AR convo hi bhara huya hai agar bore ho jao to bata dena agli baar se i will try to reduce it


Promo - Game continues

sid, shin, sani and vini's turns

mystery man decides to get armaan out of the company

sid and vini affair starts

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Bro ... 😡😆..kaisa bhai h tu yaar.. ? Sid ke saath mujhe ???? I mean me n SID... as in Sid ...S-I-D.... 😭... please bol de ye jhooth h.....pleaseeeeeeeee
*Vini banging her head on the wall *...😡 ..hayyeeee!! meri footi kismat !!


Afsos ho raha h mujhe ki isi part me mujhe first comment karna tha kya..?......😡😭😆
....Tune toh meri khushi ko tikne bhi nae diya....*sob sob*

Anyways, coming to the part... Yaar, except the above thing i mean me having a crush on S**....🤢🤢 ...everything else was amazing ... seriously, it was the best part ever... I actually laughed lyk maniacs .......🤣 ..btw, jo jo tune likha h kya ye sab actually hua bhi tha??....i guess, i got to find and read those threads then...😉😆😆

First of all, i really wonder who dat mystery man is...🤔..saamne kyun nae aata idiot...!! 😡

hehe.. ridz ne armaan ko kitna torture kiya dare accpet karne ke liye.......and uff ! ye nattu toh kabhi nae sudharegi .. shaadi ka naam sunte hi iske kaan khade ho jaate h.....🤣... n Uff ye vini kitni stupid h .. game me bhi shanky uncle ji ko yaad kar rahi h....😆.. kabhi toh seedhe track par aa jaaya kar yaar.......😆
waise ye buddha armaan wala convo sach me hua tha kya..? 😛😆😆.. man! sazi ne kitna torture kiya baba ko....🤣...Flirty Partner...!! 😲🤣
..ridz ki toh lottery nikla padi ...waise dnt u think sani wud suit more into this charcter..?...😉🤣...mujhe toh aisa hi lag raha tha as if sani ki aatma chali gayi ridz me......😆😆

Vini: sharmana to larkiyo ka gehna hota hai na (and all started to laugh on that)

..OMG !! cough cough ... kuch jyada nae ho gaya.. ? i mean tu mujhe itni izzat mat de yaar ..PLEASE.... 😲🤣

Vini: comeon yaar bas thori der (she was getting attracted to sid but didn't tell him as she wanted to know him first)

....NO COMMENTS.... 😒😡

Riddhima: (started dreaming about all the hot and handsome men she has met and dated)
..Yeh toh Sani ka reaction hona chahiye !! nae.. ??...🤣

backup to hona hi chaiye... 😲🤣....tune kitne rakh rakhe hain...? 😉😆😆

Shin: yaar tum dono kar kya rahe ho, bas bhi karo ab tum dono jokers.
heyy Riddhima...i'm a girl so plz no flirting with me.
..CG ki izzat par khatre ke badal mandra rahe hain.....🤣and tum dono jokers ho..?? Mujhe bhi tumhara CIRCUS dekhna h......🤣..waah yaar tum dono kitna kaam karte ho ...Zoo me bhi and now circus too........🤣

Sani: ye kya sab partner in flirting ho raha hai, mein kiski partner hoon?
...lo aa gayi apni asliyat par... bas isko toh mauke ki talaash rehti h.. .jahan partner,shaadi,bf , bache ka topic shuru hua wahin sexy churel ke mahaan kadam pade... 🤣

Armaan: waisey is restaurant mein kai handsome waiter hai kisi ko bhi apna partner bana lo aur raat ko sapne mein ussey shaadi bhi kar lena (started to laugh)

..oye tujhe nae lagta waiter bhi iske level ke liye thoda bada h ... 😉🤣....and aisa bolne se pehle us bechare waiter par toh taras kha leta .... woh restaurant se bhaag gaya toh khana tu serve karega kya?......🤣


Nattu: I am very bad at flirting, actually I have not tried flirting that much with ur jiju islia jaldi se sikhna hoga

..sirf jeeju par hi try nae ki ...baki armaan and junior karan ke saath toh hamesha lagi rehti h... bechare humare jeeju....😭🤣and "that much" ka kya matlab..??...yeh ladki karna kya chahti h..?.....🤔😆😆

Riddhima: flirting is an art..and every one should know this.

...toh mujhe kyun NAE aati........😭😭..*sniff sniff*....

N WOW !! yaar kya shayari bolta h ... .rdz toh cloud nine par pahuch gayi hogi ...ab use neeche kaun layega .., goof..... 😡😆😆

Sani: chi chi Riddhima janu ..kuch to rahem karo...

..chi chi... 🤢🤢..sani CONTROL ur emotions gal....... 😲🤣

jisne ki sharam uske phute karam

..wow !! 👏👏 ... nice one.. 😆😆😆

I think bahut ho gaya ..warna my stomach ll hurt more... 🤣 ... seriously i enjoyed it loads .. . guess tere examz khatam hone ki khushi isme umad umad kar aa rahi h... 😆😆... simply LUVD IT ... 🤗👍🏼🤣....keep going partner .....and i wont say anything more but yeah PLEASE SPARE ME ... tu apni behen ke liye woh ladka kaise dhund sakta h jise woh hate karti h ... !! tujhe mujhse kya dushmani h.. kis janam ka badla le raha h...hmm .. ?...😭😭

Continue Soon ...

