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Posted: 15 years ago

heyya guys with completeing 19 parts.. i am here wit hanother thread.. i completedd 150 pgaes.. thnku so much... guys.. i am glad u guys loved this ff so much...
heres the link to the previous thread
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1368145/fallen-in-love-with-you-forever-sg-mn-part19-pg139

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Okay guys... i have decided to give it a short... hmm.. inspired by sum books and amazing fanfics.. i have decided to write one tooo.... i dont knw how good or bad it will be.... but guys your support is very necessary.. i am editing the character sketch in just few mins...

<font size="4">CHARACTER SKETCH</font>
GUNJAN BHUSHAN
She is adopted by one of her uncle's since her parents died in a car accident...she is shy. innocent sweet and helpful
her uncle was no very rich.... but still he did whatever he could do so taht he could give her all the luxury.... doing so he commits a crime... so in payment of all the love..gunjan wants to save him from getting the punishment.. she will indeed have to face a lot of problems doing so.. but lets see what infact who is the problem
RAJESH SHARMA
Gunjan"s uncle.. working in the bussiness with shergill's
SAMRAT SHERGILL
Owner of Shergill industries... his father died due to cancer... from then her mother also doesnt keep well.. he loves his family...he seems to be very ruff and tough from out side but his heart is very soft from inside... he can do anything for her mother....
as the doctor says she needs to be kept happy he fulfills all her wishes...but forgot to tell u guys oine thing.. he has got a very flirty nature too....
MAYANK SHERGILL
Sweet. smart i.. intelligent.. flirt..helpful.... he went to london for studea and it only 1yr since he is in mumbai...
<font color="#0e0000">SHILPA SHERGILL
Mother of samrat and mayank
Wants her children to get married she alwayz wanted to see nupur as a younger sister in law.. and finding another girl for samrat </font>
NUPUR SEHGAL
Mayank's best friend.. actually she loves him but.... (cant reveal...)

so guy..s bas yehi...tak.. jana chte hai ki kaisi gunjan aur samrat milenge.?aur milenge to kya hoga? kay un dono ko ek dsre se pyaar hhoga? kya nupur kahegi mayank ko apne dil ka raaz ya phir mayank hko ho jayenga kisi aur sey pyaar? sab jane ke liye wait for my upadate aand plzz lick the like button if u like the thing and jsut tell me if u want pms..

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Sana Quraishi

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi pragz

need to go in a get together

so will comment tomm or tonight

n sorry for reserving the place like this

n congo for a new thread🥳

muhhhhhhhhhhh🤗

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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

mindlowing fantastic superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update yaar

realy loved it

im glad sab MU khatam ho gaye

now just want to see some morreeeeeeeeeeee romantic momentsss

n the song sequence r really cool

the last one i badly wanted to included in my ff

but u already used it😆

anyways ur update is fantastic👏👏👏👏👏

plz continue soon

n thanx for the pm

lots of love

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 20

Mayur
mayur were walking in the hotel..
N: mayank ek baat kahu?
M: ha.. bolo na
N: mayank bhale hi tum ne mujhse pyaar nahi kiya.. bhalle hi tumne kisi aur se pyaar kiya... par mujhe is bat ki khushi hai ki mujhse tum jaisa jeevan saath mila... tum mile... tum jaisa dost mila.. gar tum nahi hot e toh pata nahi main kya karti... main bahut lucky hoon mayank sachi main
M: nupur... tum se zayada lucky main hoon ki mujhse tum mili.. itni badi galti ke baad bhi tumne mujhe maaf kiya... maan ki main gunjan se pyar karta tha...par karta THA,,, ab nahi.. mera mala hai ki.. main ab woh sab bhulana chahta tumhe har woh khushi dena chata hoon. sachi
nupur smiled
N: yeh mera sabse acha birthady hai mayank
M:bhi tak sirf acha hai.. aage dekho sabse acha ho jayega
both smiled
but but but but omg gunjan ne yeh sun liya she was in tears...
G( in her mind): mayank mujhse pyaar karta tha ? yeh mere sath kyun hua ? jis insabn se main pyaar karti thi ewoh mera shayad kabhi ho hi nahi payega..

cut
gunjan and nupur in their respectve rooms crying.. mayank was paasing by gunjan;'s roo mand samrat by nupur the ysaw hem crying andwent upto them

MAJAN
M: gunjan
gunjan wiped her tears
G: mayank tum.. tumhe toh nupur ke saath hona chaiye tha...
M: ha.. par jab main yah se ja raha tha tab maine tumhe rote huye dekha... kya baat hai?

