Thick and thin - Rati/abhi OS

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello everyone

This oneshot is written by my sis ... she generally writes waht ever she fels like
So i thought y not i gift it to her by posting on the forum

Full credit goes to my sis ... abt friendship b/w rati and abhishek ..
Hope u guys like it


All four mohit , sanaya , arjun,rati are hanging out on the sets . As usual M,S,A doing masti and rati watching them

They see abhishek coming towards them

Abhi : Hey guys . Hi rati

Moh : Hey abhi how come u are here.

Abhi : just came for some formalities.

He came and made himself comfortable next to rati.

Abhi : hey rati howz it going on

Rati : as usual abhi. Tum aur jas bhi nahin hein toh itna mazaa nahin aa rahan,

Abhi : arey aise kaise apna prankster hein na arjun

Rati just smiled

They both are engrossed in their discussion

Arjun watched both of them for a sec and went back to sanaya and mohit.

Meanwhile rati got a call from production house and she left saying that she will be back in an hour. Kyonki unhone kahan ki kisiko math batana rati ne kisiko nahin bataya ki call kahan se hein.

Rati went and came back in an hour. Arjun was getting ready for the scene post leap where he was imagining nupur. Rati didn't speak to anyone and just changed to her costume. Abhi felt some change in rathi. ( Actually he was abt to leave when he saw rati coming a bit depressed. So he decided to stay back and talk to her)

The scene was shot but something was missing ----- the glow.

Rati went straight to her vanity van . Abhi followed her. He saw her resting on the couch with her head down.

Abhi : Hey rathi kya hua

Rati : Kuch nahin abhi. I just had a talk with PH and I am the one who is leaving the show. Tomorrow is my last day.

She sighed.

Abhi came and sat next to her , He took her hand and squeezed it , Rati slowly raised her head and kept it on abhis shoulder looking blankly.

Abhi: Rati aaj kahin baahar chale . Tu,mein,jas.

Rati : nahin yaar mann nahin hein

Abhi: aise kaise re . chal na

Rati: **sighed** theek hein challenge thodi der baadh

Abhi: Tujhe yaad hein jis din se mujhe ye baath pata chala ki mein season 2 mein nahin hoon

Flashback

Every day rati and abhi used to go to meet some popular director for a role . When ever rati got time from shoot she even used to attend his auditions with jas.. same thing goes with jas also..

The day abhi got the project rati and jas were with him. They hanged out all night at jas place.

Flashback ends

Rati : haan yaad hein us din hamne kitna masti ki hein na

A small smile crept on her face.

Abhi : Toh tujhe ab kis bath ki tension hein. Is baar bhi hum aise hi karenge ' Par is baar tere ghar pe hangout karenge yaar.. ye jas aajkal shaadi kya ho gayi kanjus ho gaya yaar

Rati smiled finally heartfully.

Rati: haan jab dost hein tho tension kis baath ki. Both stayed there for some time..

Just then arjun came in and saw them

Arjun : anything wrong guys.

Rati: nothing arjun just catching up things,

They sat there and had a talk for 5 min

Arjun left as he has to talk with mohit and sanaya

Rati and abhi also left to jas place to share the news.

Last scene

Everyone came to know that it is rati . Rati came out wearing a red saree as breath taking as ever. She had the same smile playing on her lips.

Rati didn't use glycerine for this scene . Once the scene is shot she ran to her makeup room. She changed to her normal attire ' Left some gifts for everyone and cameout as quickly as she can

When she came out she saw abhishek and jaskaran waiting for her .. She hugged them and they left the sets

Their journey must have ended in the show but they had a life long journey as friends ' Friends are defined when u go through thick

Hope u guys like it


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful! I love Abhishek, mainly because he's so close to Rati. Just wish none of them left, then the friendship would've always been around on sets. Stupid CV's!😡
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwww!!!!!!!!
awesome!!!!!!!!
different concept and mindblowing work!!!!!!1
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it..love rati and abhishek!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very touching OS well done loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ewwwww touching OS dear i love rati n abhi
it was awesome os
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

ewwwww touching OS dear i love rati n abhi

it was awesome os
do write more



Samira, hunny I think instead of "a" you wrote "e" you meant awwww, right? 😆 Anyways even I love rati, abhi!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanofamrita



Samira, hunny I think instead of "a" you wrote "e" you meant awwww, right? 😆 Anyways even I love rati, abhi!😳



😆 yaa...it changes the whole meaning...
waie it was lovely dear 😳
i always Loved and adored their scenes as Nupur and benji....i miss then:('
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: fanofamrita

Beautiful! I love Abhishek, mainly because he's so close to Rati. Just wish none of them left, then the friendship would've always been around on sets. Stupid CV's!😡



thanks 😊
just wish season 1 ended on a happy note
and season 2 started with same characters with diff look 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: me_mohit

wowwwwwww!!!!!!!!

awesome!!!!!!!!
different concept and mindblowing work!!!!!!1



Thanks a lot 😊

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