sajan's os on :tum mere ho

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hey guys this OS is based on current track of sajan and my OS has a climax of this track
yesterday i loved aahana's idea that in this track we want DCH's climax and here i am trying to make this OS like that one , i hope i justify this OS , this is climax of this track and here neil and gun's engagement take place and scene starts


one boy is sitting numb on the bench of road , he has no any kind of expressions on his face and eyes, he is totally heart broken, his life tested him a lot in his whole life and today again he is giving his test of love, he has no idea what to do, and why all this is happening with him night is covered with darkness just like to echo his life's bitter truth, today he is going to lost everything, his life, his hope of tomorrow, his strenght, his support, his chashmish

dude please kuch toh bol why r you sitting like this, do something your chashmish is getting engaged with someone and you r sitting like loser you r not this is words of his best friend benji who is giving him support and make him encourage to stop this unwanted engagement of neil and gunjan

dude i know you think yourself not deserving to her but how can you forget gun's love for u , how can u forget her sacrifice for you and her support to you she always stand by you and today only and only to make you understand she is unwillingly getting engaged that neil, with this she wants to make you understand that society will pin point of your relationship without marriage and she is also desirable to any mature man

samrat: ye kaisa pyar hai dude ki woh muje pyar karati hai par engagement kisi aur se kar rahi hai

Benji: yahi toh main tumhe samjana chanata hu samarat ki woh chahati hai ki tum dekho ki koi ushe tum se chin bhi sakata hai aur woh neil toh yahi samajata hai ki tum gun ke layak nahi ho

Samrat: sahi toh hai main sach main chashmish ke layak nahi hu saying this he burst into tears

Benji: dude ye kaya kar raha hai mere dost samrat sabse best aur kabil hai, aur ushki chashmish ka deewana hai, jo ushki chashmish ke liye 150 km dur ki flower shop se ushke liye purple rose lata hai, jo ushk ki chahsmish ko kabhi dukhi nahi dekh sakata , jo apani chashmish ke ek bar kehne par ush reporter ko sorry bolata hai, jo apni chashmish ki ek smile ke liye ush ke ghar pe ladder leke pahoch jata hai

by hearing all this sam hugges benji and start crying like baby and proud of his best friend benji to have in his life

Samrat:dude main apani life main sab ko khoya hai meri mom , mere dad ,shuhani par chashmish ko main khona nahi chahata kyuki apne aap se bhi jyada main ush se pyar karta hu, agar woh hi meri life main nahi rahegi toh main kaise ji paunga agar woh chahati hai ki main ush marriage karu toh main taiyar hu par ish bar main samaj gaya hu ki marriage woh nahi ab main bhi karana chahata hu

thare is a one smile on his face while speaking this now he gets confidence and answer of his question why i want to marry her

Benji:ye huyi na bat mere samrat jaisi toh phir der kish bat ki chale engagement rokane

Samrat:benji ab muje kisi bat ka ya kisi ka dar nahi hai main janata hu ki main sahi karane ja raha hu aur mere dude bhi mere sath hai saying this he looks on sky and we can see darkness of sky vanishes , darkness of fear, guilt, insecurity and demons and moon lights to say that yes we all r with you just gather courage we all will support you

on the other side neil and gun's engagement

neil: ab tum sirf meri hogi gunjan tumhe pane ke liye maine 10 intezar kiya aur dekha mere pyar ne tumhe mujse shadi ke majaboor kar hi diya na

Gunjan:bhagavan please samrat koh bejdo aaj agar woh nahi aaya toh pata nahi main kaya karungi ushe samjane ke liye hi main ish engagement ke liye razi huyi hu, muje pata hai ki woh mujase naraz hai par ye sab main sirf ushi ke liye hi kar rahi hu ish bar main sabako batana chahati hu ki mera samrat ish duniya ka best lover hai jo sirf mere liye bana hai aur main ush ke liye

and engagement is abt to start where samrat and benji comes there and on seeing them neil and gun gets shocked

neil: samrat please tum yaha chale jao wahi tumahare liye achha hoga waran muje guards ko keh kar tum bahar nikal wana padega

