MY 1ST OS...(nw updated 3rd part on pg 3)

Hi guys, dis is Jasneet... its my 1st os on mjht n i hope u lyk it... plz leave ur cmmnts aftr reading it so i might make it an ff...

Intro: Mayank, Nupur, Samrat, gunjan studying in excel colg... Mayank -Nupur in same class n Sam- Gunjan in same class jst lyk original... Now d difference strts... Nupur taking Gunjan's Samrat's nd sum oder studnts of deir stnd's tuitions at her home... Mayur hate each odr... Samrat flirting wid both nupur n gunjan... n ya der r sum new characters in d stry...

The story strts wid nupur taking tuitions...
Nupur is writing on d board suddenly she hears sum1 talkin... she turns nd strts...

N: Yes Mr. Samrat Shergill... kya hua???

S: Oh plz mam muje sam nhi to sammy kahiye but mr samrat shergill sounds too budha... aur me abhi buddha thode hi hua hu...

N: (smiles)By God apni hi teacher se flirting kr rhe ho... kya tumhare stndrd ke log apne colg me isi tara s teacher's k saath flirting krte hai???

S: nhi mam hamare colg me ap jaisi sundar aur cute teacher kaha???

N: Oh to ab ye bhi meri galti hai???

S: nhi upar wale ki jisne apko itna sundar aur cute banaya...

N: Oh... chalo ab padhai karo...Dekho gunjan kitne ache se padh rhi hai... hamesha padhai me dhyan lagati hai...

S: (nw flrts wid gunjan) wahi to mene kitni bar chashmish se kaha ki itna mat padho pr aapki behan sunti kahan hai...

N: Kya?? Samrat tum to use bhi bigad doge...

Suddenly fone rings...

N: me dekhke ati hu...
(picks up d fne) Hello...

d odr side: hello nupur beta kaisi ho??? me Rama bol rhi hu...

N: Oh mam aap... aapne muje kaise yaad kiya???

R: kya hai na beta muje kuch kaam se sheher ke bahar jana hai... aur mere students jo tumhari std me hai unke xams hai... isliye me soch rhi thi ki agr tum unke saath padhti to unki kuch help ho jati... aur unme se 1 ko shayad tum janti ho tumhari hi colg se he...

N: acha unke naam kya hai???

R: Ravi, Sheela aur...

Suddenly sum1 calls out 2 nupur frm hr studnts... meanwhile R says d 3rd nme........ MAYANK...
Nupur doesn't hear...

N: ha aa rhi hu.... tum board pe jo likha hai padho...
(den turns 2 d fne) Ha theeke mam aap unhe mere paas bhej dijiye... pr subah me tuitions leti hu to aap unhe dupahar me 3 baje bhej dijiyega...

R: theeke... thnx beta... bye...

N: are mam aap tomeri teachr hai aap kyu thnx bol rhi hai ye to mea farz hai... Acha Bye...

Comes 2 students...
N: acha to theeke aak humne jo bhi seekha wo kl padhke ana me test lungi... ok... bye...

All say bye n leave...
N: gunjan tu apne kamre me ja... aur ha thoda music sun lena aaram milega kitna padhegi...

G: ji di...

In d aftrnun...
D door bll rings...

Nupur opens d door with a smile bt as it opens hr smile changes to a frown...
N: Tum???????? (den realizing oders around) oh aap sab Rama mam ke studnts hai... aaiye na...

She takes dem 2 hr room n asks...
N: aap sab ke naam kya hai???

they ans..Ravi, Sheela, Mayank

N: (trying 2 smile wid a frown) Mr mayank aap mere saath aenge muje kuch books lani hai...

M: Sure nupurji...
(outside d room)
N:tum yahan kya kr rhe ho???

M: muje kya pta tha ki tum ho mam ki choice...

N: (wid atitude)dekha mera naam kahan kahan tak faila hai?? tumhari teachr tak muje recmmnd krti hai...

M: faila hoga pr me aur tumhare saath... kabhi nhi padh sakta... me ja rha hu tumhare sath padhne se acha akele hi padhu...

N: (in a figthin way) to tumhare sath bhi kaun pdhna chahta hai... jao na...
(aftr he goes...) by God kitna akdu ladka hai acha hua khud hi chala gaya...

(nupur making arrngemnts fr ravi n sheela wen fone rings)

R: Nupur ye kya tumne Mayank ko wapas bhej diya...

N: ha mam me uske sath nhi padh skti... hum dono to dushman hai...

R: dekho nupur beta tum bas apna gussa sambhalo... aur samjho na mene Mayank ki mummy se wada kiya tha ki jane se pehle use 1 achi student ki company me chodke jaungi... agr ab wo akela padhega to me uski mummy ko kya jawab dungi? tum meri pareshani samjho na...

N: (dil pe patthar rakh ke) theeke mam lekin use keh dijiye ki mujse jhagda na kare...

R: tum dono bas apne gusse pr kabu rakho... me use samjhake bhejti hu... Bye...

N: bye mam...

Aftr sum tym d door bll rings...

N: zarur pizza wala hoga mene mangaya tha na...
(she takes her purse n goes towards door... opens it n without seeing n lukin in hr prse tells...)
Kitna hua bhaiya???

M: Bhaiya???

N: (lukin up)(sees him n frowns) oh tum... ao aur jake us room me baitho me ati hu...

M: (starts goin bt den stops n says) madam...

(nupur feels happy he cald hr mam n trns smiling)

M: sirf hume hi nhi aapko bhi padhna hai... hum aapse sikhne nhi balki saath padhne aye hai...

N: (angry at his masti wala madam) (wid a frown cum smile) ha jao na me ati hu...
(he goes...)
(to hrself) hey bhagwan me iske sadu ke saath kaise padhungi... mujpe daya karo...
par kya karu mam se wada kiya hai ki unke ane tak me isse acha bartav karungi... chalo ab kuch din is akdu ko bhi seh lenge.............




thats all fr now guys hope u lykd it... plz do cmnt... n ya i dnt kno if dis is d place 2 post it... its my 1st tym so i dnt hav ne idea... if dis topic has 2 b shifted plz pm me how 2 do so n i'l do it...


Regards,
Jasneet...

it waz just wonderful plz plz plz plz continue

WOW!!!!!!!!!!
KYA OS HAIN YAAR!!👏👏
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