Soni a wandering hoodwink!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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A wandering hoodwink

I was a wandering roving hoodwink

Searching for company

On my journey I met many

Together we sailed a boat

In blinded light

And silvering waters

My heart flew out

Endless days of humor and joy

I found these waters beautiful

They swayed in all directions

In nature's and mankind's creation

A note of every reaction

Took a voicing action

This happiness was more than a satisfaction

Suddenly the tides swayed

The boat got butchered

By unknown strong forces

In pieces the boat lay

I found myself surrounded

In the crushing forces of the waves

No one came to save me

I tried to gather pieces

With help from other shining fishes

After all not only was our boat indespensible

But we are not disposable either

So we had to find a means

To start a new journey...But..

Gone was the light

And there I saw darkness's true sight

I was in an illusion

Although spiracles of water flowed beside me

I knew, I made a mistake

The mistake of not foreseeing the truth

That truth which we all fail to see

When we are in a chimera of joyous moments

Today I see, that although I love

Everything and anything

I can't step away from the walls of my heart

That are screaming and aching

_______________________

Note to you all: Not everyone who is friendly to you is your friend, so watch out, and never let your heart go too far on the wrong person! But you can shower this love on many other people who need it, who deserve it!

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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sharanb thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats was brill
wow kya sher hai yaar 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wowwwwwwww Soni superb👏 that was awesome 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharanb

thats was brill
wow kya sher hai yaar 👏

thanks sharoo, no sher yaar, those are my feelings!😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG...!! that was wonderful.. soni im proud to have someone like u among us..!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess1_43

Wowwwwwwww Soni superb👏 that was awesome 😳

thanks samia, am happy you liked it!😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: buttercup

OMG...!! that was wonderful.. soni im proud to have someone like u among us..!! 👏

thanks buttery, am proud to be liked by some people atleast!😛 you're no less, you rock as well!😛

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏👏 👏 Wah! Wah! Soni dee that was great!!Yur poems are always great!

I tried writing a poem with the advice you gave me....but it didnt work out 😆 My brain just didnt work 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: dadhich

👏👏 👏 Wah! Wah! Soni dee that was great!!Yur poems are always great!

I tried writing a poem with the advice you gave me....but it didnt work out 😆 My brain just didnt work 😆

thanks Neelu! just write random words, you'll get a poem in no time!😛 I guarantee you!

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

thanks samia, am happy you liked it!😊



Me a totall fan of ur poetry... 😳 wow that was awesome though ... me too much of a tubelight to come up with something so gr8 😳 i can understand its a wonder 😉

jokes apart its really gr8

Lots of luv
samia

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