The Moment Of Truth (RN)-Oneshot - Page 4

Hi Mana 😊

Tum fic to brilliantly likhti ho but tumnein OS bhi bahut achhaa likha hai👏⭐️

I think tumhein aur OS likhne chahiye😊

In starting Raj is angry wid Naina😡 but he is madly n deeply in love wid his Naina Ah Singh😉😆

In drill some people attacked Raj n Naina n Raj is injured n Naina gets worried for him but he didn't want to told about his injuries n then he fainted n she was shocked to see him lyk this😲

He tries to provoked him by saying" Oh come on cadet singh ! Show me that confidence with which you shot me in the truck that day..."she was feeling nervous in removing bullets n she was hurt after hearing this😭😭

And then in sub-conscious state Raj confessed his luvs for Naina😳❤️ n then Naina decide to wait for him coz she too luvs him😳❤️

Luv

Naina 😊🤗

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Hey Mana....no yaar i am not a doc....even no where near it.😆😆😆😆...i just like reading medical....infact i am just a 12th pass waiting for her board result and nowhere near science subjects....i am more into psycho,eco and maths.....though i detest maths....😆😆😆

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow!!! Chalo.....iss fic me Raj k saath saath Naina ki bhi baat kar hi lungi!! Waahhh !!! naina yeh baat sunke toh dhanya ho jayegi !! 😆 😆 😆

Waise....agar dande Yazh ko padhne the.....to phir ye saare praises bhi usike liye!!Nahiiii !!! praises mere !!😛

Firstly....it was a lovely continuation yaar!! Mujhe bahut kam continuations achhe lage hai....and its surely one of them!! Thanks...😊

Okay....I kinda liked the fact that Raj was sumhow irritated or hurt at Naina's behaviour!! Mostly we get to see that he is all okay....but I feel its not truly possible that u r not hurt....after all He loves her....and Love definitely hurts!! So this was a gr8 point in this fic!! Hmmm...thanks again ! 😊

And then....their way thru the 'jungle' or watever it was (sorry main abhi upar jaake nahi dekh sakti...hehe)....the way Raj was trying to conceal his feelings....that was dam lovely!!

Then when Raj was shot....Naina was shouting at him....hehe....I must say....never before I liked ANYONE SHOUTING AT RAJVEER!!! Lolz....

But tumne usse ek nahi do nahi....chaar chaar goli maar di....sach me tumhe uspe taras nahi aya?? But however u pulled off that scene brilliantly....beyond my expectation yaar!! Truly fabulous....and bas....aur adjectives nahi ate!! Thanks...but Sumi..what were ur expectations yaar....😆

I so wish it cud move on....but I knw sum things r better left!! So I dont mind either!! Good girl !😆

And yeah....itneeeee deri se padhne k liye main sorry feel kar rahi hu.....lekin APNE LIYE!!! Nuksaan to mera zyada hua na?? Nahi yaar..aisi baat nahi hai!

Chalo bye....am stopping my bak bak here only!! ohkkkk !!😉

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Mana 😊 Hi Naina !

Tum fic to brilliantly likhti ho but tumnein OS bhi bahut achhaa likha hai👏⭐️ Thanks yaar...

I think tumhein aur OS likhne chahiye😊 Do u Reallythink so??? 😆 😆 Agar yeh tum apne dil se keh rahi ho, toh i'll definitely think about it !

In starting Raj is angry wid Naina😡 but he is madly n deeply in love wid his Naina Ah Singh😉😆

In drill some people attacked Raj n Naina n Raj is injured n Naina gets worried for him but he didn't want to told about his injuries n then he fainted n she was shocked to see him lyk this😲

He tries to provoked him by saying" Oh come on cadet singh ! Show me that confidence with which you shot me in the truck that day..."she was feeling nervous in removing bullets n she was hurt after hearing this😭😭

And then in sub-conscious state Raj confessed his luvs for Naina😳❤️ n then Naina decide to wait for him coz she too luvs him😳❤️

I am glad that u liked the entire OS Naina....keep reading !😃

Luv

Naina 😊🤗

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Ye dekho maine padh k pehle hi rakha tha is ko aur reply karna bhool gayi.
Maine padha to pehle hi tha but reply karna bhool gayii thi. Koi baat nai yaar...

Gud one. Thanks..

Naina k liye Raj ki mohabbat n Raj k liye Naina ki kuch palon ki nafrat ne Raj ko kis had tak tod diya tha ye to bus vahi mehsoos kar sakta hai. chalo kabhi Naina ko apni galtiyon ka ehsaas hua aur us ne Raj se maadi maangi.
Yahi nahi vo ab ye ehsaas bhi kar rahi thi ki us ka aisa karna kis had tak galat tha. Jo Raj har situation me us ka saath deta aaya us k saaath vo aisa kaise kar sakti hai. Ek baar fir se mentorship camp un dono ko pass le aaya aur Naina ko sorry kehne ka mauka bhi mil gaya. Haan...issiliye toh maine Mentorship camp ARRANGE karwaya ! 😆

Raj ko ye log maarna chahte the ek baar fir. Thank god Raj ka jyada nuksaan nahi hua. Naina ko Raj ka provogue karna jaroori tha varna Naina vo kabhi aisa nahi kar paati jaisa us ne Raj ki jaan bachane k liye kiya. Us ko pata bhi chal gaya ki Raj pyaar karta hai us se. Jo shayad Raj apne hosh me nahi keh paata.
amazing, keep on writing OS. Thanks a ton again, Vertika ! 😃