SGIANS N MNIANs pls do read these scenes..pls

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys its me n simi(simar456) together
no this topic is not abt my veiws on the impending disaster thet is going to take place in the serial
i hate it sim hates it too just like the rest of us
n yet still we think there is not much we can doo abt it..
so we thought why not to prepare ourselves for this disaster
me n simi wrote the following scenes together..
we thought abt writing our own version of accident
n we start from where yesterday's episode ended guys
this is the first part
n it is really happy shappy
we both thing u would like whatever is written it this part
the next part contains the accident n well also includes the death
i will post it later at night or in the morning if ya guys still want me too
guys pls read this scene of mayur n sajan n doo tell ur veiws
scene>>>>>

Mayur

Mayank completely shattered at nupur's decision of divorce, agrees to sign the divorse documents..

He signs them n keeps a letter along with the documents on nupurs table n leaves the room,..

When nupsi returns to the room she sees that the documents were already sighned

She is hurt terribly as she had expected mayank to not agree to it

To fight back

But apparently she had been wrong

Then she notices the letter

Picking it up she reads it>>

Nupur..

Agar tum chahati ho k humara rishta khatam ho jaye to yahi sahi ..

Shaya tum sahi thi mein tumhein kabhi khush nahin rakh paaya..

Har baar maine kisi na kisi vajha se tumhein hurt kiya hai nupur..

Par mein kya karun .. meri zindagi mein tumhare aane se pehle tak muhjhe pyaar shabad ka matlab bhi nahin pata tha…

Lekin phir tum aayi aur meri zindagi badal gayi.. meine pyaar kko sirf janna hi nahin use mehsoos bhi kiya..

Lekin shayad mujhe pyaar karma aata hi nahin .. shayad mein kisi se pyaar karne k laayak hi nahi.. isiliye nupur mein tumhein humare is bematlab k rishtey se azaad karta hun..

Lekin mein khud ki is rishtey se azaad nahin kar sakta nupur.. yeh rishta meri zindagi hai .. to aj mein apni zindagi khatam karne jaa raha hun

Hop sake to mujhe maaf kar dena

tumhara

mayank

teriified nupur stares at the letter . this was something she had not imagined n this was something that was going to end his life…

nupur ran out of the room n gets banges straightaway in benji

b== aaah nupur kya hua tum aise kyun??

N== benji mayank kahan hai??

B== vo terrace ki taraf gaya tha

N== terrace ki taraf

Does that meas he was actually going to end his life has he gone mad??

May be he had

B== nupur batao to sahi k hua kyat um itna ghabrayi hui kyun ho??

But nupur was already running upstairs.. no way was she going to let mayank his life no way could that boy get away from her soo damm easily..

Reaching upstairs she sees mayank's shoes lieng near the ladder which lead to the top of her house..

Thinking that mayank has climbed it nupur herself tries too climb the ladder but slips mid way n fell backward..

But mayank saves her just in time..

Mupur feels dizzy with relief on seeing mayank completely fine..

She hugs him tightly

N= mayank tum theek to ho na??

M== haan ab to mein bilkul theek hun

(nupur breaks the hug)

N== yeh sab kyat ha mayank.. tumne ek baar bhi nahin socha k tumhari is harkat se mujhe kitni takleef hogi..

Agar tumhein kuch ho jata to mein kaise zinda reh pati mayank

Kya tumne yeh ek baar bhi nahin socha???

M== socha na nupur isiliye to yeh saar natak kiya

N== natak??

(mayank comes closer to her n takes her face in his hands)

M== haan natak . tumhe yeh ehsaas dilanne k liye k bhalle hi hum dono mein kitni bhi ladai ya dooriyan paida ho jayein , hum dono ki jaan ek dusre mein hi basti hai nupur…

Agar hum mein se kisi ek ko kharonch tak bhi aajye to dusra she nahin pata aur tum keh rahi thi k agar hum alag ho gaye to hum khush rahenge???

A small tear escapes nupur's eyes

Mayank wip[es it away .. he then joins his forehead with hers n closes his eyes..

