Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) - Page 36

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Priya............. Hiiii guglu...

Ye update toh maine kal hi padh liya tha...par comment aaj kar rahi hun... main samajh sakti hun yaar...tumhe Ud samajh me hi nahi aaya hoga...tabhi nahi kiya comments...😆 vaise bhi mere uds me sab kuch confusing hota hai...

Wo kya hai na...jyada late ahi kar sakti iss baar...aaj nahi kiya to nahi kar paungi... achhi musibat hai meri bhi...
nahi yaar...yeh prob hum sab ki hai...har baar yahi kar k fass jkate hain hum sab...😕
Achha khair...bahut go gayi meri bakwaas...ab sidhe update pe aati hun... to kaisa tha ye update............ yeh bhi toh tum hi bata sakti ho na...!!! main toh ek baar likhne k baad use padhne ki himmat bhi nahi kar pati...😆

Fantastic update...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 mazaa aa gaya... sachhhhhhiiiiiii....thanqqqqqqqqqqq😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Ye raj bhi ki na bas... ek to peekar aaya hai...upar se Naina ko bhi ek peg dene ki baat kar raha hai... wah...kya baat hai... 😆😆😆 unq piece hai yaar...duniya k sare lyts on kar k bhi dhundhogi na toh ek bhi copy nahi milega...😆 😆 😆

Naina jakar bahar divan par so gayi...fir Raj aaya uske piche piche...usse manane... Wo scene itna khubsurati se likha hai na tune ki bas...maine kal se kam se kam 5 baar padh liya hai...fir bhi mann nahi bhara... wow yaar... isse kehte hain full flow of emotions...👏👏👏 ab kha mere sar ki kasamm ki tune ise 5 baar padha hai...😆 😆 😆 ...par sach kahun toh...thanxxxxx a lot yaar...tere kuch words mera din bana dete hain...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Naina kitne sawal karti hai.... sahi kaha Raj ne...PATI ki bahon me PITA ko yaad kar rahi hai... 😆😆😆😆😆😆ye Raj ko kehti hai mazak mat karo...fir khud hi mazak karti hai... kya ladki hai... ab naina pagal ho gayi hai...koi bhi raj k kareeb aane par khushi se pagal toh ho hi jayega...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ka wedding gift to bahut khubsurat tha...aur unke saath me bitaye hue pal bhi...par ab train ki awaz se Raj ko kya yaad aa gaya...??? Wo Aditi ki bahon me kaun se jakhm dekh raha tha...Aditi zanzeer se kab bandhi hui thi..ye flashback kya hai Aditi ka??? Raj loaded gun lekar kahan chal diya...??? Kya hua tha Aditi ke saath...??? Yaar jaldi batao na...kholo na saari mysteries... kitne sawal hain iss update me...
ufff....kitne sawal puchti ho yaar...tum toh naina ki dadi nikli😆...us se bhi jyada sawal puch rahi ho tum...par koi baat nahi kudiye...main next part me kuch batain toh clear kar hi dungi...pakka...😃 😃 😃 😃
Chal, ab continue soon...(Halanki mai jaanti hun ki tu aisa karegi nahi...) main toh kai dino se try karr rahi hun...ud post karne ki...par mera net hi mujhe dhoka de raha hai...

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi !!! mujhe bhi HI bolna padega kya...

The update was superrrrrbbbbb !!! .....ShukriyaNow dont tell me that you didnt expect this ! 😊 nahi main aisa nahi kahungi...kyoun ki mujhe pata hai...chahe main kitna bhi bura kyoun na likh dun...tum sab use achha hi kahoge...!!! ab tum sab bhi kya karr sakte ho...tumhe bhi toh dosti ka farz nibhana hai na...😆 😆 😆

Shuruvat toh hui jhagde se....but jaldi hi Raj ne Naina ko manaa liya... ab ek lauti wife hai us ki...toh use yeh sab bhi toh jaldi hi sikhna padega na...😃

What I liked most is when he said, he is an ordinary man, who have many faults and he dont want to change and be a stranger to himself....👍🏼 yeh sahi bhi toh hai na... 😃

And Naina's reply to that was nice too... ...shukriya...naina ki taraf se...😃

What I liked most is the ease of conversation between the two of them 😊 sachhi...😃

You know, That's my dial...whenever I want to ask someone that WHY EXACTLY HE/SHE is so WEIRD....😆 😆

Main bhi yahi poochti hoon...ki..." Tum National Holiday par paida huye the kya?" 😆 hmmm...ab mujhe tujh par doubt hone laga hai...yaar yeh toh mere dails hain...jo main almost roz bolti rahti hun...😆

And Raj saying Pati ki baahon mein PITA ko yaad kar rahi ho was funny...😆 sahi toh kaha us ne...😆

So issliye woh Delhi gaya tha !! Ohkkkk !!!

