MY 1ST OS...(nw updated 3rd part on pg 3) - Page 2

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PART 2.-

Nupur gusse me aakar andar chali jati hai sab ke saath padhne k liye…

Nupur: hey guys chalo padte hain…

Ravi, Sheela: sure…

(thode time baad)
(Nupur bore ho jati hai…)
Nupur: guys tum log kuch khaoge kya muje both bore ho rha hai…

Mayank: ms.nupur bhushan padhte same khate nhi hai… ek waqt pr ek hi kaam kiya karo…

(Nupur gives him an angry look)
Ravi: ha nupur plz kuch khane ko lao na… padte padte neend aa rhi hai…

Sheela: ha nupur hum pad pad ke bore ho gye hai… ab frnd ke saath padne ka koi to fayda hona chahiye… Rama mam to kabhi khane nhi deti…….
(in nupur's ears)
Sheela: mam Mayank ki deewani jo hai… (luks at mayank n smiles) bilkul meri tarah…

(nupur luks at hr den mayank den her den mayank… she is shocked)

Nupur(2 hrself): by god is sadu ko bhi koi pasand kr sakta hai… wo bhi koi ladki… by god… kahin me sapna to nhi dekh rhi…(pinches hrself)…

Nupur: neways… guys tum biscuits khaoge ya chips… aur cold drink to loge na???

Mayank: (grins to himself): nupur tumne kya ghar pe general stores khol rakha hai???

Nupur: (angry bt tries 2 cntrol): dekho mayank tumhe nhi khana to mat khao… par aise hamare khane par nazar mat lagao…

Ravi: arre nupur chodo na… jao dono bhi le ao…

Nupur: theeke…

(nupur goes n brings d snacks)

(all r eating n studying)

(nupur purposely goes near mayank n makes sounds of eating in his ears 2 disturb him)

Mayank: nupur tum ye kya kr rhi ho??? Ya to aawaz mat karo ya fir dur jakar baitho… mujhe disturb ho rho hai…

Nupur:to muje kaunsa shauk hai tumhare paas ane ka… kahi tum hume khate dekh jal to nhi rhe ho??? Tum chahte ho to kha sakte ho… mene mana nhi kiya…

Mayank: agar muje khana hoga to me le lunga… waise aapki permission k liye shukriya ms. Nupur…

Nupur: (ekdum style me) oh ur Welcum…

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Regards,
Jasneet...

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PART 3:

(Sab padhke ja chuke hai)
(nupur goes 2 gunjan's bedroom)


G: di tum hamesha mayank se ladti kyu rehti ho?

N: gunjan… me ladti hu??? Tune use nhi dekha wo meri har baat ko kitna tokta hai....

G: di par…

N: dekh gunjan tu mujse uske bare me mt baat kr… aur waise tu behan meri hai ya uski??? Uski itni tarref kyu k rhi hai.??? Tuje lagta hai me jaan puchkar usse jhagda krti hu??? me buri hu???

G: di di di… bas… me to sirf itna keh rhi thi ki mayank ek acha ladka hai tumhe usse dosti kr leni chahiye… kuch logon ki tarah nhi…(thks abt samrat's flrting)

N: dekh gunjan tu mayank ko nhi janti… wo both hi sadu ladka hai… (gets angry n sad) isliye me to usse baat nhi karungi…

G: (sees nupur's sad face) arre meri di to bura maan gyi… by god ab me aise kabhi nhi bolungi… theeke…

N: (smiles) hmm…
(both hug each odr n go 2 sleep)


(Next day is a holiday)


(mayank thnks us din zyada padhai krni chahiye to he speaks to ravi n sheela abt it n dey agree… he tells sheela to tell nupur… bt she frgts)
(as usual gunjan subah subah uthkar terrace pe jati hai padhne ke liye n mayank abse pehle nupur ke ghar aata hai)

(door bell rings)

N: (wid a towel in her wet hair n wiping hr face with its end) aa rahi hu baba… kahin aag lagi hai kya… ye gunjan bhi na kitni baar kaha hai jab terrace pe jaye to chabi lekar jaye par ye ladki…

(opens d door)


(both mayank n nupur c each other)
(dey have an eyelock or a few minutes)

(den nupur realizes n asks)


N: tum ? yahan? Is waqt?


M: ha wo…
(before mayank can complete)

N: kya wo ha??? Tum muje milne ke bahane dhundhte ho kya???


M: kya??? Tum pagal ho gyi ho??? Kya baat kar rhi ho.???

(suddenly sheela comes)


S: oh Mayank tum aa gye… (n smiles)

N: sheela tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho???

S: kuch nhi…(in mayank's dreams… she's staring at him n mayu feels odd)

M: sheela nupur kuch puch rhi hai…

S: oh… kya hua nupur???

N: tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho???

S: oh… m soo sorry mayank n nupur… actly mayank me nupur ko batana bhul hi gayi ki hum aaj jaldi aenge padhne ko…

M: kya??? Sheela tumhe ek to kaam diya tha…

N: sheela tum muje bata deti to me taiyaar hokar baithti na…
Neways ab tum dono wo room me jaakar baitho me aati hu…

S: theeke… n sorry once again ha…

N: its ok ab jao…

(mayank n sheela go to d room)
(aftr sum time ravi also comes n all of dem start studying)

(while studying nupur ke geele baal mayank ke muh pe lagte hai)
(pehle wo khota hai jst fr few seconds n den realizing gets angry n says)

M: nupur tum plz apne baal sukhakar ao… meri books par paani pad raha hai…

N: mayank baalon ko naturally sukhne dena chahiye nahi to wo kharab ho jate hai…

M: nupur… chodo… tum meri baat to sunogi nahi… yato apne baal us taraf rakho nahi to……….. ek kaam karo sheela tum mere baju me baith jao…
(sheela's shocked 2 hear mayank's words… she's super duper exited… she goes n sits nxt 2 mayu…)
(she's just staring at mayank)

M: (2 himself) agar ye isi tarah muje ghurti rahi to na khud padhegi na muje padhne degi…

(den purposely)

M: (to ravi) ravi ye sum dekhna to…

R: (ravi comes nxt 2 mayu) kaunsa?

M: sheela ek kaam karogi plz toda udhar shift ho jao na ravi ko yaha baithne do…

S: sure…( shifts bt is sad)
( lukin at dis nupur feels lyk laughin)

M: nupur tum ha kyu rhi ho?

N: (trying 2 cntrol hr laugh) me kahan has rhi hu???

M: chodo tumse to baat krna hi bekaar hai…

N: to tumse kisne kaha baat karne ko…


Thats it guys for dis tym… I kno its little long… but don't frgt 2 leave ur commnts…

THNX...

Regards,
Jasneet

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