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Posted: 15 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
nice ff.....
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thnx dear i will surely add u 😛

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#172

Originally posted by: ash_sajan

</div>hey no need to say thanks pragya waise can i call you prags and pls no thanks na i just said what is truth and this ff is really cute.You have done a really nice job on it.nad am really sorry ke main ye pehle nahi parh paayi kyunke mujhe achi tarah se time nahi mil raha tha that,s why but now i,ve even started your second ff as well and do pm for the next update
<div>love ash

omg thnks a ton dear... u are such a sweetheart.... dusra ff bhi? good good... ya i happy u read the whole thing now and u enjoyed it.. i will continue soon and u r on the pm list 😛

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#173

Please update next part soon.Long time no update.Please ASAP..

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#174

Originally posted by: kris97
Please update next part soon.Long time no update.Please ASAP..

i will soon 😛

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#175

Originally posted by: chilluppp
its brilliant dear
tooooooooooooooooo good

thnx dear 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#176

awesome part..!!
loved it..
plz pm me when u cont..
cont soon

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Originally posted by: rads14
awesome part..!!
loved it..
plz pm me when u cont..
cont soon

thnx dear.. and i will pm u ... 😊

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#178

PART 22
Hey guys i know after long this update but cant help dear my school has started... no time and i am updating this in high fever only for u guys so bare with me...

after the party was over mayur had gone to their room
N: mayank
M: ha
N: ab mujhe mera gift do mujhse aur wait nahi ho raha hai
M: arrey itna kya harbar hai mil jayega na...
nupur comes in front of mayank
N: dekho mayank tum seedhe seedhe mera gift de rahe ho ki main gussa ho jau( turning that side and showing fake anger
M: arrey nahi meri maa please tum gussa mat ho..

SAJAN
they are walking
G: kyun gussa nahi hoon? tum mujhe kabse bore kiye ja rahe ho kuch bolte kyun nahi?( childishly)
S: kya bolu chashmish?
G: acha ab kya bolu? kyun kyun uss uss SHEEENAAAHH ke saath kitna khee kheee karke baat kar rahe the..... ab mujhse bhi baat karo... mujhe nahi pata.. kahi se bhi dhoond ke lao mujhe baat chahiye...
S: huh? chashmish dekho tumhari halat theek nahi hia hum chalte hai..
G: nahi mujhe baat karna hai.. aur agar tum baat nahi karoge toh main yahan sarak pe beth jaungi....
S: NAHI..... main main baat karta hoon na.. tum jo kahugi main woh karunga...
G: good... toh phir... ( acting to think)

MAYUR
N:to phir kya mujhe guess karna parega ki mera gift kya hai?
M: ha
N: kya? guess... dekho mayank mere sabra ka band tut raha hai.. tum dete ho ki nahi..
M: okay... pehli apni aankein band karo
N: uff phirse.. tumne na subah se yeh lukha chuppi ka kehl lakha rakha
M: gift chahiye
nupur nods like a child
M: toh aankh band karo..
N: SAADU..( an dshe closes her eyes)

SAJAN
Dhaandi hawa chali and gunjan closed her eyes...and turning around
G: kitna khoobsurat mausam haina samrat
S: ha bahut khoobsurat( looking at her and bringing his face close to her)
gunjan blushes...

