Prida FF Betrayed Love Part 11 Pg 41

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Hello everyone, I am Siddharth(Sid) and i am a pridaholic, so i just decided to start an FF on them. do read and comment, it means a lot to me😊

it is based on a story of two people who fall in love but then circumstance betray them and they fall apart. What is the problem which got them away? and will they ever be able to be together again?
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Index
Pm List Page 1 😊
Introduction Page 1 😊
Part 1 Page 1 😊
Part 2 Page 7 😊
Part 3 Page 11 😊
Part 4 Page 15 😊
Part 5 Page 17 😊
Part 6 Page 20 😊
Part 7 Page 26 😊
Part 8 Page 30 😊
Part 9 Page 33 😊
Part 10 Page 38 😊
Part 11 Page 41 😊
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Introduction of Characters

Prithvi Saxena: A handsome, muscular and strong-headed straight forward guy. He is a normal person who comes from manali. He owns an adventure sports club there, but now he has to go to Mumbai as his parents have fixed his marriage with Sonakhsi and want him to know her and spend time with her. He does not want to marry her or anyone else, because he does not believe in love and does not want to ruin anyone else's is life because of his this kind of nature. But he also cannot break his parent's heart and hence he has reluctantly agreed to this marriage.

Damini Gujral: An elegant, beautiful yet strong-headed girl, she is a civilian of Mumbai from a rich family who is deprived of his parents love as they work day and night to earn more money, but even then she respects them very much and does not go against their wishes as in the end of the day they are her parents. She thinks she can take care of herself because she knows how to use a gun. She also possessive of her friends as she has only a few of them and knows that they are the only people who do not let her feel lonely.

Sonakshi Mehta: A beautiful yet cunning girl. She fell in love with Prithvi when she saw him in manali for the first time, and since then she has been doing everything possible to get him be it winning his parent's heart with fake good nature or trying to come close to him to make him fall in love with her.

Sameer Saxena: A handsome hunk, he is a close friend of Damini and the husband of Avni, he lot does not leave anyone when it comes to proving that who is the best of all. He loves Avni from his heart and does anything or everything to get a smile on her face.

Avni Saxena: A simple and straightforward girl, she also loves Sameer a lot. She is also Damini's true friend and gives her the best advice when she asks for it. She sometimes gets very unhappy when someone tries to show her low by telling that a guy like Sameer is not meant for her but she does not tell it to him as she knows that he loves her a lot and will do anything to prove them wrong.

Roshni Gujral: A fashionable, stylish, smart and beautiful girl, sister-in-law of Damini and wife of Varun. She is very cute and bubbly, does not think twice before she speaks, she is the brightness of the otherwise dull house of the Gujrals. She loves Varun very much but is unhappy with his boring attitude.

Varun Gujral: A smart, intelligent business man who helps his father runs the Gujral Empire, but he does not keep his Damini di and Roshni aside because of work and pays full attention to them also as he knows how is it to feel lonely. He knows that he is a little boring sometimes but that is not his fault as his father never let him do what the other boys would do as he wanted him to become a great businessman in the future. But still he tries his best to keep everyone happy.

New Characters Would Be Introduced As they come up in the FF.

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Part 1
A handsome lad was walking on the lonely road happy with the uncompanionably silent atmosphere. He was looking down as he walked pondering over some unknown fact when suddenly he banged into someone, he moved back at once mouthing a sorry and asked "are you okay" and that's when he saw it was a girl. "Tum dekh kar nahin chal sakte kya" she shouted and Prithvi remained silent "aur tumhe kya lagta hai main apna khayal khud nahi rakh sakti you male chauvinist" she continued, no one could go away with calling Prithvi names because of no reason so he shouted back scaring the daylights out of the girl in front of him "dekhkar toh aap nahi chal rahin thi, pata nahi kahan se aagayi aur mujhe dhakka maar diya, aur maine sirf insaaniyat ke naate se pucha tha ke aap theek hain yaa nahin isiliye agli baar kisi ko bhi kuch bolne se pehle soch lijiyega" saying that he took a turn to the road and started walking away.

Damini was way too scared to reply anything to him and soon the familiar sound of the jeep and the shouting's made her run again. But the car was faster than her and blocked her only way out, around 5-6 people came out of it and started teasing her and Damini found herself helpless without her gun as one of them had knocked it out of her hand with one swift move before only. Without thinking anything she punched hard on the nose of two of them and pushing the 3rd one sideways she ran back into the direction where she had come from taking a new turn this time.

Prithvi was walking alone again when someone banged into him from behind again, again he mouthed a sorry and asked if the one behind him was fine or not, but when he saw the same girl again his anger came back to him "aapko dikhai nahi deta" but this time she said she was sorry in a softer tone and pointed to the jeep heading towards them "who mere peeche pade hain please help me, meri car kharab hogayi hai aur meri gun bhi kahin gir gayi hai" Prithvi was surprised when he heard the word gun from the mouth of the girl but he did not have enough time to think over it as the jeep stopped in front of them. The goons got beaten very badly and had to run back from where they had come from and then Prithvi turned to look at the girl. "thank you" was the curt reply before she walked away "ghmandi kahin ki pata nahi apne aap ko kya samajhti hai" saying so Prithvi walked away too.

