Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6)

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#331

Hi !!!

The update was superrrrrbbbbb !!! Now dont tell me that you didnt expect this ! 😊

Shuruvat toh hui jhagde se....but jaldi hi Raj ne Naina ko manaa liya...

What I liked most is when he said, he is an ordinary man, who have many faults and he dont want to change and be a stranger to himself....👍🏼

And Naina's reply to that was nice too...

What I liked most is the ease of conversation between the two of them 😊

You know, That's my dial...whenever I want to ask someone that WHY EXACTLY HE/SHE is so WEIRD....😆 😆

Main bhi yahi poochti hoon...ki..." Tum National Holiday par paida huye the kya?" 😆

And Raj saying Pati ki baahon mein PITA ko yaad kar rahi ho was funny...😆

So issliye woh Delhi gaya tha !! Ohkkkk !!!

Yeh Naina ka interrogation toh khatam hi nahi horaha ! 🥱 🥱 😆 😆

Sahi kaha Raj ne...agar Naina ek aur sawaal poochti toh bechare ke paas bhaagne ke alawa koi option nahi bachta ! 😆 😆 😆

Arey yaar yeh Naina agar Ziddi hai , toh Raj maha ziddi ! 😛 Aakhir he made her close her eyes....😉

And now I tell you , that You are Awesomeeee at writing romantic and passionate scenes....👏 👏 👏 👏

And fir kabhi yeh baat kahi ki tu romantic nahi likh sakti, toh main kahin se bhi dhundkar tujhe bahooooot peetungi ! Samjhi??? 😛

Arey Samjhegi kaise? Samajhne keliye toh dimaag ki zaroorat hoti hai na ! 😆 😆 😆

And then Achanak Raj ko train ki awaaz se uska past yaad aana and uska yeh samajhte huye bhi ki woh galat kar raha hai, khudko na samjha paana....IT WAS DONE BRILLIANTLY !!! 👏 👏 👏

It blended so well that Naina toh kya, hum bhi Raj ki takliff ko samajh gaye ! 😛

Well achcha laga yeh dekhkar ki Naina understanding hai...

Now yeh Aditi-Raj aur JIGYASA ki kya mystery hai....?

and Jigyasa kise waha khada hua dekha??? ( My guess, Raj 😛)

Waiting for you to clear the doubts....

bye....

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#332

awesome update dear great update sare praises tumhareliye hai too good fantastic amazing update loved raj and naina's convo toooo gooddddddddddddd

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina ka gussa finally shant ho jata hai and she feels sorry about hitting Raj!!!!!

😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is feeling very guilty about how he had behaved when they both had first got married!!!!!

Naina tells him to forget about the past as a new furture awaits them!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj ka suhaag raat waala dialogue was very funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Naina wants to know Raj uske saath ush din kya karta but Raj himself did not know what he was doing that day!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Magar ush din Raj ko aisa kya pata chala tha jisse sun kar Raj gusse se pagal ho gaya tha??

😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina ka puchna ke ab usse kaun shaadi kar raha hai aur Raj ka kehna tumhara Raj was very sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj toh abhi bhi mazak kar raha hai aur Naina naraz ho jaati hai!!!!!

😒 😒 😒 😒

Magar Naina ko pyaar se manana bhi Raj ko aata hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

😊 😊 😊 😊

Ankur abhi bhi confused hai aur woh kare bhi kya!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Arjun's sense of humour is too good and his answers to Ankur's questions are just hilarious!!!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Aslam's explaination is too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Waise isse mujhe Kaminey ka gaana yaad aa gaya "Raat ke dhai baje"!!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊

Vishal's explaination for being late was too funny and what he said about the politicians is so true!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj and Naina were about to kiss when Vishal called them!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Finally Raj and Naina get married and now no one can question their relationship!!!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Arjun has to give his expert comments again on seeing Vikram!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ka Vikram ko kehna ke usse uparwale ne jitna bada jism diya hai utna hi bada dil diya hai was too funny!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ankur had a hard time controlling his laughter at this!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj reminded Vikram of the time when Vikram had tried to forcibly marry a girl but with the same result and Naina was shocked to hear that!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Vikram wants to shoot Raj but Gaurav stops him in time and asks him to stay calm!!!!!!

