Cinderella.. Let Me Be Your Prince...(Sajan OS)

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ok guys, i was reading this book, i really loved this story, so thought of sharing it with you all, its on sajan, do read an comment

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It all started two years ago at the beginning of the last semester at high school. I was 16 years old and my middle name was > geek < . Guess what ? I had thick black wavy hair that stayed behind my ears, braces (which people made fun of them) and glasses.

I used to make part of the drama Club and as always the club decided to make an end-of-the year play. As I had been a member of this group for over five years the drama teacher, Tamana gave me the leading role which was Cinderella. We were going to play the classical story, Cinderella, but with a modern edge. I was hoping that Prince Charming would be played by someone I knew as I used to be easily intimidated by people who weren't my type.


My friends were congratulating me for being given the main part when suddenly the door opened and in came Samrat shergill! What the hell what was is he doing here? I thought to myself. (Not knowing samrat shergill one would be asking who he is. In short I will tell you. He is the hottest guy at school, basketball captain and dating head cheerleader) .

Going back to the real world from my thoughts I looked at him as he approached tamana and handed her a paper.

She nodded at him and they headed towards us. "I would all like you to hear what I am going to say," she said. All our eyes turned to look at her and Samrat who was standing next to her. "You all know Samrat from your classes, he is going to be making part of this and take part in the play. With discussions with the headmaster we decided to give him the second leading role, Prince Charming."


When Tamana finished what she had to say, all eyes turned to look at me. I was looking at Tamana with my mouth open. ME of all people.. Chosen to work with HIM? The most intimidating person of the school was going to be my partner! I couldn't refuse my part and he seemed somehow inclined to do it, which was rather something unusual as he always look at people like me as if we were nothing.


I saw Tamana handing him his script and talking to him. He looked as if he was asking her something and then she turned and nodded over at me. When he looked at me his deep blue eyes caught mine and I started to blush. I was such an idiot!


"Come on guys. Make a circle and everyone will read out loud his part so to know what we will be doing." Everyone obeyed her and in one minute there was a circle formed and we were reading out our parts. I read my lines perfectly all way through and then when we were at the last pages of the script some words caught my eye : [Cinderella and Prince Kiss and curtains fall]. I was gob smacked when I read this. Did I really have to kiss Samrat?

When all the script was read Tamana told the others to go in groups of four and try to memorize their lines together and meanwhile she called me and Samrat next to her.

"About the kissing scene-", she started, but then she stopped when she saw me and Samrat not facing each other. "Ok, about that scene we will talk later. First you have to get to know about each other. You have to talk and get comfortable . OK?" she asked. "Fine," Samrat said and I just nodded. "Go and take two chairs and start talking a bit. At the end of the lesson I will talk with you."

We walked slowly to get a chair and we went to the corner. We stood there facing each other and saying nothing. I started to look at the ceiling and play with my hair when I heard him clear his throat.
I looked at him, "So you are gunjan'" he said "Yep, that's what the say" I said to him back. I didn't know how I was going to look at him.

He was looking at me like I was a freak and I was getting really uncomfortable. "Are you good at memorizing lines?" he asked me. "Yes," I replied back, shortly. "Do you think that you can give me a hint how I can memorize lines? I'm really bad at this stuff," he asked. "Ummm.." I didn't know what to say.

"I can come over your house if you want and we can practice together," he said before letting me think. "Sure, "I said and smiled at him. He smiled back. He really was gorgeous!

We started reading our lines together and bit by bit I began to memorize them but he was a sad case. He stammered and read slowly and I helped him as much as I could.

Everyone was leaving and when we were ready we got up to leave. " Gunjan and Samrat, come over please," said Tamana. My heart was in my legs as I knew why she was calling us. We walked slowly next to her as if we both knew what she was going to tell us. "I'm going to talk straight and plain. You both know that at the ending you have to kiss each other and it has to appear real so both of you have to practice and find a how to make it look real. OK?" Tamana said plainly.

"Sure" we both said in unison. "You can both leave now. See you!" she added. I said bye to both of them and went out quickly. How would I kiss him? How would I feel? Will it be really hard to get it right? I just didn't have an answer for them.

In the first two weeks Samrat came over my house and we practiced our lines together. We were doing really well and we didn't practice the kissing scene. We were going pretty well with each other and we talked about common things but that was all.

On Monday afternoon of the third week we were starting the proper rehearsals as the play was only five days ahead. When we entered the drama room Tamana made us try on our clothes and I got to wear an adorable dress which was pretty much cute.

When we all tried our clothes, the play started and everything was going really well ,but when we arrived at the end me and Samrat just stopped the play by dancing and didn't kiss each other.

