Picture Perfect Moment- A SaJan Scene

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Hello my SaJan ki Deewanis!!! 🤗

I'm making a topic after a looong time, and u all must b knowing the reason behind it..Yes, u've guessed it right..this new track.. There's nothing in it that makes it interesting, and the worst part is (acc. to me) that it has no direction.. Its just stretching and stretching, wid numerous new entries.. Like most of u, i was also looking fwd to some soulful SaJan scenes after Gunjan's recovery, but v didn't get any.. In dis track itself, there was, and still is a scope of SG being together, but it doesn't seem to b the case..

So, i thought why not share wid u all a SaJan scene, a situation that came to my mind last night.. Before proceeding I want to tell u all that its my first attempt in writing a scene, so plzzz accept my apologies. I'm not at all good at it but I've tried my best to make it interesting and above all SaJanish and am looking fwd to knowing from u whether I've been able to do it or not.. If u don't like it, I apologize beforehand.

Picture Perfect Moment- A SaJan Scene

Scenario:

The girls r at Bhushan's house taking care of princess (the baby, I'll call her by this name in the scene as Sam calls her so) and r also thinking abt a plan to deal wid the boys.

The boys r at the detective's agency, and he has told them that he needs a picture of Princess, as widout it wudn't b possible to start off with the mission of finding her parents..

Now the story begins:

At Bhushan's House:

All the girls r trying to manage princess, but the more they try, the more louder she screams.

Gunjan: Di, shayad ye itney logon mein ghabra rahi hai. Mein isko apney room mein le jati hun. Waise bhi ap logon ki planning me mujhey koi interest nahin hai. So, ap apney boys handling mission pe concentrate karein, mein baby ka khyal rakhti hun.

Dia, Nupur, Suhani agreed to dis, as now they will b able to make a plan to tackle the boys and devise a way to teach them a lesson.

So, they kept on discussing, while Gunjan took Princess and her stuffed toys upstairs in her room.

Gunjan's Room:

Gunjan came in her room and sat on the bed holding the baby in a way in which she cud talk to her.

Gunjan (making cute baby faces): Aww..tum kitni cute baby ho. Tumharey hands, tunharey paon kitney soft hein. Per tum apney parents se itni dur a gayi ho, unhein miss to bohat ker rahi hogi. Worry na kero, hum sab milkey tumharey parents ko dhoond lein ge or phir tum unke paas chali jao gi. Waise, humein to tumhara naam bhi nahin pata. Chalo aisa kertey hein ke mein tumhara ek cute sa naam rakhti hun, phir hum tumhei ussi naam se bulaein ge. (All this time when Gunjan was talking wid the baby, she was responding to her through her eyes, expressions and sound, as if she was understanding watever Gunjan was saying) .

Gunjan starts thinking of a name.

Ummm Princess kaisa rajhey ga.. (The baby smiled to her)..Lagta hai tumhein ye naam pasand hai, toh ajse mein tumhein Princess bulaongi (baby responded wid an even bigger smile). So, friends princess??? And she held her finger with her own and they both had a finger shake.

It was night time and slight breeze was blowing, the sky was full of stars and a full moon was peeping through her window.

After Gunjan and Princess were done wid the formal intro session, Gunjan took her out on the terrace to enjoy the breeze and the starry night. She settled on the swing that was placed on almost a corner of the terrace, and she started talking wid Princess in baby's language. Both of them were enjoying the peaceful, and pure environment at the terrace.

At the Detective's Agency:

All the boys r thinking, who will go and get the baby's picture.

Mayank: Mein to ghar gya tha, magar meri better half ne mujhe baahir se hi c-off ker dia.

Uday: Mujhey to meri favorite sister tak ne undar nahin jaaney dia. Who toh chah rahi thi, magar baki ki fauj ne usse bhi apney saath mila liya.. aur mera chocolate fudge cake?

Benji interrupts: Arrey yar Uday, tujhey khaaney ki pari hai, yahan situation out of control ho rahi hai..Mera aur Adhiraj ke jaaney a bhi koi faida nahin..

Samrat (patting on Benji's shoulder) : Don't worry dear when Samrat is here. Jo tum sab nahin ker sakey, wo mein ker sakta hun.. Remember, my secret entry point, jo meri Chashmish tak pohanchney ka raasta hai.. Mein us window se ja kar baby ki pic. le aonga.

All the boys agreed to it.

Adhiraj: Dude meri car mein camera perha hua hai, who le jao.

Sam took the camera from Adhi's car and off to Bhushan house he went.

On the Terrace of Bhushan House:

Gunjan, a bit tired after a hectic day, still is managing to play wid Princess. She had just talked, talked and talked wid her and now wants her to go to sleep. But Princess is enjoying her company like anything and is playing, relaxing after sooo many days.