So Vikram had once wanted to marry Gayatri Devi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Waise Raj Gayatri Devi ko Choti Maa bulata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Kya woh uski Chachi hai??😛 😛 😛 😛

Vikram jab bhi shaadi karne jaata hai uske saath aisa hota hai!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪Zaroor uski kundali mein dosh hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

So a wedding gift is waiting for Naina and Raj wants a deep kiss in return!!!!!!

😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Nandini ne undono ke door pe swagat kiya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats nice!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yeh Adi ko bahut jaldi hai aur usse do saal mein hi bhatija ya bhatiji chahiye!!!!!!

😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Nandini has made the right decision of divorcing Gaurav!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊

Vishal ne Nandini ko behen kaha and now wants to take her to his house!!!!!

😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

But Gayatri Devi is right that they should stick together for now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Just as I had guessed that Naina's biggest surprise and best wedding gift ever was her father!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne Naina ko diya huya wada pura kiya aur uske dad ko dhundh liya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Ankur Arjun ko dinner pe le jaana chahta hai but Arjun got scared and refused!!!!!!

😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj, Vishal, Aslam and Arjun are on a drinking spree on the terrace!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is now scared to go to Naina as he has drunk!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Arjun, Vishal and Aslam have a hard time controlling their laughter as the Raj they knew wasn't scared of anyone!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

But now he is scared of his wife!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Ab bade se bada aadmi bhi apni biwi se darta hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Arjun Yashmin se takrata hai aur usse background mein gaana sunayi deta hai!!!!!!

😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar yeh Yashmin toh usse bhao hi nahi deti hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

As per the condition Raj ko uski kiss mil gayi magar Naina ko pata chal gaya that he has drunk!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The joke was funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj bhi na ek taraf Naina ki cooking ki insult kar raha hai aur dusri taraf usse hot bula raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Too smart!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab dekhte hai Naina kya karegi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#334

the up is superb plz cont soon and why is raj beahving like this ?

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liquidfantasy

@liquidfantasy

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#335

ab aayi ho tum update karne 100 saalon ke baad 😲😲😲i chckd FF page several times...thinking u must hv updated n wud hv forgot to PM me...lekin wo bhi nahi tha...no updates!!

lekin tumhara PM mila update padha to saara gussa gayab 😆😆😆😆
itna cute update...arrey waah 😊..

so raj ws the person who saved naina's dad...use kya pata tha ki wo jaane-anjaane mein apne father-in-law ki jaan bacha raha hai 😉😉
chalo achha hai her dad wont be angry at him for forcefully marrying his daughter 😉😉

ye aditi ko kya hua tha...wat went wrong wid her...she is so bubbly n good...hope its nthing bad 😔😔 n y didnt raj share it wid naina...arrey usko samjhao ki wo uski ardhangini hai 😛😛😛 hak banta hai uska 😉😉

ab itne din baad update mat karna..jaldi jaldi karna 😃
and loooong wala 😊 ye dil maange more u see 😉
tc n update soon..
mehendi

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#336

Superb Update ........Naina ne toh saawal toh khatam hi nahi ho rahe the.
aur ye kya? end of the update kahani mein naya twist???????
waiting for next part.....

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#337

wow!!!!!!!!yet again a mindblowing updt.......

loved d dialogues and d passion of this part.....

rn wer amazing and d way u brought mystery to the romantic scene....too goood....

