Ek Duje Ke Vaaste (os on Rajeev)(for suhana dii..) - Page 2

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Very Lovely !!

I really liked iit....didnt reply earlier because my net wasnt woring properly....i posted 2 replies and both didnt get posted.....they showed error....and then i finally gave up rewriting the whole post !!

It was veryyyyyyyyyyyy good !

Luv,

Vandu

wow

heya tht was a very sweet & cute story, keep up the gr8 gud wrk, & loved the character names, sumthg unique & different :)

hii readers.. 😃 thanks for liking and commenting on this OS.. 😃 i'll soon reply to all the comments.. 😃

Hi Nandini

How r u?

First of all, M very sorry for replying so late, I was very busy in my clg, and didn't get time to comment. I know m very late…

The concept was lovely and the title was so true "ek duje ke vaste". I loved the song and the title too.

The names and the dresses of the characters were just beautiful. I liked the way u have written their first meeting and have expressed their feelings.

Their meeting was very sweet and both of them were not able to take their eyes away from each other. I loved Ridit's dialogue. (I just love this name, it suits on him na)- kamal hai kuch waqt pehle mujhse nazre bhi nahi hata pa rahi thi aur jab main iske saath hoon to nazre mila bhi nahi pa rahii..

He is very sweet as he tries to relax Shi as she was dam nervous. I tell u na he is very sweet.

Shi was so upset to know that Ridit has to go, She just wants to spend her time with him.

The morning scene was so cute, Shi was so excited to see ridit. Actually m very impressed with him and his idea of going by bus so that they both can spend more time together. Shi was so sweet while talking with her dad, Ridit bhi bahut shaitaan hai, 8 seats book kar li tanki koi bhi use disturb na kare. He is very intelligent na.

Their bus scenes were very cute, I just loved them but it was very emotional as their separation time has come. Shi was unable to control her tears But Ridit kept his promise. He called her but their talks created a big problem as Shi's mother and father take it a wrong way. I hate her father, usne ridit ki kitni insult ki, Ufff………..how can he do this? Usse apni beti ka khyaal nahin aaya. Shi's injured and ridit doesn't meet her but he just saw her talking with her parents. For him, watching her is more imp than to talk with her.

Shi's father insulted him again. He is not ready to accept that Ridit is best for Shi. But, Thanks to her mother, he realizes his mistake and says sorry to ridit. And their marriage is fixed………..Party time

Their dresses were very nice, But yeh kya ridit to shi se bhi zyada darpok nikla and wo dono cockroach ke saath dance karne me hi lag gaye. Loved that scene aur phir ridit ne kitni ache tarah se pyar ka izhaar bhi karwa liya, Their weding scene was so cute but shi aur uske papa bhi na, yahan bhi shoro ho gaye, aur ridit ji to shi ko chood kea ne ko taiyar ho gaye. Thanks to their relatives ki unhone aisa nahin hone diya. Their room scene was superb, they both loved each other, can't live without each other still cant resist fighting.

In whole, It was a superb OS, Loved it. Sorry again for commenting so late.

Do write more.

Luv Preet