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Posted: 15 years ago

The drops of rain 11

It is mid night and the light of the moon light the room of the two lover
the curtains fly so slowly with the light wind as the stormy rains stopped……and the drops of water is only there like the storm of emotion…… of missing is calm down to follow by the comfort silent ……and the happiness of there life appear in there faces after such a long time……………

Santo there rest in DM arms with a lovely smile enhanced her beauty along with the twinkle of love in her eyes ……..she hear the beating of DM heart increased under her ear ....she know the reason and santo move her head in away that she could see his face his eyes …………after such long woirred time fially DM smile from his deep heart and in this moment he look so young …….so life not like before some days when he looked as he older ages on his real age……………nothing like the sadness make the one be older so fast so fast ………….

Santo hand cover DM cheek in a lovely care emotion way ….as her eyes catch the smile in his eyes ……santo say in low lovely voice

Santo: dhramraj …………I will make a promise to u as the god is the only witness on us ………..DM is silent look at her waiting for her words

Santo: I promise to be u wife in this life and in the 7th life…to protect u….to love u …….to be always around u until the death take me from this life……DM in this moment put his hand on her mouth …..

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
dear beloved .........dear my strong

forgive me my only hope .....forgive all what u hear from me...........forgive the pain of lover man who found his love in other man arms ................nothing i say it or not say it will repair the damage in u .....but all what i can say.........

sorry & I love u



the love is what hold me back always to u .the pain bring me more closer ........

u understand as always ............and in the time of the truth comingg out ...I run to u to take u pain away run to u to hide u in my arms away from everything .............u tears is cuting me ........u scream ....pain scream cut me more down ..so hide in my my angle...........my better half ............hide in my heart forever

u love
Dhramraj
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hbuy

hey sara,
so today d show has taken the new angle; sanraj together again...
just hoping for their best.....😃


anyways when are you going to post the next part??? ......

the "drops of rain 11" shows what was DM feeling in the "drops of rain 1" when he holds santu's hand after knowing the truth...

really nice creativity ... i m not getting words to describe it...👏👏
👏

oh u also see that .me too ...............happy they are togather
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb Sara🤗, just love it😳 so beautifully done it😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh DM

nothing in the life is more wonderful and make me feel that i such important person to u like what u did today
u save me ....protect me .love me all in once ...............

i forgive u ..............and love u also

to hide in u are was me wish ..............and to be in yours arms today is a dream come true

ha hide me like that all our life ......my only love

loved that u dress what i like that mean u want me so strongly in u life as me

u santori

PC: I love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
so gos love awesome loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh so sweet from u to read it up
:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
very well written sara........thank you 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

The drops of rain 12

DM in this moment put his hand on her mouth as she was talk a bout the death …..In the moment of his hand touch her mouth touch her lips …santo eyes speak loudly to him …..Malik I die thousand times and live thousand times under u touch under u breath I lost from long time and nothing will bring me back …………the words are received by his eyes …..By his heart ……

Santo slowly move her hand to his hand in the same time the wind play with her hair and make some tresses touch her face …….DM was amazed by what his eyes lost in….santo touch his hand as his eyes so away with her and slowly kindly she kiss his palm ….kiss it with all her emotion ….DM touched by her kiss and he move his hand away from her sweet lips to take a place in the back of her nick and he say to her ….

DM: santorii …….The only promise I will give u as u will give me is to love me as I love u …..To trust me as I trust u……To hold me as I hold u…….to walk with me in this life as I walk with u …………..santo answer him in a big smile which shine her face and say in low soft touching voice…

Santo: I promise…..thousand time ……..

Her voice disappears in the warmth kiss …..and in a mint she become like a shadow under him……….the rainy a atmosphere touch them silently as the clouds in very slowly way cover the moon light from them …..

The rain start all over a gain to fall down ……..it becomes stronger and stronger …..in the silence of the house as the only sound come from the rain fall …..a knock on the door of there room break all the silent around them ……….

DM in sleepy voice as the knock come at 3 a.m …: who is there?

Silent repeat him…….

DM get up from the bed and walk to the door ……..he repeat the question

DM: who is there ?..............in that moment as he voice become louder santo also get up and look at him wondering what is there

Slowly DM opens the door to found…………

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago

Oh..both of them taking vow of luv...😍 Sara 👏👏

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