Samrat:neil main yaha tumse bat karne nahi aaya hu with angry look

samrat goes towards gun and kneel down

Samrat:chashmishhhhhhh

Gunjan: ha samrat

Samrat:chashmish main yaha tumhari engagement rokne nahi aaya par please tum muje ek chance do agar tumhe lagata hai ki main tumhari liye thik nahi hu toh main tumhari yado ke sahare apani puri life spend kar dunga but main ye kabhi seh nahi paunga ki tumne muje ek chance nahi diya

main tumhe pehale bhi kaha tha aur aaj bhi keh raha hu ki tum mere kal ka sapan, aaj ki haqeeqat aur kal ki umeed ho chashmish agar tum mere pas nahi rahogi toh main kaise ji paunga

main promise karata hu ki aaj ke bad tum jo kahogi main wahi karunga, main thik se studies karunga aur BB bhi time pe practice karunga, tumhari har bat manunga, tumse kabhi bhi naraz nahi hounga

aur tum ne jo timetable banaya hai ushe follow karunga aur agar kabhi late shoot ho toh main tumhara bahar intezar karunga, main promise karata hu chashmish ki kabhi bhi gussa nahi karunga aur kisi bhi reporter ko nahi marunga unhe sab ki tarah ignore karunga,tum jab chaho tab, jab kaho tab jaise kaho tab tumse shadi karunga'

chashmish ab muje pata chal gaya hai ki shadi ka matalab do logo ka milan nahi par do dil ka milan hai aur hamare dil jude huye hai bas shadi ke paveetra bandhan ki hi hame jaroorat hai

main manata hu ki main shayad kabhi shadi ke liye taiayr nahi tha par aaj maine jana hai ki shadi ka matalab ek dusare ki thought kis respect karana hai , ek dusare ke support main rehana hai agar tum hi nahi rahogi mere pas toh main ye kaise nibha paunga ha mere parents ki shadi ke bure example ke karan main shadi se darata tha par aaj muje kisi bat ka dar nahi , kyuki ab main bhi shadi karana chahata hu , main bhi chahata hu ki log hame mr and mrs shergill kahe log hamare reste koh bhi ek pous nazar se dekhe

main promise karata hu ki tumhe hamesha khush rakhunga aur perfect husband ban ke dikhaunga

gunjan has tears in her eyes that her love wins and what she thougt comes true she has no any reply but her tears and smile on her face made him to understand that she is also ready for this

but she gets tensed on seeing neil but this time neil comes close to them and when he abt to say something gun stops him

Gunjan: neil bas ab aur kuch mat kehana mere samrat ko,ab tak main chup thi aur tumahari har bat ko sun rahi thi main tab bhi janti thi ki tum sirf ye muje pane ke liye samrat ko nicha dikha rahe ho par main sahi waqt ka intezar kar rahi thi

main sirf samrat ki thi hu aur hamesha rahungi samrat mera pehala aur aakhari pyar hai aur ushshe main bahot pyar karati hu jis samrat ko main janati hu ushe koi nahi janata woh mere liye kuch bhi kar sakata hai, muje khush dekh ne ke liye woh sari hade par karane ko taiyar hai, aaj woh yaha engagement rok ne nahi par mujase dusara chance mang raha hai aur yahi mera samrat hai jo chinana ya kisi ki buraya karana nahi par sirf dusaro ki feelings ko dhyan main rakhata hai

neil tum mere liye hamesha se dost rahe ho aur maine kabhi samrat ke siva apani life main kisi se pyar nahi kiya hai pyar sirf ek bar hota hai aur main woh samrat se kar chuki hu

tumhe ye lagata hai ki ham dono ek dusare se alag hai toh tum sahi ho aur shayad ishi liye ham ek dusare se pagalo ki tarah pyar karate hai