Love

Vini

Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago
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EDITED😉
lalalaa mein aa gayi kam akkal😆
bhai ur part was just superb like muahzzz, AR se bhara hua and i seriosly loved it. bechara armaan dare mein boora phasa hua tha and riddhima uska fayda le rahi thi😆 yaar riddhima ke to international level tak BFs hai and mera to local bhi nahi😭😆😆😆
Armaan: lo yaar gayi bhes paani mein, ab mere saath tum log kya karoge.
armaan yaar dar to aise rahe ho jaise ki tumhari izzat loot legi🤣
Sid: abe agar mad ka baccha hai to truth nahi dare choose karma.
oye mr mard. why r u jumping so much?😆 uff i hate people like that.
Sid: kyu na mein tujhe dare doon
don't u think sid kamina kuch zyaada hi kud raha hai dare dene ke liye. aisi kya dare deni thi?😆
Shin: ab kya poora din meow meow aur bhau bhau sunna parega, nattu isey rook warna hamara training room zoo ban jayega
shin kamini ko armaan ki chinta nahi hai par meow meow and bhau bhau ki pari hai. dekha kam akka🤣 btw agar zoo ban bhi jata hai then i don't mind kam se kam free mein jaanwaro ki awaaze to sunne milegi🤣
Sid: (who was feeling really jealous of armaan ki riddhima ne usey flirt karne ke liye kaha mujhe nahi) vini thik keh rahi hai riddhima, waisey bhi mujhe nahi lagta ki yeh kabhi kisi ke saath bhi flirt kar payega. Yeh to bas sab ka bhaiya banne layak hi hai.
kam akkal dikha de iss kamine sid ko tumhe bhaiyaa se saiyaan banna bohot achi tarah se aata hai😉😆😆😆
Riddhima: will u just shut up, I have given a dare to armaan not to u, so keep ur mouth shut.
🤣🤣🤣 bhai i was like GO RIDDHIMA GO RIDDHIMA after reading this😆😆😆 kya jawaab diya hai, khote ke muh par taale lag gaye😆😆😆
Shin, sani and vini also started to make fun by calling armaan budda where as sid was trying his best to convince armaan not to accept the dare.
bas teeno kaminis ko yahi kaam aata hai. kisi ko provoke kaise karna yeh humse pooche😆😆😆 i feel sorry for sid🤣 and VINI TU BHI MIL GAYI😲😆😆😆
Riddhima: aise math kahiye... mujhe sharam aati hai
yaar riddhima se itni sharam digest nahi hui😕😆😆😆 riddhima ko sharam bhi aati hai? thats a dicovery🤔🤣]

Vini: sharmana to larkiyo ka gehna hota hai na (and all started to laugh on that)

wah vini kya dialogue mara hai, muje do baar check karna para ki yeh tune hi kaha na🤣
Vini: comeon yaar bas thori der (she was getting attracted to sid but didn't tell him as she wanted to know him first)
oye hoye. naye naye pyaar ke phool khil rahe hai vini ke bageeche mein😉😆😆😆 par vini i thoight u had better choice, par chalo khalli ke saamne to koi bhi acha lagega🤣
Sani: chalk am akal pooch le ke usey shaadi ke baad kitne bacche chaiye (and started to laugh)
bas sani ko yeh sab ke alawa aur kuch sujhta hi nahi hai😡😆😆😆
Shin: nahi nahi pooch ki shaadi ke baad iska kitne aur affairs karne ka plan hai
shin sab teri twinzy ki tarah nahi hote. kuch log commited bhi hote hai🤣
secondly pyaar ek se hota hai.......................haazaro se nahi...........................................so choose one and be loyal to him
kya ex hubby yeh line tum par suit nahi karti jiski ex wifey ke already 50 hubbys ho🤣
Armaan: yes same with me..............................backup to hona hi chaiye
bhai meine to back plan ke baare mein socha hi nahi. mein kal hi arun se baat karti hu😆😆😆
Sani: ye kya sab partner in flirting ho raha hai, mein kiski partner hoon?
bhai aapne bechari abla naari ko akela chor diya.😭 uske liye bhi koi lao na😉😆😆😆 waise vini is right ki jaha par bhi shaadi, BFs, partners, bacche ki baat aaye sexy churel ke kaan khare ho jaate hai🤣

