Kambakht Dill (A,S,R,S) Part 7a pg 14

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Hey guyz this my first time writin a ff so plz bear with me..this is about armaan,shilpa,riddhima,sid…well the characters are the same as in DMG. This is 2 years in the future of DMG. And there is nothing of ridz and shilpa being sister or anything. I hope u guys like it and plz comment..also critizism is always welcome!!!





Preface

Armaan waz sitting at his usual spot…the basketball court. But this waz not the basketball in sanjeevni..he had left that one a long time ago. Now he waz in london, living happily with his wife. And tomorrow waz their first anniversory. He waz sitting there planning something special…when suddenly he felt a hand behind him….it waz his loving wife..she looked at him and asked him wat he waz doing here with her eyes. He just stared at her and asked her for a basketball game. She accepted and they began playin and it waz a tough game but at the end he let her win. And with that they went in the house in each others arms….



That's it for now.. and I just want to see if u people like it or not soooo plz comment even if u just want me to tell it waz boring….anyway do try to guess who his wife is…k now…and I know I talk or shud I say write a lot hehe… also I will have a bigger part nxt time and if u guys do reply then I mite even post the part later today.

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Index
part 1 - pg 1
part 2 - pg 2
part 3 - pg 2
part 4 - pg 4
part 5- pg 7
part 6 - pg 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1

As Armaan waz going inside holding his wonderful wife by his side. He started thinking about what to do tomorrow for his special day. When they entered their house she left him to go to the kitchen and make a snack for both of them. While armaan got busy watching tv. She came out of the kitchen and gave him some snacks while she waz about to leave he pulled her in his lap and said……

A: so do u know wat tomorrow is??

Ummm no wat is it??

He knew she waz just teasing him becuz he could always see through her lies. So he decided to play along .

A: its Saturday and that means I have day off from work…ahhh so glad finaly a break from work

Now she waz mad cuz she thought he has really forgotton about it and just got off from his lap and went away from there.

A: hey Shilpa where u goin

S: nowhere just in the kitchen uhmff

He thought to go and tell her he didn't forget but then he decided that he will just surprise her tomorrow…..he knew she loved him a lot and wud definatly forgive him about his stupid act today wen he surprised her… and he waz very thankful of god for giving him someone like that even though he could not love her like she loved him…it waz true he did love her but not like riddhima… he doesn't miss her but he knows that no one can ever take her place…but shilpa had made her own special place in her heart and he would do watever he could to give her the best husband she wanted….main line waz he loved her but no one could take riddhimas place…….he knew riddhima waz happy with sid and that made him happy to know that she waz happy but little did he know that it waz a whole different story somewhere………………..well after thinking of the aweosmest plan he got up and went to the dining table where his wife, shilpa, waz setting up the table..and u could tall by her face that her anger waz already gone,

He thanked god once more for giving him someone like that once more…he will never leave her side cuz he knows she loves will love him till death and he had made a promise to himself that he would do the same…. he still remembers how she always took care of him and never left his side when he needed someone the most….those were the most difficult days of his life…he moved from sanjeevni just after the he heard that sid and riddhma were settled….he waz happy for her but come on he still could never see her with anyone else..so he moved to another hospital……and there he had found her.

She had noticed him always being very sad and she being shilpa had to find out….and someway or the other she had found out everything about him…. Then one day as she was jogging she saw him sitting in the court looking sad, at first she also felt sad for him and then she decided that she waz not going to feel sad for him but make him his old self again so she asked him to play basketball at first he refused and then wen she started begging him he agreed and from then on they became friends and somewhere along the way she fell for him… then she proposed him in a very armaan stylish way and waz very happy wen he accepted it….and from then on began their relationship….during their relationship wenever armaan tried to bring his past to tell her about it…she always dropped the subject saying she doesn't want anything hear anything about his past and they shud live in the present and dream about the future and babies, armaan wud always blush at that….(hehe) and then came marriage…she still remember s how it waz a bad day for both of them and at the end while they were taking a walk on the beach she suddenly turned and proposed………the look on armaans face waz historic and he just walked home alone leavin her alone on the beach…at first she waz shocked but then she realized he must be remembering about riddhima and all so she decided to let him go and wait for his answer even if it took her whole life time….the next day armaan insisted on telling about his past and shilpa finally told him that she knew everything and she waz really happy to have him in his life……after that they got married and moved to london where shilpas dad lived…sadly after a few months her dad waz satisfied with his life and finally decided to go to his wife in heaven and tell her about how theyre daughter had became a woman…..during those days armaan was very supporting of her and their relationship became stronger

