The Moment Of Truth (RN)-Oneshot - Page 2

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Mana... Hey Debs !!

Kya baat hai yaar...just a few days ago you were complaining that you don't get sufficient ideass regarding an OS...and here you have posted another OS... Oh you have thank Yazh for that...ussine idea diya tha na...😊

of course we have to thank Yazh for that...so shall I put an OS as your MOTW task...😉😉😉... Right !!! You have to thank Yazh...

And Hell noooooooo !!! No more OS !!!🤢

Leave it...you will be over burdened... Thankssss !!! ** relief***

Okay...now coming to the One Shot...it was brilliant...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Thanks yaar !😃

Naina has finally realised her mistake and is repenting for it...and in this situation our doctor comes up with an excellent plan to get these two angry and confused souls together...😉😆😉

Mentor - protegee camp... now Raj is in a denial mode...he is trying to keep Naina away from himself... (***slaps forehead*** iss ladke ka kuch nahi ho sakta) And she thinks he is angry with her (Another dumb head) But when Naina falls down, Raj ka concern to dekho...but he quickly covers it up...(***uff ye ladka***)
He he he !!! Nice way to sum up !! And ya...even I get frustrated at his attempts to keep her away aur Naina toh hai hi khaali dimaag ...

As if the tension between them was any less, now some gunmen attacked them... Raj is hit with four bullets...😲😲😲😲😲😲😲 but he lies so that Naina does not gets panicky. Typical Raj...😆😆😆 And finally when she does find it out, she is all worried and Raj asks her to take off the bullet... Seeing him injured, Naina gets back to her 'chillana' mode...😆😆😆 Raj par wahi kaam karta hai... Haan yaar !!! Thoda EAR problem hai...and uparse he is OUR president na....jaise humpe 'dhamkiya' kaam karti hai, uspe chillana kaam karta hai 😛 😛 😛

Naina has the first aid kit ready with her...and to get her to do the task, Raj tells her to be as confident as the last time in the truck when she shot him... well, it did the work though... and she finally succeeded in taking out the bullet....aur mai soch rahi thi ki ye Naina ko hurt karne par tula hua hai...(***mai bhi na kuch jyada hi pagal ho gayi hun aajkal***)
Ab yeh main jaanti hoon...😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab finally the MOMENT OF TRUTH...Naina finally comes to know that Raj loves her...*sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh* (Kaash ki aisa sach much LRL me hota...) Great job Mana...👏👏👏👏👏👏 Mai to kho gayi isse padhkar... Keep it up...

Arey yaar ! Tu KHO mat jaana !! TMS aur TDQ ka kya hoga fir? 😛😛

Jokes apart....thanks a ton for liking it dear...😃

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooooome..........
superb...........
fantabulous...........
excellent.....
just too good.......
thanx for the pm........

Originally posted by: rajeev_myfriend

nice os mana par n ko bhi raj ko bolna chaheye tha but anyways raj ko izzhar kiya

the os is really good

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: khushi909

Wowwwwwwwwwwww Mana its very nice dear thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Manali Hi Di !

How r u??? Good !!!

Moment of Truth was really brilliant..👏👏 Thankssssss ! 😊

The start where Raj is angry with Naina reminded me of LRL..Finally Naina realized her mistake n she was really sorry for her behaviour towards Raj..She doen't deserve him but wat can b done when captain is head over heels in love with his cadet..He can never b angry on her.. Yeah...this was my reaction too when Raj was angry with her and Naina repentant....but ab she is repenting naa...toh chalo, usse maaf kar dete hai ! 😛

During the drill some people attacked Raj n he was injured by the bullets..Naina was really worried but he didn't tell her abt those injuries but then he fainted with exhaustion n she was shocked to see him like dis..

Raj asked her to remove the bullets but she was too nervous to do that..But he provoked her by reminding her dat she shot him in the truck..Naina was really hurt but she tried to hide it.. That was necessary to do but....Naina needed a push....

Raj confessed his love when he was semi-concious but Naina knew that he was speaking the truth..She loved him too n was ready to wait for him... That's what true love is...isnt it??? Now that she knows he love her, she can wait for however long it is required...

I really like this sweet confession n way Naina held him in her arms after removing the bullets..😊 Thanks...

perfect example of medical romance..👏👏👏 awww...Thank you so much yaaarr !!! This means a lot !! 😃

only a proper doctor was missing coz Naina is not a certified doctor..But she treated Raj really well.😃 Ab main waha nahi thi na...😛😉

I hope something like dis wud have happened in LRL too😍 Oh ! How i wish too !!! 😍

Bye

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

haha

great one

Rajveer confessing is always nice to read

good work mana

lag raha that kisi doctor ne likha hai!

:)

Sur