Yeh Naina ka interrogation toh khatam hi nahi horaha ! 🥱 🥱 😆 😆 ab voh bichari kya kare...apne sawalon k jawab dhundhne aayi thi...par naseeb me kuch au hi likha tha...isiliye shaadi toh ho gayi...par ab use sawal k jawab dene wala koi muft me mil gaya hai toh voh bas cash karr rahi hai...😆 😆 😆 😆

Sahi kaha Raj ne...agar Naina ek aur sawaal poochti toh bechare ke paas bhaagne ke alawa koi option nahi bachta ! 😆 😆 😆 aur nahi toh kya...bichara kitne romantic mood me aaya tha...naina ne us me pani pher diya...😆 😆 😆

Arey yaar yeh Naina agar Ziddi hai , toh Raj maha ziddi ! 😛 Aakhir he made her close her eyes....😉 tabhi toh kahte hain na...Raam milaye jodi😛

And now I tell you , that You are Awesomeeee at writing romantic and passionate scenes....👏 👏 👏 👏 tujhe pakka yakeen hai...😆

And fir kabhi yeh baat kahi ki tu romantic nahi likh sakti, toh main kahin se bhi dhundkar tujhe bahooooot peetungi ! Samjhi??? 😛 pahle pakad k toh dikha...😆

Arey Samjhegi kaise? Samajhne keliye toh dimaag ki zaroorat hoti hai na ! 😆 😆 😆 aur nahi toh kya...aur jab se main raj k club ka member hui hun...tab se maidan pura safa-chat hai...😆

And then Achanak Raj ko train ki awaaz se uska past yaad aana and uska yeh samajhte huye bhi ki woh galat kar raha hai, khudko na samjha paana....IT WAS DONE BRILLIANTLY !!! 👏 👏 👏 thanxxxxxx Darl...😃 😃 😃

It blended so well that Naina toh kya, hum bhi Raj ki takliff ko samajh gaye ! 😛 tabhi toh maine sirf RN ko hi nahi tum sab ko bhi pakaya tha...😆

Well achcha laga yeh dekhkar ki Naina understanding hai... mujh pe jo gayi hai...😃... dekh main itne bade se smile k sath...tujh se bhi yahi kah rahi hun ki main bhi baht understanding nature ki hun...par prob yeh hai ki meri baat ko samajh hi nahi pata...😆

Now yeh Aditi-Raj aur JIGYASA ki kya mystery hai....? batati hun na next part me...😃

and Jigyasa kise waha khada hua dekha??? ( My guess, Raj 😛) ab tu kah hi rahi hai toh main teri baat thode hi na taal sakti hun...kyoun ki tu toh janti hi hai ki main tujh se kitnaaaaa pyar karti hun...😛

Waiting for you to clear the doubts.... sare toh nahi par kuch doubts toh main clear kar hi dungi...next part me...😃

bye....

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

awesome update dear great update sare praises tumhareliye hai too good fantastic amazing update loved raj and naina's convo toooo gooddddddddddddd

Originally posted by: rituka7

superb part
amazing
updater soon

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

the up is superb plz cont soon and why is raj beahving like this ?

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

ab aayi ho tum update karne 100 saalon ke baad 😲😲😲 i chckd FF page several times...thinking u must hv updated n wud hv forgot to PM me...lekin wo bhi nahi tha...no updates!!nahi yaar 100 saal toh abhi tak hue bhi nahi...😆...achha achha ab naraz mat ho...actually main kuch kaam me fass gayi thi isiliye late ho gayi...sorryyyyyy...maaf bhi kar do...😃

lekin tumhara PM mila update padha to saara gussa gayab 😆😆😆😆
itna cute update...arrey waah 😊.. thanqqqqq Mehendi😃...aur thank God too...kam se kam tumhara gussa toh thanda hua...😃

so raj ws the person who saved naina's dad...use kya pata tha ki wo jaane-anjaane mein apne father-in-law ki jaan bacha raha hai 😉😉 pata hota toh tabhi ashrivaad na le leta...😆 😆
chalo achha hai her dad wont be angry at him for forcefully marrying his daughter 😉😉 yeh baat toh hai hi...😛

ye aditi ko kya hua tha...wat went wrong wid her...she is so bubbly n good...hope its nthing bad 😔😔 n y didnt raj share it wid naina...arrey usko samjhao ki wo uski ardhangini hai hak banta hai uska 😉😉 raj ko maine samjhya hai yaar...par voh hai ki samajhta hi nahi...😛

ab itne din baad update mat karna..jaldi jaldi karna 😃
and loooong wala 😊 ye dil maange more u see 😉 jo hukum sarkaar...😃
tc n update soon..
mehendi

Originally posted by: vvdn

Superb Update ........thanxxxxx namita...😃

Naina ne toh saawal toh khatam hi nahi ho rahe the. ab muft me koi us k tortures sah raha hai toh voh apna kaam karwa rahi hai...😆
aur ye kya? end of the update kahani mein naya twist??????? koi twist nahi hai yaar...ab sare suspense clear hone ka tym aa gaya hai bass😃
waiting for next part.....