Shilpa knows that armaan loves her but not like riddhima and she didn't feel bad about it either cuz he never showed it…she waz proud of him and their happy family…………….

As the couple enjoyed their dinner shilpa fell in more love with him and wished they would always stay llike that!!!

While Something waz happenin in india that waz going to bring a whole new twist to the story….



Hey guyz so this waz the first part I hope u all enjoy it very much and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment and do give me ideas about how their anniversory…like any sceane u guys want to add or like an idea … also I hope some of u arnt dissappointed that shilpa waz the wife and not ridz but just to tell u guyz she and sid will come into the story very soon also I am a ar fan soo(hint hint) ……I know this part waz boring but it waz there to tell ull about the past and all………….soooo I hope u like it and comment thxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx love ull fatu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@riddss thxxxxx so much for commenting and reali appreciate it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ahhhhhhhhhhh nice concept.
first part was fantastic. armaan shilpa do actually make a good pair.
even though i love jenni to bits. but armaan deserves someone better than ridhima. shilpa can be the one.
i would love reading the story ahead. please please please cont soon. pls pm me also.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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VERY NICE START
PLZCOUNTI....
I REALLY LIKE UR FF 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woah dear its really rocking superb read it on DMG section plz continue it & plz add me in ur pm list




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Posted: 15 years ago
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erm.....Are AN in here?

If they are can you pls add me to the pm list?

Thanks, Rhea (for Sheena)
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Part 2

Armaan was lying down in his bed…going thru the plan he had made for the anniversary. He saw Shilpa sleeping beside him and he couldn't wait to surprise her. He was going to make this day very special for her. She had done so much for him and now it was his turn. Armaan then suddenly remembered all the times he had stayed up all night planning for someone other. Someone that was very special to him. Riddhima. He remembered every time he surprised her, she would become so happy and he would do anything to see her smile. He loved that smile. It lighted his whole world for him. But now everything has changed. She is with somebody else and he is with somebody else. Thinking that he is with somebody else he remembered that now he has someone else to think of. And that was his wife, Shilpa Malik. And now nobody had the right to enter his mind except for Shilpa. She was his everything now. And with that thought he went to sleep looking forward to a awesome day with his wife.

