So he landed up at the Sanjeevni Orphanage and first things first, this was the place where he first fell in love with Riddhima. I think we need to contact Google Maps and mark all the areas where Armaan thinks he fell in love with Riddhima the first time and nth time.
It will be easy to label those areas and also get the driving directions. The viewers can always find before hand, where ever he is heading would he cross any place where he can have a possible flashback with Riddhima.
Today far away from Sanjeevni hospital, he has a separate flashback for Riddhima, which Sid cannot see from the hospital.
This is great, they have respected the rights of a husband, where the ex-lover is having a flashback of his wife, almost in the same place where he is standing.
This more like a copy version of Shahrukh and Kajol, and as he plays the piano with his fingers.. tum yaad aaye and they dance in the garden, in circles just like the story.
Is dark pink is the new color theme for DMG?
Armaan successfully recovers from his flashback, without shedding any tears.
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Riddhima is treating a patient, and after putting on the bandage she tell hers "ghao gehra hai laiken theek ho jayega". In the background you could identify Sid lurking, looking at her as if the message was for him.
"tumahrey har dard ko mitana chahta hoon Riddhima", he transmits on LF, Riddhima can only hear HF Band.
"Khush dekhna chahta hoon tumhay" he adds, no can hear him, not even the viewers. I guess Sid is a man of few words, max 35 words in his vocabulary bank, thats why he keeps repeating the same thing. With due respect, iss say zyada variety ke saath to totaa (parrot) bol laita hai. Totaa owners can second me here, their totas knows more sentences than Sid.
When Riddhima does not receive his Low Freq transmission and walks away, he calls for instant flashback (coffee like, dark color, without milk, sepia)
I think that scene was in a loop, She again starts from "ghao toh ghera hai, waqt to lagey ga" to the female patient, and Sid like a Qawal adds, "sahi kaha tum ne Riddhima waqt toh lagey ga" kya zamana aa gaya hai, ab Sid kiss tarah Riddhima ki haan main haan mila raha hai.
"Kissi bhi cheez ke theek honay main waqt toh lagta hai", he gives his expert opinion. He is standing there like a salesman giving a lecture on his product (toilet cleaner).
"Kyun ke main chahata hoon ke tum humarey rishtay ko waqt do". He finally demands attention after three months of marriage where the poor Riddhima has been trying to convince him that she wants to be with him. (BTW, can someone confirm whether DMG has fired their last scriptwriter?)
"aik nai shruwaat karen, dosti hi ki sahi" It must be the new scriptwriter, someone tell him please they have to be husband and wife again in 7 months, doston main divorce nahin hoti.
"Main apni taraf se poori koshish karoonga Riddhima" he promises but forgets to add "jab tak Armaan wapas nahin aa jata" It would have been much better to say it all in front and on her face that she knows what he is now up to, rather than acting as a sharp shooters using a silencer.
Scene changes, Armaan after his welcoming flashback gets the bag from his car and walks towards the Orphange, there is a lady in almost same color clothes as Riddhima was wearing and she is surrounded by children. Was she the one whom Armaan mistook for Riddhima in the flashback???
She finally turns in to Riddhima, in a sleeveless dress. Offering water to Armaan through the hose pipe. I guess Armaan water capacity is 45 litres and does 7 km to a litre on streets.
Why is it that irrespective of the place or situation Armaan stands so close to Riddhima that if by chance Riddhima sneezes, its going to spray all over Armaan face. Which is bad at least from the hygienic point of view.
While Riddhima tries to serve Armaan with water, the water accidentally spills over his trousers and children also enjoy and Armaan takes the pipe from her and makes her all wet. What do orphans have in their poor life, just a wet shirt show. Then to add more excitement for the young children (as this show is also for young children) he pulls her towards him and they are standing and holding each other nose to nose, good demonstration to the kids of how to hold a wet girl. The young boys in the background are betting would he, would he not kiss her. Its like the opposition player has successfully dodged all the defensives and has reached in the D area of the goal. Can he score it??? people are biting their nails, clock is ticking, 30 seconds for the whistle to blow. What now?? The young boys will keep discussing this for the next couple of weeks. I think its a good way to present entertainment to all the orphanages of the world. So, technically this covers part one of the children checkup.
BUT, that was his daydreaming sequence. He is yards away from that woman, this means he can take anyone for Riddhima. They have sent the most stable doctor to check the children. I hope he understood correctly that this was an Annual Checkup and not just Ana* checkup. Poor kids!