on hearing this truth neil sits on chair with heavy heart and says

neil: gun aur samrat muje maf kardo maine selfish banke ye sab kiya aur socha maine chaha ki jo main chahunga woh muje mil jayega aur gunjan sirf meri hi aur woh kisi aur ki ho nahi sakati shayad maine hi gun se dil se pyar nahi kiya warana main tum dono ko alag karane ki sochata bhi nahi muje maf karado please

by saying this he apologize them and sajan hugs him trio has a tears of happiness in their eyes

benji is watching this with tears as well and feels proud of his buddy sam

benji: arre bas karo guys flood lana hai kaya

after hearing this all burst in to laughter

samrat:main aur bhi kuch bat chashmish se karana chahata hu akele main

benji: owwwwwwwwwww hame bhi toh bata

gujan blushes on hearing this from sam and neil aslo smiles on that

samrat:chashmish chale

Gunjan gives her hand to samrat and both come on terrace

samrat:chasmish tum hamesha se chahati thi ki main tumhe officially propose karu aur main ish proposal ko kuch khash banana chahata hu by saying this he points out to moon

samrat: chashmish ye moon hamare pyar ka witness hai aur main chahata hu ki ye hamare proposal ka bhi witness bane by saying this is kneel down and open his arms and asks will you marry me gunjan bhushan?

on hearing this gun can't stop her self and hugs him tightly and both feels heaven in each other's arm , both r really happy to have each other in their life gun while hugging watches moon their witness of love and sam looks up to thank god for this beautiful moment and beautiful life which will be meaning for each other

samrat: chashmish main kabhi tumse kaha hai ki main tumse had se jayada pyar karata hu aur main tumhara deewana ban chuka hu

Gunjan:tum ne kaha nahi kar ke bataya hai

after breaking hug both starts laughing

Gunjan: samrat tum sirf mere ho aur tumhe ye keh ke nahi kar ke bataya hai
and then gun gives him peck of kiss to approval of their new life


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wickedangel thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome OS sweety!👏....thanx for writing it today🤗🤗....it was so needed to cheer us up this weekend!
I loved it especially the part where Gunjan tells that champu off😆.....man I really hope that we get to see Gunjan go off on champu in this track!.....that would be the best episode ever😆...
so have you thought about writing that ff yet?...didn I tell you that I will keep bugging you until you give in😆....and you know how big a pest I can be when I go after something I want🤣.....aakhir Samrat ki chamchi hu itne aasani se haar nahi manti🤣
Edited by gina87 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😆take your time honey
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mindblowing update dear
really awesome
loved it to the coreeeeeeeee
plzkeep writting beautifull OSs dear
i love them alotttttttttttttt
lot of love
sanu😳
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsomeeeeeeeee nd mindblowingggggggg OS dear...

loved it a lotttttt
it was so touching...😳
keep it up...
Edited by ridhima1_gunjan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMGGGGG aashiiiiii!!! ye kya kiya tune..??? 😆
it ws beautiful dear.... mindblowingggg
loved it to d core...
n loved sam-benji talk.. the way benji ws supporting n showing him d right way...
sajan were jst too cuteee.. as always.. 😳
awesomeeee dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh god di its was such a beautifull os by god aaj to aankhon mein paani aa gaya
awwwww i hope ke sajan ki life phir se sudhar jaye
lov ya di always
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pls write more
lov ya loads di
u r ultra specialn thanks for such a nice os
lov
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee aashi.....
lovely....really loved it....
pehle to sam ko depressed dekh...mai aur bhi depress ho gayi....
par benji...loved d way benji made sam understand n supported sam...
loved sam-benji convo...
loved sajan....jab sam gunji ko officially propose karta hai....😳
mind blowingggg....jus loved it....
awesome yaar...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was beautiful.Hope CV's read this and get inspired and bring Sajan together soon..You gave all us a reason to spend the weekend...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome..................tooooooooooooooo goooooooooodddddddddd liked whole to the core..............awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.................mindblowing.

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