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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
Awesome blossom...
Bohut mazza ayaa...
I liked the way Gunjan shut the mouth of Bui...👏
Cont soon...
with babloo number 2..lollzz....
Aab pata challega ke Samrat kitna possessive hain...😉
*Sana*😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
awesome.....
read all d parts nw... too gud...
thanx 4 d pm... do cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

awesomeeeee updt

loved it
loved when gunji speaks up 4 sam
and babloo number 2 lol
continue asap
n thanx 4 the pm me

hey thanx
i am glad u lliked it
i will try and cont asap😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

GR8 prt!
gunji spoke for Sammy........... 👏
bablu prt2!!!!!!!!!!! god nayi musibat!!!!
do cont soo nd thanx for d pm!

@Lina I love ur AB avi!

Luv Adz!

thanx dear
gunji speeaking up for sammy
is the past i enjoyed the most writing
so i am glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: arjunmayankfan

i raed it all from the first again and you are too good yaar

do continue soon i wanna know who this mr. babloo part 2 is continue sonn
and thnx for the pm

hey i am glad u love it so much
u will find out who is babloo nuber 2
very soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: cutekins

aaye hayee

gunjan ne bui ko chup karaya sam ke liye
by god kya ff hai
loved it
thanx a lot 4 d pm

thanx
ya gunjan made bui quiet for sam
in this bui is not going to be a very positive cherecter
so she will always be after sam while gunji fights for him
glad u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

Awesome blossom...
Bohut mazza ayaa...
I liked the way Gunjan shut the mouth of Bui...👏
Cont soon...
with babloo number 2..lollzz....
Aab pata challega ke Samrat kitna possessive hain...😉
*Sana*😳

thanx
im actully looking forward to write possesivness
i hope it turns out goodEmbarrassed
glad u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

awesome.....

read all d parts nw... too gud...
thanx 4 d pm... do cont soon...

THANX😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
as u said, ve sent u buddy request plz accept dat... i dnt want 2 miss out ds ff....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Update 5
Recap: benji tells them all that a boy is coming to see gunjan in sham shadhi ke silsele mei

all are shocked

everyone was just standing there in shock...........but one.............that one was boiling up..........his hands were made into fist...............his temper was uncontrollebal and it looked like he was going to burst out his anger and kill that dude who wanted to marry HIS chashmish.......his chashmish

yes guys it was non other then our very own samrat shergill.......................samrat could not control anymore and he speeks up

S: yeh kya BAKWAS kar raha hai tu benji..............tu hosh mei bhi hai ya nahi..........................kis ki itni himit ke woh meri chashmish ke liya rishta lekar aye................uski tu........................woh janta nahi hai ke wo kya kar raha hai...............woh yaha ane ke 2 second bath ulte pao wapes jaraha ho ga.............chasmish sirf or sirf meri hai sari zindigi bahar sirf mere sath rahe gi...........koi use mujse nahi chinhe ga( without him knowing his anger was turning into concern which was turning into fear.............. fear of losing his chasmish....................his eyes which were red in anger were now turning into tears and soon enough thoes tears started rolling down his cheeks)

Benji's pov

Samrat gunjan ke liya kuch bhi kar sakta hai yeh tu pata tha par itna caring itna pyar itna sseriousness samrat ko asa kabhi nahi dekha..........................samrat ki puri dunhiya puri family us ka sab kuch gunjan hai..............ha kabhi kabhi woh apne stupit pranks or jokes ke piche ye chupata hai....................hum sab ko pata tha ke woh us se bohut pyar kar ta hai.........par itna pyar koi kisi se itna pyar kese kar sakta hai 9his thought were interepted)

S: CHASMISH tum mujhe kabhi chor ke tu nahi jao gi na chashmish ( it was like all of samrats insecurities which he hid under his charm were now rising up, he always thought that gunjan deserve better then him but still he wanted to be with her forever, and now the thought of some dude wanting to marry her scared him)

G: (She calmly walked up to him not wanting to say anything she wraped her hands aroung him and gave him a tight hug which he responded to) samrat tum asa such bhi kase sakte ho..........mei tumhe kabhi bhi nahi chorhu gi.................dekna sab thiek hojayga tum fikar mat karo................(they both just stood ther into each others arm)

now nupur spoke up

N: ha gunjan sab kuch thiek hojae ga magar sab se pehle hume is babloo2 ko bagana hai phir tum dono jake apne bare mei babuji or bui ko sab kuch bata dena (sajan broke there hug and now were standing properlly)

