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Posted: 15 years ago
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he guys ........don't kill me by ur comment{especially sidma lover}😊😭
thats jst a refreshment😊
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Characterss
gupta family..

Dr.shashank gupta:he iz not de head of sanjivani anymore but visitz it often..

Dr.anjali gupta:yes she haznt married yet and she iz as she waz before.. 27 year old

mallik family

dr.armaan mallik:head of sanjivani.. 27 year old
dr.riddhima armaan maliik:wife of armaan..26 year old
ayesha mallik: Daughter of armaan n riddhima 5 year old
dr.rahul garrewaal ..26 year old
dr.atul joshi..27 year old
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interns
dr.arima..21 year old
dr.raj..22 year old
dr.muskaan mehra..21 year old
dr.makul ..22 year old
dr.tunji..21 year old



i am strtin it wid a cute ar scene

morning time

riddhima dressin up and armaan enters de room and stares at her for 2 minz wid nayghty nazron se and strts singin a song
armaan:ho soni kitte soni aaj tu lagti we(goin near her)
bus mere saath ye jodi teri sajthi we(holdin her hand n dancing)
roop aisa suhana tera(pointin to her face)
chand bhi hain diwani tera(pointin 2 de sky)

and he iz sayin more but riddhima interrupts
riddhima:shhhhh.....shhhhh(keepin hand on her lips)tum dekh nahin rahe ayesha sorahi hain..agar uth gayi tu..
Armaan:tu kya??
Riddhima: Dr.armaan hamari bethi uth jaayegi tu kya sochengi hamare bhaare mein..
Armaan:arrey yehi sochegi ke uske dad uski mumi se kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa pyaar karte hain..
Riddhima:armaan(laughs)tum na kabhi nahin suthroge....abhi bhi wohi hoon.
Armaan:haan mein abhi bhi wahi hoon..cool,handsome,smart,stylish..
Riddhima: (angrily)bus bus itna hawa mein urhne ki zaroorath nahin hain..
Now riddhima iz really angry at armaan and when armaan notices her anger he stops all dis bakwaas and says
armaan:sorry(keepin head down and sayin sorry in a veree cute voice)acha sorry na baba..mein zameen pe agaya ab tu maaf kardo..
Riddhima:theek hain(still angry)
armaan:ek smile tu kardona ??
Riddhima takes her shoes and says:tum yahan se jaate ho ya mein..
Before she cud say armaan interrupted
armaan:nahin nahin mein jaata hoon..
Andhe goes and after dat riddhima smiles..
Riddhima 2 herself: pagal kahi ka..
Armaan iz going 2 sanjivani and he remembers sumthin and turns bak
armaan:riddima arima kaha hain??
Ridz:aap ke behen abhi tak sorahi hain..
Armaan:arrey tu phir ussey uthao .. Tumhe pata hain na aaj uske internship ka pehla din hain..
Ridz:acha theek hain..utha thi hoon..
And riddhima went to arima's room and pulled blanket 4rm her but still arima pushed it towardz her riddhima again pulled but again arima pushed towardz her..
Riddhima:ye larki na aisi nahin uthegi..
And riddhima opened de curtain and and sunshine came on her face and her face strted glowin(arima)she woke up stretchin her arm and hand..
Her warm ,gentle,appealin and expressive blue eyes r shown and her hair shiny,lusturous golden brown on her face den da hair moves away bcuz of wind and her face white as snow and pick also wid cute dimple and smile on the face iz shown..

Scence shifts 2 rahul
rahul took his mobile and dialed no. And was collin sum1
tring..tring..tring..tring
no1 picked up
rahul:ye saala kaha hain..phone kyun nahin utharaha hain..
Another coll..tring..tring..tring..tring..tring
rahul:makul plz phone utha..kaha hain tu..
On de other side
makul: ( while becumin ready):yaar ye bhaiya kyun baar baar phone karahe hain..
And atlast he picks up
but..but he instead of sayin hello he strts wid
makul:the mobile phone u r dialin is currently switched off or unavailable..plz try later..
Rahul: oyye..plz try later ke bache sun..
Makul: Ughhhh......arrey bhaiya kya hain .. Kyun aap mujhe baar baar disturbe karahe hoon..
Rahul:lsn u r going 2 be late tujhe ye bhi pata hain..
Makul:bhaiya , going to be late na late tu abhi tak nahin hua..mein bus abhi araha hoon..

Scene shifts to muskaan mehra
she iz not dat muskaan chadda .. She iz a intern and she iz a ditto copy of muskaan(in drama)and she iz chaterbox lyk muskaan only..u can imagine her as muskaan only if yeh want..
Muskaan 2 herself:muskaan na .. Tu na aaj bohut late hone wali hain..jaldi chal jaldi..

Precap:arima and raj accident each other;zz car..
Arima:ughhhhhh.....tumne mera ghaari ka stayanash kardia..how dare u??
Raj : oh excuse me madam meine aapke ghaare ka nahin balke aapne meri ghaari ka satyanash kardia..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW!!! i luv this ff its sooo refreshing and its much better than the current story! well done pls continue soon👏

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