Sam climbs up the ladder and on to the terrace he gets. Is going towards the window wid tippy toes when he hears the giggling sound of the baby. He turns around to see from where the sound's coming.. He turns left, finds no one, turns back, there's no one. Then he turns right and there he saw his Chashmish wearing red suit (the same one which she was wearing in the college), wid her specs in her one hand (as Princess had taken them off and was trying to take them in her mouth and Gunjan was stopping her from doing so and was making cute faces), Princess sitting on her lap and she holding her wid the other hand.. Her hair were falling slightly on her face due to the light breeze. And behind these two, their messenger and the only witness of of their love, the full moon was shining bright on them, making both the girls look more beautiful..

His whole world came to a standstill, everything around became non-existant, and what all remained was HIS agelic beauty Chashmish, wid the nature's angel Princess, and their bodyguard the moon. Instantly, a smile came on his face and he just wanted to go and hug them both. He was getting amused looking at the way Gunjan herself was acting like a baby, was pampering princess, gave a small kiss on her cheek, was trying to take back her specs widout making Princess feel bad abt. It. It was a moment that he wanted never to pass, he wanted to keep looking at them forever.. and then Princess coughed.. Gunjan immediately started patting on her back to comfort her. Wid this, he came back to life.. He had forgotten the reason of being there, all he remembered was, all he cud see was Gunjan and Princess.

He started walking towards them and suddenly realized that he has a camera in his hand. On reaching quite close, he switched it on and zoomed to fit Gunjan and Princess in the frame. He clicked the butto. The flash made Gunjan keep a hand on her eyes and she immediately turned to see from where that light came.

To her surprise, she saw Sam standing there wid the camera.. he switched off the camera and moved close to her.

Samrat: Chashmish, not bad..practice ker rahi ho? (and winked at her)

Gunjan: (still in shock and not understanding wat he said) Kya???? Aur ye tum yahan kaise aye?? Aur kyon aye?? Aur kya kaha tum ne..

Samrat (interrupts): Chashmish, Chashmish, Chashmish, saans toh le lo..Ab jab mein yahan a hi gya hun, to tumharey sab sawalon ka jawab de ker jaon ga.. (and moves closer)

So, sab se pehley..mein yahah ladder se aya hun, Kyon ka jawab ye hai ke shayad upar wala dude aj meri side pe hai, and last but not the least, tum is Princess se jis tarah khel rahi thi, aur sambhal rahi thi, toh mujhey laga shayad aney waley time ke liye practice ker rahi ho.. U know jab humari bhi ek itni hi cute si ba?

Gunjan: (Blushing like anything and not understanding where to hide says..) Samrat.(and then lowers her face to avoid his).

Samrat: Oh! Toh meri Chashmish ko mujh se sharm a rahi hai.. Wah Chashmish, mujhey toh laga tha ke hum ek doosrey se bina sharmaye sab kuch share ker saktey hein. (holds her chin and makes her look towards him).

She wanted to melt, find peace in his arms, but had to remain intact..After a mini eye-lock, she says..

Gunjan: Theek kaha tum ne.. Mujhey bhi yehi lagta tha.. Magar ab, ab aisa lagta hai ke shayad tum mujh se bohat kuch chupa rahey ho. Bohat si aisi baatein hein jo humarey darmiyan abhi bhi un-kahi hein.(While they were talking Princess had gone to sleep in Gunjan's arms, wid her face on her shoulder.)

Sam knew what she was exactly talking abt. And he has to clarify things to her. So, he kept the camera on the swing and moved sooo close to her that they could feel each other's breaths. She got confused as wat he was up to and so moved a bit, but before she cus anything, he bent forward to take Princess from her and while taking her in the most careful manner, he said?

Samrat: Arrey meri cute si Princess..Abhi tum is swing pe so jao taakey mein apni dil ki princess ki shikayat dur ker sakon..

Gunjan was surprised that how come Sam's also calling the baby Princess and them she remembered the lecture on telepathy Sam gave to her..

Samrat made Princess lie on the swing, covered her wid her blanket, and patted her lightly a few times so that she goes to sleep. And Gunjan was watching all this with sheer amusement.

Samrat then turns to Gunjan and kept his hands on her shoulders.

SamratLin an apologetic tone) Chashmish, I'm sorry. Mein tumhein is sab ke baarey mein batana chahta tha magar mujhey darr tha ke kahin tum mujhse naraz na ho jao.. Aur Chashmish, abhi abhi tum itni bari takleef se guzri ho, mein tumhein pareshan nahin kerna chahta tha.

