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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEy friends this is my 1st Fan-fiction.Please read it and tell me kya main ise continue karu?

Characters
Riddhima Gupta- Sukriti Khandpal
Code Name- Ridzi
She is a sweetest, polite and loves everyone around herself.

Armaan Malik- Karan Singh Grover
Code Name-Army
A Very handsome, sweet and simple dimpled doctor.He is a heart throb of every girl in the hospital.

Shruti Malhotra- Shweta Gulati
Code Name- Princess
She is very intelligent and Cutest.She loves armaan but never shown it.She belongs to a rich family but does not value the riches as much as her virtues……..

Anjali Gupta- Sunaina Gulia
Code Name- Angie
Riddhima's elder sister…..she is dominating and is very fond of her riches….she loves her family and her younger sister a lot……..she wants to raise her dad's name as a successful doctor………..Anjali is a practicing intern at her father's hospital.

Atul Joshi-Pankkit Thakkar
Code Name- Champ
Another intern at sanjeevani.he belongs to a small family and has come from a small village from gujarat……He is very sensitive and childish……

Kirti Mehra- Sonia Singh
Code Name- Lady Hitler
A very diciplined, Strict senior doctor. Sometimes understanding and helping too.

SANJEEVANI-
Sabhi Interns Sanjeevani mein enter karte hai...Woh kuch kahe isse pehle hi dr.kirti unhe fire karna shuru karti hai-
Dr.Kirti-Doctors Aap log pure 10 Mins late aaye hai.Aapko pata hai in 10 mins ke kisi bhi patient ki jaan bhi ja sakti hai.Kal se sab log right time pe aayege.
Atul-Haa par aap ho kaun, jo ki humein itna fire kar rahi ho?
Dr.Kirti-Main aap sab logo ki senior doctor hoon.Dr. Kirti Mehra
All- Oh sorry mam
Dr.Kirti-It's OK. LETS START…… aapki duties main abhi aapko padhke sunaungi......and let me make myself clear.....main apne aap ko repeat nahin karoongi so please be attentive and listen carefully.......
Dr.Anjali Aap Children Ward
Dr.Atul OPD
Dr.Armaan Generel Ward
Dr.Riddhima Pathlab
AAP SAB LOCKER ROOM JAAKAR APNE EQUIPMENTS NIKAL LIJIYE……AND PLEASE QUICK……
ALL- YEAH……
EVERYONE GOES TO THE LOCKER ROOM……
THEY ALL SEARCH FOR THEIR LOCKERS AND GET THEM……
Atul-Wow mera locker to kya mast hai, ismein to main apni scrapbook se lekar sab kuch rakh sakta hoon.
Anjali-Oh please, in lockers mein humein sirf apne equipments rakhne hai and cell bhi
Armaan-What? oh please main to apna mobile apne pass hi rakhunga
Anjali-Haa aur jab woh lady hitler fire karegi na tabhi tumhe rules samajh aayenge.
Armaan-allright. Waise hi...i am armaan malik
Atul-Main Atul Joshi...Sanjeevani ka upcoming best doctor
Riddhima-Hi...Main Riddhima gupta. Waise you can call me ridzi
Armaan-and you?
Anjali-I don't wanna talk to you.Let's go ridzi
CAFETERIA- 2PM
THE FIRST DAY ITSELF WAS REALLY TIRING… AFTER THEIR DUTY THEY GOT A BREAK…EVERYONE WAS IN THE CAFFE...
Riddhima-Kya humara roz ka din aisa hi stressful hoga :(
Armaan- I KNOW YAAR.... ZARA SOCHO PEHLE DIN PAR YEH HAAL HAI TOH KAL AUR USKE BAAD KYA HOGA......
Atul- PATA NAHIN ROSIE KAISI HOGI...
Anjali- ATUL YEH ROSIE KAUN HAI???
Atul- WOH ACTUALLY MAINE KAL HI EK NAYA PLANT LAYA HAI...AUR USKA NAAM ROSIE HAI...
Riddhima- ATUL TUM APNE PLANTS KA NAAM RAKHTE HO????
Atul- HAAN KYUN????
EVERYONE LAUGHS AT THIS AND ATUL IS CONFUSED...
THEN ANJI'S PAGER RINGS....
Anjali- EMERGENCY!!!!! GUYS MAIN NIKALTI HOON....BYE.....
ALL- BYE......
Sab log bhi apna LABCOAT leker wehan se apne duty pe chale jate hai.

