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Posted: 15 years ago
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😳Mrs.manhotra tells prateeksha that raj isnt coming for another month....prateeksha talks to herself that maybe she was responding to rajs love for eher...but she didnt love him....,coz it didnt feel like love...she asks her sef how do I kno love now...she is distributing prasas at hte same time.....anchal refuses to take prasad...and tells her not form ur hands.....and shashank gets angry and go after her...he tells her bhabhi hai waoh tumhari...and anchaal is about to say something and she sees prateeksha coming and stops...
prateeksha tells shashank that becoz of her..there is so much tension in the house..shashank tells that its prt of life...she is my sister Im sorry for her behavior...but he promised everything would be normal...daadi is sick...prateeksha takes care of her...everyday she does things for daadi....and talks to her...and makes room in daad'is heart....shashank comes home and sees prateeksha sleeping on the dinning table....he stops and thinks how beuatiful she is....and then thinksabout things she do...and howshe took care of daadi....he goes closer..and he sees some food there...she wakes up...and he asks her if she has eaten....she says no she was waiting for him...he saysh e hasnt eaten either but he doesnt want to eat here,.....coz people are sleeping...so they go out by the pool.....she forgets one plate and shashank tells her its ok we can eat in one plate....😳..he looks at her and eat....he says if i love her..wats wrong she is my wife.....but then he says how m i going to tell her......and then he says he has no doubt desitny wanted them together.....they boht get up and go for a walk.....shashanlk tells her he loves walking at this time....prateeksha looks at him thinks how she cant live without seeing him...how she waits for him to come back form office...
Next day prateeksha and shashank goes to see araqina....veryemotional scene and araina is crying....raunak says thanks to shashank..both sister goes inside...araina tells prateeksha that she looks happy.she tells her....shashank is a very nice guy..prateeksha agrees she tells her..her life has been changed..shashank takes care of her so muc...araina says she can see ligth h in her eyes when she talks about shashank wats going on...😉 prateeksha smiles and leaves they both come outside and she says ...woh mujhey nahi pata.....araian say prateeksha is in love....and then she jokes woh bhi khud kay pati kay saath..she says they look like if they are made for each other.,..she plans to play a joke on shanshank and tells him prateeksha will be staying with her for few days....shashank reminds prateeksha of her resposibilities....araina says u just dont want to leave her becoz meri behan hai hi intni pyaari u r gonna miss her.......and shashank and prateeksha lok at each other and then look away.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Love confession :shashank and prateeksha
Shashank drives back home..back home he gets to know that he has to go to shimla for another trip...prateeksha gets a little sad.she goes to her room, shashank is sad too.He asks her if she has ever been to shimla she said yes and she loves it.He is wishing if mom or someone says that u can take prateeksha with you meanwhile his friend calls he go out side and ask his friend how to take his wife,His friend says come on yaar tumahari patni hai woh.,,just tell her you want to go....shashank goes to her mom and tells her he doesnt like hotel food...and he wants to stay in thei house in shimla....shashank moms say you were never that consious about food.He says now Im😆..his mom says woh waha akelay nahi raha jata..i get bored,...she says anchaal ko lay jaoo and he is ike she has studies mom...the mom laughs and goes away ...he goes back to his room and see prateeksha packing he says..you are oging too,.....she asks him if he minds it he says not at all mein bhi yehi chehta......then he stops...they go to shimla and come to the house...prateeksha makes tea for him ..they talk he tells her randomly she looks beautiful in pink..she says thanks..next dy shashan is getting ready for the office..and asks prateeksha what she is going to do the whole day she says she is going to read a book or go out..he convinces her to come with him...she is earing light blue saari...he introduces her as his wife prateeksa asks herself why does she feels so happy when she is called his wife..he is working and she is just looking at him they have several eyelock scenes..she sees someone comes in and hugs shashank that his friend jyoti...she seems very friendly with shashank..she tells shashank tumhari biwi bohat khubsoorat hai ..aur masoom bhi...he looks at her and says yes...jypti is wearing western dress and sitting close to shashank..prateeksha feels lil uncomfortable...they all go for lunch and jyoti and shashank remember their college days...and she tells prateeksha shashank was her crush for long time..prateeksha is kinda sad..
they go back ..prateeksha is cooking and burns her hand..shashank applies cream on her hand and she sees pain in his eyes...