Gunjan: (with a slight anguish on her face) Aur tumhein kya lagta hai Samrat..ab jis tareekey se mujhey in baaton ka pata chal raha hai, to mujhey takleef ya pareshani nahin ho rahi hai??? Mein ne tumhein kaha tha na Samrat ke tum mujhey hamesha apni best friend samjho ge aur tunhari life ki koi bhi problem ho gi usey mujh se share karo gey. Phir bhi tum ne aisa kya, kyon Samrat???(Samrat dropped hhis hands from her shoulder and she moved in the other direction). Mein janti hun ke aisa kerney mein tunhari koi majburi ho gi, per Samrat hum her sukh, her dukh ke saathi hein.. Agar tumhein koi pareshani hai to tum ne ye soch bhi kaise liya ke mein aaram se reh sakun gi.. Jab Di aur baki sab tum pe shak kartey hein to mujhey bohat bura lagta hai, kyonke mein janti hun, mera dil janta hai ke tum kabhi ghalat nahin ho saktey ho..na ab, aur na mujh se milney se pehley..Phir bhi Samrat tum ne mujh se ye sab chupaya..Kyon???

Each word of hers pierced through his heart. He wished that the earth tears apart and he falls in it.. He wanted to run away from there, but no, he had to give answers to Gunjan, not just to clear his own self, but for her satisfaction, for her comfort, for her trust.

He gathered all the courage and moved towards where she was standing..

Samrat: Chashmish, meri taraf dekho gi bhi nahin??? Mein tumharey sab sawalon ka jawab donga..magar mujhey thoda waqt de do.. I promise me khud a ker tumhein sab kuch bataon ga..

Gunjan: Nahin Samrat.. Ab aur nahin..Mujh se ye bardaasht nahin hota ke log tum pe unglian uthayein, tumhein Princess ka daddy kahein, Ria ke saath tumhara naam ghalat tarekey se jodein. Aur agar abhi tum mujhey kuch nahin batao ge to mujhey aisa lagey ka ke tum mujhpe trust nahin kertey aur issiliye shayad mein tumharey laik nahin hun..

Samrat immediately keeps his finger on her mouth.

Samrat: Chashmish, please aisi baatein mat kero, aur tum ye soch bhi kaise sakti ho ke tum merey laik nahin ho? Bulkey is sab ke baad mujhey ye yakeen hota ja raha hai ke mein tumharey laik nahin hun. Tumharey aney se pehley meri zindagi bilkul misguided thi, merey saath to bohat loag the, magar mere paas koi nahin tha.. Aur mere is akeleypan mein, meri life mein bohat ladkiyan ayein, mera naam kabhi ek ke sath to kabhi doosri ke saath joda jaata. Lekin tum Chashmish, tum in sab cheezon se bohat uper ho.. Tumhara dil sheeshey ki tarah saaf aur sacha hai..aur mujhey darr lagta hai ke merey past ki wajah se kahin tumhara ye dil toot na jaye.

Hearing all this Gunjan felt a lump in her throat. She wanted to hug him, wanted to assure him that no thing in the world can change her love for him, that no matter how many girls came in his life, she will never bother abt it, she will never misunderstand him, never mistrust him..but she remain firm for him. She went close to him and took his hand in hers, covered it with her other hand and said..

Gunjan: Samrat, mein jaanti hun ke tumhari life mein bohat ladkiyan ayein, magar mein uske saath saath ye bhi jaanti hun, ke tum ne kabhi kisi ladki ka faida nahin uthaya. Mein tum se pyar kerney se pehley tumhari best friend thi Samrat, aur mein ne hamesha tumharey dil ko dekha hai, jismein dosron ke liye dard hai, pyar hai, izzat hai. Samrat tum hi kehthey ho na ke tum mujh per khud se zyada vishwas kertey ho.. to apney vishwas per bharosa rakho aur hamesha rakhna..mein her qadam, her saans pe tumharey saath hun.

Samrat was relieved after her words as if a big obstacle was removed from his heart. He again held her shoulders, and this time was more firm and said:

Samrat: Janti ho Chashmish, Ria princi ki beti hai. Who meri class fellow thi aur kuch hi time mein hum bohat achey frnds ban gaye..Woh dil ki bohat achi thi aur class ki baaki ladkiyon se bohat different bhi. Phir hum ne ek doosrey ke saath kafi time spend kiya. Who shayad merey baarey mein serious thi..magar mujhey to tum janti hi ho na Chashmish.. mein ussey achi frnd consider kerta tha..Aur phir 2 yrs pehley valentines ball mein humara kisi baat pe jhagda ho gya, aur who apney raastey aur mein apney raastey chal padey..

Gunjan: (looking towards Princess) Aur ye bacchi??

Samrat: Tumhari kasam Chashmish, mein isko, iske mummy, daddy ko nahin jaanta. Ye koi hum boys ke saath prank ker raha hai aur issi liye hum ne 2 detectives ko hire kya hai jo sacchaai ka pata lagaein ge. Mein issi liye yahan pe Princess ki picture lene aya tha.

