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Sohil Gupta

@Sohil_Gupta

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Hello Everyone I am Sohil Gupta. and i have been a viewer of lnmdj from the start.

i just joined this forum and found all the lovely and amaziing collection of written work you people have collected here. So i decided to contribute one from my side too if it is acceptable to you all😊

My FF is based on LNMDJ characters with a different story.

it is a story of people who are totally different from each other yet have come together for a common cause.

5 people, the best of friends, leading a happy life unaware of what fate or maybe a group of crooks have decided for them. A man living his life only for a single cause, to obey his master and die or kill on his command enters their lives, will the man be successful in his task or the love of these 5 will destroy his reason to live? will they come out of the crisis alive together or a grave will be opened for someone?

The prologue will follow suit and the character sketch will come only if you people want me to continue. do comment

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Sohil Gupta

@Sohil_Gupta

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Index

Introduction:- Pg 1

Prologue:- Pg 1

Pm List:- Pg 1

Character Sketch:- Pg 13

Part 1:- Pg 23

Imp Note:- Pg 26

Part 2:- Pg 28

Part 3:- Pg 43

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-GothicBeauty-

@-GothicBeauty-

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Posted: 16 years ago

ohhhhhhhh my god
it is so good
great work sohil do continueeeeeeeee waiting for ur updates
and pm me

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Sohil Gupta

@Sohil_Gupta

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Prologue

A man in his 40's is sitting by the fireplace in a huge yet dark room which is only lighted with the fire in the fireplace and rocking on the chair. A thin and feeble person of about 10 yrs older than him enters the room and says "he has arrived after his training" the chair stops rocking and a smile lights up the face of the person "how is he?" "Well he has definitely grown a lot since I last saw him, from the small thin boy into a tall muscular and handsome guy. But hasn't changed a bit by his nature, still maintains the serious killing look on his face and one can see unbeatable amount of fire in his eyes just on one look at him as if he was made'.." "no" the man sitting spoke up firm by his voice as if totally against the idea what the other person was about to say "no he was not made, he was... Trained to kill" he spoke up with finality in his voice as an evil smile lit up his face

"But what is the use of getting him so trained when he can't kill anyone" a third man, young probably in his late 20's six feet tall, dressed in a royal suit entered the room. "He doesn't need to kill anyone, all his work gets done without the need to do it" the man retorted standing up and sending the other one outside "well he does everything to get his without killing anyone as he is scared from death" the younger man said trying to light a cigarette with the lighter but it didn't light. "He can die for me without a trace of fear in his mind and kill on my order without a trace of grief in his heart I have trained him since he was 11. I have taught him to play with death with bare hands at that age, the fire in him has been burning since that long which will not allow him to go against me" the old man said taking the lighter from his hand and lighting the cigarette for him. The young man bowed his head in thanks and then smoking a puff of it he said "but what if with time he tends to go against you, after all he is royal blood. He will not go against his traditions which are so called in scripted in every cell of his blood." The man posed a question and the old man turned to face the fire "then history will have to repeat itself" and then began humming a rhyme

'If time permits right,

Or love blossoms bright.

It would make a deadly wonderful sight

Two graves instead of one

On a silent dark lonely night
'

And then began laughing hysterically.

Edited by Sohil_Gupta - 16 years ago

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Sohil Gupta

@Sohil_Gupta

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: marie1994
ohhhhhhhh my god
it is so good
great work sohil do continueeeeeeeee waiting for ur updates
and pm me

thanks marie.

just updated the prologue and will post the Cs soon

and will definitely Pm you next time

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Nisha Gera

@--Nisha--

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey sohil (if i am correct)loved it,very gud,can u add me in ur pmlist and plz do continue soon,hope u love the forum,and the people here

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Sohil Gupta

@Sohil_Gupta

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: marie1994
waooooooooooo awesome start
good going

thankss will try and post the CS soon

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Sohil Gupta

@Sohil_Gupta

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera
hey sohil (if i am correct)loved it,very gud,can u add me in ur pmlist and plz do continue soon,hope u love the forum,and the people here

thank you sheetal, yes you are correct.

will add you for sure.

and try to continue soon too.

i am already begun to love it😃

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Nisha Gera

@--Nisha--

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

thanksss for liking t and if u want u can come to pridaholics abode aur savni dream house your choice

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Nachiket

@Dark_Star

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#10

Awesome start and you have to continue.

Very well written and a totally different concept. Looking forward to it.

Add me to the PM list!

And yes, Welcome to the forums!😃

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