M: par guys humhe iss situation ko properlly handle karna hoga.............agar humare baganhe ke chak kar mei babuji ki izat ko nuksan pocha tu samrart or gunjan kei rishte ko woh kabhi nahi apnayge.....................so jo bhi plan banao soch samaj ke banao

D: mayank is right guys...............last time yad hai hum neh adhiraj ko baganeh ke chakkar mei itni bari musibat karhi kar di thi.............or phir nupur or mayank ka future was at the danger zone hum log phir se woh risk nahi le sakte

B: guys...............hum log ek kam kar te hai......................pehle us larke se milte hai or phir kuch decide kare ge.....................hum agar use explane kare tu shaya uno woh manjay

U: benji dude hum ku usse mille woh tu gunjan se milne ara hai na beside i dont think hes that type woh girls mei hi intrrest rak ta hoga tabhi tu gunjan se milne a raha hia u see

D: dodo shut up

S guys is uday ne ek bat to kam ki ke woh chasmish se milne a raha hai

N: ha tu

S: so nupur agar chasmish sweet innocent gunjan se tottally evil batameez tpe girl ho tu

g; matlab

s: dekho chashmish woh tumse milne a raha hai right..............jis tara babuji is rishte ko lekar kush hai so woh kuch tu jante hi ho ge na ...................that u know use tum jase larkiya passand ayegi tabhi tu itne confident hai magar tum koi totally oppisit girrl banke uske samne chale jao tu woh khud hi mafi man ke ulte pao wapis bahge ga

N: WAH SAMRAT KYA PLAN HAI BY GOD (GETS EXITED) HAI NA MAYANK

m: nahi birkul nahi samrat agar gunjan wese ban ke sab ke samne gayi tu to babuji bhi use asa dekhe ge na phir tu une shak ho ga hi na

d: no problem mayank hum kahe ge ke gunjan us se akele mei bat karna chathi hai u no koi decision lene se pehle use andar liya ge or wah tayagi ho ge nahi....................phir wo jake shadhi se mana karde ga wase gunjan pa kar or taya ji ko shak bhi nahi ho ga

S: brillient candy bas ab tum or nupur chashmish ko samja do use kesa behave kar na hai

d; dont worry sammy hum sab handle kar le ge

n;ha samrat jab nupur or dia ho tu fikar kis bat ki hena

g; nahi di meh meh ase nahi kar pao gi...............muj se acting wacting nahi hogi

n: par gunjan

g nahi di muj se nahi hoga

s mere liya bhi nahi chashmish................plese chashmish try it

g: ok

n: wah gunjan kya bat hai samrat ne kaha tu foron jaht se ha or mei keh rahi tu.......

d oh come on nupur asa pehle kabhi hoa jo ab hoga gunjan sammy ki bat kabhi bhi nahi tale gi right gunjan

g (blushing a little) tum log bhi na

m ok guys get to work nupur dia tum dono gunjan ki madad karo benji uday keep an eye on the door jase hi wo aye inform karo...........................................jab tak mei or samrat baki sara intizam kar teh hai agar sirf gunjan ki acting se kam nahi chala tu phir hum proops ka istamal kare ge

n; right (in mind bablu 2 joh bhi ho tum aj tum hum sab se tu nahi bacho ge)

every one gets busy and now its time

benji comes running and says to everyone guys get ready position le le woh agaya hai

n; kya kon hai woh kesa dikta hai

b; pata nahi mene us ka cehra sahi se dekha nahi seedhe yaha agaya uday ko waha betha kar

s; ok guys get ready chasmish tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya kar na hai

g;hmmm mujhe pata hai

d:ok doll then u wait here hum use abhi laye or sammy plese control ur emotions

s: dont worry candy

the five of them go to the lounge where uday was already there gunjan was in room

bui': ao aao bacho idhar aao nupur ise pechan no yeh hai wohi tera or gunjan ka bachpan ka sathihie............................................ NIEL

then the guy turns around and we see non other then niel standing there.................smilling at nupur and nuper gets all tensed

bui are gunjan kaha hai

d woh actully kya hai na bui woh woh gunjan nei decide kiya hai ke koi bhe decision lene se pehle woh woh is larke se barth karna chahe gi baro ke bagair ......................use hamare hone se koi problem nahi hai but kya hai na agar ab sab log sath mei hoge to woh she is shy u no..............

