What would be if......

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Posted: 15 years ago
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instead of Vansh it was Veer in Iccha bedroom?

Unable to cope with his pain anymore Veer knew he needed to talk, to see the one person who could make it all better, his Iccha, his Iccki. In a state of despair he drive to Jogi Thakur house, remembering how he climbed into Iccha window when he gave her the necklace, he climbs once more.

Staring on to her gentle beautiful sleeping face his despair and pain leave him; he reaches over and slowly carefully pushes a lock of hair back; she stirs but is then still. Veer sits on the bed just watching Iccha sleep and the memories of their times together, from thier 1st meeting come to his mind.

"Oh Iccha.' he whispers his voice tense with the bitter sweet pain of his memories

As though something is pulling her Iccha stirs, her face frowns, her eyes open fluttering but close again.

Veer looks upon the face of the only woman he had and would love; his love for her shining from him, seeing her innocense her beauty just made him want to cherish her, keep her close to him forever.

Iccha moves and her Veer eyes are caught by the necklace she is wearing-flashback

Veer and Vansh as little boys in front of Mai:

"Its for me!"
"No its for me!"

2 little boys sqabbling over something the both are holding half half.

"Kya hua app dono ko?"

They turn and both scream "Mai!"

The smaller boy tells her "Mai tell Bhaiyyah that this is for me."
"Nahi Mai tell Veer its mine."
"BUS! First show me and then I'll be able to tell you."

The boys walk over to their Mother and show her the necklace they are holding; it is very old, a gold chain with a diamond pendant.

"Where did you find this?" Taking the boys she tells them the story of how one of their anecestors helped to save a British family and this was given as a gift for his bravery. "Veer Beta this will go to Vansh's wife for this is our parampar."

"Oh. Yuck that means Vansh Bhaiyyah has to get married and to a girl! Veer turn to his older brother "Vansh Bhaiyyah is getting married. Vansh Bhaiyyah is getting married......" and running around the room he taunts his brother.
"NO I'M NOT" Vansh cries out, chasing after his little brother

Back to the present:

On seeing the necklace around his Iccha neck the pain, the hurt, the anger that had driven him from his home to Iccha bedroom rose again.

"NO. YOU'RE MINE!" he says as he shakes Iccha

"Veer? VEER?" Iccha shieks out.

Veer stills his shaking but grips Iccha arms tightly, bringing his face to hers, eyes to eyes he tells her- "YOU. ARE. MINE. YOU. LOVE. ONLY. ME."

"Nahi Veer" Iccha says soft whisper, dropping her eyes as she cannot lie into the eyes that she loves so much. "Nahi Veer, I'm Vansh's everything that I am belongs to him."

"NAHI!" Veer cries out loudly

Iccha looks to the door, "Veer please, someone will come. What will they think? Please Veer go, go before you wake Papa or someone." Iccha urgently whispers, trying to get out of Veer grip.

Gripping her tightly Veer looks into Iccha face "Let him come. Let all of them come. What do I care? Mein toh baadbard hogay-que nay app bhi?"

"Veer nahi, please. Please Veer." Iccha cries to him

"Please Veer, please" Veer mocks Iccha "When I said 'Please Iccha' did you listen to me? When I told you that my happiness was with you and not Tapaysia did you listen to me? When I BEGGED you to take a stand did you? DID YOU?! No you didn't. And now do you see how many lives you've ruined?" He tells her shaking her.

"Me? I've ruined?" Iccha replies shocked

"Or kuan? Mine, Tapaysia, Vansh Bhaiyyah, Ammo, Papa, everyones because your so selfish!"

"Selfish but...but...."

Veer gives a cold laugh "Ha app or selfish, nahi ho sakta-right? WRONG! You are selfish! What you want thats all that matters; you want me and Tapaysia together no matter what. Doesn't matter that I DON'T LOVE her, that I HATE her, detest her but what do you care? Doesn't matter that Tapaysia doesn't love me, doesn't love me as VEER but loves me THAKUR VEER GUNDALA. Doesn't matter to you that you have become Vansh Bhaiyyah new nasha, his new addiction and that you're using it as a way to get what you want-you are a USER. So yes Miss Iccha you are the most SELFISH PERSON I know!"

Iccha is in shock of hearing this; no one had ever called her selfish before or a user, Iccha shuddered at hearing these words. Closing her eyes tightly to escape them, but in her mind she can see Veer coming to her, telling her to tell the truth, to fight for what is hers and only hers and how she turned away from Veer, blinding herself to HIS PAIN, HIS AGONY. He was right she was selfish, she had sacrificed his love and in doing do so had unwittingly used Vansh.

Poor poor Vansh who had seen her help as something more and SHE had used it to keep Veer away, had used it for she knew Veer would sacrifice his love for his brother well being!

Opening her eyes Iccha looked straight into Veer's and for the 1st time acknowledge his pain and his hurt that she had caused, unable to be strong, unable to hide her love Iccha cries out "Veer."

Looking into her eyes that no longer hid her love for him, hearing his name called with the love that he'd missed so much, "Iccha" he calls as he holds her tightly to him, "Iccha, Iccha, I love you, I love you." he cries into her hair.

"Veer I love you" Iccha cries lovingly into his chest.

Hope you enjoyed it, its what I would've loved of seen but knew it was Vansh. It would nice if the creatives would give us an episode of just Veer and Iccha, of him being able to tell Iccha how much she has hurt him and her finally being able to see it.

Like Mai Iccha has used Veer strengh against him in getting what she wanted, I was hating Iccha for not seeing Veer pain but finally when Veer finds out the truth you see Iccha realising how much pain Veer is in. But its too late for Iccha IS Vansh new addiciton as we saw in the Holi episode!

When there is so little happiness I don't know why we watch these dramas!

Can anyone tell me in 1hr special and Veer was being rained on what song was playing? Thanks



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear Shasha many tqs for sharing ur imagination...I loved it...reading people's reaction is the most wonderful thing tht keeps me addcited to this forum.....irrespective of what is actually shown on this soap....ur brilliant in highlighting Veer Ichcha...kaaaassh ....Ichcha realises that is she had to live her life again....she'd dare not do mistakes again...well done👏


and finally I'm sorry i dont remember tht song ....😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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although i knew that it was Vansh,
but deep inside my heart i wanted Veer to be there......
and really excellent imagination....wish it could be true..
and the song is AAWARAPAN-BANJARAPAN frm the movie jism.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks.

I really want some romantic scenes its been way too long and way too much misery and tears-i feel as though i'm drowning.

Can't the CV some how trap Veer and Iccha together in:

a- a room

b- a car

c- a storm

or d- a burning building! Anything but PLEASE some ROMANCE!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shasha74

Thanks.

I really want some romantic scenes its been way too long and way too much misery and tears-i feel as though i'm drowning.

Can't the CV some how trap Veer and Iccha together in:

a- a room

b- a car

c- a storm

or d- a burning building! Anything but PLEASE some ROMANCE!


heyy its good 2 have romance in a lift, a car, room ..but not in a storm yaaa burning building pllease...😭, i prefer them 2 b alive without romance than b dead in romance
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Don't worry Shivani, it is a hindi melodramatic serial...
where even in a storm or burning building
the eyelocking session is so deep and passionate that
hero-heroine can't feel the burn and storm around them..........😆😆
and i will prefer them to die together holding hand in hands and confessing their love for each other rather than
living seperately and doing all the sacrifices 4 those people who don't care 4 them.......atleast we will be safe frm this torture.😉

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