Armaan: waisey is restaurant mein kai handsome waiter hai kisi ko bhi apna partner bana lo aur raat ko sapne mein ussey shaadi bhi kar lena (started to laugh)

kamine zyaada daant dikhaya to tumhare daant zameen par geere hue milenge😆😆😆
Sani: yaha bohut flirting ho rahi hai
kyo do u need some air?🤣
bhai nattu ko kitni bholi bhali hai, usne apne hone waale pati ke saath flirting nahi ki and armaan, nalayak work ke pehle din hi shuru😡🤣 waise nattu ne jeeju ko chor kar sab ke saath flirting ki hai😆😆😆
bhai ur shayris were outstanding and some of the punches (and kam akkal, am not talking about boxing😡🤣 )were just mindblowing (literally dimaag phat gaya😆😆😆)
Sani: chi chi Riddhima janu ..kuch to rahem karo...
NO COMMENTS😡 dekhlungi tumhe to mein nalayak. watch.😡. ab bas yehi din dekhne ko reh gaya tha.🤣
Shin: bas karo yaar aur kitna flirt karoge aur yeh delhi mein beaches kahan se aa gayi.
that was my exact question bhai even before i red shin's dialogue ki yeh kamina dekhi mein beach kaha se aaya?🤣

Note - is part mein sirf AR convo hi bhara huya hai agar bore ho jao to bata dena agli baar se i will try to reduce it

no bhai it's an AR ff, so AR hona imp hai kam akkal😆
sid, shin, sani and vini's turns
bhai ke bacche you better give me some good dare😉😆
lalala finally ur MOST AWAITED comment edit ho gayi.🤣
love
sani

Edited by Sani_Rani - 15 years ago
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*Edited *

Hey partner

Wow... kya mast part likha h yaar.........😆😆 .. n isme armaan was back to his devdaas mood , isnt it?.......🤣... luvd it.. u were surely a hidden writer....... i luvd ur punches in this one too ..
nahi sis armaan devdas nahi tha, shayari dhyaan se paro, devdas wali nahi hai😆😆😆...no sis i don't have a hidden writer, i have a hidden joker and a prankster in me😆😆😆............well ab mera FF hai to usme comedy ke punches to honge hi na😆
arre shayari devdas wali nae h pata h par kya karoon jab bhi tu shayari karta h toh mujhe tera devdas torture yaad aa jaata h...😆😆😆 n yaar, u rnt a hidden joker and prankster..woh toh poori duniya ko pata h ..par tere andar ke writer ko koi nae jaanta tha na..😆...haan woh toh h .. teri FF me seriousness ki umeed kar bhi kaun sakta h.. !! 😆😆


N man, ridz's character is soo different.. she's so carefree and flirty .......u r soo right .. ridzi me muski ki aatma h.........😆😆... n dis sid... 😡..man, i hate him lyk anything... usko toh is FF me hona hi nae chahiye tha.......luvd sani n shin's character here.. . 😆..
sis ab baki FFs se thora different banana tha to ridz aur armaan ka nature thora different rakhna para na, well jab tak tum bore nahi hoti kya bura hai ridz with muski ki aatma in it😆........well sid ko hona hi chaiye tha kyunki ab mein vini aur sid ki love story shuru karne wala hoon with sid trying to use vini for a reason😆.................oye sani aur mera convo kaisa laga😆

...N u knw wat m luving AR coz of it ..itna fresh and new character h dono ka... its gud u did sumthng different...n me toh kabhi isse bore nae hongi.........😆😆..i luv this entertainment package.........😆😆... very funny .. mujhe is par hasi nae aayi........😡😭😭.. I ll kill dat S** ... (waise tujhe pehle hi bata deti hun ki me stars isliye laga rahi hun coz its nt less den a swear word.. 😆😆).... Arre yaar sorry jaldi jaldi me us par comment karna bhul gayi.. It was really funny .. and mene ye convo sani ki FF par padha tha .. so it reminded me of dat... Seriously, it was lyk reliving all those moments... 😃
Finally, kam akal is getting famous... 😆... btw, thode tym me use bin akal bhi bana dena.... 😉😆😆... mujhe bhi nattu ke secrets jaan ne h....esp...(samjh gaya na) 😉🤣
well ab kam akal nam famous to hona hi tha itne special person ne yeh naam jo diya tha and don't warry nattu ke bache huye secrets jaldi hi bata dunga sabko😆
.. woh toh h.. 😆.. yeah m soo eagerly waiting for those secrets....😉😆😆

N yaar, ye mystery guy kaun h .. he's so disgusting .......😡.. i feel lyk killing him..........
well ab tumhe mystery guy kaun hai yeh janne ke liye thora wait to karna hi parega na😆
..yaar please thoda toh hint dena... after all m ur partner too bro...😉😆😆

cnt soon ..jaldi se... mujhe is mystery man ki reality jaan ni h......
well i will try to update that ass soon as possible😃
..its ohk.. take ur tym.. abhi toh examz khatam hi hue h.. ?waise hw was ur exam?

Love
Vini


LOVE
PJ
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Posted: 15 years ago
glad to know dat, u r doing mba ..
and i m doing c.a thats y i m interested in corporate world
yeah i have seen ur conversation wid sani, vini,hubs and others on many threads like vini;s birthday , hubs party etc..😆😆
we havent talk before, but i know much of u all, becoz i m a good observer, haan abhi tak to nai thi pj baba ki shishya par lagta hai ab zarur bana padega..😉😉😉
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Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

res dammit am second. KAMINI VINI😡



better luck next time hubbies ki mallika😆😆😆

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