MAYUR
N: mayank jaldi karo
M: ek minute baba
mayank comes in front of her...
M: yeh lo ( he hands over a gift to her)
N: thnakyou... ab maian dekhu isme kya hai?
M: sure
nupur opens it carefully and it was an amazing diamond necklace
N: mayank yeh toh
M: pata hai... tumhe pasand aaya tha par tumne uss din liya hi nahi
FLASHBACK
mayur had gone for shooping the day they patched up again after marriage... but left cause they had to meet pari...
in the shop
N: mayank yeh dekh kitna acha haina
m: bahut acha hai.... aur tum isse pehnungi toh bahut acha laga
nupur saw the price tag
N: kaha mayank mujhe yeh sab nahi pehna mujhe acha nahi lagta.. main khud ke liye thori na bol rahi thi main toh bas woh aisehi..
just then samart had called mayank.. and mayank remembered nupur's bday is coming up and they left
FB over
N: mayank thnku so much lekin itna expensive gift kharidni ki kya zarurat thi
M: tumhare liye.... ab main yeh sab tumhare liya nahi launga toh kiske liye?
nupur had a broad smile on her face
N: mayank pata hai.. tum aaj agar yeh gift nahi bhi laate toh main khush thi kyunki jitna tum mere liye karte ho utna koi nahi karta...
M: aur kar bhi nahi sakta.. kyun main..........ummm... kyunki main tumhara best friend jo hoon...
N: hmm.. so toh hai
and they hug

SAJAN
G: samrat.. ek baat puchoon?
S: hmm... puchoon
they were sitting on a bench
G: pyaar kya hota hai?
samrat was shocked at this question
S: chashmish yeh kaisa sawal hai?
G: samrat tum please batao na...
S: chashmish par tum aisa sawal kyun kar rahi hoon
G: kyunki mujhe aaj tak samaj nahi aata pyaar kya hota hai... kya pyaar hamesha dur jaana hota hai..kyunki aaj tak maine jisse bhi pyaar kiya sab dur chale gaye( she had tears in her eyes she was crying) pehle mummy papa chale gaye.... phir yahan chachaji se dur rehna para.. phir yahan jab kisi se pyaar hua toh pata chala usse kisi aur ka hona hai... kyun? mere saath hamesha aisa kyun hota hai...
Samrat was really touched by all this
S: dekho chashmish tum please aise ro mat...dekho...main samajh sakta hoon tum par kya guzar raha hai...paar shayad hum sab ki kismat main yahi lekha tha...
G: nahi...
S: shh....( putting finger on her lips)
S: woh dekho( pointing towards the sky) woh dekh raha hai
G: kya? woh tara...
S: ha....
G: ha dikh raha hai...
S: tumhe pata hai woh kaun hai?
gunjan nodding her head in no...
G: kaun?
S: tumhare mummy papa
G: mere mummy papa aisa kaise ho sakta hai?
S: aisa i hota hia... dekho woh aaj bhi tumhe dekh sakte hai... woh aaj bhi tumhe pyaar karte hai.... unka aashirwad tumhare saath hai... woh hamesha tumahre saath rehta hai tumhari raksha karte hai.. phir tum kaise bol skati hoon ki woh tumse dur hai.. aure jahan tak tumhare chacha ji ki baat hai.. tum jab chaho unse baat kar sakti hoon hum unse milne bhi chalenge... promise.. aur yahan par jo naya pyaar tumhe mila woh............ ( he was blank for this)
G: woh pyaar nahi tha.... ( she smiled) samrat ab tum nahi hote mujhe yah sab baat kaun samjhata...? tum bahut ache ho.... thnku.. aur waise hi koi hona ho.. wum toh hona mere saath hamesha...
S: ha.. hoon.. tumahre saath hamesha.....
G: acha waise tumhe pyar ke baare maine itna sab kuch kaise pata... ? kahi tum kisis se ?
S: nahi... offcourse not... bas aajkal ek aajeeb se feeling hoti hia dil me
G: mujhe bhi... ( smile) matlab hum dono same to same
whihc made samrat laugh a lot
they hug( guys gunjan is still drunk this all is happening coz she is drunk )
G: acha bahut rulaya tumne mujhe? ab hasao
S: acha? maine rulaya?
G: nahi.. par hasa toh sakte ho na....
S: kaise?
G: ganaa ga ke please..
S: nahii.. pagal ho kya...
G: mujhe bachpan main gaane gane ka bahut chauk tha.... please gao
S:toh woh tmhe tha mujhe nahi.. toh tum gao na....
G: umm.. okay main shuru karungi tum mera saath dena .. okay
S: okay deal
G: deal..
G:Kissa Tera… Teri Dastaan…( gunjan pointing towards samrat)
Chehra Tera… Khud Kare Bayaan…_ pulling his cheeks)
Kisise Pyaar Tujhe Ho Gaya…( showing her fingers and nodding her head in yes)
Tu Maan Ja, Haan Maan Ja…( twirling around)