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

wow!!!!!!!!yet again a mindblowing updt.......

loved d dialogues and d passion of this part.....

rn wer amazing and d way u brought mystery to the romantic scene....too goood....

awesome one..... 👏

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

awsome update

interesting

loved the part

too good

superb

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: sun_423

priiii main aagayi.... thoda ruk ja...main aarti ki thaali le kar aati hun...!!! hadh hai yaar...hamesha late...meri tarah...!!! is se toh pakka pata chal jata hai ki tu meri dost hai...😆 😆

sorry thoda late hun i know tum mere comments ka bohat time se wait karr rahii ho lekin woh thodu sa busy hogayi thi... sorrryyyyy..😃 hmmm... chal thik hai...koi baat nahi...!!! vaise bhi na main baht sweet ladki hun...😃

ab chalo agge badhthe hai fanfic aur parts kii taraf.... ab kahaan se shuru karun.. hmm.. let's start from wahaan jahaan naina kii shaddi us Mr. budhape mein jawani ke saath ho rahii thi... ha ha ha...kya sahi naam dhunda hai tum ne...😆 😆 😆

yeh gaurav aur vikram kitne besharam hai ek shaddi-shuda ladki kii phir se shaadi karwa rahe hai... woh bhi tab jab dulhan apne present pati se head over heels pyaar karthi hai... ab voh toh villains hain na...toh aise kaam karna toh un ka birth rights hai yaar...tabhi toh peetenge na...😆

lekin dekha jaye na tho yeh vikram aur gaurav tho hai hii bad people of the first order.. agar pehli barr mein hii raj naina se shaddi karke us baat ko official karr detha tho tab aathe mazaa tab yeh vikram aur gaurav tho naina kii taraf ek kadam bhi nahii utta paathe... lekin yeh raj bhi na jaldbazi mein zabardasthi kii shaadi karli naina se... atleast he should have claimed the right over naina tab hii.. haan...par agar yeh sab tabhi ho jata toh mere fic us ka 2nd thrd kahan dekh pata...!!! aur yeh fic toh 1st thrd k 50 pages me hi khatam ho jati...!!! aur phir tum log mujhe galiyaan kaise dete...😆 😆 😆

lekin koi baat nahii raj knows very well how to claim over his love... & in a way it is good because though raj ne pehle hii naina se zabardasti kii shadi kii lekin now he will claim his love in front of all only after he has won over his love... gooddd...good... ab hero hai apna raj...toh use pata hai ki koun sa kaam kab karna hai...😃

tho raj kii poster lagayi hui hai mandap mein aur raj usse phaadkar entry kartha hai..waahhh kya baat hai... arjun ne bilkul sahii kaha 'phata poster nikla hero'.. aur sahii bhi hai kyunke ab jab hero kudh wahaan aagaya hai tho uske poster ka kya kaam....hehe... tabhi toh Arjun ne voh dail bola tha...!!! mujhe pata hai ki voh thoda filmy tha...par chalta hai...😆

now i liked the next bit of the scene jahaan naina takes raj to the room & her first reaction is to slap raj because he was late... that scene was very emotional.. & it showed how much they actually love each other.. i liked their meeti meeti baatein... ab raj politician hai toh har jagah par late pahunchta hai...ab khud ki shaadi me bhi late pahunchega...toh naina toh aise hi react karegi na...😛

aur dusari taraf gaurav & vikram locked in the room, serves them right... kaash us kamre ka darwaza kabhi na khule.. nahi khulega...toh mere readers mujhe maar dalenge...sabhi kab se wait karr rahe hain un k peetai ki...😆

tho abhi raj weds naina officially on the mandap.. yaayyyy.. gaurav aur vikram kii hogayi gayi 'tayein tayein fishhhh'... ab yeh toh hona hi tha na...😃

ab yeh vikram naina ko choo kar tho dikhaye agar raj uske haath nahii thod dega tho tum mera naam badal dena... hehehe... lekin yaar..,tera naam badal kar main dushra naam kya rakhungi 'jyotika'...naaahhhhh... mujhe na 'suriya' naam hi achha lagta hai...😆