SANU
N: nahi samrat aisi koi baat nahi hai
S: jhooth mat bolo nupur.. tumhari aankhon se sab kuch saaf saaf dekhayi de raha hai.. ab tum mujhse sach batagi...
N: woh... woh.. woh mayank mujhse nhai gunjan se pyaar karta tha
S: what?

MAJAN
G: aur mujhe yeh baat aaj tumahri aur nupur ki conversation sun ke baad pata chali...
M:i am soory gunjan.. par maine tumhe yeh bat nahi batayi,.. mujhe lag tum aur bhaiyaa..

and then sajan tell mayur theie whole stroy and mayur to sajan

SANU
N: itna sab kuch hogaya aur aap hume abhi bata rahe hai? kya hume yeh sab janeka haq nahi tha
S:nahi nupur aisi baat nahi hia.. woh halat hi ausa the. par humelaga sab theek hojayega
N: aur ho ga bhi.. ab hum jo aapke saath hai.. hu mapki mada zarur karenge..
samart smiled
S: ek shart pe ?
N:kya
S: ki tm kabhi rogi nahi...
N: ok paka promise..
S: good girl
n; acha ke sawal puchon
S ha kyun nahi
N: kya apne kabhi bhi gunjan se pyaar nahi kiya?
S:...............................
N: boliye na
S: nupur aisi koi baat nahi.. main aur gunjan sirf ache dost hai.. bahut ache dost hia.gunajn mere liye special hai par main usse pyaar
Nupur knew he loved gunjan but he didnt realise it
N: yeh toh ap jaane tu ya jaane na waali bat kar rahe hia
S: what?
N: ha.. do best frends.. ekdusre se bahad pyaar karte par khud yeh baat nahi jante... phir kaafi musibatoon ke baad unhe realise kiya ki the yare made for each other.. toh aap dono itna drama na karke direct..
S: NUPUR..
N: okay okay.. ab main chali.. daat nahi kahnai...

MAJAN
Mayank was abt to go
G: mayank
M: ha
G: main woh bol rahi thi.. ki .. tumhe nahi lagta hume yeh saari purani baatien bhul kar.. ek rishta kayam karna chaiye jo hamre beech hamesha se tha..dosti ka rishta..
M: correct
G: so friends(bringing her hand foward)
M: forever ( giving it to her)
both smiled
M:waise ek aur bat
G: kya?
M: i sabke baad main yahi kahunga .i hume ab apne partners ko accept karna chaiye... unhe wh sari khushiyan deni cahiye jo woh desreve kart hai.. tumhe samrat ko aur mujhe nupur ko... i think yeh sari dukh takleefe ho mita kar...
G: shayad tum theek keh rahe ho..