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So far inspite of being in the same ward where Sid was secretly transmitting on his LF, suddenly Riddhima turns to go out and Sid is walking towards her, she stops and he stops, again like trains or this time braveheart, horseman face the horseman for fight. Riddhima asses the situation and speeds up to dodge Sid, but Sid is like small boys selling stuff on the footpaths..
"Riddhima mujhse baat karlo"
"Main busy hoon Sid" (tumhey avoid karney main)
"2 minute ke liye baat kar lo." does he want a local call or long distance?
"agar kaam ke barey main koi baat karni hai toh theek hai" Kaam aur Sid? yeh toh phir no hi hua.
Meanwhile hospital staff takes position in the vicinity to make a scene look like a Broadway scene. Sid holds Riddhima's hand, there is a cymbal crash, Riddhima turns towards him and says "leave my hand Sid" in immaculate English. Sid does not understand English.
"I said leave my hand" like a teacher. Sid was till last 20 sec begging Riddhima to talk to her and before that transmitting friendly messages of understanding, suddenly turns into Armaan and drags her through the corridor in a room. As Sid starts to drag Riddhima the staff which was placed there also start to move in different direction very very realistic scene. Show main jaan parh gayee ek dam se.
Scene changes
Yuvi is on the roof of a newly constructed building and looks down, there is a group of people standing in the hospital compound, I guess waiting for a bus????? or waiting for the ticket windows to open as in cinema halls. Suddenly JP speaks out challenging Yuvi.. I immediately recognized this to be a comedy track of the interns. Last time Naina told him to die. Only if yuvi had searched the internet he would have found the book for 50 ways to kill yourself or so. There would be some web sites for how to attempt suicide.They keep waiting for Naina.
Scene changes. Sid bring Riddhima into the famous changing room which is better known as Armaan and Sid conspiracy room. Where they made business plans (transactions) about Riddhima.
Bechari Riddhima darr ke marey simaat jati hai.
Sid says in a dramtic voice "mujhay kaam ke baarey main nahin, meray aur tumharey barey main baat karni hai."
Riddhima is scared, he repeats, "humarey barey main baat karni hai." Riddhima manages to put herself in reverse gear and moves back and says "laiken mujhay tum say koi baat nahin karni hai" very politely.
Sid suddenly pushes her to the wall pinning her, it was so quick that the human eye could not register this, so he repeated the feat for us. Thanks Sid.
But this was a dangerous maneuver, he should have checked for any nails on the walls first.
Although he must have seen or heard Armaan pinning her to the wall but he possibly did not know what Armaan did after that. So Sid waited and tried to play safe and said "Please Riddhima" she bites her lips.
Sid requests "sirf aik baar mujh se baat kar lo" and they wait. The bell on the cell phone rings. Is she going to talk with Sid over the phone? or Sid is calling her.. suspense guys..
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Intern track. Dr. Naina enters and a male nurse Jiggy calls her by first name and stops her by holding her arm. He tells her about Yuvi.. all of this was so hilarious that , I kept laughing holding my stomach and had tears in my eyes.., I forgot to write about it.
Scene changes. The world has changed but Armaan has still walking away from his car. They did not show it, but if they zoom in, after he got of the car he took a ride on the snail. So it
is not Armaan's fault, the snail maximum speed is 3 yards in 24 hours, this way Armaan will reach the orphange building in 72 hours.
A girl calls him (thanks goodness it was not a call-girl) and calls him "Sid Bahiya" What Sid did to Armaan in the last few weeks, Armaan should have punched her for calling Sid, but at the same time he feels that he no more as popular as he was. A girl did not recognize him for himself. She tells him that there is a doctor coming from sanjeevni for their check up. Armaan brightens up as now he can boast of being the doctor.
The girls almost stepped on his b*lls by saying "iss liye Sid bahiya bhi nahi aaye aur Riddhima deedi bhi nahin aaye." the cymbals crashes and Armaan bends further in pains. She keeps squashing his b*lls by saying "aap Sid bhaiya aur Riddhima deedi ko bula saktey hain, last time bahut maza kiya tha."
She is acting like a boxer who has punched first and keeps on punching and adds "Sid and Riddhima bahut lartay hain, phir Sid bhaiya jaa ke Riddhima deedi ko manatey hain aur phir hum bahut mazza kartey hain" I was expecting Armaan to say yaar ye toh mera patent style hai Sid mujhay copy karta hai. But he is lost and finally sits down, after recovering from her blows, "don't worry iss dafa bhi bahut maza aaye ga,(dumbest dialogue) main aap ke doston ko iss tarah theek kar doon ga." He came for check up, aik case meningitis ka tha. ye sab ko theek kar daiga jo kehtay hain ke Sid bhaiya ache hain.
