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Posted: 15 years ago
aww sara first of all thankx for re-opening the ff's and i love it abolutely love this one.. soo heart breaking plz continue asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
sara

i m 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

continue as soon as possible dear..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara...ur so sweet...its so heart wrenchng epi...poor santu...Sanraj separation...OMG...
BTW wht it means "SHE CUDNT BRING THER CHILD INTO LYF"?waiting 4 ur next
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Posted: 15 years ago
The child that she couldn't brings it to there life
this line mean that she deliver a child but could't toled DM a bout the child u will understand itbetter in next one as the child a live and it is now 9 years old ......u will know in next one
Edited by love2211 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Memories

Along the silent night santo go back in the time to where all that happened and never ever she could speak a bout it to any one even to her friend champakle …..

All begin when she enter the jail and DM leave with her answered that she is the one who killed arjun ……..he left as joy and the happy leave with him …..The days become like the nights for her and the mints …hours….become same for her ……to suddenly in one day of her sadness beautiful news come to shine her nights ……

That she will become a mother all that happen after three months of her imprison……as she found about it from the jail routine check…….

Santo been like dancing in the party but alone without him and in that moment of happiness her tears share her weakness ……
In present moment Santo say to her self…….oh I wish that I had told him everything …I wish but no…….
santo keep everything to her self and the months just flow fast in a second to found her self in the last month……………the deliver day came all the way …and she was just a lone all be herself welcome the new life welcomed the sign of love ….her love with him…..no DM …no anyone of her family

the girl was the most beautiful baby ever santo saw in her life ………the happiness of holding her child in her arms mix with the pain the big one in her heart as DM not stand beside her and share the coming of there child …………

poja ….her daughter name …….the girl who shine santo life for the last 10 years as there is some roles that the child rise by his mother until 9years in the jail if the mother don't have family and santo just be like that for the 10 years …..

that all happen from such long time ……santo thought as she still site in her place facing the dark of the night …………oh Poja I must bring u from long time to u father house but ……………

Santo memories go back to where she gets out from the prison to found the big mess in the Mahiavanchi family and the isolation of DM ………so she decide in that time to keep poja with a nice family until everything settle so she could bring her to the home but nothing is been right for her from POA matter to ruder cause to the divorce and the tears come again to her eyes maybe it will wash the deep useless in her ….the deep pain in her….oh Malik why u make it difficult………santo what u saying it is never his mistake it only u mistake for hidden everything from him……

From Birow matter to her poja matter …. His poja…….and the tears keep falling as it will never end in the dark of the night ………

In the other place of the village to where the house of the Mahavanchi is settled there is the man who could not accepted the empty of his house ……the house is full with his family but yet it is empty without her ….without santorii……he knew that she left to her Nanaji house as he listen to her told champakli about it and it was killing him as he saw her accepted to be out from his life ……..but for him it is not like that and it will never be …………

Her laugh echo…..her cham cham echo …….her voice calling echo ……just keep coming again and again in his ears in his mind ………….
The dark is all what he could see and the lonely seem what his life will be …………
Back to santo who decide to bring her daughter to there life …..Her father life ….maybe …………….

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
Pooja....their symbol of love..😍 Hope this happens in the actual serial(enough of separation...😭😭) Nice epi. Sara...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara ur drop of rain 24 & 25 were totally emotional and simply beautiful ending👏

The next FF's u start "the broken heart" is really touching one, it feels the pain😭, u r an amazing writer Sara🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: crystal30

Pooja....their symbol of love..😍 Hope this happens in the actual serial(enough of separation...😭😭) Nice epi. Sara...

crystal... pooja will bring them togather .no more sepreation dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanrajpremika

Sara ur drop of rain 24 & 25 were totally emotional and simply beautiful ending👏

The next FF's u start "the broken heart" is really touching one, it feels the pain😭, u r an amazing writer Sara🤗

soni awwww where u had been miss u
thanks dear .......u lovedddddddddddddd hug to u 😳🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

guys every episode will had a title so this time it is little Different

:D ................sara
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