RIDDHIMA's HOUSE- 10PM
Riddhima apne computer pe uske online friend '23ammy' se chat karti hai-
Sweetridzi-Hey, how are you? You know today i joined 'Sanjeevani Hospital'.
23ammy-Well i am good. Great...Hey tomorrow i will give you a biggest surprise.
Sweetridzi-Really? Kya surprise? Aur kab?
24ammy-Kal dopehar 2 baje Sanjeevani ke terrace par 😊
Sweetridzi- Sanjeevani ke terrace par 😊?
24ammy-yup :D
Sweetridzi-ok great...us time mera lunch break bhi hota hai. Hey i have to go now.bbye
24ammy-yeah bbye

In Sanjeevani-
Dr.Kirti- Dr.Riddhima aaj aapki duty ICU mein hai.wehan kal hi naye 2 naye patients aaye hai
Dr.Armaan path lab, Dr.Atul OPD aur Dr.Anjali General Ward.
Aur interns aaj ek nayi intern join karne wali hai, Dr.Shruti Malhotra. To main chahti hoon ki aaj sabhi interns is nayi intern ko aap hostpital ke rules aur work samjha de aur ek baat koi bhi uspe prank nahi khelega...Is that clear?
All-yes mam
Dr.Kirti-Now go back to work.
ICU-
Riddhima ko har hour year jitna bada lagne lagta hai. Woh sochti hai ki kab main 24ammy se milungi and woh hoga kaun? Ya phir woh nahi aaya to
Path Lab-
Armaan(murmuring)- I know ki woh tum ho riddhima because itni simple is hospital mein sirf ek hi hai.bus tum woh aaj ke surprize ka intezaar karte raho
ICU- 2PM
Riddhima terrace pe jane lagti hai tabhi ICU ke ek patient ko feats aane lagti hai isliye riddhima ko wehin rukna padta hai.
Sanjeevani-
Shruti Malhotra sanjeevani mein enter karti hai but tab lunch break hota hai isliye woh boar hokar terrace pe ghumne chali jati hai.
Terrace-
Shruti terrace pe enter karti hai tabhi uspar red roses girne lagte hai. Woh shock hokar thoda aur aage jati hai to wehan par red-roses se heart banaya hota hai jismein likha hota hai- Welcome sweetridzi
Woh aur aage jati hai to 10-15 flowers banquette rakhe hote hai. Aur tabhi un banquette ke piche se armaan nikalta hai with his dimpled smile 😊 lekin shruti ko dekhke woh shock ho jata hai. Woh dono bas ekdusre ko dekhte reh jate hai
Shruti- Ammy yeh sab kya hai?
Ammy-Shruti woh tum thi?
Shruti- haa main hi to hoon aur koi bhi naya hai kya?
Ammy-btw college ke baad yehan kaise?
Shruti-Tumhe bahut miss kiya na isliye tumhare hi hospital mein bimar hokar aa gayi.buddhu main yehan ki nayi intern hoon.
Ammy-oh ok.

Guys i think u got it ki kya story hai...i know thodi boaring hai lekin kya main ise continue karu?
Otherwise mere pass dusri bhi real love story hai :) 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey shefali awesome start to a sweet fanfic awww first day at sanjeevani
plz continue karo
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice starting

cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Next Part-
On Terrace-

Shruti-Hey baki log kehan hai?
Ammy-Baki log yehan kyun honge yaar? I told you na ki main tumhe terrace par surprize dunga
Shruti-Kya? But...
Ammy-Ok stop argue. Dr.Kirti ne keha hai ki main tumhe is hospital ke rules aur regulations batadu.well woh work main nahi kar sakta to sirf main tumhe hospital dikhaunga
Shruti-What?
Ammy-yeah... because mujhe mera path lab ka work bhi hai and waise bhi mujhe laga sweetridzi koi aur hai 😊
Shruti-Kya kaha tumne?
Ammy-Nothing...Let's go
Ammy shruti ke sath cafeteria mein jata hai aur wehan use sabse milata hai. But riddhima se woh nahi mil pata.After work sab log apne ghar chale jate hai.
Gupta House-

