AR/KaSh: On the roads of Destiny

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I don't know if this would be an OS or not, it's kinda of bit soppy and well it's an idea I am toying around with. It's gonna be short.

Not sure if I should post it here or in FF, but let me know what do you think.

This is about AR, but the entire thought process has been the way KaSh would have. I have written the part keeping KaSh in my mind..

Let me know when you all think:) Please press like button if you like it, but just don't press it. Give comments so I can improve as well. or if I should continue:

On the paths of destiny: - Part 1
The wind was blowing high as a girl tried to take her hair back again. The wind is loud today as she taught to herself. She fixed her glasses and waited for the bus to come. As she looked around, she saw little kids playing and was jolted back to her childhood, her memories with sister Anjali and best friends Muskaan and Nikki. She missed those times and a smile followed up on her face. She then was jolted back to her college times. She was never the most popular girl, but she was very studious. She always was number one until he walked in. From the looks of it, every girl in college was crazy for him, but he never gave anyone a good look. He always wore his bag around his shoulder and was always glued to a book he held into his hand. She hated his guts and he hated her. They never saw eye to eye, because of their top competition. After college, she never saw him again.
Jolted back into reality, she went inside the bus. Today was the day again. Another new chapter Riddhima. Get over yourself. You have to get the job this time for sure. After all, you were going to be an intern at such a good hospital; you had to show to the world that you were number one. However, Riddhima thought to herself '#1 doctor, not my cup of tea. I did not even want to be a doctor. I wanted to be a lawyer, but dad and mom. Just because di and the entire family are of doctors, let us make the youngest one too. It is good that I was smart, but seriously, doctor bores me.
While she was lost in her thoughts, another person was fixing his tie and his glasses. She turned around and saw a man dressed in perfect attire, trying to make sure everything works. She thought to herself. " Maybe I need something motivational to get me working on this job. How would I apply myself, what would motivate me, she thought to herself.
The bus finally stopped and another person got on. It was a girl, she was wearing pants and shirt and a white coat, well here comes another person – Riddhima thought. Were all going to Sanjivani to get their interns of what. The girl was really nervous and Riddhima felt bad for her. Riddhima was about to go to her when the bus jolted and she was thrown on the other side when a hand grabbed her.
She opened her eyes to see him. Her eyes widened. He was still the same. The same glasses, bag around the shoulder. He was holding to her waist and a spark fell down her spine. She thought to herself. " What is he doing here?" He is not here for this job is he? He finally let her go and she straightened herself up. He took a seat behind her, and looked calm and relax. It was time for Riddhima to be more nervous then she should have. Relax Riddhima. You are well prepared. She shot a glance back at him and he was toying around with his blackberry. She prayed that she would be selected.
The bus finally stopped, and all of them get into the large building. They were given numbers and asked to report to the main front where Dr. Keerti would be asking them questions. Riddhima was nervous, the other boy and girl were also nervous but he was calm. She shot some more glances back at him , thinking whether he remembered her or not, but he continued to toy with his blackberry.

Dr. Keerti was tough. She asked them random medical questions and to her surprise, everyone answered it correctly. He was as usual the topper, he knew everything but maybe because he was passionate. Riddhima was let off on an easy question, thank god. Now the passion to do well and get the job was important for Riddhima. He was there, to motivate her. All were given the jobs and were asked to rush to their lockers and began their jobs right away.

She went to her locker and opened it , and adjusted her locker, with certificates, and photos. She could feel his presense, as he opened his locker. A strange smell intoxicated Riddhima. He put his bag in and grabbed his medical coat. He stared at it for a bit and he slowly closed his locker and went away.
The announcement broke her thought process and she went to get her duties assigned. The gang was finally introduced to each other, but he was nowehere to be seen. She tried to find him but she couldn't see him anywhere. She asked Dr. Keerti about the boy with the shoulder strapped bag but to her shock, Dr. Keerti told her there was no one such like that. There were only 4 interns – Her, Dr. Rahul Grewwal, Dr. Atul Joshi and Dr. Sapna Shah. There was no boy with a shoulder strapped bag.
Had she been dreaming this all along? Was he just a figment of her imagination or was he really here?


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jenny It's awesome. Great writing ! <3

Continue soon.. Will be waiting !
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Jens...aww how can we not like it i actuall love it yaar its KaShome bt u have to update regularly i hate waiting...now lets see wht going on in ur mind u won't tell na...part was KaShome yaar plzz do continue okay

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Just for Maham. Of course she is gonna kill me at the end 🤣

On the paths of destiny : Part 2

Throughout the day, everyone was busy doing what they were supposed to do, but she wasn;t. She was still in the thoughts of him. How can he not be real? She had seen him. He had held onto her waist, she had felt the sharp hands holding on her down with millions of sparks going through out her body. How can that sensation be unreal? How can she can possibly dream of this?
She was jolted out of her thoughts by Dr. Keerti who asked her to assist her in a new case. She followed her into a room of trauma. " Oh great, she thought, first day and Trauma case" Dr. Keerti asked her to look over details. She looked t the file and read the name, and looked at all the problems. She looked over to the other table and noticed an allergy list. She grabbed it and looked at to see what the patient was allergic too. She tried to look for a pen when she saw it on the table. She went to grab it when a hand held her. She looked up and her eyes widned. He was there, with his shoulder strapped bag, and his hand was on her hand. Millions of emotions rushed through her. She had to see if this was real. She lifted her hand up but was jolted out again, Dr. Riddhima. She looked up and all around, but he was gone again. Dr. Keerti asked her if she was okay. She nodded and proceeded to the trauma case. After bandaging the patient, she decided that she needed a coffee break. She grabbed her stuff and headed down to the caf. She grabbed a coffee and looked through the patient's file she was asked to study.
Everything seemed normal until she read the end note. He had been a student of her school. Her medical college. She wondered who the patient was, but before she could think, her eyes jolted back to other side. People were gushing over something. She put her cup down and walked over there. The other interns were playing a game. They asked her to join but she refused. She had to figure out who the heck that guy was. She didn't even remember his name because she hated him. Plus, everything was in numbers. Names were never given out.
A page came and she went to check on her trauma patient. As she touched his hand, a spark fell through. She looked up and saw him inside the bandages. What was happening to her? She quickly broke eye contact and decided to go home early. As she packed up early, and headed out, she saw something that stunned her. He was walking right towards her. This was it Riddhima. This is the only chance you will see whether he is real or not. She waited….
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jenny that's was fantastic loved it, great going, look forward to it and plz do continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing start Jenny! You love cliffhangers, don't you? :P

Continue real soon! Would love to read more!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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jenny i must say...brilliant.......interesting.......i like medical thrillers...he was hurt.....i thought so too when keerti said there was no intern like that.....but you stopped at such a part......plz continue soon...........and plz add me to the pm list............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome!!!!!!!!!!i <3ed it...do continue :)

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