A New One-Shot: ~Socha Na Tha~

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mahnaz_00
Awesome OS dear
It was jus wow......😍😍
specially luved the ending a lot........
Do write more

TC
Mahnaz

Thanks Mahnaz for enjoying the one shot....

Aww thanks dear..your commetns mean a lot to me....

Will definitely write more...And share with you guys!!

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Fantastic..fantastic... fantastic......!! Wow Jass..... goregous gorgeous OS.... one of my all time OS for sure....😛😛😛😛

U r simply mindblowing...!! 😉Totally luvd the story......it felt sooooo real... !! There wasnt a single element of improbability in it..!! Fabulous job...

Really njoyed how Armu... went out of his way...to save Bharti..from taking such a definitively drastic step...!! n OMG OMG ....what a convo the Duo shared..!! Armus growing attraction towards Bharti... Bhartis interest while listening to Armu...it all just blew my mind off...!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Luvd the Leap inbetween... n wowie... what a Classy way of getting ArBi together.. at PayKars party...!! 😳😳 Can soo imagine them dance.. closely.... n that KISSSSSSSSSSS .. hai allah..Jassie... marr dala......!! 😍😍😍😍😍

PHENOMENAL stuff...........

Thanks dearie for the lovely cmments!!!!Thanks dearie!!

Thanks dear..I tried to make it different and i'm glad that it turned out well....

😃😃😃😃Your comments really make me smile like an idiot...Thanks a lot!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hey Jassie..!! :)

I actually read your OS yesterday itself but had forgot to comment..Anyways i gotta say this One Shot was so beautifully written..!! I was so drawn into it throughout..and read it fully one shot, my eyes did not move away at all...just like how a One Shot is...I hope you catch my drift..😉 😆...Really very well written...!! 👏 👏 👏

I loved it SO much..!! Esp love the two years gap thing..Beautiful ending with that kiss....Hai....SO sweet..!! 😳....

Do write more of them..! 😊

It's a treat for us to read them...and man all of you one shot writers are inspiring me to come up with a One Shot myself...:)...

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hey Jassie..

It was BEAUTIFUL!😍

Loved your way of writing....👏

This was a whole new concept and I really wish that some producer in India might make a new show with our beloved jodi based on this concept..

Hats off...👍🏼

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

WOW

i am speachless and the only word i can say at the moment i

B E A U T I F U L

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I Could so imagan everything in frount of my eyes😍

i love the way you write it 😳

soooo magical

i want the pen you wrote it with😆

well i LOVE IT dear 😳

Arbi's moment and the Kiss i was allll..............☺️☺️☺️

i love this love story😍 and Arbi made it even romantic

hats off to ur creation 👏👏👏

ohh forgot to say that i love the song as well😉

MUST WRITE MORE

PLZZZ

Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07
Hey Jassie..!! :)

I actually read your OS yesterday itself but had forgot to comment..Anyways i gotta say this One Shot was so beautifully written..!! I was so drawn into it throughout..and read it fully one shot, my eyes did not move away at all...just like how a One Shot is...I hope you catch my drift..😉 😆...Really very well written...!! 👏 👏 👏

I loved it SO much..!! Esp love the two years gap thing..Beautiful ending with that kiss....Hai....SO sweet..!! 😳....

Do write more of them..! 😊

It's a treat for us to read them...and man all of you one shot writers are inspiring me to come up with a One Shot myself...:)...

Heyyy....aww it's ok dearie..Thanks a tonne for your lovely comments!!!

Serious???I did want to elaborate a bit more but i was a bit busy so i rushed it a bit too...

Thanks yaar....Yeah will think of different concepts to write...

Yeah that's an awesome idea..please write and post it soon,yeahh??

Cheers,

Jassie

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: 1994

Hey Jassie..

It was BEAUTIFUL!😍

Loved your way of writing....👏

This was a whole new concept and I really wish that some producer in India might make a new show with our beloved jodi based on this concept..

Hats off...👍🏼

Awww thanks a lot dearie!!!!

It just started with a thought and i just went on writing and i'm just glad that it worked out well and i loved it too so did others which made the effort worthwhile....

Aww that's a huge compliment!!!Thanks dear..

Cheers,

Jassie

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz
WOW
i am speachless and the only word i can say at the moment i

B E A U T I F U L

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I Could so imagan everything in frount of my eyes😍

i love the way you write it 😳

soooo magical

i want the pen you wrote it with😆

well i LOVE IT dear 😳

Arbi's moment and the Kiss i was allll..............☺️☺️☺️

i love this love story😍 and Arbi made it even romantic

hats off to ur creation 👏👏👏

ohh forgot to say that i love the song as well😉

MUST WRITE MORE

PLZZZ