cut to shilpa aunty's room
she was resting
sam came
SH; samart beta tum? andar aao na
S: mom apki tabiyat kais hai?
SH: jab meri bauye mera itna kahyal rakhti hi toh mujhe theek toh hona hi hoga na..
s: so toh hai.. btw apne apni dawai le li na
SH: ab woh.. woh main bhool agyi sorry.
S: ab bhi na mom.. bhahar aaya ki apka routine bigra... rukeye main deta hoon
and gunjan was standing outside seeing sam lovingly taking care of his mother...
sam gave the medicine
S: acyha ab main chalta hoon... ab so jao........raat ko part bhi toh hia...
SH: samart beta ek bat puchun
S: ha
SH: main janti ooon ki tume gunja nse shaadi mere wajh se ki thi meri khushi ke liye... uss samay maine yehh socha hinahi ki gunja naur tum ek dusre ko samh bhi pauge ya nhia... mera matlab. tu khush hai na.. maine kahi ko
S: mom... aapne jo bhi decison liya hai mere liye woh kabhi galat nahi ho sakta hai.. and gunjan bahut achi larki hai.woh sirf mera aappka nahi sabka khayal rakhti hia.. woh bahtu achi hai uska dil bhi bahut acha hai( meaning everyword he said) usne mere liye bnahut kiya hia.... ( and gunjan was hearing all this and tears in her eyes...) shilpa auty smiled
SH: mujhe jankar khushi hui...
G( in her mind) : smarat mere baar main ktna siochta hia.. maine aisa koi kam nahi kiya jo woh eri itni tarif kare.. shayad mayank shi keh raha tha...
gunaj nwiped her tears
G: main andar ajao
SH: arrey uisme puhni ki kya baat hai?
g; nahi mujhe laga maine ma bete ko conversation main disturb toh nahi kiya
SH: nahi. bilkul nahi.. infact hum dono tumhre bare main hi baat kar rahe the.. tumhhri tarif sun rahi thi
gunajn smiled.. and sam was shocked never expected shilpa aunty to tell that in front of gunjan
and gunajn looked at samart and smiled..
they started having conversation... and gunajan;s hand was on the bed.. andsmart put his on her.s
gunjan was shocked but liked... it...

at the party
mayur were walking
and nupur;e eyes tied wit hcloth
N: mayank kaha le ja rahe ho..
M: bad dekhti jao
N: kaise dekho yeh pati jo hai mere aankh ske samne
M: do min nupur agaya
M: bads hm pohoch gaye.. as nupur opened her eyesit was dark and she was at centre of the stage..
N: mayank kaha ho tum?
and mayank was on his knees.
spotlight on mayur
N: mayank yeh
M: main i have the pleasure of dancing with you?
nupur smiled and gave her hand..

music
Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon ( mayank gets up)
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
( twirls her)
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua.. ( dances)

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon ( lifts her)
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua.. dances)

Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon ( twirls and twirls and twirls)
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda..

Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Ek Dhum Ke Mein Nishano Pe ( nupur dances)
Chaloon Rukoon Ishaare Pe..
Tu Kahe To Khwab Ka Bana Ke Mein Bahana Sa
Mila Karoon Sulaane Pe.. ( and mayur hugging )
Hoo…Tumse Dil Ki Baathe Seekhi
Tumse Hi Yeh Raahe Seekhi( eye lock)
Tum Pe Mar Ke Mein To Jee Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Ke... Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya...
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda. ( and they dance)
every one starts clapping..
now everyone was visible...
nupur was very happy..
sajan clapping shilpa auty clapping
hugging session.. nupur hugging everyone...
and everyone wishing her..

mayank takes samrat somwhere fast
MS: the partuy isnt over
music ( note they wil be inacting what is said in lyrics.i cant really tell hat steps they are doing)

My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl…… ( samrat )
My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl…… ( mayank) ( nupur and gunjan stare in shock)
Jhoomka Girade, Jo Mila Le Agar Woh Nazar Se Nazar Mitade ( sammy)
Nachke Dikhade, Sabki Dhadhkan Bhi Kadam Se Kadam Milade ( mayank)
Lehron Se Chal Ke Jaal Bicha Ke,Dil Ko Ye Behaal Banade( both)
Saare Deewane Maane, (Na Dekhi Koi Aisi Girl ) - 2 ( they bring gunur on stage)
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl ( all four dance)
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
( sajan dance)
My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl……
Pade Kamar Pe Jo Nazar, Saare Saapnon Mein Rang Bhar Jaaye
Jo Tham Le Woh Haath Toh, Haske Hi Aashiq Mar Jaayein
Dhoondon Jahan Mein Chahe Kahin, Na Tumko Milegi Koi Aisi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl……
(mayur dance)
Jahan Jahan Bhi Jau Main, Saari Nazrein Toh Peche Peche Aiye
Ruku Zara Mein Jo Yahan, Thandi Thandi Saari Saase Tham Jaye
Sabki Nigahon Ne Hai Kaha, Ke Khwaabon Mein Hai Dekhi (Meri Jaisi Girl ) - 2
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl,My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl,My Desi Girl
( all four together)
Jhoomka Girade, Jo Mila Le Agar Woh Nazar Se Nazar Mitade
Nachke Dikhade, Sabki Dhadhkan Bhi Kadam Se Kadam Milade
Lehron Se Chaal Ke Jaal Bicha Ke, Dil Ko Yu Behaal Banade
Saare Deewane Maane, (Na Dekhi Koi Aisi Girl ) - 2
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl……
( sajan and mayur almost hugging looking at each other)

