Siddhant - The Silent Lover: Part II

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Contd...from Sidhhant - The Silent Lover: Part I

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1383307/siddhant-the-silent-lover-part-i-and-ii-updated


But she preferred death over a life with me which shook me no end
The incident left a deep impact n took quite a while to mend......

I became a brute to get you out of your autopilot mode

To evoke those feelings n emotions waiting to explode

Gradually we started to accept each other n the reality of the situation

Waiting to embrace the new life, new hopes n dreams and the 'new relation'


I wonder what kept us together coz love is something our heart controls

But there's a bond stronger than the bond of love... it's the bond between Two Souls

I started to like you and n u felt the same for me

But sometimes what we want is not meant to be'

Your past returned n stood between you and your future life

Everything came to a standstill'coz he dint know u r now my wife

I started having doubts about us as I felt you might still love him

The more I thought 'bout it the more our future became dim

I decided to set you free for that s what true lovers do

If you came back u'd be mine' if not I'd say adieu

To let you go was like dying a 100 times each day

But your happiness is the only thing I wish for n pray

I've buried my emotions, my feelings n my desires so in no way do I succumb

N it won't be wrong to say at this point..I've become 'Comfortably Numb'

I might not say it too often 'coz silence is a language too

My lips don't move but my my soul cries..'Mrs. Ridhhima Modi.. I'm so in love with you'

By Siddhant Modi

The Silent Lover


Hope you like it guys..hit the like button if you did...

Cheers!!!

Rapz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Read both and really liked dem......................
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Wow! You're an amazing writer! perfect choice of words to evoke the same emotions as Sid has!👏
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hi

superb rapunzel84

great job, loved it

norzar
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Thank u ppl...glad u liked it 😊
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the first and the second parts are brilliantly written........amazing....... 😛 😛 .......please can u alos make a third part?
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Very beautiful.. You make more sense than CVs.. I am an AR fan, but I appreciate your good work...
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I liked your Both topics.
Rapunzel you simply Rock.👏
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Very good writing and the words are just the perfect word. Good job 👏
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Brilliant and great use of words, liked both and exactly expressed the feeling of SR..... congrats👏👍🏼

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