CHUPA HUA PYAAR AUR IKRAR..MAYUR SS NEW

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi frndz.

Seriously guys aaj mujh pe likhne ka bhoot sawar hai shayad mjht k current situation ka asar hai....ok guys ab meri bak bak band karti hun...wel dis ss wil be of 4 or 5 parts....or may be more than it.

CHUPA HUA PYAAR AUR IKRAAR

Nupur ek amir baap ki ladki hai jo apne ghar mein sabki ladli thi aur apni tarif sunna pasand karti hai....
Lekin jab se uski shadi mayank se hui hai wo kuch naram matlab kuch sudhar gayi hai...par woh chahti hai k woh jo kaam kare uske sasural wale uski tarif kare jaise uske gharwale karte the....uska bhai samrat jo use har wakt samjhane ki koshish karta hai aur use hasane ki koshish karta hai...ab aage.,. 😉 😆 😆

Nupur was laughing uncontrol bcoz of samrats stupid jokes....

S:ek pagal dusre pagal ki dead body ke paas khada hans raha tha..logoun ne us se pucha k are kyun hans rahe ho..tumhe sharam nai aati murde k paas rehkar hansne mein..to pagal ne kaha are saheb mein hans kaha raha hun mein to khushiyan mana raha hun k yeh pehla pagal hai jo brain tumer se margaya...is ka matlab ye hai k hum logoun k paas b dimaag hota hai...

N:sam bas bhi karo mujh se aur hansa nai jata...hans hans k mujhe marvane ka khayal hai kya.?

S:are nupsi yeh kaisi baatien kar rahi ho mein sirf tumhe khush dekhna chahta hun...mujhe tumhara wo sada hua chehra bilkul pasand nai hai jo tum ek ghante pehle apne sasural se lekar aayi thi.

N:mein kya karun sam un logoun ko meri thodi b fikar hi nahi hai..yeh dekh kar meri aankhaun mein khud bakhud aansu aajate hai,.she 2ld with moist eyes.

S:he wipes her tears...nupsi tu phir se shiru hogayi mein tujhe kitni baar samjaun k woh tera ghar nai hai yahan jo har koi tumhari har baat maanta tha...aur tumhare naaz nakhre uthata tha..

N:are mein ne kaha k woh log mere naaz nakhre uthaye mein toh bas un logoun ke munh se apne liye do tarifi kalimat sunna chahti hun.
Samrat was abt to tel sumthing but they heared a horn of d car.

S:chal jiju agayi....ab phir ulta palta sochne mat baith jana....ok bye nupsi
Sanu hug each other n nupur left with mayank..

So guys here is d 1st part..do u tel me if u lyk it or nt with ur comment n critisize.

Luv
*kulsum*

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sizzysehrish thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
yippeee is baar to me first ahi gaye yr

🥳

well the intro is fab
so nupur like to praise by all
thtsnyc
mayur married wow
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and the bestest thing in ur ff
sanu bond oh loooking forward it

but really liked the concept and intro part

cont sooooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice start
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting.. Very interesting..
Continue sooonnnn...

Love,
akansha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@farrda01 n gopi06 thanx alot guys.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ak12

interesting.. Very interesting..
Continue sooonnnn...

Love,
akansha

thanx alot akansha...im glad tum jaise brilliant writer ko yeh intresting laga.. 😛 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing start hun cont soon thanks 4 pme
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start hun cont soon thanks 4 pme
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sorry dear d double post 😕
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Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

sorry dear ddouble post 😕

itz ok dear..wel thanx alot...im glad u lykd it 😊

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