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Sorry if this oneshot sucks😭.I have got an idea in my mind so i write it.Plzzzz leave your comments even if u don't like it😃.

ONE SHOT

YOU ARE MY ANGEL

Shantanu (Shaan) is going back home from his industry.Today he is very happy as well as nervous because he wants to confess his love for His wife,

Khanak.He still remembers the day when he married her.

Flashback:

For saving his life,Shaan had married to Khanak.When he arrived at his home in Mumbai along with his wife.Everyone at his home was very shocked and they treated Khanak very badly but still Khanak's behaviour with everyone was very nice and she had sorted out the relation problem between his dad and mom and also she had tried to make him responsible so that he could help out his brother in business works.Everyone started to like her.In that whole time,Both of them(Shanak) had become good friends.

Back to normal:

Now He has started to love her.Finally shaan has reached his home.When he enters in his home.He sees that whole the family is in the hall.

Shaan:

Hi Everyone😃!!!!!!.Aap sab yaha kya kar rahe hain???Aur yeh kya chezein hain???

Shaan's mom:

Shaan, tum bhool gaye aaj raat ko tum dono ko Dhulwadi ka liye nikalna hai because Khanak ki sis (Suraj's sister) ke shadi hai.

Shaan sis-in-law:

Tum busy tha iss liye main aur mom Khanak ka saath ja kar shopping kar aaye ye dhekho.

Shaan

:Thak hai bhabi baad main dhek lo ga because i'm realy tried right now🥱.Waise bhi abhi mujhe packing karne hai.

Khanak:

Aap ne lunch kiya???Main aap ka liye khana le aate hoon.

Shaan:

No its ok.Main lunch kar ke aaya hoon.Aur waise bhi abhi three hours main humain nikalna hai.

Shaan's mom:

Haan beta tum dono packing karo main tum logo ka liye coffee bhajate hoon.

Shaan and khanak go upstairs.They start to do packing.After packing khanak starts to think what she will wear while going to her home.

Shaan(Thinking);Maybe this is right time about telling my feelings to her.

Shaan(Nervously):

Hmmm,Khanak mujhe tumse kuch kha na hai.

Khanak(While searching something in cupboard):

Haan bolo.

Shaan(Irritately😡):

Tum iss tara cupboard main dhekte raho ge tu mere baat tumhi samij main nahi aaye ge.

Khanak(Still in the same position):

Kyu tumhi mujhe esharoo main koi baat batane hai??Tumhare information ka liye main kano se sunte hoon aur mere kan tumhare taraf hain.

Shaan(In anger grips her hand and lets her sit on the bed😳):

Ab mere baat suno main tumse yeh baat karna cha raha hoon ka hmmmm ka mujhe pehle lagta tha ka tum mere zindagi ke sab se bare problem ho per mujhe ab pata chala ka tum mere zindagi main problem nahi balka angel ban ka aaye ho.Actually i started to hmmmmmm l------O------V------E hmmmm You.(He starts to look down).

Khanak(Who was surprised by shaan's first action now she is shocked😲):

Tum sach main mujh se pyar karta ho.(Shaan nods fearfully and khanak immediately hugs him🤗).

Khanak😳:

Main bhi tumse pyar karte hoon.

Shaan(Still in state of surprise 😲hugs her back🤗):

Aak cheez laya hoon main tumhare liye.

Khanak(Looks at him questioningly😕):

Kya???

Shaan(Shows her red bangals and help her wearing them):

Tumhi pata hai thak aaj ka din main apne angel yane tumse mila tha as 'MITHYE KUMAR'.By the way tum cupboard main kya dhond rahe thi???

Khanak(While remembering the past time😊):

Hmmm woh Dhulwadi jane ka liye kya phano woh dhond rahe thi.

Shaan:

let me help.

Khanak:

Main ye red wale sare phano ge.

Shaan:

Nahi tum ye blue wale phano na.

Khanak;

nahi mujhe yeh red wale pasand hai.

Shaan:

Per mujhe tum per ye blue wale ache lagte hai.

Khanak:

Tum phan lo blue shirt main tu ye red wale hi phano ge.

Shaan:

main kha raha hoon na tum ye blue wale phano.

Khanak:

nahi red wale ache hai.

Shaan:

Nahi blue wale ache hai.

Khanak:

Red.

Shaan:

Blue.

Shaan's mom comes for giving them coffee.But she sees them fighting.

Shaan's mom:

Oh they are fighting again.Somethings never change🥱.

THE END😃

I hope u guys like it😳, Love, Fatima⭐️

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it's cute!! 😃 really liked it.
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Its sweet nd cute.........do write more on them!
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its really very very sweet OS fatima, loved it.😛😛😛😛

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cute loved it , still fighting make theirrelation more sweeet
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Thankkkkkkkkk youuuuuuu guys for taking ur precious time for commenting.

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very cute..continue it more dear as you are very talented.....
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Aww! That was really sweet! do write more. 😃

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