broken by claps..
M: hello everybody.. jaisi ki aap sab jante hai.. aaj ka din hum sab ke liye bahit acha hai.. aaj nupur ka birthday bhi hai. .aur aaj pura shergill paroiwaar bahut khush hai.. isleye.. is khushi ko manane ke liye.. ek last song..humare liye...

M: aye dil laya hai bahar
apno ka pyaar
kya kehna... ( mayank goes to shilpa auty woth nupur)
g: mile hum
chalak utha
khushi ka khumar
kya kehna
( gunjan goes to shilpa auty with samrat)
SH: khile khile chehro se aaj ghar hia mera
gulee gulzar
kya kehna..

khile khile chehro se aaj ghar hia mera
gulee gulzar
kya kehna. (samrat takes shilpa auty"s hand and maked har dance a bot and them maynak takes too and dances)

aye dil laya hai bahar
apno ka pyaar kya kehna (and then shilpa aunty stops gives nupur's hand to mayank and gunjan's to samrat)

S:( to gunjan and dancing wit her) mile hum chalak utha khushi ka khumar kya kehna

sajan and mayur both dance

N( for mayank and dancing with mayank): hum tum yuhi milte rahe
mehfil yuhi sajti rahe..

M: bas pyaar ki yahi ek dhun
subah shyam bajti rahi( mayur dancing)

G: gale main mehkta rahe
pyaar bahri nahon ka haar kya kehna...( saja ndancing bahon main bahein)

S: aye dil laya hai bahar
apno ka pyaar
kya kehna...
N: mile hum
chalak utha
khushi ka khumar
kya kehna

all of them

khile khile chehro se aaj ghar hia mera
gulee gulzar
kya kehna.

all five hugging
okay thats if for now... hope u guys liked enjy had fun...
but picture abhi bake hai mere doston the partyy is not yet over.. abhi aage aage dekho hota hai kya par agle upadte main.. till then byee....

Edited by pragya_luvsajan - 15 years ago

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana_sajan
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hi pragz

need to go in a get together

so will comment tomm or tonight

n sorry for reserving the place like this

n congo for a new thread🥳

muhhhhhhhhhhh🤗

thnx yaar. okay waiting for the comment huge ones okay... and thnx once again..

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Posted: 15 years ago

CONGRATS for new thread!!🥳
Fantastic update...

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Posted: 15 years ago

prags congo for ur new thread..

fantastic update dear..

will edit it later

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sam-18
CONGRATS for new thread!!🥳
Fantastic update...

thanku so much.... 😛

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MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani
prags congo for ur new thread..

fantastic update dear..

will edit it later

thnku so much.. please do edit soon.. 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi pragya

a new thresd
wah wah- congrats dear

a big hug for u

any way superb update
loved it to the core.
loved the song sequences.
awesome part
keep it up

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: fariaa70
hi pragya

a new thresd
wah wah- congrats dear

a big hug for u

any way superb update
loved it to the core.
loved the song sequences.
awesome part
keep it up

thnks a ton... 😛 hugs to u too... 🤗.. i am glad u liked it.. i was suppose to update more... but again the time problam so the party is still on hope u like that too... 😛

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