so finally naina is going to her husband's home.. raj's home.. everything at raj's home was sweet emotional.. gayatri devi, aditi, nandini, aslam, vishal sab hai wahaan.... ab raj ki shaadi hai toh sabhi toh honge hi na...😃

thank God nandini & shagun are in safe hands.. & yeh kya naina's father is back.. raj ne unko bachaya.. raj is truly a savior... finally everything is going well... i liked the emotional sequences... all were very well written... thanxxxx a lot sweety...😃

the scene on the terrace between raj, vishal, arjun & aslam was cool... raj naina se darr raha hai... hahaha.. you know yeh padhkar ek hii baat mere mann mein aayi, that is he may be a politician outside his house but ghar par he is bheegi billi, & very soon i'am sure sab usse joru ka ghulam kehke tease karenge...hahaha... gooddd... goodddd.... achcha hai... ab har insaan kisi na kisi se toh darta hi hai na...😛

the scene between raj & naina was so funny.. naina asking him that usne whiskey pii hai & raj telling yeh tho whiskey nahii rum hai...it was so hilarious.... ha ha ha...ab raj ko koun samjhaye ki naina serious hai...😆

tho naina aur raj ka first official naraaz hona bhi start hogaya.. naina raj se naraaz hai because usne pii hai... well is baat par main raj se kehna chahoongi raj abhi se aadat daalo.. naina ko manane kii practice karo.. kyunke yeh tho bas shuruwaat hai.. agge agge dekho kya hotha hai...hehehe.... ab roothna -manana toh zindagi ka ek hissa hi hai...😃

the romance between raj naina was ek dum mast.. zabardast... unke dil kii baatein.. unka ek dusare se apne feelings share karna.. sab kuch too good tha jii.. humko bohat hii zyada achcha laga.... i liked the way naina jaanboochkar raj ko tung karne ke liye, uske romance mein bhung daal rahii hai...& raj ke cute expressions.. all were awesome.... Thanxxxx a lot dirl...

finally raj tells naina about how he found her father.. the flashback was interesting... i'am happy that naina's father is alive.. warna agar unko kuch ho jaatha tho naina will be totally broken.... now raj is back to his naughty & romance mood.. aur yeh naina jaankar bhi usse ched rahi hai.. their romantic talks were so very sweettt.... naina ke sawaal raj ka romance all were just superb... ab dono ek dushre k liye hi bane hain yaar...😃

mujhe raj ka gift bada achcha laga aur naina ke aankh bund karwaane ka tareeka bhii.. hehehe... lekin yeh kya sab kuch tho achcha chal raha tha, lekin phir raj ko kya hogaya... aditi ke saath aisa kya hua hai, joh raj kudh ko kasoorvaar maantha hai.. hmmm... was aditi molested or something by these villain gang... kya raj aditi ko sahii time pe bacha nahii paaya.. these are the things running on my mind... par joh bhi ho, whoever is at the receiving end of raj's ghussa is done for sure... i'am sure raj will not leave them... raj ka aditi ke kamre mein jaana, uska ghussa, his tears all show that may be aditi ke saath joh bhi hua hai raj uske liye kudh ko zimedaar maantha hai.. he feels responsible may be as he could not save his sister in time.... this is just my guess... ek baat bata...tu itna sab kaise guess kar leti hai...!!! vaise kuch hadh tak tu sahi hai...par kahan tak voh nahi batayungi...😛

hmmm... raj with a loaded gun, that too in ghussa... hmmm.. asaar achche nahii lag rahe mujhko... lekin mujhe vishal kii baat se tasalli hui, usne naina se kaha na kii raj won't anything.. he won't break his promise given to gayatri devi...& now if i think of it i know raj is sensible enough to handle his anger.. & he would not do anything in the fit rage of anger i'am sure of that.... dont woory...dear...main hun na...😃

i hope vishal tells naina about what happened with aditi & raj... because raj ke liye may be to narrate his past will be damn painful, bas usse sochkarr raj ko itni takleef ho rahii hai tho usko batane mein kitna dard hoga raj ko... so it's better vishaal tells naina... bilkul sahi kaha hai tune...yahi baat hai jis ki wajah se raj naina se apne past lyf k bare me kuch nahi kah pata...😊

you keep up the good work going yaar... story bohat hii interesting hothi jaa rahii hai... i'am absolutely enjoying reading the fanfic...👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏 shukriya....suri jee😃
Priii next part jaldi se post karr.. aur coming to tumhare pm ka sawaal uska jawaab i'll pm you soon... dekh sach keh rahii hoon jaldi se update kar de warna hum tumko pm's ke upar pm's karke tumko tung karenge... agar isse bachna hai tho continue soonnnn..😃 karr rahi hun meri maa... ab mere piche danda le kar bhaagna band kar... 😆 😆 😆