How Ironic can Life Be? Armaan-Ridz-Siddhant

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Posted: 15 years ago
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How Ironic Can Life Be?
The one whom you had dreams for your future,
The one whom you want to be with for the rest of your life,
A dream that both lovers shared;
Shattered like glass;
How hard u tried to piece it again;
It can never look new.

How Ironic can Life Be?
The one whom you want to start a new beginning with;
The one whom you want to hold your hand to for the rest of your life;
The hope to a fresh start,
The hope of a new relationship;
Just remain stranded and lost;
Like a lost ship in the sea;
With no destination to start with or end with;

How Ironic can life Be
Where one stands the beloved you have always wish to be for eternity,
Where one stands the beloved you have want to forgo your relationship with.
One is a past,
One is present,
Which should be chosen to lead the future;
One will be chosen;
One will be the winner in this life race,
And the other remains to be alone;
With no support to hold onto;

With no hope of the return of their love.

Where will destiny take these three lost souls to
Will their hearts ever be mended
Will their souls ever meet
Will their happiness slip away
Destiny has done the uncalled
Now only destiny can show them the light.

whatever i have written here is the turmoil three of them are going through.i really apologize if im not able to express each character well.
but definitely in this journey to attain love,one heart will definitely be broken to pieces.All three want to attain love yet all three do not want to be the heartbroken.Life is so strange.a strange Journey.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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You have awesomely spelled out the present scenario. Cheers to you!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Too good and suits the scenario in DMG perfectly. Nice job
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OMG! this is sooooo AWESOME!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@prasada,prasanthi thank you so much for the comments.im glad able to express it rightly..

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Beautifully written...Kudos!!!👏
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WOW! that's amazing! I love it! <3
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Did I tell you you should have tried a hand at poetry first? Keep this one in mind.


I'll be honest, it's really amazing, and summarizes the current plot pretty accurately if you ask me.

Life is always a journey, those who accept the journey easier and better, would learn to accept life as it comes.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was really good! and it's truly explains the turmoil the three are going through...who is to blame for their condition besides circumstances

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