Another grown up lady approaches and he introduces her that he is Dr. Armaan Malik and come from Sanjeevni. kya zamana aagaya pehlay eik larki phir aik aurat, Armaan has lost his charm and become anonymous figure. After spending half a day from just getting out of the car still not reaching inside the Orphanage, he wishes to see the two sick children and she tells him that they are asleep. And carefully steps on his b*lls by asking "Dr. Siddhant nahin aaye?"
"nahin!" by now Armaan is tuned and trained to the pattern of question being asked here. And he felt in control, and unexpectedly the care taker lady literally jumped up and dug her heels on his B*lls by saying "dono ki jorri bahut achi hai." Armaan must be thinking that he was lucky to have quick daydreaming dance and wet shirt scenes with Riddhima before he met the lady, warna aaj ka din bekaar jaata.
The lady does not want to get off them and continues "pehlay hi pata chal gaya tha, dono main jhagra tha aur yehi pyaar ki shruaat thi"
She asks "main ne sunna hain ke donno ki shaadi hogaye?"
The young girls adds "I wish main unki shaadi main gaye hoti" they are taking turns on Armaan,"aap toh unko roz hospital main miltay hongay na"
Armaan can barely say "Haan"
girls asks "Riddhima deedi abhi bhi ghussa hoti hai"
Armaan "haan" Probably he is so scared of these two that wants to finish the discussion and not even once tries to says "meri-riddhima" in front of them
"bahut daanti hain, bahut zyada ghussa hoti hain" but like Sid, he also still does not have clue why she is behaving so.
And he gets a chance to start of his story, (guys second dumbest dialogue)"mananey ki bahut koshish ki sub kuch bigarta hi ja raha hai." Kiss baat pay Armaan ne shaadi shuda aurat ko mananey ki koshish ki. (ye ho na ho, they have changed the scriptwriter)
Coming Up, Dr. kirti is asking Riddhima to leave after Armaan as there is an emergency. Probably Armaan is only there for daydreaming. After so many days sister Stella is in a scene. Sid asks her about Riddhima and she did what the little girl and care lady did to Armaan by steppin... She tells him Riddhima is packing up for the lenovla orphanage.
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Yuvi is still on top of the roof. Next to this building you can see a high rise structure where they are building a suicidal jumping pad for the interns. Here it will be prudent to mention that now two triangles cannot fit in one hospital. So they are shifting Acute Triangle Armaan, Riddhima and Sid to a new battle field at lenovla. And Yuvi, Naina and Su will occupy Sanjeevni. Actually the interns have asked for more room given to them for acting. They ran short of pinning places as fire exits, cafeteria, lockers etc, as they were not allowed in the changing room where Sid and Armaan conspire against Riddhima. At many times both the triangles crossed each other and made a star One and not of David.
Needless to say Dr. Kirti needs doctor to attend emergencies and all these interns are playing suicide suicide, and hugging on the roof. (did someone confirm whether they have really changed the scriptwriter?)
Riddhima is still waiting for him to finish and Sid is waiting for the background score to finish, and says "please" They almost spent a minutes or so, they could have at least had half the discussion.
Sid is standing in the conspiracy room, turning and talking to himself,
"Riddhima main humarey rishtay ko, in 7 pheron ke bandhan ko 7 mahiney daina chahata, chahata hoon ke humarey beech saari ghalat fahmiyaan dur ho jaen, kiya tum bhi yehi chahati ho? Kiya tum humarey rishtay ko aik aur moka dainey kay liye tyar ho Riddhima," he looks in the mirror probably mistakes his own reflection for Riddhima's "aaj tumhey ye baat clear karni ho gi tumhe Riddhima."
Guys if you run this on youtube, this took exactly 30 seconds. He has been asking for 2 minutes. Had he done his homework and punched the clock to find exactly how much time he would need to tell her this, he could have told her twice before she left. The lesson is "do your homework, prepare yourself and practice.
Second. He seriously thinks that Dr. Shashank actually calculated the time it will take them to resolve their differences and that is why he mentioned 7 months. They may take just a week to resolve this provided they find time to talk this out in 7 months.
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