M== mein yeh nahin kehta nupur k mein sahin hun .. nahin mein galat tha .. mein tumhein kabhi samajh hi nahin paaya.. lekin mujhe meri in galtiyon ki itni badi sazza mat do .. mein yeh to nahin kehta k mein ek perfect husband material hun par mein apne aap ko badalne ki poori koshish karunga .. pls meri zindagi mein vapas a a jao nupur apne ghar vapas aa jao..

Silent tears ran down his cheeks

N then without further delay mayank hugged nupur tightly

Nupur hugged him back

She was wrong they were meant to be together they were like two pieces of a puzzle ..one had no existence without the other……….

They hugged n in each others arms they dissolved their differencesss.

Sajan>>>>

S== chashmish tum yeh film kyun chodna chahati ho??. Acha apne liye nahin to un logon k liye jinka future is film se judaa hua hai chashmish tum hein yeh picture karni hogi/..

G== nahin samrat mere liye sab se zyaad important tum ho aur mein nahin chahati k ab humare beech koi bhi aaye .. koi bhi doori koi bhi takleef ab humare relation mein nahin aani chahiye samrat…

S= aur mere liye tum sabse zyaada important ho chashmish isi liye mein tumhein tumhara carrer is tarhan barbaad nahin karne de sakta..

G== lekin samrat tum

S(keeps a finger on her lips)= nahin chashmish mein tumse vaada larta hun k hum dono k beech ab koi bhi nahin aayega .. hum dono ab kisi bhi cheez ko apne beech nahin aane denge chashmish .. aur is vaade ko pura karne k liye mere paas ek perfect plan hai

G== tum yeh sab kyun kar rahe ho samrat tum mujh se itna pyaar kaise kar sakte ho???

S== vaise hi jaise tum mujh se karti ho chashmish .. mere liye tum apna carrer tak chodne k liye tyaar ho

Yeh pyaar nahin ???

Chashmish tumne ek pal mein meri itni badi galti ko maaf kar diya … jab hum dono mein aisa pyaar hai to kisi ki kya majal k vo humare beech mein aa jaye…

Gunjan looks at him n smiles through her tears …samrat was indeed an angel her angel …

S== yeh hui na baat .. meri princess smile karte huye sabse zyaada januable lagti hai..

Aur ab time ho chukka hai mere us plan ko pura karne ka..

G== kaunsa plan samrat??

S== vahi plan chashmish jis ke baad hum dono k beech officially koi bhi nahin aa payega..

G== samrat tum yeh kya …

But b4 she could complete her sentence samrat sweeps her off her feet n carries her to the nearby flower laden tree..

G== (blushing hard)=samrat tum yeh kya kar rahe ho .. sab log dekh rahe hain

Samrat makes gunjan stand back on her feet , makes a cute angry face n says

S== of ho chashmish tumhein shhhhh ka matlab samjh nahin aata??

Shh ka matlab hota hai chup raho isiliye abb tum shhh ho jao n enjooyyy..

G== lekin samrat tum ye

S== shhhhh

Gunjan shut ups.. seriously speaking samrat looked too cute doing these types of dramebaazi …

So then samrat goes from thee n hides behind the flower laden tree.. gunji keeps on standing there completely confused n clueless about samrat's intentions..

N then suddenly there is a shower of white beautiful n pristine flowers over her…

Exited gunjan swirls around herself in that flowery rain.

While samrat standing behind the tree is jerking its branches hard to make the flowers fall over gunjan.. seeing her enjoying herself like this , an unknown happy tear escapes samrat's eyes .. which he wipes away quickly…

Then slowly samrat cumes in front of her

Gunji stops n looks at him smiling . samrat raises his hand n closes her eyes

N then he kneels doen in front of her

S== chashmish apni aankhen kholo.

Gunji opens her eyes n is shocked to see samrat kneeling in front of her

S== chashmish== meine jab se pyaar ko jaana tab se tumse pyaar kiya..

Jabse maine khud ko samjha tabse tum se pyaar kiya..