bui are niel se kya sharmana woh apne niel se sharma rahi haa

s apne niel...........tum chasmish i mean gunjan ko kese jante ho

niel dude bachpan me mai or gunji best friends hoa karte the phir kuch sal pehle me dili chala gaya and jab wapis aya tu pata chala ke woh or nupsi miss drama queen mumbai mei hai

n hi niel (nups gives him a fake faint smile)

NIEL: HI NUPSI or tum log kon ho (he asked samrat) hum log gunjan or nupur ke collagae friends hai uday and candy on ke couins hai mayank nupur ka husban hai or benji friend or me samrat chasmish ka bestest friend

niel cool nup tum ne tu porene dosto ko bhol a diya apni shadhi mei bhi nahi bulaya koi bat nahi ap chale gunjan se milne

n: ya come on then she wispers to samrat to quickly run a head and tell gunjan that the guy is none other then champu the niel obrai ose ek dam se dekh kar gunjan ko shock lage ga

s ok nupur and he makes an execuze and runs a head

in room

gunjan was standing all worried when samrat quickley came

g; samrat tum

s chasmish wo larka

g samrat humne discuss kiya tha na tum fikar na karo

s chasmish woh bat nahi

g tu phir

s woh larka tumhar or nupur ka bachpan ka dost

...................................someone interups from behind and says niel hai

when the y turn around they see non other then niel standing there

and the gang coming from behind trying to stop him

all were really shocked especially gunjan

niel; mujhe pata tha ke yeh larka zaror yahi aya hoga

g: niel tum..............tum yaha

niel; ha gunji mai................wohi larka jis se tumharhe rishte ki bat chal rahi hai

g: what

m: gunjan i think tumhe ise sab sach bata dena chaiya

g'; par jiju

m: no gunjan ase bat or bahre gi

g: ok shayad ap sahi keh rahe hai me sab bata do gi (she looks at samrat then turns to niel and speeks) dekho niel mei ye shadhi nahi kar sakti

mei ye shadhi nahi kar sakti

mei ye shadhi nahi kar sakti

niel: shocked par why gunji .....................mei tumhe bohut kush rakho ga i will always take care of u and love u....

now samrat was totally going to burst love her love his chasmish no ways is chamu ki tu😡

g; kuke kuke mei kuke mei (she turns and looks towards samrat takes his hand in hers and speeks again...........this time with confidence) kuke mei samrat se pyar karti hu...........

mei samrat se pyar karti ho

mei samrat se pyar karti ho

mei samrat se pyar karti ho

g; ha niel or mei hamesha ise se pyar karti raho gi plese try and understand magar mai iske bagair ji nahi pao gi

GUNJAN..............................................GUNJAN......................GUNJAN

(everyone turns around to see where the voice came from and they all see a furious babuji standing at the door staring at them)

precap;

bui; shadhi tu teri niel se hogi............jese bachpan se tei hoi wi hai birkul wese hi

niel; mei ye sab jan ke bhi tum se shadhi karne ke liya tayar ho

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u: guys guys muje ek email aye hai mujhe proffesional cheff bane ke liya england bulaya ja raha hai

gang - 1; what!

so kya hogi niel or gunjan ki shadhi. kya kahe babuji ye sab sun ke. will sajan be seperated.kya hoga bania ka confesion before seperation. ja raha hai uday bhi ab. kon he ye gang me se ek jo nahi rahe ga inke sath (gang -1 from precap means missing one of them). ab reh raha hai less then a month kareeb araha hai seperation day. kya reh paye ge sath. ya banke reh jay ge ek dusre ki yadaii. to find ot keep reading mjht yadaii😊

ok guys this is it for now a heads up i will try and update a big part before the 25 because i go away on vication for like two monthes after that and ther will be no way for me to update but am not sure because i have exams coming up so i might not update befre like september

which me luck for my exams !😊

and do comment😳

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