awesome one..... 👏

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#338

wow

awsome update

interesting

loved the part

too good

superb

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#339

priiii main aagayi.... sorry thoda late hun i know tum mere comments ka bohat time se wait karr rahii ho lekin woh thodu sa busy hogayi thi... sorrryyyyy..😃 ab chalo agge badhthe hai fanfic aur parts kii taraf.... ab kahaan se shuru karun.. hmm.. let's start from wahaan jahaan naina kii shaddi us Mr. budhape mein jawani ke saath ho rahii thi...yeh gaurav aur vikram kitne besharam hai ek shaddi-shuda ladki kii phir se shaadi karwa rahe hai... woh bhi tab jab dulhan apne present pati se head over heels pyaar karthi hai... lekin dekha jaye na tho yeh vikram aur gaurav tho hai hii bad people of the first order.. agar pehli barr mein hii raj naina se shaddi karke us baat ko official karr detha tho tab aathe mazaa tab yeh vikram aur gaurav tho naina kii taraf ek kadam bhi nahii utta paathe... lekin yeh raj bhi na jaldbazi mein zabardasthi kii shaadi karli naina se... atleast he should have claimed the right over naina tab hii.. lekin koi baat nahii raj knows very well how to claim over his love... & in a way it is good because though raj ne pehle hii naina se zabardasti kii shadi kii lekin now he will claim his love in front of all only after he has won over his love... gooddd...good...tho raj kii poster lagayi hui hai mandap mein aur raj usse phaadkar entry kartha hai..waahhh kya baat hai... arjun ne bilkul sahii kaha 'phata poster nikla hero'.. aur sahii bhi hai kyunke ab jab hero kudh wahaan aagaya hai tho uske poster ka kya kaam....hehe... now i liked the next bit of the scene jahaan naina takes raj to the room & her first reaction is to slap raj because he was late... that scene was very emotional.. & it showed how much they actually love each other.. i liked their meeti meeti baatein... aur dusari taraf gaurav & vikram locked in the room, serves them right... kaash us kamre ka darwaza kabhi na khule.. tho abhi raj weds naina officially on the mandap.. yaayyyy.. gaurav aur vikram kii hogayi gayi 'tayein tayein fishhhh'... ab yeh vikram naina ko choo kar tho dikhaye agar raj uske haath nahii thod dega tho tum mera naam badal dena... hehehe... so finally naina is going to her husband's home.. raj's home.. everything at raj's home was sweet emotional.. gayatri devi, aditi, nandini, aslam, vishal sab hai wahaan.... thank God nandini & shagun are in safe hands.. & yeh kya naina's father is back.. raj ne unko bachaya.. raj is truly a savior... finally everything is going well... i liked the emotional sequences... all were very well written... the scene on the terrace between raj, vishal, arjun & aslam was cool... raj naina se darr raha hai... hahaha.. you know yeh padhkar ek hii baat mere mann mein aayi, that is he may be a politician outside his house but ghar par he is bheegi billi, & very soon i'am sure sab usse joru ka ghulam kehke tease karenge...hahaha... gooddd... goodddd.... achcha hai...the scene between raj & naina was so funny.. naina asking him that usne whiskey pii hai & raj telling yeh tho whiskey nahii rum hai...it was so hilarious.... tho naina aur raj ka first official naraaz hona bhi start hogaya.. naina raj se naraaz hai because usne pii hai... well is baat par main raj se kehna chahoongi raj abhi se aadat daalo.. naina ko manane kii practice karo.. kyunke yeh tho bas shuruwaat hai.. agge agge dekho kya hotha hai...hehehe.... the romance between raj naina was ek dum mast.. zabardast... unke dil kii baatein.. unka ek dusare se apne feelings share karna.. sab kuch too good tha jii.. humko bohat hii zyada achcha laga.... i liked the way naina jaanboochkar raj ko tung karne ke liye, uske romance mein bhung daal rahii hai...& raj ke cute expressions.. all were awesome.... finally raj tells naina about how he found her father.. the flashback was interesting... i'am happy that naina's father is alive.. warna agar unko kuch ho jaatha tho naina will be totally broken.... now raj is back to his naughty & romance mood.. aur yeh naina jaankar bhi usse ched rahi hai.. their romantic talks were so very sweettt.... naina ke sawaal raj ka romance all were just superb... mujhe raj ka gift bada achcha laga aur naina ke aankh bund karwaane ka tareeka bhii.. hehehe... lekin yeh kya sab kuch tho achcha chal raha tha, lekin phir raj ko kya hogaya... aditi ke saath aisa kya hua hai, joh raj kudh ko kasoorvaar maantha hai.. hmmm... was aditi molested or something by these villain gang... kya raj aditi ko sahii time pe bacha nahii paaya.. these are the things running on my mind... par joh bhi ho, whoever is at the receiving end of raj's ghussa is done for sure... i'am sure raj will not leave them... raj ka aditi ke kamre mein jaana, uska ghussa, his tears all show that may be aditi ke saath joh bhi hua hai raj uske liye kudh ko zimedaar maantha hai.. he feels responsible may be as he could not save his sister in time.... this is just my guess... hmmm... raj with a loaded gun, that too in ghussa... hmmm.. asaar achche nahii lag rahe mujhko... lekin mujhe vishal kii baat se tasalli hui, usne naina se kaha na kii raj won't anything.. he won't break his promise given to gayatri devi...& now if i think of it i know raj is sensible enough to handle his anger.. & he would not do anything in the fit rage of anger i'am sure of that.... i hope vishal tells naina about what happened with aditi & raj... because raj ke liye may be to narrate his past will be damn painful, bas usse sochkarr raj ko itni takleef ho rahii hai tho usko batane mein kitna dard hoga raj ko... so it's better vishaal tells naina... you keep up the good work going yaar... story bohat hii interesting hothi jaa rahii hai... i'am absolutely enjoying reading the fanfic...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Priii next part jaldi se post karr.. aur coming to tumhare pm ka sawaal uska jawaab i'll pm you soon... dekh sach keh rahii hoon jaldi se update kar de warna hum tumko pm's ke upar pm's karke tumko tung karenge... agar isse bachna hai tho continue soonnnn..😊😃😊

Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: princessyogitha
I am the first ..i am the first to read this part ...i cant beleive this...teri pm aane se pehle hi maine ye update read kiya....yay ...so happy r u sure...matlab tujhe sach me achha laga...ki dosti ka farz nibha rahi hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Lovely 👏 👏 👏 👏 Amazing 👏 👏 👏 👏 Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 part dear thanx kahna allow nahi hai...isiliye kuch aur kahti hun...jaise...XNAHT yogi😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Raj n nainas scene in the first part is so beautiful...raj is so funny ....dekho what he is saying ..wo naina ke liye bhi ek peg lekar aayega 😆 😆 😆 aur nahi toh kya...naina ka bhi toh haq banta hai na...😆 😆 😆

raj ne kitna sweetly manaya naina ko ....ab pata chala naina ko kyun itna jaldi gussa aajtha hain...itna cutely mannane wala sweet raj jo hain us ke pass...lucky girl...loved the whole scene so much ...ab mananewala Raj ho toh...koi bhi ghanto tak naraz rah sakta hai na...😉 😉 😉

raj ne bilkul tikh kaha naina ke bare main....ye naina bhi na romance ke bich main bhi sawal karna nahin bhuli ....aur wo bhi kitne sawal ...chalo uski sawalon ki wajah se hum ko bhi pata chalgaya nainas dad raj ko kaha aur kis halat main mila ...ab naina kya karti...use bhi toh tum sab ki tarah jan na tha...sab kuch...😃 😃 😃

naina ka bhi kya kismat hain yaar...raj jaisa sweet insaan se usne do do baar shaddi ki hain ... aur upar se raj ne kitna awsome gifts di to her for donon shaadiyan ab kishmat likhnewali PRIYA ho toh sab ki kishmat achhi hi likhegi...😛 😛 😛

The song is so lovely ...tuje pata hain tune kitna beautifully likha the romantic scenes ....loved them bass try kiya tha...actually likhte waqt soch rahi thi ki yeh sab likhun ki nahi...phir socha ki chalo ek baar try kar hi deti hun...tum sab itne achhe ho ki meri peetai jyada nahi karoge...😆 😆 😆

train ki awaaz sunke raj kyun aisa react hua...actually kya hua adi ke saath ...jaldi batao yaar...thoda sabr toh karr mere yaar...jara saansh toh le dil dar...har fiqr nu goli maar yaar...😆 😆 😆

i think ab jig ki bahut acchi tarah se band bhajnewali hain...wo raj hi haina jisko jig dekhke chaunki ...hmmm...next part padh le sab samajh me aa jayega...😉

jaldi update karo next part ...eagerly waiting jo hukuk sarkaar...😆

the lrl joke is so funny 😆 😆 😆 xnaht 😆 😆 😆

Priya ....u dedicated this beautiful update to me ...ab main is ke bare main kya kahun yaar...main ye baat kabhi nahin bhulungi .......u r sooooo sweet...love u dear 🤗 🤗
🤗 🤗 🤗love u 2 ...3...4......5...😃 😃 😃!!! aur haan yeh ud tujhe dedicate karne ki ek wajah hai...😃 😃 😃!!! batayun...naaaahhhhhhhh...!!! achha chal bata deti hun...!!! kya hai na...nahi chal jane de...😆 bass itna samajh le ki...yeh ud itna khaash nahi tha...jitna tu hai...😃 😃 😃

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