"What are you two waiting?" Tamana asked indignantly "I think that I have made it really clear that you two have to kiss at the end." "Yes Tamana mam," I replied quickly, "Saturday night we will do it and it will be good. OK?"
"Fine, but make that you work it out OK?" she replied. I turned to look at Samrat and he looked sort of puzzled. "We will talk about it Friday night. Is it fine with you?" I asked. "Sure," he said, and smiled at me. Weird!- he smiled at me.

That week he didn't come over at my house because we knew the play by heart. Friday afternoon was the last dress rehearsal as the play was going to be on Saturday evening. As always we did our play perfectly and when the play ended everyone started to leave to go home.

"Gunjan, wait a sec. We need to talk." It was Samrat. I looked at him and waited for him to come over. We said goodbye to the few people left and Tamana and we started to walk towards the door
He broke the silence halfway through the long hallway. "You know about tomorrow we have to kiss each other'" he started looking a bit nervous. "Yes, I was going to talk to you about that. I heard of some ways that we would look like we'll be kissing," I told him quickly. After all I knew that he wouldn't like to kiss the geek of the school.

"But how? I don't have any idea!" he replied. We had arrived at the end of the hallway and he opened the door for me. When we were outside it was really dark and windy. I looked at my mobile to check the time. "I'm not really sure that I can stay talking for much longer because I have to catch the 8.30 bus so not to arrive late at home."

"Want me to give you a ride home? We can talk in the car meanwhile," "Sure," I replied quickly.

Who would miss a ride with Samrat? He was so damn attractive! Athletic body, hazel eyes, spiked black hair and the cutest smile ever. OMG! I was soooo into him!

It was just a crush and I surely he didn't like me back! You would think that I have a low-self esteem of myself but, I'm really ugly and no would ever take interest in me [excluding math geeks!].

We walked to the car and he got into the drivers' seat and opened the door next to him for me. I got into his car slowly and put on the seat belt. He started the engine and this time I started talking. "So, what did you want to know?" my heart couldn't stop beating since I got into the car. "How am I going to look as if I will be kissing you. I don't have an idea how we can do it," he replied slowly.

"You will just have to bend your face next to mine but your head will have to be facing the audience. Then we'll sort of move that it would look real. It's not that hard."I started to feel more comfortable second by second and by that time I started to talk to him normally as if it was nothing.

"As you say it looks really easy. We will see how it will go tomorrow. We'll just hope for luck," he replied. His head was on the road and he didn't look at me once.

"How come did you come to the drama club? I never thought that you were a fan of drama," I said trying to make conversation and fill my curiosity.

"I'm not a fan of drama. I have been coming because I got into a fight with another guy and I took all the blame. As a punishment the head told me that I had to interact with different people and so I had to choose between the choir and drama club," he replied looking a bit embarrassed.

"Hmm..I see," I replied. We stayed quiet for a minute or two. "You can stop now," I said and he stopped the engine. "Thanks for the ride. See you tomorrow!" I said and I got out of the car quickly. I walked up to my door and when I looked back he was already gone.

When I entered in the kitchen I found my mother looking happy. She had been supporting and helping me in the last three weeks so that I would make a good impression on stage. "Gunjan' I have great news for you," she started saying.

She was looking really proud as if she had done something really good. "Tomorrow we are going to the orthodontist'" she started, "Againn!!??" I replied.

My mood immediately changed.

"Wait a minute.! Give me chance to speak!" she replied smiling.

Why was she smiling? I looked at her confused...

"Tomorrow you will be removing your braces!" she cried happily.

"WHAT?"... I couldn't believe her!

"For real??" I replied in a loud voice.

Mum nodded her head and I started jumping up and down allover the place.

"Wait a second Gunjan, mores' left.."

"More?" I replied awestruck.

She nodded, "Yes.. Tomorrow before going to the dentist we are going to the hairdresser and you can dye you hair, cut it and straighten it. I know that you always wanted to change your hair so I thought that you would want to look like a real princess tomorrow," she said with a huge smile on her face as if she was going to burst with happiness.

I couldn't believe her, I jumped on her and gave her a big hug "I love you Mum! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! ... but is it all right with dad?" I asked then thinking of my strict father.

"Yes everything is OK. Now you better go to sleep as tomorrow you have a really long day!" she told me and quickly I hugged her and went running up in my bedroom to sleep.

The next day was really busy. At five o'clock in the afternoon I was another Gunjan - the new Gunjan-. I had no braces and glasses (contacts), my hair was cut into layers and straight.

No more waviness at last! I also dyed my hair,Brown. I found myself looking pretty for once and I was really looking forward for that night. I thought how would Samrat's face be once he saw me.