Riddhima aur Anjali unke ghar aate hai.Ghar aate hi ridzi sabke sath baatien karna chodkar tired hone ka bahana batake apne room mein chali jati hai. Apne room mein jate hi woh laptop on karti hai aur Gtalk open karti hai, But 24ammy online nahi hota.Ridzi bahut sad ho jati hai aur woh use Offline Message bhej deti hai
Sweetridzi-Hey where are you? Missing you 😊
Aur woh offline chali jati hai.
Gupta House-6 am
Ridzi subah jaldi uthkar wapas online chali jati hai. To wehan uske liye 24ammy ka offline message hota hai-
24ammy-Hey ridzi, maine nahi socha ki woh yeh tum ho? But ya i am happy to meet you. Aur waise bhi we can meet every day now,
Riddhima uske baaton ko samajh nahi pati.woh us message ka reply karne hi wali hoti hai ki anjali uth jati hai
Anjali-Ridzi itni subah uthkar online kya kar rahi hai?
Riddhima-Nothing di. Aise hi nind nahi aa rahi thi to
Anjali-nind nahi aa rahi to tum dadi ko unki pooja mein bhi join kar sakti ho(laugh)
Riddhima-haa ya phir main hospital ke cases study kar leti hoon.
Anjali-ok. Btw 8 baje mujhe utha dena and ya good morning.
Riddhima-Good morning di.
Riddhima sochne lagti hai ki, Meri to bad morning hai...Pata nahi ammy ne aisa message kyun kiya 😔. Kya woh mujhe bhul gaya hai
Phir riddhima hospital ke case papers study karti hai but uska dhyaan case mein nahi hota. And then song plays-
Oooo Hothi Thi Tujh Se Subha Har Din Ki
Teri Dopehar Se Shyam Ki Dhun Thi
Hothi Thi Raathein Teri Baathon Mein Khoye
Tere Khayalon Mein Jaage Aur Soye..
Tu Jo Nahin To Kya Raha

Jaane Tu Mera Kya Hai, Jaane Tu Mera Kya Tha
Tu Hi Mera Har Pal, Tu Hi Har Lamha Tha
Jaane Kaisi Kashish Hai, Jaane Kaisi Khalish Hai
Kyun Yeh Saans Thami Hai, Aankhon Mein Kyun Nami Hai
Jaana Dil Jaana Kaise Meine Na Jaana
Ke Pyar Yahin Hai, Yeh Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na..
Jaana Dil Jaana Kaise Tune Na Jaana
Yeh Pyaar Yahin Hai, Yeh Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Riddhima ke 24ammy ke khayalon mein khote khote hi 8 baj jate hai. Then woh anjali ko uthati hai aur phir dono sisters Hospital chali jati hai.
Dr.Kirti- Bahut jaldi aa gaye aap log. Aapko pata bhi hai ki yeh hospital hai jehan pe humein patients ke jaan ke liye 1-1 second bhi important lagna chahiye but aap log to. Khair...aap Dr.Shruti malhotra hai right?
Shruti-yes mam
Dr.Kirti-Aapko sanjeevani ke rules aur regulations to sabne bata hi diye honge
Shruti-Yes mam. Mujhe sabhi rules pata chal chuke hai
Dr.Kirti-Good. Dr.Atul aaj aapki duty Path Lab mein hai, Dr.Shruti General Ward, Dr.Anjali OPD, Dr....
Tabhi riddhima ka mobile bajne lagta hai. Riddhima use jaldi se switch off kar deti hai
Dr.Kirti-Dr.Riddhima Aap janti hai ki hospital mein mobile allowed nahi hai, lekin phir bhi apka mobile aapke pass hai. Aage se mujhe kisi ke pass bhi mobile nahi chahiye aur waise bhi aap logo ke pass to pager hai hi.
Dr.Riddhima- I am really sorry mam(Scared)
Dr.Kirti-It's ok.Dr.Armaan aapki duty children ward mein hai aur Dr.Riddhima OPD. Now go back to work.
Shruti aaj pehli baar riddhima ko dekhti hai, isliye woh usse baat karne ke liye jhat se uske pass jati hai.
Shruti-Hey tum bhi yehan pe intern ho?
Riddhima-Haa, main riddhima gupta, tum shayad new intern ho na?
Shruti-yeah i am shruti malhotra 😊 btw you know na ki cell hospital mein lana allowed nahi hai
Riddhima-i know par woh main kisike call ka wait kar rahi thi
Shruti-woooo(smiles) kiske huh?
Riddhima-my friend ammy
Shruti-what? Well mujhe tumhara ammy to pata nahi but meet my ammy...armaan malik
Riddhima- i know him
Shruti-Ok. Well meet u in lunch break 😊
Sab log apne apne duty pe chale jate hai.

I will post next chapter soon :)

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