6:00 AM

Armaan got up and went to the kitchen. Yes he was making breakfast for her. Her favorite,, Aloo ke parathe. It was very easy for him because he had learned to make them from her and now was an expert at them. Also along with that, he was decorating the house with flowers. When armaan was finished he went and saw her still sleeping. She looked like an angel. His angel. He went to her and kissed on her forehead and with that movement she woke up. She looked at him with sooo much love in her eyes. Armaan just stared at her and was lost in her when
S: what are you looking at?
A: seeing how beautiful my wife is
Shilpa just blushed and pushed him away, and got up. Armaan was not going to let her go that easily and held her hand and pulled her on top of him and turned over so she was on the bottom.
S:armaan, what r u doing. I have to go and get ready and then make breakfast so leave me na
A: no u r not going anywhere until u give me a kiss
S: no armaan I haven't even brushed yet so let me goooo
Armaan just didn't pay attention to her and kissed her. At first Shilpa was too shocked to respond but after a few seconds she also started to reciprocate to the kiss. Her arms went around his neck and pulled him closer. Then slowly armaan broke the kiss and went to her ear and slowly said Happy Anniversary I love You!
Shilpa was in seventh heaven and was so happy to find a guy like him
S:U remembered I cant believe it. Ohh I love u so much and happy anniversary to u too
They then hugged each other tightly and stayed like that for some time. They felt completed and happy. Both of them did!!
S:ok now let me get up and go get ready
Armaan finally got off from her and told her to hurry up and get ready cuz he has a surprise for her waiting down stairs. Shilpa then got very excited and went to the bathroom to get ready. When she went in there she saw that it the tub waz filled with rose petals. She quickly went had a nice bath
Armaan on the other hand went downstairs to check if everything was perfect. He saw that he had done a pretty good job and patted himself on the back for that. Shilpa then got out and got into a pretty dress (http://adn.is.bluefly.com/mgen/Bluefly/prodImage.ms?productCode=2045563&width=300&height=300)and went downstairs and saw that the dining room looked absolutely beautiful. It was decorated with flowers and everything looked like a fairytale. Then she saw armaan come out of the kitchen with breakfast and set it on the dining table and then turn towards her.
A: so how'd u like my surprise?
S: its so beautiful armaan
A: then shall we eat?
Armaan then took her hand and made her sit on the chair. Shilpa was so pleased how armaan had done everything and it was just for her. Thinking that it was just for her it made her a bit emotional but she didn't want to ruin the moment so she just got up and sat in armaan's lap and told him to feed her. armaan was surprised at first but he agreed and they spent the morning feeding each other.
When they were done armaan took the dishes and started washing them by himself and when shilpa saw that she was touched. Shilpa then went to him.
Armaan felt hands on his waist and when he turned around he saw her pushing him aside and started washing the dishes herself. Armaan then also had an idea and started washing the dishes with her with his hands going around her waist. While in between kissing her on the neck. She was getting distracted so she turned around and as fast as turned around she found his lips on hers. At first shilpa resisted because she knew that if she didn't stop this would go to far. But then she also lost her senses and started responding to the kiss. She put her arms around his neck and pulled him closer with her dirty soap hands. Armaan had already ruined her dress with his dirty hands roaming all around her body. Armaan then started kissing her neck. He started to suck and bite it and when he bit it too hard he heard her yell. And that brought him to reality. He then looked up at her and she saw the concern in his eyes and just hugged him.
A:r u okay shilpa? Did I hurt u?
S:no u can never hurt me.
Then she got out the hug and looked at her dress and saw it was ruined and looked at armaan angrily. Armaan followed her gaze and saw that he had ruined her dress with his dirty hands. He then put his hands up in surrender and was about to say sorry when he saw that his own shirt had been ruined too. She looked at his shirt and started laughing and when armaan was saw her laughing he joined in too. Both started laughing and couldn't stop.
S:okay now let me go and change
A: k hurry up because after this we are going to the mall
S: really armaan did u tell u U R Awesome….and she gave him a huge kiss on the lips and ran upstairs.
Armaan was just dazed and said: yes I know I am
Armaan also got a shirt for himself also and went outside to get everything in place.
When shilpa came out in a dress with a cute hat,http://www.irenelim.com/fashion/images2/frills-front-casual-dress-with-belt-blue-b.jpg, she was amazed by what was in front of her. A BRAND NEW CAR. And beside it waz the best husband ever. Shilpa went and saw the car and was in total awe. She loved this car. Armaan came beside her and took and put her in the driver seat.
A: go ahead and try it…
Shilpa saw armaan sitting in the passenger seat. She just started the car and went on full speed. She was enjoying it very much. She then made a circle and went back home and got out of the car. Armaan also got out and went to her when he suddenly heard a scream
S: AHHHHHH I cant believe u did this for me I LOVE U!!
She then hugged him tightly and said I love u a thousand times. Armaan was so happy to see her happy.
A: I love u 2
S: but how'd u do all this I mean ahhh I don't care I just know I love u sooo much
A:I love u 2 shona!! Okay now lets go to the mall and get my baby something for her anniversary.
Shilpa then went and sat in the passengers seat. And told armaan to come and take them to the mall.