At half past six I was at the school. Tamana mam and my friends were really amazed by my transformation and they gave me a lot of compliments. I went into my own dressing room as I was the star of the play and there was sonia, who did my makeup.

I was dressed in a cute little dress and my hair had small curly hair. It was amazing !

The play started and I hadn't seen Samrat once that night, but I really got into the play and loved doing my scenes. The scene of the ball arrived. After I have been changed by my fairy godmother in my beautiful dress *Bibidi Bobidi Boo!* I went to the ball and there was the prince.

Samrat looked unbelievably gorgeous! When he saw me he looked astounded. His mouth fell open like a goldfish and I looked at him waiting for him to start his lines.

Tamana was saying his part slowly from backstage so that he could hear her. When he heard the first part he began his line and went on really well. He asked me to dance and he couldn't stop looking at me.

"Are you Gunjan?" he whispered in my ear. "No, I'm an alien! ,"I said sarcastically. "Well you look really like a princess tonight," he said. I could feel my heart beating and I was afraid that he could hear it.

He told me that I looked good for God's sake! "You look good too," I replied back. I felt as if I couldn't let him go. His hands pressing on my hips were giving me shivers down my spine. But then like Cinderella, the clock started to chime midnight and I had to run away!

After I ran away from him and dropped my shoe the scene changed to me back in the kitchen scrubbing the floor and dressed in rags -the Last scene! I was really excited to see how it was going to end!

I was cleaning (as usual!) and then the doorbell rang. I went to open and Samrat entered. After being shooed away by my stepmother, my stepsisters tried on the shoe but it didn't fit them. Then I moved myself forward and asked the prince if I could try it.

I sat on a chair and he bent on his knees as he put my shoe on. When he saw that it fitted me he looked at me and smiled. "You are indeed the one I had been looking for.. will you marry me?" he asked me. "Yes, indeed," I said and I smiled at him. He then looked at me and winked. I could feel the butterflies in my stomach. He stood up slowly ,took my hand and leaned forward to kiss me'


To be Continued.....
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We got out of the hall and once outside my mobile started to ring. It was mum.
"Hi mom. Yeah it was great.. Thanks! See you tomorrow and have fun!". Samrat looked at me as I put my phone back into my purse.
"Who was that?" he asked. "Just Mum, she told me that we had made a great performance," I looked at him.
"Thank her for me then. I really loved acting it out." I nodded in response.
"God, I hate heels!" I exclaimed, as I broke the silence which had been there for a few minutes. "Why?" Samrat looked at me questioningly.

"I'm going to die until we arrive! They're hurting me so much." "Want me to carry you?" he teased. "Ha-ha..better not."


"Look the club's there!" he yelled out, making me jump. "Only one more minute walking and we can go inside and sit." He turned his whole body to me and made a silly bow. "Can you make it princess?" he asked. I gave him a big smile."Yes your majesty. Thanks a lot."


We arrived and got inside. When we got in together they were all giving us strange looks. "Why are they looking at us like this?" I whispered in his ear. "I don't know and I don't care." He gave me a wink.


"Look there's Dia, let's go over that table and you can sit." I looked at him with my mouth open. He remembered that my feet were hurting and he looked as if he cared. Samrat looked at me puzzled, "What?" he asked. I looked at him confused. "Nothing, nothing. Hurry up or they will take our seats."


We went over to Dia and her friends and sat down. My feet felt as if they had given out a huge sigh of relief. Samrat was sitting next to me "Want a drink?" he asked. "Vodka coke please," I replied instantly. After five minutes he came back with two drinks in his hands. He sat next to me again and together with Dia and her friends we talked about many things.


"Want to dance?" I turned to Samrat. "Me?".


"Yeah you. Come on! We've been sitting here for more than three hours drinking and talking." I wasn't really good at dancing but when he offered me his hand I couldn't say no so, he lead us to the dance floor.


There were many people dancing and I was really close to his body. The vodkas I drank started to make their effect. I stood on my toes as he was taller than me and shouted in his ear that I was going out for some air. He nodded and I started walking out of the crowd.


I felt a hand grip mine and when I looked round I found that it was Samrat. Wait! He mouthed. I gave him a smile and a nod and continued walking. I could feel his hands in mine and it felt as if they were burning. We got out of the crowd and we walked to the door. When we were out, his hands were still holding mine.


"Are you fine?" he asked immediately. "I'm much better. What time is it?" He looked at his watch. "Half past one."

"Already?" I asked in amazement. Time really flies when you're having fun!