Is dil ne tum se aur sirf tum se hi pyaar kiya

To aaj mein tumse poochta hun chashmish will u marry me?????

Tears of happiness engulf there eyes .. gunjan keeps on looking at her lover ..

Her angel while samrat looked at his januable princess hoping for a yes

The yes came

G==(in a whisper)yes

N then samrat did something that made gunjan laugh out aloud through her tears

He pretended to faint over the ground

N before swooning he said

S== hiiiii maar daala chashmish

N then he falls back

G== samrat!!!!

S==(opens his eyes while still lieing down on the floor n winks at her

Gunjan laughs

In that moment samrat shergill got tied with gunjan bhushan for an eternity..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserve im selfish first place reserve kar rahi hoon😆
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omg omg omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
dolly simi u guys r just
omggggggggggg im so happy reading this os
that i have no words to describe it
"IM JUST SPEECHLESS"
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
ok ok from starting
mayur
i loveeeeeeee mayank alot in the whole scene n his letter was just awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww something in deed i have started liking mayank tyo the core but not more than sammy haan😉😆
ok ok relax n than nupur...nupur toh by god nupur hi hogi dil sa pehla dimag hi use karti hain
well i love the whole scene but still not satisfied with it
nnnnnnnnn now commming to sajan
well well well kahan sa shuru karun
loved samrattttttttttttttttttttttttt n a tear escape in his eyes awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that too khushi ka ansoon wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
loved whole sequence
both scene main mujhe gunur sa zyada sayank acche lage they were awesome
n now u guys r just januable itna accha kaise soch sakte ho yaar tum logh it is awesome terrific mindblasting fantastic fabulas😭😭😭
im still speechhless😭😭😭
all in all hats off guys👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
lov u guys
n im eagerly waiting for ur next part guys be soon in updateing
lots of love
ur's sanu😳
p.s:dolly make sure simi get to know that i loved this os the the core ok................n say thanx for writting such cute os meri tarah sa ek badiiiiiiiiii siiiiiiiiii jappieeeeeeeee uska liye
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh🤗
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n n n omggggggggggg u guys worte it in red n blue awwwwwwwwww dolly tu mujhe rula kar hi chodegi hayye mai marjawan gudh khaka tujh par😭😭😭😭😭
itna khayal math rakh dolly mera plzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks shruti for liking it
glad u liked it n sanu i am really happy u wer the first hee hee ab to aadat si hai mujhoko tumhein aise first place pe dekhne kii
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ressss!! Aww... Dolly, I'm never first for ur posts....boo hoo....
Omg!!! Dollsss! I loveeedddd itttt!!!! But u should have continued it yaar!!!! Awesome blossommmm! SaJan were toooo januablee! I riliiii hope this happens in mjht! Like the part where sammy faints!! Awww....too cuteeee! Ur an awesome writer dolls! Plz do write moreeee! And agli baar, main first hongiiii! (I'll try my best anyways)! Loveditloveditloveddddittt!
I'm officially fida on SaJan! *faints*!
Urs,
Sanju
Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

ressss!! Aww... Dolly, I'm never first for ur posts....boo hoo....

doesnt matter babes
hee hee u r always one of the special onesss😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dolly it was too nice and beautiful

Loved mayu ka natak and Samrat he is mature enough
Nupur was wrong in her decision and mayank said he too was wrong wow
Samrat is doing everything for Gunji's happiness
So sweet
please update soon and agar kisi ki death karna hi hai to please ek pair ko hi hata dena
par aisa nah karne se nahi chalgea kya?
is it really necessary to make some one die
Apologise as i mentioned Sanu's name before
thanks For the PM
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shoooo scweeetttt yaar...
Loved it...
Too good...
Keep it up...
😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dolly me want time to unreserve my post if u dont mind plzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks mayur_tasha
for liking it
n sanu take ur time babes but if u can just read the sajan part once i k ow u have already red the mayur one
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@(sajan_san4ever) hey sana thanks for liking the part dear glad u liked this one

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