Pride and Prejudice - The Prida Story (Upd: Pg39)

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#321

wow

this one was like truly wow

i mean, u'v written everything with so much beauty,

i am in llove with it,

awesome

thanks for the pm

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maham

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Posted: 15 years ago

#322

Hey Achu.. i finally made it here.. 😆😆😆😆 Loved the beginning how Damini interacted with the kids and Prithvi liked her behavior around them.. is that right? behavior..? sorry its really early in the morning so please spare me.. 😳😳 the point is i loved that one moment when she looked up to find his eyes on her.. and that smile playing on his lips.. loved loved loved what followed... damini getting all tense and irritated due Pithvi's absence.. someone has so become an integral part of her life..😃😃😃 loved how he showed up just to see her face... *sigh* so Prr

ithvi... and OMG this was the first time she called him by his name? what did she call him before?? sorry apparently you have seen by now that my observcation power is zero.. 😆😆😆 loved how he felt so happy over it.. 😃😃😃

so then she managed to get him strapped to a bed.. that can be annoying.. but he needs it..

She walked over to sit down by the bedside and he immediately caught her hand. As he looked into her eyes he was moved to believe how much he loved her. A million threads seem to bind him to her with a strength that grew stronger day by day. Minutes dragged on as they stared at each other.

'Are you all right' she asked breathlessly, the first thing that came to her mind, painfully aware of the proximity, his room, his brooding expression ......everything screaming of the throbbing intimacy between them.

loved these lines especially the part of him being binded to her.. 😍 BEAUTIFUL writing..

loved how they just kept talking about their lives and stuff unaware of the time! PriDa eye lock.. yes it always does manage to say alot of the time.... and now going on a date..!! yayy!!

loved the whole description.. certainly Prithvi Saxena at his romantic best is VERY passable😳😳😳 loved how he took her hand in his and said all that stuff to her.. loved the moment.. and then.. DANG... the vamp arrives... arghh... isnt there anything in the world which goes by the good name of PRIVACY.. lady go check the dictionaries will ya..!! interrupting our Prida like that.. when i dunno maybe Pri was gonna propose or something... poor Damini.. though i liked how Prithvi wasnt paying sheetal all that much attention and was studying Damini..😃😃😃😃😃 and then the dance.. wonderful and magical.. loved it..

He tipped her chin surprised and concerned at the tears in her eyes.

'Damini' his voice choked.

She whispered something, so softly he bent his head as he said, 'What was that ?'

She let herself sink towards him, a wave of emotion threatening to consume her and muttered against his chest.

'That was my dream at the farmhouse'.

Prithvi reached out wrapping his arms around her, stroking her hair gently.... it seemed like the most natural thing in the world.

absoloutely LOVED this moment.. especially the bit when she leans into him and tells him about the dream and he wraps his arms around her.. 😍😍😍😍😍😍 that was so i dunno.. sensitive i suppose..

to sum it.. the update rocked.. and you as usual... aced again as a writer..!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ my my this is QUITE a long comment.. ah well.. told you i love you fic..😃😃😃

Love,

Maham

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nikita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#323

achu...sweety thanks for updating🤗....wow that was a FAB part👏👏👏!!!....loved damini's possesiveness and affection towards prithvi😳😳😳.....those few hours without talking to him or seeing him were like living in hell for her😆😆😆...hahaha....and the date was quiet romantic too😳😳😳....hmmmm....dinner and then dance...wonderful😉😉😉!!!....arrg..but why was sheetal there😡😡😡...will she stop interfering...ruining prida's mood and their lovely moment😳😳😳...but well, good that prithvi asked damini for a dance👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...and the part ended nicely...wid them being in each others arms😍😍😍.continue soon plzzz....will be waiting for the next part😊.