"Thanks for coming out with me, Samrat." I looked at his beautiful face and he gave me a large smile. "No problem." He gave my hand a tight squeeze and set the butterflies in my stomach.


"I'm not going back inside because I have to take a cab back home and I don't want to sleep inside it until I arrive home." He gave me a concerned look. "I'll give you a ride. I'm rather tired too. I'll go and tell Dia that we're leaving. Wait for me here."


I sat on a small bench as I watched him going inside. His hands had left a warm patch on my hand. In five minutes he was back.

"Come on let's go," he said. I stood up and we started walking. "The car is parked halfway so I don't think that you'll get tired. If your feet will hurt too much I will carry you." He said. I gave him a light punch on his shoulders.

He gave a fake shout. "Ouch! You hurt me!"


"I wish!" I said as I pulled my tongue out at him. We continued walking without saying nothing. We were really close to each other and his hands were brushing with mine continuously. I couldn't resist him anymore and I took his hands in mine. He looked willing to hold them too and he gave my hand a tight squeeze.


We arrived to the car and we hadn't said anything until then. It was as if the silence talked for us. I let go of his hands and I watched him as he went to open his door. He got inside and opened my door from inside. I entered and sat on the seat next to him.


He started the engine and I bent down to remove off my shoes. "Looks like as if they were killing you," he said nodding towards the shoes.

"They were in fact. It would have been better if I had put on my converse."

"Hah!" he said and I saw a grin on his face.

"What?" I looked at him. He was really cute driving - simply charming. "You're different," he said. "Guess I already knew," I muttered.
"No. no. don't take it in the wrong meaning! It's better being you than being fake." I shrugged at his response.

He was looking at me and I tried not to blush. He then turned to look at the road and I took a peek at him through the mirror.


I couldn't stop taking glances at him! He had something that made me more and more attracted to him. We drove the rest of the journey in silence.


We arrived and he stopped in front of my house. "Thanks again for the drive," I said as I turned to look at him. He was already facing me, "No problem."


"Well I think I should get inside." I took my shoes in my hand and opened the door. "I'll walk you to the door. I'm in no hurry," he said quickly. I looked at him and smiled, "Sure".


We got out of the car and he waited for me on the pavement. When I arrived next to him he took my hand into his without saying nothing.

What was he doing? I couldn't believe it! I felt a cold shiver going down my spine.

His hands were holding mine really tight and I could feel as if there were electric currents passing through us. We got to the door and I had to let go of his hand. I started fumbling in my purse, trying to find my key.


"Why don't you ring the bell?" he asked.


"My 'parents are not here tonight so I have to open it myself." He grabbed my purse and started fumbling in it. "Here it is.." he said as he handed me the key. I slowly opened the door and gave him another smile, "Thank you."


"No problem," he replied.


We stood on the doorstep, looking into each other's eyes not knowing what to say.


I couldn't stand there staring at him like an idiot. "I should get going inside," I said and I walked towards the door.

I pushed the door to open it, and then I felt his hand grabbing mine. I turned around and my face found itself a few inches away from his.

His sparkling hazel eyes were looking into mine as if they were trying to read my mind and I could feel his slow breath on my face.
Then he leaned forward and kissed me.

His soft lips gently pressed mine in a slow kiss. I slowly kissed him back and he responded by kissing me more passionately.

His tongue ran across my lips and I opened my mouth so that our tongues could explore each others'. His sweet perfume made my insides water and my legs weak.

He had one hand on my waist and another one entwined in my hair. I put both my hands on his neck and slowly, he pushed me against a wall and pulled my body closer to his.

When I felt his body against mine I could feel shivers going down my spine which gave me an unusual sensation of pleasure. My hands left his neck as one moved slowly down his chest, tracing his abs and another one in his hair.

His hands moved slowly down my back and then he took both my hands, pinned them to the wall and teasingly bit my lower lip.

I could feel his breath going down my neck. It was so amazing. I was floating in another world.

Then I moved my head back and looked at him questioningly. "What?" he said smiling. "Goodnight," I replied with a smile and went inside.
"Wait!" I looked at him. "I haven't got your phone number." He was so sweet. We exchanged numbers and I went inside.

I changed into my comfy pj's and brushed my teeth. I made myself a hot chocolate and went into my room to watch some tv before sleeping. I really didn't want that day to end.

My eyes were closing, when my I received a message on my phone. I could feel goose bumps on my hands at the thought of Samrat sending me a text, but no such luck. It was Benji.

I'm at home and can't sleep. You still awake? If so call me. I am in the mood for talking...

I would never reject calling Benji. It was so much fun talking to him on the phone in the middle of the night when everyone is asleep.
I took the phone and called him.