2 days later

Prithvi got up early and as he reached downstairs after his morning workout, Sonakshi was serving breakfast on the dining table. Prithvi saw her first and rushed up back and wore his shirt before coming down again muttering to himself "subah subah aagayi pareshaan karne ab mujhe bhagwaan hi bachaaye isse" Sonakshi saw him coming and ran up to him and hugged him lightly "good morning" she said. Prithvi pushed her a little back and asked in shock "tum yahan?" "kyon main yahan nahi aa sakti?" she made a puppy dog face which made Prithvi chuckle inwardly "nahin nahin mera matlab hai itni subah subah takleef karne ki kya zaroorat thi" "who maine socha ki jab aaj tumhaare job ka pehla din hai toh tumhaare paas breakfast cook karne ka time nahi hoga toh main wahi layi thi apne haath se bana kar" Prithvi sank down as his ears heard the words 'apne haath se' the last time she had cooked for him, he had gone down with food poisoning and hadn't been able to move from the bed for one week.

So he decided to excuse himself with some other reason "arre haan Sonakshi who kya haina ke mera pehla din haina toh isiliye mere employer ne mujhe jaldi bulaya hai toh mujhe lagta hai ke main tumhaare saath breakfast toh nahi par aaj shyam ka dinner zaroor karunga aur is baar khana main banaunga" and saying so he went away leaving a fuming Sonakshi behind him. She stomped her foot as her plan failed again, but she remained determined as ever "main bhi dekhti hoon ke tum kab tak mujhe avoid kar paate ho, waise bhi jaldi hi hummari shaadi ho jaayegi phir tum hamesha ke liye mere ho jaoge sirf mere" she told herself and walked away.

Prithvi reached the Gujral mansion, and looked at it for a second. It was a huge place but for him it was another place of work as he only considered his adventure club close to his heart. He walked inside and met a man on the door and told him that he had come to meet Mr. Gujral the man took him in where Mr. Gujral was talking on the phone, seeing him he ended the call and faced "hello Mr. Prithvi Saxena aaj se aap Gujral mansion ke security chief hain aur Damini ke personal bodyguard bhi, Mr. Mehta aapko aapka kaam samjha denge mujhe abhi meeting me jaana hai to main chalta hoon" and he hurriedly walked away leaving Prithvi look at him surprised.

As Mr. Mehta explained Prithvi what all Prithvi would be doing, Prithvi took a round of the house as he wanted to see personally how the security stuff was done here. When he was passing by a room, the door suddenly opened and some banged hard into him, both of them stepped backwards and mouthed a sorry but when they looked at each other they became shocked and shrieked in unison "tum!!!" and before Prithvi could say anything the girl shouted "Mr. Mehta" so loudly that Prithvi had to put fingers on his ears, poor Mr. Mehta appeared there in a minute and asked "kya hua Damini madam" "yeh kaun hai aur yahan kya kar raha hai" she asked determined pointing his finger at him "Damini madam yeh yahan ken aye security head hain aur aapke naye bodyguard bhi, inhe sir ne appoint kiya hai" Damini relaxed "accha papa ne theek hai aap jaa sakte hain" Prithvi also moved with Mr. Mehta but Damini stopped him "tum kahan chaldiye Mr." "Prithvi Saxena" he replied turning to face her "Mr. Prithvi whatever" "Prithvi Saxena" he corrected her again and she felt her temper rising again "fine Mr. Prithvi Saxena, pehle hi din se tum apni duties bunk karne lage ho?" Damini accussed him "ji?" he asked shocked "ji ji kya laga rakha hai, tumhe papa ne mera bodyguard appoint kiya haina toh phir tumhe toh mere saath hona chahiye jab main bahar jaa rahin hoon par tum toh apni hi duniya me magan ho" "who mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap bahar ja rahi hain Maam" he added a last word in sarcastic manner "theek hai ab bahane mat banao aur chalo" she said walking with an evil smug across her face and a glint of victory in her eyes "ab pata chalega is eke isne Damini Gujral ka bodyguard banna accept karke kitni badi galati ki hai".

P.S. This and the future coming parts are extremely silly so i sincerely say that if you think i must not continue then tell me.

Sorry for wasting your time😊

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sid as promised i am your first reader and do pm me next time
and yes great story
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Hai It is very nice and I am the second reader
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love it.gr8 part.update soon. šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Another FF from you Sid, that's great! 😃
The introduction and first part were great! Looks like you've got a good story up in your sleeves... šŸ˜‰ Continue soon!
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heyy sid..u r going gud yaar.its just awesum..purane din yaad aa gaye.

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