may b just may ths is hw he felt*editd wth poster*

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oki guys .. i didn't sleep last night ... n well the reason as usual was mjht....
esp that last scene when gunji gets up finally n saves sam nn then the way everyone was making sammy get up
n then in the end when sammy looked at gunjan....
for the first time guys i actually forgot abt how everything was so illogical..
i mean after sammy was saved everyone forgot that a damm rollar coaster was riding down the road unmanned......
hee hee hee
well i only remembered that last scene..n spend the whole night thinking how they must have felt..
n in the middle of the night penned this down....
its my interpretation of that last scene....
pls pls guys do read it n comment
n i so so so hope that such a scene happes between mn too...
i know its insane but may yestreday was a night of idiots like me
hee hee hee
n ps== mods this is not a oneshot or a story so so pls don't close this topic
n guys its actually nt a story or shot it just my interpretation of that last scene with just an added hug
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hee ok guys i saw this new sigg by pari nn well i thought i wanted that hug to be like this one passionate nn well unearthly or heavenly....
so just imagine the hug like this hee hee hee
lols pari as usual u spell bounded me again jaan..
(by samrat)
(n don't worry the scene is short real short by my standards hee hee hee)

"samrat samrat utho pls"

"samrat pls utho'"

I could hear the whispering but it made no sense whatsoever..

I didn't have a clue abt where was i???or how I'd got there'

Or what I have been doing b4 I got here'

The only thing I knew was that I was feeling utterly disoriented n that my head was spinning preety madly'

"samrat samrat pl utho"

"bhai bhai utho"

The voices were growing louder,, n n I think i knew these people'..

"samrat samrat"

This time the whispers were loudest yet nn I heard my name clearly in them'.

I tried blinking my eyes open but they felt heavy nn well my head was spinning continusly'.

N then it was as if my memory was on fast forward'

Outhouse' our plan '..

Uday n me fighting'..

The terrible blow over my head '..

N

Chashmish''''''

I blinked my eyes open'..

Everything was so blurred .. the colours were mixed into each other making it completely disorienting for me to differentiate between the people standing or kneeling around me.......

N thn then I saw her........ standing '

She was standing actually actually standing'..

Our efforts had been successful.. my chashmish was finally on her feet..

I didn't know what I felt then ..

Actually with a spinning head it wasn't easier to process my feelings..

I just wanted to get up from the damm road nn actually make sure that I was seeing her for real nn this all wasn't a beautiful dream conjured up by my spinning head after I had blacked out'.

I tried to get up'but welll it was difficult ' I needed support nn mayank n suhanni made me get up'.

I was finally standing nnn..n ya she was for real'

I heard a soft sob..n I looked at her face for the first time'..

Our eyes met

N something exploded inside me..

Making me suddenly feel happy n ecstatic beyond any known limits..

She smiled at me through her tears..n I well I think I kept gawking at her like a moron'.

For once I wasn't sure whether the spinning head was because of the blow over my head or was it because I was feeling giddy with relief''''''

Chashmish moved towards me'.n touched my cheeks'n nodded her head slowly '.her eyes never left mine'

That's when I realised that there were tears in my eyes ..that she was wiping them of nn trying to tell me with her gestures that there can be no more tears in our life'

N then another explosion took place inside me'.

Finally it hit me with full impact that my chashmish had fully recovered from that nasty accident'..

That finally her life has ceased to be a nightmare''

My heart was banging so hard against my chest that I was sure that everyone present there could hear it'..i could hear murmurs n giggles all around'

But as my focus was all on chashmish's face it was impossible to understand their meaning..

She moved forward towards me'n linked her fingers with mine'.n then she kissed my forehead n started sobbing softly'''..

Another explosion inside me nn this time it made me feel that there was no one there on that muddy road except for me n her '..there were just us therenn love n nothing else..

I cupped her face in my hands nn kissed her forehead too b4 hugging her'.

We both held on too each other tightly'''''

our love passed through our bodies like electrictynnn I knew in that second for sure that we were one '. That we were two bodies n one soul..

I 'll lov u chashmish for ever n ever

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this is it .. do comment guys
loads of lov dolly
n ps== mods this is not a oneshot or a story so so pls don't close this topic
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oyye hoyye meri jaan

kya shot likha hai fida ho gayi mai toh aap ka shot par
relly dolly just too cool
loved it to the core😳
the way u expressed sammy feeling were awesome
ab toh tujhe award milna chaiye kisi ki bhi feeling ko acchi tarah describe karna ka liya😉😆
mindblowinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg one👏👏👏👏👏
keep it up and keep writting good shots for us
n thanx for the pm
muhhhhhhhhhhhh
*hugs and kisses*🤗
love yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ur love
sana😊
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this is awesomeee dolly!!!!!!
you have expressed the emotions sooo nicely and flawlessly.... its just tooooo good!!!!!
hoping to see a similar scene in today's episode!!!!!
hatts off to your writing yaar!!!!!!
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hee hee hee
sanu is this a new style of writing reserved??
lov u u r so innovative
n as usual first
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: doyel_777

this is awesomeee dolly!!!!!!
you have expressed the emotions sooo nicely and flawlessly.... its just tooooo good!!!!!
hoping to see a similar scene in today's episode!!!!!
hatts off to your writing yaar!!!!!!
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww doyel hugggggggggggggggggies
thanku soo soo soo soo so much
lov u
i too hope to see a sg hug tonight
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolly18

hee hee hee

sanu is this a new style of writing reserved??
lov u u r so innovative
n as usual first

🤣 dolly yeh mera original style hai lol maina soch agar mai spelling likhna mai late kardi toh first seat nahi grab kar paungi isiliye sorry 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dolly dear ur writing is always amazing. U described so beautifully sammy's feeling. Really he may be feeling like this time. Loved it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow dolly................................
how beautifully you expressed each and every emotion.............
loved it to core...........
you rock dear................😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey awesome os
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Girl what is this!!!!😍
You give me new feeling about yst scene!! your discription and writting is very beautiful.........Keep it up girl👍🏼

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