- Benji! I cannot sleep too!

- Me too! I didn't know what to do so I thought that I would call you.
- Yeah.. It was a good idea. I got news'you won't believe me!

- What?

- Think! hahaha

- Come on B! My mind is not in service right now, please try again later

- You would make a good answering machine, you know? Hahah
He really could make me laugh

- Me and Daniel kissed!

- Oh my gosh! Seriously?? I knew there was something going on ' he added teasingly

- God! He's so cute!

- hahaha' crush alert!

- And how did it go with Ms.Cheerleader?

- Fine.

His voice sounded mysterious. What could have he done?

- You're lying. What went wrong?

- Ohhh! She was such an idiot. He started mimicking a girly voice; Does my hair look good? Do you really think I'm pretty? Do I have a hair out of place? And all that crappy stuff!

- And'

- I didn't know how to get rid of her politely so I told her that it wasn't working, so she went with her friends.

- And you stayed alone?

- Obviously not! I went to a club and met Uday and all I know is that I kissed two or three girls and I don't know their names!

- Ohh Benji! You're such a jerk! hahahah

- Ohh, c'mon live a life!

- By being a jerk!

-Oh shut up!

- Looser.. I'm going now, I'm soooo sleepy' I'll see you tomorrow right?

-Yeah , Good Night

-Bye!

That night I couldn't sleep, my mind was thinking all the time. Samrat! He was so cute and I had a great crush for him , but a thing that you didn't know is that benji had feelings for Me, my friend old me, but i never asked him in embarrassment,

Crazy right? But he's like my other half and he knows me too perfectly. The thing about Samrat was that I was having doubts. He just kissed me cause I was pretty. Before he wouldn't even look at me.

But Benji.. i thought of him only as a friend, nothing more. I nodded off with a plan in my mind for the next Monday'


To Be Continued....

Ok guys, how was it, do coment and criticize, i will continue this OS later..right now i have to go, so will finish this OS later, while you guys tell me how it was....and i know your all confused about samrat and benji..but you'll come to know as the story take place...hope u like it...love
Sonal
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oh my god that was really nice. keep up the good work
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lovedddddddddddddddd the os its amazing...........thanks for the pm.........cont soon
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Ressss!
Omg sona! It was really toooooo guuuuuddddd!!! And the SaJan kiss! Phew...I have butterflies in my stomach yaar! Sigh....now...time to dream about that kissssss....so januable...fiery...passionate....but plz yaar...jaldi continue kar...jaan nikal Rahi hai yahan! Saveeeeee meeeeeeee!!! Agar mujhe aaj heart failure hua na, tho woh bhi teri waja se hi hogi....bachao! From the hottness of this hot sceneeee!! Love u!
Sanju!

Btw, yeh konsa book padh rahi thi tu? Mujhe bhi padhna hai!
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Wow wow awesome sajan os man loveeeee it to core wow cindrella play awesome n sajan r da leading roles so cool man n Sammy asked gunji to help him wid lines lol so so cool n den all der scenes n all awesome n den der kiss wow wow btw she was looking cute n den benji gunji talk awesome haha loved all scenes lol continue soon nw n thnx for pm
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

Ressss!
Omg sona! It was really toooooo guuuuuddddd!!! And the SaJan kiss! Phew...I have butterflies in my stomach yaar! Sigh....now...time to dream about that kissssss....so januable...fiery...passionate....but plz yaar...jaldi continue kar...jaan nikal Rahi hai yahan! Saveeeeee meeeeeeee!!! Agar mujhe aaj heart failure hua na, tho woh bhi teri waja se hi hogi....bachao! From the hottness of this hot sceneeee!! Love u!
Sanju!



hahha...sanju...meri jaan...mein tujhe kuch nahi hone dongi....lolz.///i will save you and thnx alot jaan, i love ur comment
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yaar it was awesome plz plz plz pm me the part next time not the link
it was really interesting and loved reading it😃
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Originally posted by: sweetsonal156



hahha...sanju...meri jaan...mein tujhe kuch nahi hone dongi....lolz.///i will save you and thnx alot jaan, i love ur comment



Thx jaan! Main mar nahi sakti na! Tera scene jo padhna baaki hai! Btw, yeh konsa book padh rahi tho tu? Mujhe bhi padhna hai yaar... Waise update kab kar rahi hai?
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Thx jaan! Main mar nahi sakti na! Tera scene jo padhna baaki hai! Btw, yeh konsa book padh rahi tho tu? Mujhe bhi padhna hai yaar... Waise update kab kar rahi hai?



the totle is the same as this one...and yr i will updt tommarow or the day after

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