some words from heart poem -page 2

hi dear friends perhaps you know me .i write some ff on mayur ....not as good as you are but i have some interest in writieng poems too here is my third poem which i have written on net and this is first time when i am opening a special thread for this post i don't give this one any name why i don't know .here is my first creation ..hope you like it
give your view i will wait for your view ...


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kyo asaq ke tadad bad gayi
teri tanyahi ye kya zulm ker gayi
jo na mare zamne ke kahar se
tere nazar unko chalni ker gayi
ab to her saans pe tera pehra

tere vo katal nigaah dil ka
chain le gayi, hamari rooh tu aapne saath le gayi
katail kaho tuje ya khud ko majanu
mere liye bas ye sawaal chod gayi

tere surkh lab per ek muskuraht
aa jati jab tu aapna chrea se parda haata
hume aadab bulati hein,
mere kano mein ek mitaas gul jati

tu kyo apni har ada se muje gayal ker jati hein
or apni her ada se mere liye bus sawal chod jati hein



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this is for my friend faria who gave me the courage to tll someone something ......
i am heavenly blessed by god by giving her and tapoor and jenny and pinkey in my life.

hey really nice one!!!!!!!
gr8 job 👏

awesome aditi!

really awesome!

i loved it!

hey kahin tujhe pyaar toh nahi ho gaya hai na?

i loved the poem........

and write more na.........

loved it.....

love,
Mahak

Adiiiiiiiiiiii awesum poem yaar
loved it yaar..........u are so talented........
amazing poem was it.......
thanks 4 pm............

waa waa kya baath hain

wowwwwwwwww superb adiiii...... very nice........

Adiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii janiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

wow superb

mind-blowing poem yaar.

u express ur feeling in a wonderful way.

ek baat tujhe batati hu- mujhe pehle koi poem acchi nehi lagti thi

but after reading urs and mahis poem i m totally fida over it.

u not only a wonderful writer but also a an awesome poet too.

haye kash main bhi kuch likh sakti.

fantastic job.

awesome

too good

what-its 4 me

oye hoye dil khush hogaya. thank u so much

[lz keep writing.

thanx 4 sharing such a wonderful poem with us.

(sorry for late reply becoz of electricity problem)

Nice, Adi...

Loved it, dear

Thanks for PM.

hey adi that was such a beautiful poem and truly heartfelt.