MALL
Armaan and shilpa went inside. They first shopped for clothes. Shilpa went saw some of the dresses and didn't like any of them. So she asked armaan to come and help her. Armaan then picked a red dress and gave to her and she loved it instantly.http://flypaper.bluefly.com/images/red_strapless_dress_blueflys_blog_flypaper_1.jpg She went to the changing room and was trying it on when somebody was pushed on top of her. She was about to fall when she felt a pair of hands gripping her waist and when she looked up she saw Armaan. She breathed a sigh of relief but then she got up and asked him what he was doing in the ladies changing room.
A: well I was missing u
S: ya sure now tell me wat r u doing here?
A: nothing now show how u look in this dress
Shilpa then showed him how it looked on her and armaan's mouth was left hanging open. Armaan came up to her and started looking at her with passion in his eyes. he was very turned on by the dress she was wearing. Shilpa looked at him and could tell what was going on his mind. So she started to walk backwards and armaan coming towards her. and when she hit the wall armaan was totally in front of her. he first grabbed her hands and put them on the wall. He then came to her ear
A: u look very hot
Shilpa just blushed very badly
Armaan was about to kiss her when they heard knock on the door and suddenly started panicking…shilpa finally managed to say something
S: umm theres somebody in here
P:oh im sorry
Shilpa then looked at armaan and told him to get out of here. He just gave her a small kiss and went away hoping nobody sees him coming out of the ladies changing room and after a while she comes out too and they resume shopping like nothing ever happened. So they shopped and shopped and shopped.

Finally, after they returned home armaan and shilpa were really tired. Armaan then told shilpa to go and freshen up. And then again shilpa was surprised. The whole bathroom was decorated with candles. Armaan then came behind her
A: don't think this is only for u
Shilpa first was confused but then she finally caught on. She just threw her arms around him and kissed him. They then spent the rest of the time making love and then talking.
They finally came out. Armaan quickly got ready and went outside to make sure the other arrangements were ready. While shilpa was trying to decide what to wear. She came out wearing a beautiful red sari. She was looking gorgeous.
Armaan was on the phone and when he saw her coming he quickly cut the phone and saw her in the sari. She looked heavenly. He came up to her
A: shona u look breathtaking…I didn't know that you would look soo beautiful in a sari
S: well I just wanted to do something different today.
A: okay since u r ready I have another surprise for u we r going out
S: really where?
Armaan was about to speak when Shilpa cut him off
S: let me guess it's a surprise.
A: haha yup
S: okay so lets go.
Armaan and shilpa then went to the car and got in. then armaan stopped the car and went to the other side and got shilpa out. In front of her was a beautiful yacht. It was decorated with ribbons and on the front it said I LOVE U SHONE HAPPY ANNIVERSARY! Shilpa was very touched and turned to him with moist eyes. Armaan then saw her and just hugged her and told her that he does not want any tears in her eyes.
They then walked on the yacht in each others arms. They then had dinner and were having the times of their lives. After they were done armaan got up and went on his knees.
A: shilpa today has been the best day of my life and it is all because of u. thank u for coming in my life and making it heaven. I promise I will love u always and never leave ur side. This one year of my life has been the best and I hope to have many more. Happy anniversary. And pulled out a ring http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_4UTDb0-EvDk/SnlEoGV5T-I/AAAAAAAAAI8/M4Dppj60QVs/s400/three+stone+diamond+ring.jpg

She looked at him as he put the ring on her.
S: armaan u know u r the best husband anyone could have asked for and I am very lucky to have someone like u. I LOVE U!!
And with that armaan kissed her. she put her arms around him and kissed him deeply. While he pulled her closer to himself. His hands around her bare waist. They started out slow but then everything got hot. Armaan started kissing her neck and her pallu fell down. He then picked her up and took her to one of the room and they made sweet hot passionate love.

This was a perfect day but will their life always stay like that??? NO


Okay so this waz the anniversary part….i hope u guyz like it… PLZZZ Comment… And I promise SR will be in the next part ….hope this part makes up for the 2 days!!!
So PLZZZ comment and press the like button love yall!!

Love, fatu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great part dear
loved it
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hey when are you gonna update it plzz pm me when you do and write only about arsh

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