Gunjan:Samrat, agar tum ye sab mujhey pehley bata detey, to mein is mein tumhari madad ker sakti thi. Di Mayank ke baarey mein, Suhani Adhiraj ke baarey mein, aur Dia Benji ayur Uday bhaiya ke baarey mein ajeeb batein soch rahi hein aur soch sakti hein, magar mein kabhi bhi merey Samrat ke baarey mein kuch ghalat nahin soch sakti.

Her words "mera Samrat" shook him from inside, and a tear that he was holding in his eyes since the start of the conversation, found a way out from a corner of his eye?

Samrat: Chashmish, Suhani ki sachai ka pata chalney ke baad tum ne mujh se promise kiya tha ke tum mujh se kabhi koi baat nahin chupao gi.. Aj wohi promise mein tum se kerta hun, ke aj ke baad, mein kabhi bhi tun se koi baat nahin chupaon ga.

Hearing this tears start rolling down Gunjan's eyes,, He cupped her face wid both hands and continued

Samrat: Aur ek baat aur Chashmish, meri past life mein jo kuch bhi hua, who kuch bhi aisa nahin tha jiski wajah se tumhein kabhi koi takleef ho.. Tum merey jeeney ka maksad ho Chashmish aur mein apni puri zindagi tumharey naam ker chuka hun..

These words sent a shiver through her whole body.. She cudn't believe her ears..tears were rolling from her eyes, from his eyes..She became numb for a second and then moved forward, kissed him on the forehead and hugged him tightly.. He also locked her in both his arms and they finally found peace in each other's arms. This moment seemed a lifetime to them..and they wanted to remain like that forever and ever.

But then how can it b, that SaJan remain uninterrupted. Princess started crying and wid this,they both came out of that heavenly hug, back to the world,..Simultaneously they both bent to hold her and their hands landed upon each others. Sam nodded to Gunjan that I'll take Princess..She moved back.. He took her in his arms, wrapped her in blanket properly so that she doesn't catch cold, kissed on her cheek and said..

Samrat: Dekha Chashmish, mein bhi bacchon ka khyal rakhney mein expert hun.. So, wat say???

He winked at her..she blushed..and her cheeks turned red..He wrapped his arm around her and she buried her face in his shoulder..They both were smiling?

In one arm he had Princess, the other was around Gunjan, the moon was wid them, and all three of them were smiling.. Cud it b more picture perfect??? 😊😊😊

This is it guys?Its a loooong one, but I sincerely hope that u all enjoy reading it as much I've enjoyed writing it. Your comments will be a booster for me and ur criticism will help me improve.. So, I'm looking fwd to both.

Loads of love and hugs!!!

Ayesha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazin,commendable,outstanding,rokin wat more cn i say

it absolutely suited d situation presently in d scene

hope dey show such a scene btw sajan

sajan in ur point of view again turn out 2 be so januable

dere pureness of luv so easily available

nd ya SAMRAT+CHASHMISH+PRINCESS=PICTURE PERFECT
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omigosh Ayesha .... beautifully written, hun ... I WANT such a scene NOW!!!!!! It was perfect, right from the moonlit night, the terrace - Sajan's meeting place, the dialogues , Gunjan scolding Samrat for hiding things from her, but showing her trust in him ... and what we've all been craving for ... Samrat watching Gunjan with the baby!!! Thank you for writing this so beautifully so that I can imagine it all👏👏👏 ... really hope we get a scene like this in the next week!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww! That was so cute! i absolutely LOVED it!!!! And I seriously hope that something lyk this happens in the show! Love u for this!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very beautiful.................
Do you hear CVs!! we want a scene like this!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ayesha .... u written sooo beautifully dear ☺️.👏👏👏......
☺️hope aisa hi ho SaJan ke saath 😳☺️
cv's plz read karo is topic ko plzzzz 😛😉
- sana -
Edited by NiceAngel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ayesha swetheart.....wowiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeee......god am i glad that i came online this evening or else for sure i wud have missed this one

god that was just fab sweety.......am just soooooooooooo lost in d SAJAN world now.....its as if tumhare is OS ne last few weeks ki meri sari shikayaten dur kar di......i cant tell u how am finding it tough to switch off the screens of my brain which r continuously screening ur OS without ne break....god i feel as if i have derived what i wanted to see out of the baby track with this OS of urs.....love u for giving this to me.......it was just awesomeee....i wud suggest n req u to post it in CVs thread so that we can get to c sumthing like this

u simply deserve zillions of this👏👏👏👏....n loads of hugs for making my sat so much better sweety🤗
Edited by meens1981 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ayesha superb , wonderful and fantastic OS i loved it the core the way you portrayed our sajan and baby so well yar i hope cvs will read your OS and make this kind of super scene in the show dear you rock keep rocking dear 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so well written!!....loved it.....superb man!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifully written Ayesha & d End yes simply picture Perfect 👏

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