jyoti calls shashank..she invites both of them for whole day...prateeksha and shashank leaves next day...jyoti and shashank are shooting and prateeksha is looking at them..she is jealous...and then she sees them talking about horse riding,...shashank tells jyoti he has gift for her...jyoti gets excited and kisses on his cheek..prateeksha cant bear it and leaves from their she tells shashank she is going to check something....jyoti opens a gift and its a prank.....she starts beating up shashank jokingly prateeksha looks from far away...she asks herself mujhey kya faraq partha hai but then she says faraq partha becoz becoz i love him...aur woh mera pati hai...she sees a huge change in her...she says she cant share shashank with anyone..she says its crazy how kuch hi dinoo mein shashan us ki zindagi ka sub say ahem hisa ben gaya and she doesnt want to loose him....in the evening...she goes out of the house and is walking and sees shashank on his knees and asking for jyoti's hand she gets shocked...and runs shashank sees her running..he goes after her and she says dont follow me he says kaisee nai karoon she says app ko kya faraq partha hai ap jaeinn yeha say...apni jyoti kay pass...aur azaadi chehiye nah apko...tu mein ap ko is rishtey say azad kardo ge.jayee ap apney pyarr kay paas....he is chasing her and hold hers arm form back and says jo dil mein araha hai bolti ja rahi ho....she says u should be with ur pyar ...he says mein apney pyar kay saath hoon..she looks at him surprisingly...he holds her face and say pagal hogyi ho tum kya....jyoti was nervos of her bf propsing her and she asked him to do something like that he said mein tu karna bhi nahi....he sees prateeksha goes far...and he goes closer to her hold her face and say "zindagi mein sirf ek bar pyaar kiy ahi maein nein..pehli baar kisi larki nein mujhey itna majboor kardi ya hai,...kay mein us ki siwa kuch sochta hi nahi,,,din raat us kay khiyalon mein hoon...kehna chehta par keh nahi sakta..,.tumhey pataa hay tumhari ankhein is duniya ki sab say khubsoorat ankhein hein in mein ansson nehin dekh sekta mein he wipes her tears...she looks at her and says...that she is greatest gift of her life..he says log tu apni pyar ko apna jevan saathi banna sochtey hein mein nay apney jevan saathi mein apney pyar bhi pa liya....he tells her that he can live without and he knows that when he will die she would be the only love of his soul..she covers his mouth and hugs him and tells him mein bhi apssey...bohat pyaar karti hoon..khona nahi chehti app ko..she takes his hand and aSsks him to promise her that they would never leave each other no matter what he kisses her hand and nodds..she says...that app meri zindagi ki woh anmool cheez hein joh mujhey is poori duniya mein sab say pyari hain..mera tu din aur raat ap say shooro hota hai...she says ap ko kuch hu ney say pehle mein apni jaan..he stops her and kisses her cheek and then her forhead and then her...
He hears people calling them....he takes her there.....one of his employees is getting married and he asks shashank to come and bring his wife and they will be the cheif guest of wedding...shashank and prateeksha are in their room..shashan tells prateeksha today he wants to get ready as he wants...she lets him...they both look so romantic....and he put sandoor in her mang..she closes her eyes...he turns her ..and they are face to face he kisses her fore head...and she hugs...him and then she looks at time...they both leave and both looking gorgeous..everyone at wedding is looking at them..contionously the whole wedding they have eye lock scene....that night shashank disappears..and later a car picks prateeksha..she recieves flowers..as she is walking towards her room....she goes inside the rooms..and its candels and very well docarated...she calls shashank and he comes from the back and hug her from back ..she is blushed and ...guys there will be suhaag raat here...next morning ...shashsank not willing to get up and go to the office he says..aj ka din sirf apkey naam..she brings breakfast for him..he feeds her....and she feeds him...
its rainiing they have rain dance......very romantic...
next morning they go back..home....and are very happy...all the time they are sitting with family shashank tells prateeksha with is eyes that she needs to come to the room..she says acha ma itney nin ho gayee we shouldhave a cup of tea together...shashank keeps callign her....his mom sees him and tells prateeksha someone is baytaab she takes prateeksha outside..and asks her she is so happy to see them happy wats the reason of happiness..she tells the mom that she loves shashank and shashank loves him and they both cant live without each other...she says jo bhi raj nein mujh say kaha woh kaha...meri zubaan say ajj tuk in ka laya yeh nihi nikla kay me raj say pya rkarti hoon..shayeed mein apney sechay pyaar ka intazaar kar rahi thi...she says that shashank is truly her love...and destiny has brought them together too...mom is happy and she says you are truly made for each other...prateeksha goes to room...and sees a statue of crystal standing there and it says "HUM ko tum say pyar hai. tum ko hum say pyar hai" she loooks at it and then higs shashank and say hein hai...he is happy ....
Edited by rose1982 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Hiiiiiiiii there!!!😃

Just read your FF and luvd it!!! The story is GREAT!!
Please please please update soon!!
And PLEASE do PM me when u update. Thank you!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Great writing, can just imagine PraSha in those scenes😍, looking forward to next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
plzz pm me when u update!!!!! i really love ur story
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow awesome luved❤️ all parts plz pm when u update!
update soooooooooooon👍🏼

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