Kahin Na Laage Mann, Kya Hai Yeh Sunaapan Aaha… Aaha…( samrat started0
Mujhe Tum Bathaado, Koi Tho Wajaah Do Aaha… Aaha…( tapping her shoulders)
Har Ghadi Ab Khayaalon Mein Keh Rahaan Hai Koi..( dancing)
Har Ghadi Mere Khwabon Mein Aa Rahaan Hai Koi..( bith are just enjoying and dancing)
Is This Love….Mein Ne Na Jaana… Aaha-ha…( gunjan was really happy and dancing and smrat was just staring at her)
Is This Love..Tu Hi Bathaana Aaha-ha…
Could this be love…
Can you tell me…
Could this be love…

Tu Ne Chuna Ishq Ka Raastha, Humsafar Is Safar Mein Doondtha Hai Tu( singing for samrat)
Haan Baath Yeh Maan Bhi Le Zara, Toot Kar Ab Kisi Ko Chaahatha Hai Tu ( and suddenly she stats remembering all the moments with samrat)
Raat Din Mere Neendhon Mein Jag Rahaan Hai Koi, ( and samarat remembers all memories with gunjan)
Raat Din Mere Aankhon Mein Bas Rahaan Hai Koi
Is This Love… Mein Ne Na Jaana… Aaha-ha…
Is This Love..Tu Hi Bathaana Aaha-ha…( coming oput of the dream world)

I Need You, You Need Me,( eye lock)
All We Need, Is This Feeling Of Love,
Inside Our Hearts…

Tu Ne Tera Dil Kisi Ko Diya, Baath Yeh Sach Hai Agar Tu Maan Le Ise...( starts raining)
Dil Ka Sukoon Tu Ne Hi Kho Diya Ab Haqeekath Hai Yeh Tu Jaan Le Ise( gunjan playing in rain)
Aaj Kal Mere Chaahon Mein Dhal Rahaan Hai Koi( samart came to her)
Aaj Kal Mere Saanson Mein Chal Rahaan Hai Koi( both played with water like kids)
Is This Love….Mein Ne Na Jaana… Aaha-ha…
Is This Love..Tu Hi Bathaana Aaha-ha…( danced)

Kahin Na Ab Laage Mann, Kya Hai Yeh Sunaapan Aaha… Aaha…( and they hugged and it was a huge one)
Har Ghadi Ab Khayaalon Mein Keh Rahaan Hai Koi
Har Ghadi Mere Khwabon Mein Aa Rahaan Hai Koi
Is This Love….Mein Ne Na Jaana… Aaha-ha…
Is This Love..Tu Hi Bathaana Aaha-ha…

Could This Be Love…
Can You Tell Me…

Could This Be Love…

both came to their rooms
samrat carried gunjan into his arma..kyunki gunjan ne zidh kiya tha...
gunjan lay her on the bed.. put the blanket...
he was about to leave...
Gunjan held his hand
G: please mujhe chodkar mat jao....
S; main kahio nahi jaraah yahi hoon
G: nahi.. mujhe dar lagta hia... tumne promise kiya tha abhi tum hamesha mere saath rahoge...
S: okay meri maa..main yahi hoon
G: main tumhari maa nahi
S: oops sorry sorry chashmish ho
gunjan nodded in yes with a smile
S: ab so jaou...
samrat sat there and gunjan was going to sleep

okay guys thats it.. cant write more.... not well.. tada bbbye... next part will come soon..till then enjy have fun.... and do click the like button and comment

Edited by pragya_luvsajan - 15 years ago